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[hydrozero]

I wrote a complex interactive short story and posted it in several pieces on deviantART:devil:

It is a fan fiction for the wonderful trilogy Mass Effect 3. Both the video games and books present a vivid and
intriguing universe. I would compare ME lore with Star Wars and Star Trek. Before you begin to read the story
please make a basic choice that will affect your possible choices in further reading. Some other choices will be
limited as in Commander Shepard being male and Tali being the only love interest available. The story is interactive
and has several alternate endings as you read along.

Despite originality it does contain some spoilers. The story takes place at the climatic battle with Shepard making the final charge to reach the Citadel. You may start by making one of two choices....


CHOICE: What is your galactic readiness rating?
[link] 1) Bellow 10%
[link] 2) Above 50%

[Mad-Hamlet]

Sorry. I'm femsheping it only.

[hydrozero]

Lol, Yeah, thta's the way I play. A) Femshep has an awesome voice actress, and femshep can romance another woman. I am a man, and this appeals to me.

[Celtic man51]

I approve great job with the ending! I like the simplicity and absoluteness of it! The choices make it dynamic and engaging. I especially liked the Tali ending because it was a cute and happy conclusion ! fan endings are so much better than the original ones they gave us.

[Volc19]

There was a bit too much "Renegade dumb, Paragon smart" in the progression I picked. I felt like it was telling me "How dare you want to pick Control. We're giving you Destroy anyways and I'm going to make you feel bad about yourself. Your opinions are irrelevant. Take that."

[Lefardo]

My choices got me everything I ever wanted in Mass effect, unlike in the game. Thank you from this. Finally got my beach house :')

[NOD-INFORMER37]

That was very good, although some work could be done (maybe by adding more scenarios) I feel the same was as Lefardo, it offered a bit more of an impact for choices I made than it did in the game. 

Nice work! ^^

Modifié par NOD-INFORMER37, 24 février 2013 - 10:10 .

[Yate]

Volc19 wrote...

There was a bit too much "Renegade dumb, Paragon smart" in the progression I picked. I felt like it was telling me "How dare you want to pick Control. We're giving you Destroy anyways and I'm going to make you feel bad about yourself. Your opinions are irrelevant. Take that."

well it's only paragon fanboys that want a different ending anyways

[hydrozero]

I want to thank everyone who's read my interactive story, and actually I kind of agree with Volc19. I do need to offer more options in the path of renegade. With the renegade infamy ending I was trying to create a similar feeling that was seen with Light Yagami at the end of Death Note. The only reason it feels like "Renegade dumb, Paragon smart" is because that's Anderson's perspective. I am very much motivated to wright another two renegade endings in which you can gain control... and then subsequently go evil or good.

P.S. through out my entire ME history I was always 50-50 renegade and paragon. I liked the idea of playing as a moral leader who could be ruthless if they needed to be.

[hydrozero]

http://jameshuston.d...ameshuston&qo=9

Lol, made two new endings. One renegade option results in a positive "control" over the Reapers. the other renegade option turns Reapers into an army bent on conquering the the galaxy in the name of mankind.