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[Zuzu Mumu]

Act 1 is almost ready and i would like your opinions on it before i post act 2

robertfierce.blogspot.co.uk/2012/05/mass-effect-other-side-of-coin.html 

[Zuzu Mumu]

hmm 110 views and not 1 comment
should i be alarmed?

[samurai crusade]

This is an essay on the Quarrians? Up until the red lines... You need to reference the codex. It was like the codex and mass effect lore word for word... Needs proper citing to avoid plagiarism.

Also, I think it's almost impossible to be attacked and boarde by Geth while the ship is in FTL travel.

A solid fan-fic by a dedicated fan. Keep up the work, it is awesome I lose yourself in te universe you love.

[Zuzu Mumu]

they didn't board during FTL bro ,if you read the whole story you will know the first officer tells the captain the geth boarded the Alarai before they jumped FTL , before the mission began,  when they retrieved the "package"
but duely noted , it might be just the fact that i didn't write much about that part of the story which i will correct!

thx a lot for pointing out that i should make a reference to the codex , anything before the red lines is only for those who simply enjoy reading about mass effect even if they know about it all ready as i mentioned at the beginning or for the new peeps who are very new to the ME universe , i'll make a reference so that people will know that's not what i wrote myself.

Modifié par Zuzu Mumu, 07 janvier 2013 - 12:59 .