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Yea I just registered with fanfiction.net today and just gotta love their 2 day waiting period. What I'll do is post the prologue since I'm still working out the rest of the story. Feedback can be posted here and any negative ones would be appreciated in my message box so I can cry in a corner while making voodoo dolls of each one of you to stab at night or whenever I feel like it ;)  Anyway enjoy. I hope I haven't butchered this too much. This is my first time writing like this.



***Usual disclaimer....I don't own the characters, settings or quotes from Dragon Age: Origins or it's novels The Stolen Throne and The Calling. I also do not own any quotes by famous people, music lyrics and/or poetry used in this fanfiction.***

---Prologue---

I still remember the sun
Always warm on my back
Somehow it seems colder now

Where has my heart gone
Trapped in the eyes of a stranger
Oh I... I want to go back to
Believing in everything

[Latin hymn:]
Iesu, Rex admirabilis
Et triumphator nobilis,
Dulcedo ineffabilis,
Totus desiderabilis.

Where has my heart gone
An uneven trade for the real world
Oh I... I want to go back to
Believing in everything
Oh, Where

Where has my heart gone
Trapped in the eyes of a stranger
Oh I... I want to go back to
Believing in everything

I still remember.
*Evanescence - Fields of Innocence


“Have at you!” Fergus cried as he pointed the long stick at Evelyn as she scurried about the courtyard at Redcliffe Castle. He laughed evilly as he gave chase to his baby sister and took swipes at her legs as she attempted to climb the tree. “No fair! Cheater!”

Evelyn stuck her tongue out at him and climbed high to find a stick to use against Fergus. A blond haired boy near Evelyn’s age watched from afar, interested in what was going on. Fergus circled the tree, “You can’t stay up there forever you know.”

While he circled Evelyn had managed to climb onto the stone wall and sneak around with a mischievous grin. She had one short stick and a longer one that was thin but sturdy. As she snuck down the steps a few of the servants children came to see what the ruckus was about before they looked at each other taking small bets.

“I’ll bet a whole silver the little one takes out the big one.” One boy named Julian grinned before shifting his attention to the blond hair boy watching the scene intently, “Alistair, you want in?”

“Huh? In on what?” Alistair looked confused.

“Nevermind.”

Evelyn climbed the stone railing and leapt when she saw Fergus, “Ah ha!” She shouted and lightly slapped his hand with her stick.

“Ow!” Fergus growled and looked at her, “You sneaky git. I’ll get you!”

“You have to catch me first big brother.” Evelyn taunted. She grinned gamely before running off past the gate towards the stables. They took swings at each other and jumped off anything sturdy or that would hold their weight. The children cheered on the two who were guests at Redcliffe. A few of the girls watched in awe and coo’d over Fergus and Evelyn.

“The one with the shorter hair is just too cute!” Coo’d one not realizing she was admiring one of her own.
With a flurry of moves Evelyn became the victor just by mere size and speed. She grinned down at Fergus, “I promise not to tell father.”

“Ha!” Fergus laughed and got up with Evelyn’s help before dusting off. He noticed the small gathering of children and playfully bowed before jabbing Evelyn in the side to do the same. She did reluctantly then heard Julian call out, “Can we play too?”

“Hm…well I suppose we could use some help in our army eh baby sister?” Fergus replied as he looked over to Evelyn.

“Sister? I thought that was your brother.”  Julian shouted while looking confused as he walked over to Evelyn and poked her with his finger.

She swatted it away and glared defiantly, “Hey!”

“You mean to tell us that a girl bested you in a stick fight? Ha! That’s laughable.” Julian continued as he circled Evelyn and sized her up before flicking her short hair, “Looks to me she doesn’t know her place.”

“Leave her alone.” Alistair came out from the crowed and glared a bit at Julian.

Evelyn looked at Alistair and tilted her head a bit wondering why he would defend her. She was able to defend herself and besides she had Fergus at her side too. Her eyes shifted to Julian who hm’d at her before looking at Alistair.

“I’ve got an idea.” Julian grinned and looked at Alistair who gulped. Usually Julian’s ideas led to trouble and this time was no exception. “We’ll settle who is better in a stick fight,” He picked up a stick and tossed it to Alistair, “This girl from Highever or the boys from Redcliffe.”

“You got it!” Fergus agreed despite Evelyn’s protests. She glared at her brother and was suckered into a silly honor fight. Her eyes shifted to Alistair who looked reluctant to take part. She sighed wondering if she should just let him win but the look on Fergus’s face told her he wanted to win badly.

“Terms of the fight are as follow. First one to fall loses. No tricks. It will be a straight fight.” Julian stated as he paced between the two with a wistful grin. He stopped in front of Fergus, “Loser has to be our slaves for the rest of the week.”

Evelyn glared, “Slaves?!”

Fergus didn’t like the sound of it either and shook his head, “No…Loser gives up their allowance.” He pulled out a sovereign and showed the group.

“Deal.” Julian nodded and let his greed show. He walked over to Alistair and put a hand on his shoulder, “Don’t screw this up. She’s just a girl.”

“One that can kick my ass.” Alistair muttered.

“Just think of this as your one last hurrah before being shipped off to the Chantry.” Julian said casually before moving away.

Fergus looked at Evelyn and frowned a little, “Sorry, Evie. No matter what happens you’re still my baby sister. Just do your best.”

“No pressure…” Evelyn quipped then looked at Alistair as Fergus moved to the side. She saluted Alistair properly then walked a circle around. She tuned out the jeers and cheers from the side. Her blue eyes were intense as she looked at him. He countered her movement and seemed nervous. She knew that a nervous mabari could prove to be a hell of a fighter in the end. Ser Jean told her never to underestimate her opponents.

Alistair felt a bead of sweat trickle down his forehead as he watched Evelyn’s movement. She was a pretty girl despite having her hair cut like a boy’s and her eyes seemed to bore a hole into his soul. It made him uneasy.

Way to go Alistair…Open your mouth and see what it gets you? A sound thrashing from a girl who’s probably younger than you are. Can’t wait til Arl Eamon hears this one…or worse yet if the other kids in the Chantry hear about it I’ll never live it down.

Before he could finish his thought he was locked in a fight with Evelyn. Their sticks were locked and the determination in her eyes made him realize the passion she had for the game. He didn’t want to hurt her but he didn’t want to be made a fool either.

Forgive me…

He pushed hard and managed to knock Evelyn back a few steps. Quickly he swung at her and she hopped back. It was like watching a dance as they took swipes at each other landing hits on each others legs and arms. The two were evenly matched but Fergus knew better. Evelyn wasn’t giving it her all out of pity for Alistair and Alistair was holding back out of fear of hurting her. The two carried on and ended up near a large outside the stables where a large puddle of water seemed to be awaiting them.  Alistair pushed Evelyn towards the muddy puddle using swings to guide her before guilt set in again. Evelyn could see the hesitation and shook her head slightly as she ducked one of his lunges causing him to tumble over her into the puddle.

“Gah!” Alistair cried sat in the mud and looked up at Evelyn who frowned. She offered him a hand calling a truce. As he reached to take it Julian scoffed. He looked down feeling like a loser and it was at that moment Evelyn pivoted and looked at Julian. She hated it when bullies picked on her and it made her blood boil when they picked on others.

Julian laughed as Evelyn walked over to him and growled. He looked down at her seeing her anger, “Awww the little tomboy is angry. What are you going to do? Poke me with that stick of yours?”

Her anger faded and she looked at him calmly while Fergus helped Alistair up. Fergus didn’t like what was going on and apologized to Alistair before looking at Evelyn. He knew that look and tried to get to Evelyn before it was too late. Just as he reached her a loud crack was heard and the legs of Julian flew over his head as he flipped backwards into the wheelbarrow that held the manure from the horses. The children roared with laughter as she glared at Julian, “Never assume that just because I’m a girl that they can’t kick your bloody ass you….”

What followed were a slur of curses that Fergus quelled by covering her mouth with his hand. Laughter came from the stables as Bann Teagan and Arl Eamon watched the whole scene. Eamon looked at Alistair and chuckled a bit, “Come now, Alistair. We need to get you cleaned up. The templars are here.”

Bann Teagan looked at the children and laughed again, “The girl is spirited.”

“That she is, Teagan. More than her mother would like.” Bryce Cousland replied as he came into view and looked at Evelyn sternly.  She frowned and hung her head immediately while Fergus seemed unsure what to do. Bryce moved forward and tousled Fergus’s hair then looked at Evelyn, “Alright pup…Go on inside now and get cleaned up. We’ll be leaving too. Your mother has sent word that I need to head to Denerim to meet with the other Teryns and Arls.”

“Yes, father…” Evelyn whispered and walked with Fergus towards the castle. She stopped by Alistair and smiled softly then nodded her head respectfully to him, “May the Maker watch over you, Alistair.”

“And you…” Alistair whispered and he watched her go. He felt his cheeks redden when she looked back to him with those blue eyes. His eyes shifted to see Julian sitting up with a bloody nose and he muttered before running off to his mother. Alistair grinned and left to get cleaned up.

To be contiuned...

EDIT: Okay I'm going to contnue posting in two places here and fanfiction's website. If I get too mushy let me know lmao

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very good :)

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I like it.

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i liked it

cant wait to read the rest of it

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Thank you for the feedback =) I had to work on my formatting earlier so I apologize if it looks messed up lol. I'm working on the other parts of the story now and might even tweak what I've posted here as well.

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So far so good! Can't wait to see the rest! Very enjoyable and funny. Keep posting when more becomes available!

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I love when characters meet as kids those stories always turn out the best. I can;t wait to see more.

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Decided to post this little bit :)






“To betray, you must first belong.”  – Kim Philby

--- Present day ---

Rays of sunlight came in through the windows of the training hall casting shadows on the walls from the various training dummies and weapon racks that were placed strategically around the room. This room was only used
when it was raining outside but today the room was being used for a private lesson.

Clang!

 “Again.” The voice of an elder man ordered as he looked at his student. He moved forward to attack
with two blades. As he swung with them two daggers countered causing the familiar clang of blades from earlier. Beads of sweat trailed down their foreheads as they panted tiredly. They had been training for hours but neither
seemed willing to give up just yet. In a blade lock the two stared intently at each other, teeth bared.

“You’ll need that determination, Lady Cousland. But don’t let your anger guide your blade. It always leads to failure.” He advised before pushing her back and taunted her to attack.

“Don’t address me so formally, old man.”  Evelyn quipped as she stumbled backwards. She regained her footing quickly and moved in for her own attack.

The moves were a flurry of quick cuts and she paid no heed to the man’s words. There was something distracting her as she made poor decisions in her attacks. He dodged her attacks just as quickly as they came before landing a hard kick to her gut, knocking the wind out of her. She collapsed onto the wooden floor and dropped her daggers as she struggled to breathe. Her arms crossed over her stomach as if to protect herself and she
watched as the daggers were kicked away from her reach before she felt the cold steel against her neck.

“Now then…What have you learned?” His voice was calm and he looked down at her with his grey eyes.

She took a moment before meeting his gaze with her own. Her blue eyes met with his and she looked defeated though a hint of defiance remained. She parted her dry lips, “Never under estimate an old man…Especially when it is your own teacher.”

He chuckled then removed his blade from her neck then lightly slapped her back with the blade, “Up. I think that is enough for today.”

Evelyn stood slowly then wet her lips before moving to retrieve her daggers. She looked at her reflection in the pristine steel. They had never seen a battle and she figured they never would. Her silence caught his attention and he cleared his throat before moving over to her.

“This is fine craftsmanship. You are fortunate to have such daggers but I get the feeling that the daggers are not the problem.” He rested a hand on her shoulder and gave her a caring smile.  He had been her teacher since she was big enough to hold a weapon, “You can tell this old man what troubles you.”

“Ser Jean…I am always grateful for your advice but I think this is one time it will not help.” Evelyn replied softly. Her tone was filled with disappointment. With great care she sheathed her daggers and wiped the sweat from forehead using the back of her hand. When she noticed Jean wasn’t leaving her alone she sighed, “But since you insist…Father and Fergus are leaving for Ostagar and I can’t go with them.”

“So I see. And because you can’t go with them you feel less of a person?” Jean gestured to the wooden bench and sat down first. He took a long drink from the water bucket then offered her the ladle.

She moved to sit down and accepted the ladle. After taking a long drink herself she looked at him, “More like I’m being treated like a little girl. Why can’t I fight alongside my father and brother? I’m just as good with a blade as Fergus is and I can help against the darkspawn. You’ve taught me well and I just want to be part of something rather than be looked at as some woman who happens to be handy with a blade.”

“You may not be a little girl. You’ve just turned eighteen but you must remember to a father you will always be a little girl…Though if I recall correctly you never did care for the dresses and ribbons in your hair that your mother constant put you in.” He laughed at the memory in Redcliffe and how furious Teryna Cousland was seeing Evelyn with short hair and covered with scrapes and bruises. The memory passed and he looked at her now a grown
woman. She had her mother’s beauty and her father’s eyes, but her soul was that of a fighter.

“Have you spoken to your father about this?” Jean asked as he took the ladle from her and set it back into the water bucket. He raised his brow from the look he saw on Evelyn’s face. Slowly he shook his head then got
up. “Remember what I saw about your anger. If I were you I would go talk to your father and mother about your feelings. Keeping them bottled up will just tear you apart inside and create hatred where there is no need for it. Just take my words into consideration young one.”

Evelyn stared at the floor once Jean stood up and she sighed heavily. He was right though she found no use in speaking to her parents about her feelings. Her father knew of her skill but had to adhere to her mother’s wishes. Mother only had plans to marry her off to any single man in Ferelden. Her eyes shifted from the floor to look at Ser Jean and she knew he meant well. She nodded her head in respect to him and wanted to apologize for her stubborness, “Thank you, Ser Jean…I…”

The door burst open to let in a messenger. The young elf looked at the two panting and quickly stood up straight. He moved to Evelyn and bowed a bit, “My lady, your father has requested your presence in the main hall. He said it is urgent.”

Evelyn looked at the elf and nodded her head slowly, “I will be there shortly.” She stood up then looked at Jean, “Thank you again, Ser Jean. And I am sorry for being so difficult.”

“Lady Cousland?” Ser Jean called as he packed away a couple of his best swords, “Before you leave I wanted to let you know that it has been an honor training you all these years. I hope that you take the two lessons I have taught you to heart.”

“And which two would those be, Ser Jean?” Evelyn smiled knowing full well what they were but always enjoyed hearing them from him.

“Never let them see you bleed.” Ser Jean smiled as he moved with her towards the door only to stop near a portion of stone wall that was between two large paintings.

Evelyn grinned, “And the second?”

“Always have an escape plan.” Ser Jean smirked then rather than leave out the main door he pressed on a stone to use a secret passage and disappeared.

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nice

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this story is great I can't wait to read more

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Love, love, love the kid story! I can't wait to see how this pans out. Want more, please!

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http://www.fanfictio..._Lost_Innocence

Got the first two chapter's posted which are the ones you've all read thus far. I'm still working on the rest.

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Hah! Crafty old bugger. :)

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not working fast enough Talon hehe :)



seriously though, is good stuff :)

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lol sorry!



I just finished the next chapter. It's been sent for upload there but I'll continue to post here as well for those that don't want to look there lol

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Vindicta Nemo magis gaudet quam foemina. Translation: No one rejoices more in revenge than woman. – Decimus Junius Junvenal

It was the late watches of the night and not many could sleep. Bryce had decided to stay up with Howe in his study. They drank some wine with Duncan and chatted about the old days. Riding into battle against
Orlais and being alongside King Maric.

“Ah those were good times…And now we fight a threat that is far bigger than Orlais.” Bryce said as he sat back in his chair and swirled the wine in his goblet. He looked tired but the thoughts of war kept him awake.

Howe nodded, “Yes, a bigger threat indeed.” He set his goblet down and drummed his fingers on the table while staring at the fire.

“Do you doubt the darkspawn threat?” Asked Duncan as he leaned against the wall and just observed the two men.

“Doubt? No. What I doubt is that this is a blight.” Howe replied sharply then took up his goblet again to drink all the contents. He seemed to be avoiding Duncan’s eyes for the moment.

Bryce shook his head, “I think my friend you have had too much wine. We should probably get some rest while we can.” He finished his wine then stood up. Just as Bryce finished standing the door to his study opened. Two of his guards came in and bowed slightly.

“Sorry to intrude my Lord but Howe’s men have just arrived. His captain is here asking to speak with Howe.”

Bryce nodded, “Let him in.”

Howe’s captain entered with two other guards flanking him. They nodded to Howe but said nothing. Howe stood up then looked at Bryce with a grin. He walked over to Bryce, “Well then I shall bid you goodnight, old friend.”

His grin grew as a dagger slipped into his hand from a hidden sheath in his sleeve. Duncan moved to interview but he was too late. Howe stabbed Bryce in the ribs, twisting it as he whispered into his ear, “Don’t worry, old friend…All that you love will join you shortly and all that you have is now…mine…”

Bryce’s eyes widened and anger filled them, “You…Bastard!”

The Cousland guards moved to help their lord but were cut down by Howe’s captain. Duncan moved quickly using a small bottle that held a liquid smoke. He threw it on the ground before grabbing Bryce to get him out of Howe’s clutches. As he dashed out he used his dagger to cut the two flanking guards. The smoke caused the right effect and a choking Howe made it out shouting to his men to find Bryce and to kill anyone in the castle.

“No one is to be spared!” Howe shouted in anger and looked at his captain, “Find that Grey Warden rat and bring his head to me on a pike with Bryce Cousland’s.”

“As you wish.” The captain replied and marched off.

 

The bells chimed from the chantry and shouts from all over could be heard. It was an alarm. Dax growled as he moved from his corner. He raised his hackles as he bared his teeth. Sounds were coming from the hall. Evelyn was out of bed and looked at Dax knowing something was very wrong. She said nothing as she quickly put on her armor. As she finished a blood curdling scream came from across the hall.

Oriana! Oren! Mother!

Evelyn’s door burst open and two guards came barreling in. Dax growled and barked before he lunged at one of the guards. His teeth sank into the throat of the guard, snapping his neck.

“Maker!” cried the other guard as he quickly tried to take aim at Dax only to be silenced by a dagger to his heart.

Evelyn narrowed her eyes as she watched him sink to his knees. Her eyes weren’t focused on his face but on the symbol that he wore on his chest, a bear. Just down the hall were two more guards trying to break down the door to her parents’ room. Dax charged at one, biting his let while Evelyn just marched up to them and gutted him  behind. She was emotionless as she twisted the blade then took her free hand to slit the throat of the guard next
to her in a quick move. A gurgled sound came from the man as his eyes met with hers. He had nothing but shock in his eyes whereas her’s had nothing but anger at their intrusion.

Her armor was splattered in blood and Dax was wearing some on his fur. He panted heavily as he moved to keep watch. She started to turn from the door when it flung open. Her mother appeared in armor and looked a little frightened.

“Are you alright? I heard fighting.” Eleanor said as she looked at Evelyn. The blood on her made her eyes widen, “Are you hurt?”

Evelyn said nothing but shook her head no.  She then handed her mother one of the discarded weapons from the dead guards, “Howe’s men are attacking the castle. He’s betrayed us.” She was shaking in anger as she turned her eyes to the bodies on the floor.

“Howe’s men?” Eleanor’s eyes looked at the armor and she glared. It then dawned on her that Bryce hadn’t come to bed and worry came over her, “Have you seen your father?”

“No…I’ve been in my room the whole time.” Evelyn replied then shared the same worried look. Her thoughts went back to the scream. If it wasn’t her mother…

“Oriana and Oren…” She whispered and without waiting she ran over to the door kicking it in. Eleanor followed and gasped at what was discovered.

Oriana and Oren’s bodies laid on the floor. Oren’s neck had been broken from the look of it while Oriana’s throat had been slit. Evelyn knelt down with her mother who began to cry over Oren.

“Oren! No!” She cradled the boy in her arms, “Howe’s not taking any prisoners is he? He intends to kill us all.”

Evelyn frowned seeing Oriana had been raped as well. Her dress was torn and she figured that Oren tried to stop them before he was flung to his death. She clenched her fists until her knuckles turned white, “He’ll pay for this…I will kill Howe.”

Her tone was dark and as she stood up Eleanor saw the anger in Evelyn. She too felt the same rage and knew what needed to be done. They quickly moved to get what weapons they could before leaving the living chambers
of the castle to see who was left and who could be saved. The ran down the stairs and checked the guest rooms. Lady Landra was sprawled on the floor. Her head bashed in and a pool of blood surrounded her head.

“Oh dear Landra…I shouldn’t have had you come…” Eleanor sobbed then shook her head.

Evelyn tugged her mother out of the room and they ran outside to see fires everywhere and the sound of fighting was louder than ever. Eleanor held her sword and looked at Evelyn, “We must find your father and escape. There is no choice.”

“I want Howe dead.” Evelyn replied coldly and was starting to move before Eleanor grabbed her arm.

“If you want Howe dead then we need to survive.” Eleanor said sharply then let her go.

She had a point and Evelyn nodded before they headed off. One of the servants shouted at them, “The castle is overrun. I’m out of here!”

Evelyn growled, “Stay and fight you coward!” She threw him a mace and he caught it after stuttering a yes m’lady.

Chaos was everywhere. Cousland guards were falling left and right due to being overpowered by numbers rather than skill. Evelyn did what she could to save what guards she could. The path they needed to reach the larder was blocked by fiery rubble and bodies were strewn on top of that. Eleanor looked at Evelyn, “We need to find another way around but first we need to get something important from the armory.”

Evelyn understood what she meant and the four of them made haste to the armory. The guards were dead but the door looked intact. Eleanor unlocked the door with her key then let Evelyn hurry in to grab the Cousland family sword. The shield was put on her back for now and she tossed her mother one of her daggers.

“From this point on Howe’s men will fall on the family blade and his head will be severed by it.” Evelyn vowed and ran her palm against the blade as if to make a blood oath. Her blood dripped from the blade and she wrapped it in a handkerchief.

They left for the main hall to see what looked like a last stand. Ser Gilmore charged at the nearest solider. Howe had a mage conjuring spells in the back and that became Evelyn’s focus. Eleanor needed no instruction as she moved to attack an archer. Dax had scampered off to rip the hand off a solider about to strike Ser Gilmore from behind. The servant was trying his best not to get killed. Using her skills in stealth Evelyn weaved quickly through the fights and surprised the mage by breaking the staff.

“You think you’ve stopped my power? Foolish girl!” The mage hissed and used an Arcane bolt on Evelyn.

The blast hurled her into a table and made her yelped but she got back up. She could hear the voice of Ser Jean now.

You’ve always been stubborn. At times it will serve you well and in others it can lead you to defeat.

“Getting up, churl? You should mind your betters!”

Evelyn glared and kicked a chair at the mage as a distraction before lunging at her. Her family blade sunk into the mage’s gut with a sickening slush. She gritted her teeth as she watched the mage sink to
her knees, “Mind yourself, ****!”

She put her foot up on the mage’s shoulder then kicked her off the blade before moving to take care of the archers nearby. It was a bloody mess by the time the bodies of Howe’s soldiers littered the floor with a few of their own.  The smell of death hung in the air heavily and it wasn’t over yet. Ser Gilmore’s voice broke the silence as he ordered the men to barricade the door.

He moved over to them looking relieved to see Evelyn and Eleanor alive, “Thank the Maker you two are alright. We tried to keep Howe’s men from getting through.”

“They did get through…” Evelyn said sadly thinking of Oriana and Oren. Her expression said enough to Ser Gilmore who would have touched her shoulder to comfort her but was denied this due to his station. He looked down as if he failed instead and Evelyn felt even worse.

Eleanor sensed the tension but broke it with her own voice, “Have you seen my husband?”

“Yes, he went to look for you but I can only assume he went to the larder.” Ser Gilmore replied, “He believed you’d be there once the alarms sounded.”

“Then we must go.” Eleanor said as she looked at Evelyn then moved to the door to leave the main hall from the side door.

Evelyn looked at Ser Gilmore, “Come with us.” She knew it was pointless to say it but she had to. Her eyes saw his answer.

“If only I could, Evelyn…Go, I will hold them back.” Ser Gilmore turned and ran to help bar the door.

Evelyn turned and left with her mother feeling a heavy weight on her heart.  She shook it off as best as she could to keep her wits about her while Dax scouted ahead and the servant cowered behind them holding desperately onto the mace he was given. The screams of the servants was unbearable. She could almost feel their pain as it
shook her to the core. Her mother kept an emotionless face though her eyes told a different story. Worry, fear…All seem to be revealed in just one glance. They came to a halt as the sound of heavy metal hitting against a thick wooden door. Eleanor stopped and tried to stop Evelyn from going forward but the gift of stealth for a rogue was all that seemed to be needed.

“Hold.” The captain of the guard said. He felt something stirring and he gestured with his hand for the guards around him to fan out.

As the guards got closer to them the servant lost his nerve and ran out. The guards closed in on him and Evelyn made her move. She stabbed her dagger into the back of one guard while her mother handled the other.  Out of fear the servant began to bludgeon the third guard in the head with his mace. Screams of pain came from the guards as they were taken down until the captain was left with two guards beside him. He narrowed his eyes at the group then laughed, “Well this saves me the trouble of finding you. Once I finish off your father I’ll be able to enjoy my new post.”

Evelyn’s eyes showed a fury unlike any other. She growled as she charged in with Dax beside her. Dax jumped the right guard and mauled him. The left guard was occupied by Eleanor and the servant. The captain belonged to
Evelyn. Their swords clashed and he grinned at her almost in a mocking manner.

“So the pup wants to play?” He goaded as he pushed hard with his two handed blade, “Then let’s play.”

“Shut up and fight!” Evelyn challenged and pointed her family’s blade at him. He tried to swat it away only to have his blade met with her dagger. She was not as easy as she looked. Her anger was what he needed to play to. He taunted her and faked her to have her use her energy so he would have an easier time to overwhelm her. She hopped to the side as he swung at her then stomped on the blade before giving him a pommel strike to the face. His nose began to bleed and she watched him stagger backwards stunned.

“You…you ****!” He stammered, “You broke my nose!”

She didn’t wait for her to say anymore as she plunged her dagger into his chest and watched him look at her with hate in his eyes. There was no pity for his actions which enraged her.

 “DIE!” She screamed and cut his head off with the Cousland blade. His head sailed just a few feet
away before smashing against the wall. The helmet flew off and his head rolled down the slope to the pile of rocks below. She kicked the torso off her dagger then moved to the get into the kitchen. The larder would be where her father was if he was even there.

No words passed between mother and daughter as they entered the kitchen to find someone had made it in or the elf servants and Nan had been wounded before barring the door. Evelyn frowned seeing poor Nan on the floor. Her wounds were defensive from what she could tell, cuts on her arms, legs and hands. The elf servants had more of the same wounds but the looks on their faces disturbed her. The eerie silence was broken when they heard ragged breathing in the larder and quickly they moved in. At first they saw nothing in the darkness but then…

“Bryce!” Eleanor cried as she hurried to his side. She knelt down and tried to help him sit up before she noticed the blood, “Maker’s breath! You’re bleeding!”

Evelyn hurried over and knelt down to see it was true. Her father had been wounded badly and from the look of it he wasn’t going to make it. She couldn’t bring herself to say a word at that moment. Her mother fussed over her father, “We must get you out of here and find you healing magic.”

“No…I am done.” Bryce said softly as he looked at them with sad eyes. They were no longer the brilliant blue that Evelyn remembered. The once calm after the storm eyes were now dark and stormy.

Evelyn didn’t want to believe that her father was finished, “We can carry you out.” Her eyes started to tear up, “I’ll carry you.”

She moved to touch his shoulder but he gasped in pain. Her eyes closed tightly refusing to believe in what she saw. They tried to convince him they could escape together.

“I will just slow you down.” Bryce replied then coughed. A thin trail a blood came down the corner of his mouth and with care Eleanor wiped it away.

“The Teryn is right.” Duncan’s voice came from behind as he walked in. He was covered in blood which made Evelyn on edge wondering if he was friend or part of the siege. He knelt down beside them and frowned seeing
Bryce’s state was far worse. His eyes met with Evelyn’s, “Even if we could get him out of here Howe’s men have surrounded the castle. We would not get far.”

“Duncan…Take my wife and daughter out of here.” Bryce begged as he looked at the Warden.

Duncan nodded slowly, “I will take the Teryna and your daughter to Ostagar…But I must ask for a boon in return…If it were any other circumstances…”

“I understand, Duncan.” Bryce looked from him to Evelyn.

Evelyn raised her brow confused but it soon became clear when Duncan looked at her and spoke, “I offer you a place in the Grey Wardens, Lady Cousland.”

“What?!” Evelyn replied in shock. Her eyes shifted to her parents seeing them approve and she shook her head not sure of what to do. She felt trapped in this but she did desire being a Warden. Didn’t she?

“But what about Howe?” Evelyn asked as she looked to her mother.

“Revenge?” Eleanor asked as she looked at Evelyn, “You want to avenge us? Then live. Someone must tell Fergus of what has happened here and kill that traitorous bastard!”

Evelyn nodded her head slowly then looked to Duncan, “I accept your offer.”

Duncan stood up with Evelyn but Eleanor didn’t move. She looked up at them, “I am staying.”

“Mother…” Evelyn frowned and reached for her mother only to have her hand gently swatted away.

“My place is here with my husband. We have lived a good life…” Eleanor whispered as she hugged Bryce close to her, “It is up to our children now.”

Evelyn’s tears fell seeing her parents huddle together. Her father’s life slipping away with every second. She shook her head as she tried to step forward to drag them with her but Duncan held her arm, “We must go.”

“I’ll kill every bastard that comes through that door!” Eleanor stated as she looked at Evelyn, “Now go!”

“I love you both!” Evelyn cried as she tried to fight Duncan’s hold. The tears were streaming down her face as she reached with her fingertips towards them. Her mother reached out just a little then whispered, “We love you too.”

The sound of doors being broken down could be heard and Duncan had to drag Evelyn away. Dax was chasing after them as they made for the secret passage to escape.

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Nicely done, that ending is always a tear jerker.

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I try. Thank you =) *blush*

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*sniff*

she loves er parents so much

*sobs*

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“When we lose one we love, our bitterest tears are called forth by the memory of hours when we loved not enough.” – Maurice Maeterlinck

 

“You want to avenge us? Then live! Live so no one will forget what has happened here. Show the world Howe’s treachery so that he may have a traitor’s death!”

~I will live mother…I will live to watch Howe die by my hands and my hands alone…The Couslands will  never go quietly…We will rise like the phoenix from the ashes as it always has been. It is what our family crest is…Rebirth…I will be reborn a Grey Warden. I swear it…~

Tears seeped from Evelyn’s closed eyes as she tried to sleep. Dax nuzzled the back of her head and she opened her eyes as she felt the tears trail down the side of her cheek then off the tip of her nose. Slowly she sat up and wiped them away. Tears of bitterness were the tears of mourning. She stared into the campfire and across the way she saw Duncan keeping watch. He had heard her crying the whole night and couldn’t help but feel her heartache. Losing the ones you love is never easy.

His dark eyes watched her as she just stared into the fire and the tears came freely from those deep blue eyes. She looked like her mother but had her father’s eyes. A rare beauty in a world of darkness is what some would say. He remembered losing his family and recalled the Fade when he could have had them back even if it was a lie. As he recalled the days of his youth as a Warden he sighed then looked to Evelyn when he heard humming.

Dax had moved to rest his head on her lap and gently she patted his head before rubbing his ears as she hummed a tune that her mother did when she was a child. It was an old tune that even Duncan knew and he smiled a bit.  The tune was haunting and almost sad at the same time. He remembered it being a tune of love being unrequited or something close. It was a haunting melody and as he watched Evelyn he could see the sadness grow as she watched the fire. 

The soft whine from Dax as he nudged the hand of his mistress showed he felt as she did. He slowly sat up with his ears back as he watched Evelyn sadly. His whine got her attention as he nudged her again then licked her cheek before trying to pretend he was a lapdog just for her amusement. Softly she smiled as the tears fell down to her chin then fell onto his nose. His dark brown eyes looked up as he whined again. Her head shook as she let herself laugh just a little. It was enough for him to shake his stubby tail.

“Mabari are very smart.” Duncan said finally, “He feels as you do, Evelyn.”

Evelyn looked over to Duncan and nodded her head slowly, “He’s all I have left…”

Duncan got up, “It’s not all you have left dear lady.” He lightly tapped his head then moved to put the fire out. Dawn had finally come.

Memories…I’ll never forget….Never.

She got up off the cold ground and gathered her gear. They had been traveling together for the past few weeks only stopping to barter with traveling merchants and once in Redcliffe to speak with Arl Eamon. Evelyn had
opted to stay at the Chantry during that visit and offered prayers to the Maker for her family. She had prayed that Fergus was safe though she wasn’t sure if he wasn’t already dead. His group could have been ambushed by Howe’s men on the way to Ostagar for all she knew. They only had half a day’s walk to Ostagar now.

 

The walk was quieter than usual. Duncan respected Evelyn’s need for silence and Dax stayed beside her. She looked around hoping seeing what the Korcari Wilds were like but they were on the outskirts. There were stories about witches and barbarians in the wilds but she didn’t really believe them. She figured they were old wives tales to scare people mainly children.  The Imperial Highway was rather boring when she thought about it. It was then she noticed how silent it was. She sighed a bit then caught up to Duncan to walk beside him, “I am sorry for being so quiet, Duncan.”

“There is no need to apologize.” Duncan replied, “Words of comfort can feel empty during these times. I was like you when I lost my parents. You never really value what you have until it is gone…I learned that the hard way.”

Evelyn nodded her head slowly, “Thank you, Duncan…”

“You are welcome.” Duncan replied honestly and gestured ahead. A stone fortress was ahead of them. It was a ruin but still took one’s breath away when gazed upon. Ostagar was what only people spoke of in old legends. She looked in awe at the ruins as they approached. Details in the stone despite the years of wear from weather were still visible. She felt like she was on sacred ground at that point. They made their way up to the main area
and saw guards awaiting them. She took a deep breath then let it out slowly to calm her nerves.

“This is Ostagar. The Tevinter Imperium built this to keep the wilder folk from invading it seems only fitting we make our stand here against the darkspawn. The King’s forces have already encountered the darkspawn
several times.  Here is where the bulk of the horde will show itself…” He paused a moment as they kept walking then glanced at her, “This Blight must be stopped here and now. If it spreads to the north Ferelden will fall.”

Evelyn pondered what Duncan said for a moment then wondered why they would need so many men to fight the darkspawn. Then she remembered the stories of the Blight and how the darkspawn were not like fighting an army from Orlais. She bit her lower lip as she looked ahead.

So it begins.

 “Ho there, Duncan!” A voice called as they approached the span that connected one side of Ostagar to the other. The man behind the voice was none other than King Calian himself.

Evelyn was stunned to see the King of Ferelden greeting Duncan. He was a handsome man with blond hair and blue eyes that reminded her of her father. His armor was gold and identified him as someone of importance. She didn’t say a word as she looked at Calian in awe and respect.  Her father had told her stories of King Maric and she could  only assume that Calian was like Maric. She watched Duncan’s reaction as he seemed slightly surprised by the greeting.

“King Calian!” Duncan looked at the King a bit surprised as they joined arms in a friendly greeting, “ I didn’t expect a…” Duncan started before he was cut off.

“A royal welcome?” Calian finished and grinned boyishly, “I was beginning to wonder if you were going to miss all the fun.”

Duncan tried not to dampen the enthusiasm Calian expressed over the war against the darkspawn, “Not if I could help it, your majesty.”

“Then I’ll have the mighty Duncan at my side in battle after all. Glorious!” Calian said proudly as he stood to the side with Duncan slowly taking his place next him. Evelyn raised her brow slightly at the scene and wasn’t sure if she should laugh or be serious.

The mood quickly changed as Calian turned to look at Duncan directly, “The other Wardens told me you found a new recruit. I take it this is she?”

Oh great…here we go…

“Allow me to introduce you, your majesty…”Duncan politely suggested before Calian again cut him off.

“There is no need to be so formal, Duncan.” Calian said as he moved to stand before Evelyn, “We’ll be shedding blood together after all.” His eyes looked down to her, “Ho there friend. Would you be kind enough to tell me your name?”

Ho there friend? He’s kidding…

“Evelyn Cousland, your majesty.” She replied.

“Ah you are Bryce’s youngest.” Calian smiled, “And when will your father be arriving?”

Evelyn felt like she had been slapped in the face and looked down, “He isn’t…” There seemed to be a shadow over her face and Calian looked at her puzzled. He looked at Duncan.

“Teryn and Teryna Cousland have been murdered by Arl Howe. We barely made it out alive.” Duncan answered as he moved over to Evelyn’s side, “If we had not made it to Ostagar Howe could have told you any story he wished.”

“Arl Howe will be punished for his crimes.” Calian said angrily and looked at Evelyn, “You have my word that once we route the darkspawn I will personally march my army to Highever to bring Howe to justice.”

Her eyes slowly moved from the ground to meet with Calian. They were glassy from fighting back tears and she nodded, “As long as Howe pays I will be content.”

“Your brother arrived here a few days ago. He was assigned to scout the wilds.” Calian said and seemed to empathize with her loss.

Evelyn frowned, “I need to tell Fergus. Is there no way to contact him?”

Calian shook his head, “I am sorry, my lady but no. I’m afraid he won’t be back by the battle either. You will have to wait until it is over.” He laughed a bit, “I’m not even sure this is a real blight to begin with.”

Duncan raised his brow, “You sound disappointed…”

“I was hoping for a battle like in the tales.” Calian admitted and looked at Duncan, “But I guess this will have to do.” He cleared his throat then stood straight, “Well I must get back to the war tent. Loghain is probably looking for me and wanting for bore me with more of his plans.” He bowed a bit then left with his entourage.

Watching him leave Evelyn had to wonder about Calian. He seemed to be over confident in his battles with the darkspawn. It was as if he had no worries at all. She had to commend him on his ability to empathize with her but somehow she felt his words were hollow. Her eyes shifted to look at Duncan, “He’s not taking this seriously…”

Duncan gestured for her to follow, “No but I cannot tell the King what to do in this matter.”

“He respects you it seems so why not? If he reveres the Grey Wardens so much why wouldn’t he heed your council?” Evelyn asked Duncan with her brow raised even more. She crossed her arms as they stopped at the top of the steps that led to the span that took them to the camps, “What would you have him do, Duncan?”

He must think Gryhpon's fly out Duncan's ass or something...Be nice, Evelyn, be nice...

Duncan looked at her seeing that spirited nature her father told him about, “I would have him wait for the Grey Wardens from Orlais but he will not…Teryn Loghain’s forces will have to suffice, but enough for now. We must prepare for the joining.”

“The joining…” Evelyn repeated as she looked at him, “Well I guess I’m ready but…”

“But?” Duncan looked at her curiously with a brow raised to match hers. He seemed to be mocking her in a way but in a playful manner.

She smiled a little, “Could we get something warm to eat first?”

Duncan laughed and patted her shoulder, “Yes, of course. We have time before nightfall.” He walked with her down the steps, “You can wander around the camp but don’t leave it. I’ll be at the Grey Warden camp if you need
anything. Once you’re ready to start the Joining…look for a man named Alistair. He’s somewhere in the camp.”

“Alistair?” Evelyn tilted her head a bit. The name sounded familiar but she couldn’t put her finger on it. She shrugged, “Okay. Where do I find the food?”

Duncan laughed, “Follow your nose.”

Evelyn wrinkled her nose at him, “I’m not a mabari.”

Dax barked and wagged his tail before running off. He knew the way.

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O-o...

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LOL

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Keep it coming hun, I enjoy your works

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I've got the next chapter up. I'll try to post it soon here.

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It takes a lot of courage to release the familiar and seemingly secure, to embrace the new. But there is no real security in what is no longer meaningful.There is more security in the adventurous and exciting, for in movement there is life, and in change there is power. – Alan Cohen



Chasing Dax down was always a chore and by the time she caught up with him he was happily gnawing on a bone given to him by an Ashe Warrior. Evelyn shook her head as she approached and looked at the man, “I am sorry for any trouble he’s caused you.”

“No trouble at all. He’s a fine mabari.” He replied then moved to tend to his own hound.

Evelyn had heard of the Ashe Warriors from Ser Jean and how they treasured their hounds in a fight. She pet Dax thinking about the danger she was putting him in and sighed a bit. He just chomped away at the bone, pulling the bits of meat off it with his front teeth. She straightened herself out then looked around, “Well…Dax take that bone to where Duncan is and stay there.”

Dax seemed to ignore her as he cracked the end of the bone with his back teeth. Evelyn raised her brow and put her hands on her hips, “You hear me?”

A whine confirmed he did and he got up. With a toss of the bone in his mouth he trotted off towards the Wardens’ camp. Evelyn shook her head and went to take a look around hoping to find a bit to eat. As she walked she saw two large tents adjacent to each other. She recognized the royal banner but the other she didn’t. As she approached the King’s tent she looked at the guard who just watched her carefully. She just smiled a little then headed off to the other tent where the guard there was a bit more abrasive.

“Move along.” He ordered.

Evelyn raised her brow at him, “Pardon?”

“I said move along.” He repeated in an annoyed tone.

She wasn’t used to being ordered around by a guard and it showed in her eyes as she stared at the guard. He just stared right back at her. Her hands moved to her hips, “Whose tent is this anyway?”

“Teryn Loghain.” He answered and narrowed his eyes at her. His grip on his halberd seemed to tighten.

Loghain eh? Lets see who this guy is…

“I wish an audience with the Teryn.” Evelyn shifted her weight as she moved her hands from her hips only to cross her arms over her chest. She casually looked at her fingernails, “Make it quick.”

The guard seemed a bit baffled by her request and studied her carefully. She was no ordinary woman. She seemed high born and not the regular soldier. He eyed her again then grumbled, “Stay here…I suppose you have something important to tell the Teryn.”

Evelyn grinned as she watched the guard disappear into the tent. She could hear some words but they were muffled. The tone sounded a bit annoyed and angry but shortly after the exchange out came a man with dark hair and piercing blue-grey eyes. If she was the timid sort she would have probably shrunk under him then ran off but it wasn’t her nature. She noticed his armor was Orlaisian and wondered why he would wear such a relic. Her eyes met with his and he seemed to raise his brow at her.

“Oh…you must be the new recruit Calian has been talking about.” Loghain said as if it was nothing. He studied her closer, “I heard of what Calian promised to you. I’m sure Howe will get what he deserves.”

Her eyes flickered a bit with anger but she controlled it. She couldn’t help but felt nothing of a disregard towards her family. Her anger faded slowly though her eyes showed determination to see justice served. Loghain took note of it but showed no emotion that indicated he approved of her.

“I am sure justice will be served to Arl Howe for his betrayal.” Evelyn said calmly as she stood her ground.

Loghain remained passive and changed the subject, “I’m sure as a Grey Warden you’ll be fighting alongside Calian?”

“I do not know.” Evelyn replied honestly and kept her eyes on his. Despite her age she wasn’t afraid of him but she did respect him for what he had done for Ferelden.

“If Calian has his way you will be. Now if you’ll excuse me there is a battle to be planned.” Loghain turned and headed back into his tent without even a backwards glance. The guard reassumed his post and gestured for Evelyn to move along.

She sighed then wandered around a bit longer. There were many soldiers seeking the blessing from the Chantry Sisters. She stood to watch the preaching. To her it seemed like a lie after losing everything she loved. Her
eyes shifted away from the blond preaching to the soldiers about the Maker and his bride Andraste. She spotted the Circle of Magi’s camp and figured it wouldn’t hurt to wander over there to see what was going on. There was an elderly woman standing off to the side watching the sermon that caught Evelyn’s attention.

“Erm...Hello?” Evelyn said not sure of the woman was a mage at first but after seeing the staff she had her confirmation. She hadn’t really seen mages before and wondered what they were doing here.

“Hello there.” The woman answered and smiled a bit, “You must be the new Grey Warden everyone is talking about.”

Evelyn blinked a bit, “I have a following already?” 

The woman chuckled then smiled, “I am Wynne, senior mage of the circle.”

“I am Evelyn. Pleased to meet you, Wynne.” Evelyn offered her hand in a friendly gestured.

Wynne shook it and noted the manners and smiled, “Pleased to meet you as well. I take it you have faced the darkspawn before?”

Evelyn shook her head, “No, I haven’t.”

“Horrible creatures.” Wynne said as she looked at Evelyn.

“Have you?” Evelyn asked curiously as she watched Wynne’s reaction.

Wynne just nodded, “Only stragglers from time to time. I haven’t been part of a battle like this before. We can only hope it will go well.”

“Isn’t that what the Sisters are here for? To preach to us about the Maker so we have hope?” Evelyn didn’t sound like she believed it herself but she had to ask.

Wynne could tell there was a hidden pain but didn’t feel it was her place to question Evelyn. Instead she smiled warmly, “Hope is all we have in these dark times, but I think Duncan meant for you to do something other than talk to me.”

Evelyn just nodded and walked away from Wynne feeling that she probably should have kept her mouth shut. She was approaching the armory and saw a man trying to sweet talk a woman. Hearing the conversation nearly made Evelyn laugh but she kept quiet as she observed.

“I’ll take that as a no…Suit yourself then.” The man ended and watched as the woman walked away with an annoyed look. He turned around and looked a bit miffed when he saw Evelyn. His expression went from down on his luck to hello beautiful. Evelyn raised her brow at him, “Struck out eh?”

“Nah she wants me.” He said coolly before looking her over and realized she was the new recruit, “Hm well you’re not what I thought you’d be.”

Evelyn couldn’t believe he just said that, “And you wonder why woman flee from you?”

“That’s not what I meant…I mean you’re a woman.” He stammered.

“Shall I get you a shovel?” Evelyn shot back to him and crossed her arms over her chest.

He grinned a bit and was blushing, “Sorry that’s really not what I meant…It’s just that from what I’ve heard and seen.” He held his hand out, “I’m Daveth.”

She took his hand and shook it firmly then squeezed, “Evelyn.”

“So…Have you heard anything about the Joining?” Daveth asked as he withdrew his hand and tried not to shake it from the slight pain. Once he relaxed he looked at her awaiting her answer.

“Not really.” Evelyn admitted, “Do you?”

Daveth looked at her seriously, “Well I was sneaking around camp last night and heard that we’re getting sent into the Wilds. All the secrecy is making my nose twitch.”

“Paranoid aren’t we?” Evelyn grinned, “Even if they do send us into the Wilds like you heard why worry?”

“The Wilds are not a place to let your guard down. There are Chasind and the Witch of the Wilds…” Daveth replied with a hint of worry in his voice.

Evelyn just shook her head, “Well I’m not worried.”

“You sound like that knight…Well I better head back to Duncan. See you later.” Daveth said as he walked off and glanced back at her for a moment.

She raised her brow at him curiously and thought he was a bit jittery for being a recruit. Her head shook and she wandered up to see what was there. There were injured soldiers here and one in particular was out of control. He
looked as if he had gone insane and she felt pity for him. Whatever the darkspawn were it was enough to drive someone to insanity it seemed. Her thoughts were distracted by the preaching of another Sister and she looked to see that the gathering was knights rather than soldiers. She approached slowly and listened before the priestess turned to her smiling.

“Are you seeking the blessing of the Maker, Grey Warden?”

Okay this is creeping me out…Did Duncan just send a sketch of me while I was asleep to these people?

Evelyn was put on the spot and she sighed a bit before nodding, “Please.” She knelt down and accepted the blessing though her heart wasn’t in it. Slowly she stood then noticed one of the knights looking at her. She tilted her head a bit and approached him, “Something you need?”

“Um no.” He replied then stared at her again, “You’re not what I was expecting.”

Evelyn clenched her hands into fists then let it go before she raised her brow, “Okay that’s the second time I’ve heard that phrase…So let me just spell this out…Yes I am a woman and I can handle myself rather well thank you very much.”

“I meant no offense.” He said and frowned, “I am Ser Jory from Highever.”

“Highever?” Evelyn repeated and frowned as she looked at him. She didn’t know there was another from her home here aside from Fergus’s men who weren’t at the camp anyway. Her eyes studied him and she thought she recognized him but she felt like an idiot for not being able to figure out where she saw him.

He looked at her confused, “Something wrong, my lady?”

“Sorry…It’s just I wasn’t expecting to see anyone from Highever.” Evelyn looked at him, “I am Evelyn Cousland.”

Ser Jory blinked then bowed his head, “My ladyship…”

Evelyn shook her head, “Please…” She touched his shoulder, “It is unnecessary Ser Jory.” Her voice seemed to quiver and he looked at her unsure of what to make of the situation. She heard him clear his throat before she
removed her hand, “Much has changed in Highever. We will talk about it later.”

“Of course, my lady. I will return to camp for now.” Ser Jory bowed a bit before taking his leave.

Once he was gone Evelyn looked around again before head back the way she had come. She wasn’t allowed in the army camp for whatever reason and felt that it was probably some order given by Duncan. As she passed some hanging cages she heard something.

“Psst…You…”

Her eyes scanned around until she spotted a man in a cage in nothing more than his underwear. She wondered what he had done to deserve such a punishment. The fact that he was trying to get her attention piqued her interest and she moved towards the cage, “Yes?”

“Got any food for a poor soul?” He asked hoarsely.

“Heh…Sorry but I’m looking for food myself.” Evelyn replied and saw him frown. From the look of it he had gone days without food or water, perhaps longer. He didn’t appear to be wounded but with all the dirt on him it was hard
to tell. She tried not to gag at the smell and sighed a little before starting to move, “Sorry I can’t help.”

“Wait! Please!” He begged and fell to his knees. The man was broken in spirit and she pitied him more.

She stopped and decided it wouldn’t hurt to listen to him some more. He looked at her then gestured to the guard, “I know he has some food. Perhaps you can get him to give me a bit? He stashed it away in his pocket. I can make it worth your while…”

“Worth my while? You think you have to bribe me?” Evelyn sounded amused at the thought then shrugged, “Well let’s hear it.”

“I have this key you see…It unlocks the chest over there by the tranquil fellow.” He said with a look that almost told her he was proud of that fact.

She couldn’t help but be more curious, “I see…And how did you hide this key?”

“Swallowed it.” He grinned then showed her the key, “Just got it back actually…A bit unpleasant.”

Ew…I think I won’t need to eat after all.

“I’m sure it was…” Evelyn replied while trying not to look grossed out. She cleared her throat, “So you want food from the guard and in exchange I get the key that’s supposed to open that chest?”

“You got it lass.” He said with a nod and a smile.

Evelyn grinned a bit, “What if the key doesn’t work?”

“Well…I haven’t thought of that.” He admitted and sat back, “You see I lifted this here key from a mage. He was drunk so I just tried my luck. I was gunna take the contents of the chest but was caught and here I am. They call me a deserter.”

“So I see…What did you plan on doing after looting?” She asked plainly and crossed her arms.

“Well I was gunna leave.” He said then bah’d at himself for being so forthcoming with his plan.

Evelyn smirked a little, “Ah the truth. As much as I dislike those who would abandon their post I don’t see how it’s justice to starve a man.” She moved away from the cage to speak with the guard. He looked slightly peeved and was muttering to himself when Evelyn approached him, “Excuse me I’d like to talk to you about the man in that cage.”

“What about him? He’s a deserter.” He snapped.

She used her charm to soothe the guard, “Well I had a chat with him actually…”

“Bet it wasn’t much of a conversation.” He laughed then looked at Evelyn directly. The blue eyes he noticed quickly then the reddish hair. A pretty lass in the camp. He cleared his throat.

“He said he hasn’t had food or water for days.” Evelyn said softly as she frowned, “Even if the man is a deserter he shouldn’t be left to starve…”

The guard raised his brow, “Starve? Ha! His head should be on a pike for the others to see.”

“Oh that’s not what you really think is it? Here is a man who’s going to be spending his days watching a battle while starving. You could at least spare him a little bit of food. It might keep him quiet.” Evelyn smiled a little
letting a glimmer of hope show in her eyes. A hope that he would fall for her ploy to give her the food.

“Oh fine!” He grumbled then handed over a handkerchief that held some bread along with dried meat. “If anyone asks why he’s burping I’m blaming you.”

Evelyn smiled as she took it, “You have a good heart.” She didn’t wait for his response and walked back to the cage. The man looked at her hoping for the food. She showed him the bread and jerky, “Here.”

“Thank the Maker! You’re truly a good lass.” He smiled as he took the food and then handed her the key, “Deal is a deal.”

She let the key drop into the handkerchief then wrapped it up for safe keeping, “May the Maker watch over you, ser.” She wave a mock salute then went on her way. It seemed to make her feel better to help him out. She was reminded of her youth and for a moment a genuine smile played over her lips. Without even knowing it she had wandered into part of the ruins thanks to her distracted thoughts. The sound of arguing broke her from the trance and she found herself looking at two men bickering.

As Evelyn got closer she saw that one of the men was a mage and the other was a young man she wasn’t too sure about. The conversation came to an abrupt end as the mage stormed off and the young man saw her then with a roguish grin walked towards her, “You know, one good thing about the Blight is how it brings people together.”

She noticed his blond hair, hazel eyes and great physique. Overall he was rather handsome and he seemed to be the type that knew it too. Her eyes met with his and she noticed his curious expression. She coughed a little then responded to his supposed joke, “I’m sorry, what?”

He seemed to smile a little, “Nevermind. You must be the Grey Warden Duncan told us about. I am Alistair the newest Grey Warden.”

“Ah so you’re Alistair.” Evelyn mused and felt something familiar about him. She looked at his eyes again and couldn’t think straight. She smiled a little, “I am Evelyn.”

She offered her hand as a formal greeting and he looked at her before taking it. There was something when they touched. Her brow raised slightly as she shook his hand then pulled her hand back. He nodded a bit, “You know…It never occurred to me that there aren’t many female Grey Wardens…Why is that?”

Oh great him too?

“So you want more women in the Grey Wardens?” Evelyn looked at him as she put a hand on her hip. She was amused to see his reaction as he quickly stood up straight then started to ramble.

“I was just saying that it would be nice to see more of them not that I’m a lecher or anything…Don’t look at me like that…” He cleared his throat and blushed just a little.

Evelyn laughed a little then shook her head before she changed the subject more for his benefit than her own, “So what was that about?”

“Oh you mean the mage? I was delivering a message from the Revered Mother. You see I used to be a Templar.” Alistair replied as he walked with Evelyn out of the ruins, “I guess she figured it was sort of a joke to send me…Lucky me.”

“So you’re a Templar? A mage hunter?” Evelyn asked as she looked at him curiously.

He glanced at her, “Well I never took my vows. Duncan conscripted me.”

“Ah.” Evelyn replied, “Um so what exactly is your duty again?”

“Oh I get to go with you into the Wilds.” Alistair grinned boyishly.

Evelyn didn’t have a good feeling about that and wrinkled her nose, “So you’re playing our nanny then…Wonderful. I leave Highever to be left in the hands of a nanny.”

“I’ll try not to embarrass you.” Alistair quipped and seemed to have found someone who could dish as well as take. He smirked to himself a bit then glanced at her again thinking she looked familiar for a second. It wasn’t until she glanced over her shoulder at him with a raised brow he noticed he had stopped walking. He just shrugged and caught up.

“Admiring the view?” Evelyn whispered to him.

“I have no idea what you’re talking about.” Alistair replied with a serious look though she notice his eyes told her otherwise.

She shook her head as they reached Duncan’s camp. He looked relived to see them, “Ah I see you found Alistair. Now we can continue with the Joining that is if Alistair is done roughing up mages…”

“I’m sorry, Duncan. The revered Mother asked me to take the message to the mage.” Alistair frowned and looked down. He almost reminded Evelyn of a puppy.

“So she put up you to sassing the mage did she?” Duncan asked as he raised his brow. “Alistair we must try to keep peace. Try to remember that.”

Evelyn wanted to speak up but she held her tongue. She gave Alistair a sympathetic look before all attention was back on Duncan. He looked at each of them, “There is a task for each of you in order to complete the Joining. You
are to go into the Kocari Wilds to retrieve vials of darkspawn blood for each of you.”

“Vials of blood?” Evelyn asked as she looked at Duncan confused, “We need their blood? Isn’t it poisonous?”

“That it is, but it is part of the Joining.” Duncan said in a serious tone, “You will see why when we prepare for the Joining but there is another task you need to accomplish in the Wilds.” He turned to the fire, “Somewhere in the
Wilds there is an old Grey Warden fortress. It is probably ruins by now but in those ruins lies something very important.”

“Such as?” She raised her brow wondering why the Wardens would leave something important behind in the Wilds to begin with.

“They are old treaties that the Wardens can use to call upon allies to fight against the Blight.” Duncan replied and turned to look at her, “There is a protective seal on them that only a Warden can break. We need these treaties.”

“I don’t understand why we would leave something important like that behind.” Alistair said and seemed uneasy about the task. He looked at Duncan but didn’t question him further.

“So we basically need to fetch blood and get these treaties? Sounds…easy enough…” Evelyn didn’t like this but there wasn’t much she could do about it, “Um where do we look for the treaties?”

“Alistair will know what to look for. He’ll be guiding you.” Duncan replied.

All eyes shifted to Alistair who just smiled then muttered to himself, “No pressure…”

“Well what are we waiting for?” Evelyn said as she moved away from the fire. Dax was following behind her wagging his tail in anticipation. She paused hearing him panting then looked at him, “Sorry, Dax, but I think it’s best that you stay here. Duncan need guarding.”

“Ha!” Daveth laughed then walked up to Evelyn, “Duncan is a fast old bugger. I doubt he needs protecting…You on the other hand…” He grinned before the sound of a growl got his attention, “Nevermind.”

Evelyn grinned then knelt down, “Good boy.” She rubbed his ears, “Stay here and be a good boy. Duncan will watch you ok?”

Dax whined a little then barked before running back to Duncan. Evelyn slowly stood up and walked towards the gate that blocked the way to the Wilds. As the group approached the gate the guard perked up, “I hear you all are heading to the Wilds. Good luck. Maker watch over you.”

He opened up the gates and they slowly moved past them. Evelyn heard the gates close and she glanced back seeing Dax’s muzzle peering through the slants of wood. He barked at her and wagged his tail as if it wish her luck. She smiled then heard Daveth, “You coming?”

“Daveth it’s not polite to yell at a lady.” Jory chastised as he moved ahead.

Daveth shrugged and moved on with Jory. Alistair watched as Evelyn joined them and moved past him. He smiled a bit, “Well let’s get this over with.”

Modifié par tallon1982, 16 janvier 2010 - 02:55 .