Sure, we've got the 'world-in-need', and the usual Big Bad Guy that needs bringing down a peg or two, so far so formulaic. And that's fine. You can get away with formulaic as long as you personalise it - make it an emotional investment for the audience. It usually happens in this type of genre.
But the DA series doesn't ask me to emotionally invest enough, it only takes me a little way in. As decent fantasy writers know, it's not enough to ask us to invest ourselves in fictional lands, conflicting empires and 'Dark Lords', or whatever. Those things are old hat, We've seen them a million times before. The only thing they should serve as is the stage and background for more familiar, intimate, human conflicts (and by 'intimate' I don't mean purely sexual).
I want romantic elements that are intertwined within the whole plot arc, and actually DRIVE it. I want love interests that form a part of the entire plot through to the end. I want conflict resolution with LI's to be as important to plot progression as much as killing bad guys is. I want interaction with LI's to be within every step of the plot elements, and oppostion/assistance from them to be integral to the plot direction.
Basically, I want a greater sense of catharsis from conflict resolution because it involves emotive character action as much as it does cleaving skulls in half. I want drama as well as action, because action without all this is not drama.
Of course, there's nothing new in this suggestion, it's been essential to genres like fantasy, space-opera, and thriller since those things began. Think Conan the Barbarian without...that blonde woman, or The Bourne Series without Marie, or Inception without the dead chick. Ancient Greek and Roman epic, which started this whole thing, is littered with it. Who launched a thousand ships?
Modifié par shootist70, 14 février 2013 - 06:09 .





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