Dr_Extrem wrote...
tbh ... i dont care about the writers intent when it comes to this scene. i would normally dont do it either but this ... thing .. is something different, since its presence alone disturbs my perception of the enitre meu. its existance brings up questions - questions regarding the first 2 games and the answers to them, are not pleasant.
how would you rewrite it?
(i really am curious)
First of all, I'd drop the cooperative attitude the Catalyst. This is a being that should be looking down on this insignificant insect that dares question its conclusions. It has billions of years and countless cycles of experience to tell it its correct in said conclusions. This... mere child... has what? A short term cooperation of synthetic and organic races that will last a blink of an eye in the cosmic scale? Color the Catalyst not impressed.
Second of all, I'd adjust the premise slightly so that it wasn't so much organic/synthetic conflict, instead conflict in general. Then all sorts of evidence comes into play. The Rachni Wars (and the systematic extermination of a sentient species)... the Krogan Rebellions (and subsequent Genopage). To hell with organic/synthetic... organic/organic is just as capable of exterminating all life in the galaxy.
And THAT'S the point I'd have run with. As quick to war as species in this galaxy are, it's only a matter of time before they reach a point where ALL life (advanced or not) is at risk. The Catalyst stops that from happening by harvesting advanced races before they reach that point. And it's first target was the Leviathans who designed it.
It's a simplistic theme... but let's be honest, ME as a whole wasn't exactly Asmiov to begin with. It doesn't need (and probably shouldn't be) all that complex.
I'd also alter the consequences of each choice as well... but that's kinda nitpicking and this post is already getting too long as it is. If you want I can expand later.