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[MarcusDeVarro]

lol

[ReubenLiew]

I can see the huge leaps and bounds in advancement in each new comic, kuuran Very nice!

[kuurankuiskaus]

ReubenLiew wrote...

I can see the huge leaps and bounds in advancement in each new comic, kuuran Very nice!

Khii, thanks!
If I keep drawing this for several months... the final page might almost be good x)

[tallon1982]

I love the comics. They are very well done

[TheMadCat]

Good stuff.

[kuurankuiskaus]

Thank you!

:3

[kuurankuiskaus]

Updating again! This time with a single doodle :3

Wardens and Increased Appetite! Featuring Naima & Alistair~
--> kuurankuiskaus.deviantart.com/art/Wardens-and-Increased-Appetite-150635682

[tevikolady]

lol

[Emma-Lath]

your comics are awsome, how long do you plan on doing the main one till the end of the origin or is it going to cover the whole game

[kuurankuiskaus]

lala_lover wrote...

your comics are awsome, how long do you plan on doing the main one till the end of the origin or is it going to cover the whole game

Thank you!

Umm, at the moment I have plans to cover most of the origin (will skip most of the fighting in the castle at least...not Vaughan though) and after that I'll try to follow the main plot since I'll be playing with Naima at the same time. But it will be mostly just smaller pieces of the whole thing, it'd take me a decade to draw *everything* and there'll be more humour after the origin part! City elf isn't exactly the merriest origin one can pick...

[EverlastingFantasy]

These are awsome!!

[Arlana Tabris]

Nice work.

The ritual one is great - especially Oghren.

[kuurankuiskaus]

Thank you both n_n

[Hecthorn]

I really like the one where Morrigan hits Al with the shoe.

But the ritual was also very well-made.



I really like them!

[tallon1982]

Hehe I wonder who'd win an eating contest. The Warden, Al, the dog or Oghren? lol

[kuurankuiskaus]

Thanks!



Hmm, the eating contest... I think it'd be either Alistair or PC, they'd get the warden-hunger-boost. Depends on the PC I guess, how big belly s/he'd have

Oghren would be full of beer anyway xD there's no room for much food!

[kuurankuiskaus]

Done page 4 for A Wedding Day
--> kuurankuiskaus.deviantart.com/art/DANA-A-Wedding-Day-p-4-151239703

I fail with panel planning D:
... must read more manga and learn panel stuff.

[tallon1982]

I like it a lot

[tevikolady]

well done

[Sagacious Rage]

:*( Nelaros

[ReubenLiew]

Nice



As for framing, the one thing I would suggest is lessen the number of frames by at least half. It's alright when the page is really big like this, but if you priinted it out each frame would be really tiny. I myself am terrible at comic-making so I can't really give out anymore pointers since it would probably suck :/

[Inzhuna]

Wow, your work is great! The ritual, the urn of sacred ashes, morri in a dress, and especially the archdemon one - HILARITY!!! Keep it up!

[kuurankuiskaus]

Thanks all

Oh yes, I should lessen the number of panels >_< I just... somehow always end up drawing lots of tiny panels and have my brain melting trying to draw tiny faces in them xD Next page... I will... I must draw less panels x_X

[ReubenLiew]

Heh yeah it's a trap we all fall into We always want to put as much story into a single page as possible, cluttering it Moderation! Although for webcomics this rule is not always enforced since every page needs to convey the story for that page.

[kuurankuiskaus]

5th page done!
--> kuurankuiskaus.deviantart.com/art/DANA-A-Wedding-Day-p-5-151815451

I even managed to draw some bigger panels! Go me!