It is not a deleted scene. It is a fanfic.
That being said their original scene is good too.
Ashley: Everything's ready, Shepard.
Shepard: What about you? Are you ready?
Ashley: Let's get it done and go home.
Shepard: We're not getting off that easy, Ash.
Ashley: No? We looking at a rough ride?
Shepard: Ash... I get what you're trying to do.
Ashley: Hey, no brushing me off. Talk to me. What's going on?
Shepard: It just catches up with me sometimes.
Ashley: I understand. Man, do I ever.
Ashley: You know, I was lost without you, Shepard. When I thought you were dead, it broke my heart.
Ashley: And then you found your way back. It was a miracle. Screw the science--it was a damned miracle, Shepard.
Shepard: Ash...
Ashley: Shut up. It's a damn miracle.
Shepard: I couldn't do this without you, Ashley.
Shepard: When I first met you back on Eden Prime, I saw a woman who never gave up.
Shepard: You lost your company, expected no help, and there you were, fighting an invasion single-handed.
Ashley: You don't need to say anything, Shepard.
Shepard: No, I do.
Shepard: When I first saw you back on Eden Prime, I didn't know my life would change.
Shepard: Maybe I was scared to admit that I'd found something I had been looking for my whole life.
Shepard: I'm sane enough to know when I've stumbled across a good thing.