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[kirill_t]

Hey guyz..

I have just made my first cutscene, and i wanted to know that your thinking about it. I realy need come critics to know that is good and what could be changed.

Thanks, anyway.

PS: Here is the link ( watch it in HD!!!...  )

[Eshme]

Whats the background theme?



I missed something to focus on ,on the 1st and 3rd cut. The panning camera, it should focus on someting. But it is hard to say, a voiceover can also give focus to whats happening, or some text.

For example in the first cut, a text could be "Big Fortress, 1st of the whatever Age. Darkspawn invade the castle, and one happy guard makes its routes."-- going to next cut with walking guard. Well it depends on your theme, but it gives some focus to what is happening.



For the slowmotion, i would miss some dramatic music. Otherwise it looks dull.



=)

[kirill_t]

Thanks. I will defently add some music and some more voiceove and some audio effects to. But i want to finich 2 or 3 more cuscene and tu put them together in a machinema movie.

[Lotion Soronarr]

Very, VERY good. Hats off to you.

Methinks many people will want to hire you for their projects after this.

[kirill_t]

lol thanks..... second part is coming ))) i have already made the anim+the cameras.. adding the FX at the moment... i will upload it today ))))

[Machinima]

Cool. Great to see someone is using the toolset to create a short movie. I look forward to see the final film with some music, sound and voiceover added.

[kirill_t]

hi everyone, i have just finished my second cutscene. hope that you like it.





PS: The HD version is still loading