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Next chapter is up on fanfiction.net. and for those who can't find it here it is lol.


“There is no hunting like the hunting of man, and those who have hunted armed men long enough and liked, never care for anything else thereafter.” – Ernest Hemingway

The path winded down towards the base of Ostagar and it was then the full blown stench of the swamp hit them. There was no mistaking the smell of mildew, stagnant water and mud mixed in with only Maker knows. Evelyn wrinkled her nose as she looked around, “Ugh and I though Dax smelt bad after a rain storm…”

“A pretty nose like yours shouldn’t be smelling such things.” Daveth grinned gamely at her as he got his bow ready.

“Then stand over there.” Evelyn gestured ahead at a small hill, “Maybe then my nose might not be so offended.”

Jory and Alistair laughed as Daveth bah’d then moved ahead to do some tracking. His skills were more geared toward picking pockets but to pick a pocket you had to know what to look for in a target. It seemed like hours and Evelyn just rolled her eyes as she trekked ahead despite Alistair’s protests. He glanced at the others, “Women…”

“I heard that.” Evelyn called back as she knelt down and used her dagger to cut back some of the tall grass. Paw prints were in the mud but they weren’t those of a mabari. Her brow arched as she studied them closer and used her fingers to check the depth. She remembered what Fergus and her father taught her about hunting wild game. Her eyes scanned the area before she heard a faint growl. So held out her hand for the men to get ready and slowly she stood. Out of the brush came several wolves, teeth bared and from the look of them they were starving.

“Something tells me they find us tasty.” Daveth quipped as he notched an arrow on his bow and took aim. Jory held his claymore ready while Alistair readied himself with his sword and shield. Evelyn slowly backed up while holding her dagger steady. The eyes of the wolves watched her every move since she was closer to them. They were waiting for the right moment to strike. She managed to get back far enough for Alistair to tug her back by the edge of the shield she still carried on her back. Her eyes met with his as she shot him a look that told him she was fine. The men moved to shield her as the wolves began to move closer unaware that a wolf leader was taking a higher road.

Evelyn removed the shield to set it down on the ground for now. She was dusting it off before she noticed the wolf in the reflecting. Without a second thought she turned and flung her dagger at the wolf striking it’s flank as he moved to attack. The cry of the wolf signaled the others to strike. Jory swung his sword in a wide arch to catch a couple wolves off guard while Daveth let loose a few arrows from his bow before switching to his daggers. Alistair slammed his shield against a wolf that lunged at him. Evelyn had to rely on her skills using just her family’s sword for the time being. Once the last wolf fell they looked at the bodies and Evelyn felt guilt for killing them.

She moved to the body of the lead wolf and took her dagger from its side. Her hand touched its pelt before she backed away. Alistair could see that despite her tough exterior she was still a girl. He understood how she felt despite it. As Jory poked a few of the wolves to make sure they were dead Alistair checked his shield to see the teeth marks and splatters of blood on it. He thought that maybe he’d be able to get a better shield once back at camp if his made it that long. It was then he noticed that they were spending too much time dawdling.

“Come on. We’ve got vials to fill and treaties to find.” Alistair sheathed his sword and moved on.

Evelyn followed after putting the family shield back on her back. She stayed close and saw something moving on the path ahead. They all moved quickly to see it was a soldier that was crawling. He was covered in blood that looked like a mixture of his own and something else. Evelyn glanced at Alistair, “We should help him.”

“I’ve got some bandages in my pack.” He knelt down and tended to the wounded soldier.

Evelyn offered him some water and glanced at Alistair, “Should we take him back?”

“No, I can make it on my own.” The soldier said with a tinge of pain in his voice. He was helped up by Evelyn and Alistair, “I need to report in…We were jumped by those darkspawn…My comrades were killed.”

“Before you go, have you see a man named Fergus? He’d be wearing this symbol.” Evelyn turned to show the shield then looked at the soldier.

He shook his head, “Sorry, but no. I’ll be going now.” He nodded his thanks then took off towards the path they had used to get down to the Wilds.

“Fergus?” Daveth asked as he looked at Evelyn, “You lover perhaps?”

Evelyn shot him a look that could have made a man’s heart freeze before she answered him, “He’s my brother.” She said nothing more and moved ahead to see if there were other dangers like traps.

“What’s her problem?” Daveth muttered as Jory moved beside him.

Alistair watched Evelyn but spoke to them in a solemn voice, “Her family was murdered and her brother is all she has left. We’re possibly looking at the last of the Couslands.”

“So she’s out here risking her life? Not exactly smart is it?” He commented back and was given a light smack to the back of his head by Jory, “Ow! What was that for?”

“Do not disrespect Lady Cousland like that.” Jory said sternly, “It is a honor to serve beside such a family. She deserves respect.”

“Heh respect? Looks to me she could use something else but that’s just me.” Daveth grinned then hurried off before Jory could punch him.

Alistair just shook his head, “Let him go, Ser Jory. Some never understand what it is like to lose family.”

They all caught up to Evelyn who found a flower. It was pure white with a red center and held a rather lovely scent. She had picked it figuring it could be useful. It was only then Daveth chimed in, “I think one of those Ashe Warrior fellows was asking about this flower. You might be able to get some good coin for this.”

“Why would he want a flower?” Evelyn asked as she glanced at him with a raised brow.

Daveth shrugged, “I think it had something to do with the darkspawn blood and their mabari.”

She wrapped the flower in a large leaf then tucked it into her small pack before Alistair called out, “Be alert!”

“Alert?” Daveth repeated before a black arrow whistled past them. He shoved Evelyn down into the mud, “You okay?”

“I was until you shoved me into the mud.” Evelyn muttered before Daveth got up and moved for better cover. She scrambled to do the same and was nearly hit in the shoulder by an arrow as she dived for the crumbled stone wall. Her eyes glanced over to men who were trying to figure out a plan. She heard the roars of the darkspawn and the sound of their blades hitting the stone to scare them. Her eyes closed for a moment as she gathered her wits before she opened them again. She rummaged through her pack for a few vials Duncan gave her. She looked at the contents of the vials and picked two of the same color. They held an acidic liquid that would be enough to provide a distraction and possibly damage their enemy.

“What in the bloody hell is she doing?” Alistair said as he saw Evelyn sneak around the wall.

Daveth could tell what she was up to, “Oh she’s a sly one she is. I call dibs.”

“Dibs?” Ser Jory raised his brow as he held his sword ready, “How can you think of such things at a time like this?”

“One track mind my friend.” Daveth grinned as he got his daggers ready, “Besides all you talk about is your fair Helena so do you care?”

Alistair just shook his head as he watched Evelyn’s movement and prayed for her to be safe, something he rarely did.

Maker protect and guide her hand…May she find the target she seeks.

Evelyn got as close as she could before she threw the first vial against the rocks followed by the second near another set of rocks. As the vials broken a noxious gas came from them and stung the eyes of the darkspawn. They began to stumble around looking for who threw it but Evelyn managed to get out of reach. She then took a deep breath, held it then charged in to slaughter the darkspawn that had tried to ambush them. Pure adrenaline drove Evelyn to make such a fool hardy move. Her blade sliced a genlock’s head off while her dagger found the throat of another.

“Move!” Alistair ordered as he hurried to join her. His shield bashed into a darkspawn trying to stab Evelyn in the back. His shield cracked on impact and he had to discard it for now. With short swings and thrusts he was able to fight off the darkspawn that came at them. He saw Jory handling himself well despite the look of fear on his face. Daveth looked cold as he sliced his way through the darkspawn.

The fight was pure chaos and fear. It ended when a brief wind blew away the cloud and showed the damage of a Grey Warden’s blade against darkspawn. The ground was littered with six darkspawn bodies. One had his head missing thanks to Alistair and another was run through by Jory.

Evelyn gasped for air as she fell to her knees with her hands coated in darkspawn blood. Her eyes were watery as tears came down her face. Alistair looked similar to her but he helped her back up, “Use the swamp water to clean that off. Jory, Daveth…fill the vials with blood.”

“Aye, Captain.” Daveth joked as he gave a mock salute then went about getting the blood into the vials.

The pool of swamp water was close enough so Alistair could keep an eye on them while Evelyn took care to wash away the blood on her hands. She even washed her face then looked at her reflection in the water. What stared back at her was a scared girl and she knew it to be true.

What are you doing, Evie…You’re going to get yourself killed out here.
She got up and looked at Alistair. His face was splattered with blood and some tears were on his cheeks from having to deal with the distraction she made. She pulled out a handkerchief and doused it with water before offering it to him, “Here.”

He glanced at her then raised his brow, “I don’t need it.”

“You made me clean up so it’s your turn.” Evelyn put the handkerchief in his hand then went to fill a vial of blood so Jory could take his turn getting cleaned up.

Daveth went to clean up as well and looked at Alistair, “I called dibs you know…”

Alistair shook his head then wiped his face before tucking the handkerchief away in his pack. He looked at his shield and sighed, “Duncan is not going to like this.”

“Like what?” Evelyn asked as she put the cork into the vial and put it into her pack safely. She noticed the shield Alistair was looking at was badly damaged, “Oh…I see…”

Maybe I could lend him my father’s shield?

Jory rejoined them with Daveth and he saw the shield, “I think that shield has seen better days…I doubt we’ll find a replacement for it out here.”

“How do you figure? The lack of merchants give it away?” Daveth quipped and crossed his arms while keeping watch for anything unusual like more darkspawn.

Evelyn shook her head and took the shield off her back, “Here…Use this for now.”

“I can’t take that.” Alistair said softly as he looked at her.

She frowned, “But you need it and I can’t use it. I only took it to keep Howe from taking it.” She offered it to him again, “Please? I’d rather not leave you defenseless while I carry it on my back letting it be more of a hindrance and making me look like some sort of deranged turtle.”

Alistair chuckled a little at the turtle comment and smiled a bit at her, “If you insist.” He took the shield from her and for just a moment their hands touched. A familiar feeling of warmth came to him but before he could figure it out her hand was gone. She was already off with the others checking the path out. He looked at the shield before tracing the symbol then stood up to rejoin them.

They traveled further into the Wilds before coming to the ruins of the Grey Warden temple. Around it was a small darkspawn camp with one Emissary and a Hurlock Alpha. Alistair gritted his teeth seeing the odds were stacked against them. Evelyn was watching for the pathing of the darkspawn along with Daveth. She hm’d then ducked back down. With a stick she drew in the mud the layout from what she could see then began to think of a plan of attack.

Alistair looked at the sketch then saw what Evelyn did. They needed to separate the darkspawn from the Emissary and the Hurlock Alpha but the trick was how. She looked at Daveth, “You said you had to outrun Duncan right?”

“Yea…why?” Daveth didn’t like where this was going.

Evelyn took a look at what she had for vials and saw the poison. Her eyes shifted to Daveth’s bow, “Give me your arrows…And your daggers too.” They watched her as she coated the metal with the poison then used the rest on her own blades.

“Poison?” Jory asked curious.

Evelyn nodded, “Well they bleed as we do and I figure why not have the same weakness?” She looked at them, “Daveth is going to use his arrows to kill these darkspawn genlocks. There’s only two that I could see so it shouldn’t be too hard to hit them with your poison arrows. If you run out of arrows well that’s why I put the poison on your daggers.”

She watched Daveth nodded slowly with some fear in his eyes, “Once you kill them Alistair and Jory can move in to take care of the Emissary that’s pathing here.” She marked the mud with an X to show the Emissary.
“What about you?” Daveth finally asked.

“Me?” Evelyn looked innocent, “I’ll be backing you up actually.”
Alistair wasn’t too sure about the plan but knew his target was the Emissary. He’d have to work fast to defeat it and make sure his Templar skills were ready should any spells be cast. He looked at Evelyn, “You should probably come with us actually. Daveth can handle himself well enough.”

“I happen to like having her with me…” Daveth shot back and crossed his arms.
Jory just sighed, “Not this again…”

“Look the longer we bicker about this the quicker we lose the sunlight.” Evelyn reminded them and got up, “If it makes you feel better, Alistair…I’ll go with you.”

Alistair got up then looked at Daveth, “You know what to do?”

“Yea…I just wonder about that Alpha…You said they are more of the fighting sort.” Daveth replied and fiddled with the bowstring.

“I wouldn’t worry too much about him. He’s too far back to be trouble.” Alistair replied then moved down the path with Jory and Evelyn following.

Daveth made his way towards the bridge that led into the darkspawn camp and notched an arrow as he hid behind a tree. He took a deep breath and sighed, “Me and my big mouth. Well…here goes.”

In a smooth move he leaned around the tree and took aim with his bow. For a moment he held his breath before releasing the arrow. The arrow sailed through the air with great speed before striking the genlock in the head. It was a perfect shot and Daveth admired his work before the cry of the other genlock caught his attention.

“****e!” Daveth cursed as he notched another arrow quickly and shot the genlock who raised the alarm. He moved quickly towards the bridge and shot at the Emissary who had decided to join in now. Out of the corner of his eye he saw a figure move and it was Evelyn. She had decided on a frontal attack with Daveth and dashed over the bridge towards the Emissary with a warcry of her own. Not far behind her was Alistair and Jory. As they dashed past Daveth he just grinned then realized he was being left behind. He crossed the bridge and let the arrows fly as he took down incoming darkspawn while the trio dealt with the Emissary.

Alistair had to focus on his Templar skills while Jory and Evelyn cut away at the Emissary until he collapsed from the gashes he suffered. He seemed to be laughing at them until he finally passed on. Daveth joined them and had recollected a few arrows from the bodies of the darkspawn, “Well that didn’t go as planned now did it?”

“Plans rarely do.” Evelyn replied casually then moved on with them. They walked up a slight hill before seeing another small gathering of darkspawn made of hurlocks with the Alpha leading them. Alistair wanted to take out the archers first and Daveth obliged by letting his poisoned arrows hit their marks before the other darkspawn were scrambling towards them.

“Bloody hell! How do they find us so fast?” Daveth blurted as he switched to daggers and began to defend himself.

Jory moved to take on the Alpha who was rallying the darkspawn to fight. Alistair joined him but Evelyn stayed back to help Daveth as they fought off the hurlocks. Evelyn moved one to a tree as she used it as a shield of sorts. The hurlock roared at her as she taunted him. She took a swipe at his side with her sword and ducked the incoming swing from the hurlock. With a thud the hurlock’s sword was stuck in the trunk of the tree and with a grin Evelyn shoved the longsword into his gut. The tip of the blade stuck out the back before she twisted the blade and pulled it out.

Meanwhile Jory and Alistair were thrown back by a wave of energy from the Hurlock Alpha. Alistair forced himself up even though he was exhausted. Jory was using his sword to help himself up and he also had the full attention of the Alpha. Daveth threw his daggers into the back of the Alpha now that he was done with his own hurlock. He grinned as the daggers hit the Alpha in the left shoulder. The Alpha turned to look at Daveth then roared at him before charging his direction. Evelyn threw her own dagger hitting the thigh of the Alpha to slow him down. Jory moved quickly to slash at the Alpha’s torso now that he was distracted by the pain and poison coursing through his veins. Alistair moved in and with a quick slash the head of the Alpha flew off towards the swamp pit below.

The daggers were pulled from the body and given back to their respectful owners. Jory laughed off his fear while Daveth just seemed pleased with himself. Evelyn was emotionless and Alistair noticed. He found it odd that she shut herself off but said nothing as they all entered the ruined building. Ahead of them was a broken chest. Evelyn approached it and examined it, “Seems like someone plundered the place…”

Alistair didn’t like how this looked and was about to say something when another voice broke the silence.

"Well, well, what have we here?”

A woman’s ****ry voice turned the heads of the men but Evelyn stood up slowly and walked towards the source. The woman walked down towards them in a seductive manner and dressed in what could only be assumed were robes. Her eyes were wild as she stared directly at Evelyn and continued speaking, “Are you a vulture, I wonder? A scavenger poking amidst a corpse whose bones have been long since cleaned? Or merely an intruder, come into these darkspawn filled wilds of mine in search of... easy prey?"

Evelyn found the question long winded and crossed her arms as she let her blue eyes pierce into the golden eyes of the witch. She considered answering a question with a question but pushed the idea aside as she finally spoke, “I am neither…”

“She a witch of the wilds she is…” Daveth replied as she looked at Jory then to Alistair.

“Witch of the wilds is it? Such idle fancies.” She seemed to laugh off the idea as she walked past Evelyn and studied the men before standing on some rubble. Her eyes settled on Evelyn, “What brings you here?”

“Don’t answer her she looks chasind.” Alistair said to Evelyn with caution in his voice.

Evelyn glanced at him and could see that Templar training was starting to kick in for him. Her eyes shifted to the woman as she spoke again, “Oh you fear barbarians will swoop down upon you?”

“Yes…swooping is bad…”Alistair replied as his eyes narrowed at the woman.
“And what say you? Women do not scare as easily as men. Tell me your name and I shall tell you mine.” The woman put her hands on her hips as she awaited an answer.

“I am Evelyn. Pleased to meet you.” Evelyn replied and bowed her head a bit. If she knew anything about mages it was that it was best to be on their good side if possible.

“Well that is a proper civil greeting. I am Morrigan.” She smiled a bit as if pleased before she looked at the group, “What you seek is no longer here.”
“Here no longer? You stole them! You must be some sort of sneaky …witch thief!” Alistair blurted and stepped forward as if ready to hit her with some sort of Templar trick.

Evelyn held out her arm to block Alistair and looked at him calmly as she smiled to assure him it would be alright. He wasn’t sure why he backed off but he did.

Morrigan looked amused crossed her arms before Evelyn spoke to her, “Who took the treaties?”

“Twas my mother in fact.” Morrigan replied as she continued to study them like some sort of project.

“Can you take us to her?” Evelyn asked hoping this would get them out of harm’s way.

“Now that is a reasonable request. I like you.” Morrigan smirked.
Alistair grumbled then glanced at Evelyn, “I’d be careful if I were you. First it’s I like you then zap…Frog time.”

Evelyn tried not to smirk at Alistair as she joked, “Well Alistair if you get turned into a frog you can be assured that as a child I used to kiss them in hopes one would change into a Prince.”

He blinked a bit at her retort and was about to come back with a witty remark when Daveth disrupted the moment, “Are you crazy? They’ll put us in the pot they will!”

“If it’s warmer than it is out here it will be a welcome change.” Jory quipped and moved to Evelyn’s side supporting her.

“This way.” Morrigan gestured as she began to walk down a path away from the ruins. Evelyn followed without question and behind her the others fell in line. She had no idea if this was the best choice but Duncan did say he needed those treaties.

Modifié par tallon1982, 20 janvier 2010 - 09:53 .


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Please let me know if this is too much rambling or something needs to be cut back or added. Like I had mentioned before I'm rusty when it comes to writing like this lol

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I really like the interplay between the characters!! This is one of my favourite parts and I wish there was more interaction between these characters. You've definitely captured what I was wanting. I agree that it needs to be split up, but I'm not sure where. I'll keep thinking on it -- darn, that means I need to read it again. LOL

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lol sorry! I'm going to work on breaking them up more that's for sure.

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"Trust yourself. You know more than you think you do." - Benjamin Spock


The trek through the Wilds led by Morrigan brought them to a hut that had seen better days. There wasn’t much around the hut aside from the usual swamp but there was a different feeling here. To Evelyn it felt strangely safe despite the darkspawn being around. Alistair said he could sense them and he still was alert. Daveth was still timid and too close for her comfort.

“Stop staring at my ass.” Evelyn growled as she glanced back at Daveth who just looked at her innocently.

Once her attention turned back to the hut Daveth jokingly made it look like he was going to grab her when Jory slapped him in the back of the head, “Ow!”

Alistair cracked a smile at that one then went back to being serious as Morrigan picked up her pace, “Mother, I bring before you four Grey Wardens who…”

“I see them girl.” Flemeth said with a short tone while she crossed her arms.
They came before Flemeth and she was not all that she seemed. Her hair was grey and disheveled but her clothing seemed modern. There was a wild look in her eyes just like Morrigan’s yet there wisdom beyond her years. Evelyn stood front and center with Alistair to her right side. The woman was studying each of them and set her focus on Evelyn, “Mmm. Much as I expected.”

Alistair scoffed, “Are we suppose to believe you were expecting us?”

It was obvious to Evelyn that Alistair did not like this whole scenario one bit. His muscles tightened in his neck and she could tell he was ready to spring to action if either of the witches made a wrong move. Strangely enough Flemeth just smiled at Alistair almost as if she knew he would say those exact words.

“You are required to do nothing, least of all believe, shut one’s eyes tight or open one’s arms wide…either way, one’s a fool!” She replied as her eyes focused on Alistair.

“She’s a witch, I tell you! We shouldn’t be talking to her!” Daveth spoke up and seemed to cringe behind Evelyn more.

She kicked her leg back towards him to shut him up but Jory spoke up, “Quiet, Daveth! If she’s really a witch, do you want to make her mad?”

All eyes were on Daveth who just swallowed hard then took a step back to nurse his knee along with his pride. Flemeth just laughed then smiled broadly, “There is a smart lad. Sadly irrelevant to the larger scheme of things, but it is not I who decides. Believe what you will.”

Evelyn’s brow arched at her words and she glanced back at Jory wondering why his words were irrelevant or was there a hint at something else. She turned her attention back to find Flemeth right in her personal space. They stood eye to eye and Evelyn refused to blink. Her blue eyes were clear like the sea on a day after the storm. Much of her father was in her.

“And what of you?” Her stare was intense and it seemed like she was trying to read her mind, “Does her female mind give you a different viewpoint? What do you believe?”

Evelyn blinked her eyes then looked away and replied softly, “I’m not sure what to believe…” In truth Evelyn believed that the Maker abandoned her family in their darkest hour, that the Maker abandoned her to be left alone in the world.

“A statement that possesses more wisdom than it implies.” She looked at them in a thoughtful manner and smiled, “Be always aware…or is it oblivious? I can never remember.” She just shrugged not really caring if she remembered or not. Her eyes focused on Evelyn again, and once more their eyes locked on each other, “So much about you is uncertain…and yet I believe. Do I? Why, it seems I do!”

Believe? What in the Maker’s name does she believe? I have lost my faith…Vengeance is my comfort.

“This is a dreaded Witch of the Wilds?” Alistair sounded amused as he looked at Evelyn. He was grinning a little and had dropped his guard just enough to relax.

“Witch of the Wilds, eh?” Flemeth sounded very amused and glanced at Morrigan, “Morrigan must have told you that.”

Morrigan looked away trying to play innocent but her mother knew better. Flemeth looked back to them with a devilish grin, “She fancies such tales, though she would never admit it! Oh, how she dances under the moon!”

Her laugh made Morrigan shake her head and cover her face in embarrassment, “they did not come to listen to your wild takes, Mother.”

“True, they came for their treaties, yes? And before you begin barking, your precious seal wore off long again. I have protected these.” She moved to retrieve the parchments from her hut then came back just as quickly. With care she handed them to Evelyn rather than Alistair and with reluctance Evelyn took them.

“You…oh. You protected them?” Alistair felt slightly ashamed that he was about to accuse Flemeth of being a thief.

Flemeth raised her brow at Alistair, “And why not?” Her tone became serious as did her expression. To Evelyn there even seemed to be a hint of concern in Flemeth’s eyes. Could even a Witch of the Wilds fear the Blight?
Her eyes focused on Evelyn then she looked at the treaties, “Take them to your Grey Wardens and tell them this Blight’s threat is greater than they realize!”

Evelyn felt disturbed by Flemeth’s words and wasn’t sure if she should ask more questions. There were so many questions to ask but very little time. She noticed the sun was setting and all Evelyn could say was, “Thank you for returning them.”

“Such manners.” Flemeth smiled a bit at Evelyn, “Always in the place you least expect it.” A chuckle from Flemeth seemed to allay some of her fears. It was almost as if a small spell had been put upon her but why would a witch do such a thing? She kept her smile, “Oh, do not mind me. You have what you came for!”

“Time for you to go, then.” Morrigan seemed happy that the meeting had ended. No more embarrassing moments for Flemeth to tell them about.

Flemeth glanced at Morrigan almost in disappointment and it showed even more in her tone, “Do not be ridiculous, girl.” She gestured to the Grey Wardens, “These are your guests.”

In a way Evelyn was jealous to see the two talk to each other. It brought back some painful memories of her mother. All the fights over dressing up or who she should be marrying made her regret the final moments she had with her mother. A glint in her eye caught Alistair’s attention but as quickly as the tear appeared it was gone with a wipe from the back of her hand.

My own mirror image…

“Oh, very well.” Morrigan was annoyed at her mother and looked at the Wardens. She gestured to them, “I will show you out of the woods. Follow me.”

Daveth and Jory followed Morrigan without hesitation this time. Not too far behind them was Alistair but he stopped when he noticed Evelyn wasn’t behind him. She stood there for a moment in silence starting at the setting sun while Flemeth in turn was watching her. Evelyn’s eyes watched the ridgeline for a moment then she looked at her hand. A scar from the blood oath she swore the night Highever Castle was taken. She traced the scar then closed her hand before moving to join the others. As she passed Alistair he saw the tear on her cheek and wondered if there was more to what Flemeth told her than he realized.

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“In war, victory. In peace, vigiliance. In death, sacrifice.” – Grey Warden Motto


The return to the camp at Ostagar was a quiet one. Morrigan had shown them the safe path back and was thanked for her trouble to which she just shrugged off before disappearing back into the Wilds. The gates were opened for them as they approached and Dax was waiting for his mistress. He had caught her scent before she even made it up the path and was dancing around in anticipation. His stubby tail wagged while he barked at the guard to open the gate.

“Alright. Alright.” He said as he opened the gate and nodded his head to Alistair, “Welcome back.”

Alistair nodded back as the others filed in and headed towards Duncan. Only Evelyn stopped to greet Dax and was happy to see him. She rubbed his face then his ears, “Been a good boy?”

Dax barked as his body shook with happiness before he bounced away to the Warden camp. Evelyn just laughed a little and shook her head. It was the simple things in life that made Dax happy. She wished it was that simple for her. Softly she sighed then walked over to the kennels rather than towards Duncan’s camp. Alistair raised his brow but said nothing as he kept walking. It only dawned on him a bit later that she was giving the flower Daveth talked about to the Ashe Warriors.

“What’s this?” The kennel master as as Evelyn handed over the flower. Once he examined it closer he smiled, “This is the flower I needed…How did you know?”

Evelyn smiled a little, “One of my fellow Grey Wardens told me you needed this to save the mabari.”

“Thank you. Is there any payment you’d like for this? A few silvers perhaps?” He offered and smiled.

“No.” Evelyn shook her head then glanced back towards Duncan’s camp to see Dax being curious about the smells on armor of Daveth, Jory and Alistair. She smiled softly, “I have a mabari myself and wouldn’t want to imagine losing him. He’s my family.”

She glanced at the kennel master then nodded her head a bit before taking her leave. Once she rejoined the others Duncan looked at her as if he knew what she had done then smiled a little before becoming serious, “I see you all have returned from the Wilds successfully. Do you have the treaties?”
“Yes.” Evelyn replied and showed them to Duncan who nodded in approval, “But they were in the care of a Witch of the Wilds.”

Alistair looked at him, “Well they were apostates. An old woman and her daughter protected these treaties it seems.”

“I know that your Templar training and the Chantry says that you should deal with them but this is not the time, Alistair. Remember you are a Warden.” Duncan replied then handed him the treaties, “Keep these safe for the time being.”

Evelyn glanced at Alistair to see him looking a bit disappointed and she could understand that he felt obligated to do something but they were aided by the witches. She shifted her gaze to Duncan, “So are we to take part in the Joining now?”

“Yes, I’ve had the mages preparing for the Joining.” Duncan replied, “I won’t lie to you that this is dangerous.”

“More dangerous than being in the Korcari Wilds?” Daveths replied then grinned a bit as he tried to be macho but it seemed laced with sarcasm at the same time, “Well lets get to it.”

Jory raised his brow, “How could it be more dangerous?”

Evelyn wondered the same thing but it was a bit late to go back now. She looked at Duncan, “Lets just get it over with.”

“Alistair, take them to the temple. I will be there shortly.” Duncan ordered before going to the mages to retrieve what he needed.

Alistair nodded then had them follow him towards the tower. Evelyn found it interesting that the tower was where she found Alistair bickering with a mage. Her head shook at that memory and she sighed before moving to see Jory pacing nervously.

“I don’t like this. I have my wife in Highever heavy with child and here Duncan goes on about how this is dangerous.”

“Are you blubbering again?” Daveth said as he looked annoyed. He crossed his arms, “Look don’t you think defeating the darkspawn is more important? You’d still be protecting your pretty wife and child wouldn’t you?”

Evelyn shook her head as she approached, “That’s enough. Ser Jory is concerned about his family as any one sane would be. The Blight is a threat to everyone but you can’t condemn him for his feelings. It is what makes us human and separates us from the darkspawn.”

“Are you calling me insane?” Daveth raised his brow at Evelyn.

She sighed then rubbed her forehead, “Yes, Daveth…I’m calling you an insane insensitive ass.”

“I was just saying that I’d give a lot more than just my life to stop this Blight.” Daveth shrugged, “Does that make me a bad person?”

“No, but some don’t think that way.” Evelyn replied as she looked at him, “But what’s done is done.”

Duncan entered the temple with a silver chalice and looked at them, “So we come to the Joining like many before you. Tonight we will drink of the taint and master it so that we can defeat the darkspawn.”

“Wha what!?” Jory blinked, “We’re going to drink the blood of those…things?”
“It is what it takes to become a Grey Warden, those who survive that is.” Duncan replied as he looked at Jory then to each in turn.

“Those who survive?” Evelyn asked as she raised her brow.

“Drinking the darkspawn blood is poison and we must overcome that to become what we are.” Duncan replied, “It is the sacrifice we make.” His looked to the stars, “We speak only a few words prior to the Joining. But these words have been said since the first.” As his gaze fell to Alistair he made a request, “Alistair, if you would?”

Alistair glanced at Evelyn then looked to the ground and with a solemn voice spoke the words, “Join us, brothers and sisters. Join us in the shadows where we stand vigilant. Join us as we carry the duty that cannot be forsworn. And should you perish, know that your sacrifice will not be forgotten... and that one day, we shall join you.”

“Daveth, step forward.” Duncan said and looked at the rogue as he stepped forward, “You have been called upon to take the taint.”

Daveth took the chalice from Duncan and took a sip from it. As Duncan took the chalice away the taint began to poison Daveth. He doubled over in pain, “Argh!”

Jory and Evelyn became wide eyed as Daveth struggled to breathe. When he looked up at them his eyes had turned white as if he had become blind. His body became too heavy for him and he fell to his knees. Evelyn frowned seeing a man who she had been a companion to for a short time was dying. Fear gripped her heart as she watched Daveth gasp one last time then he passed on.

“I am sorry, Daveth…” Duncan frowned. It was clear he didn’t wish death on any of them but he had to press on. He looked at Jory, “Ser Jory…Step forward.”

“No…I didn’t think…I…”He stammered as he shook his head and backed up.
“There is no turning back.” Duncan reminded him then moved forward with the chalice in his hands.

Jory narrowed his eyes letting his fear guide him to defend himself. He drew his sword and backed up more, “I have a wife and child…I can’t do this!”

As Evelyn and Alistair watched, Evelyn heard a voice in her head. It was Flemeth’s.

Sadly irrelevant to the larger scheme of things…

No…He shouldn’t have to die!

But it is not I who decides. Believe what you will.


Duncan set the chalice on the stone table then drew his dagger. It was as Flemeth said and before it had started it was over. Jory made the mistake in attacking Duncan and paid for it with his life. His eyes were wide as he was gutted by Duncan’s dagger and Duncan closed his eyes, “I am sorry, Jory…”

He backed away from Jory and the body fell to the ground near Daveth’s. Evelyn couldn’t believe it and she looked at Duncan knowing she had only one choice, to die now or die later. She watched as Duncan approached her with the chalice and offer it to her. He seemed to know her decision and without being asked she took a sip. The pain wracked her body and she gasped while she fought the taint with every bit of her soul. It felt like fire in her veins and she glanced at them white eyed as Daveth had been earlier but it was different this time. Visions flashed in her mind of the darkspawn and a dragon before darkness took her.

She collapsed to the ground and breathed shallowly. Alistair knelt down to check on her and watched her breathing, “She’s alive.”

Duncan nodded and sighed as he looked at the two dead bodies, “We must clear this up. She will be fine for the time being.”

Alistair stood up slowly then glanced at Duncan before looking at Evelyn again. He nodded, “So be it.”

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Loving this! Usually, retellings of the actual game pieces get annoying after a while, but you're fleshing them out nicely.

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I know what you mean. I'm having to do a lot of this by memory which is hard as hell. Some stuff I looked up for wording from certain people. I'm not going to do each piece though. That would drive me insane.

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I can't wait to see more. By the way, I adored your fleshing out of Daveth. I was so sad when he died. It's nice to see him given a bit more time.

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If anyone was a lecher it was him lmao

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Isn't that the truth? He cracked me up until the whole dieing thing. So sad to see him go away.

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I would have LOVED to see his dialogue with Leliana...I mean that's just opening a whole can of worms there. She's a nun in a sense and he's just looking for tail. He and Zev could have swapped stories lol.

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“It will be a hard life. One without reward, without remorse, without regret. A path will be placed before you. The choice is yours alone. Do what you think you cannot do. It will be a hard life, but you will find out who you are.” Qui-Gon Jinn, Jedi Master


Was it a dream? A nightmare?

Her eyes fluttered open to find a clear night sky and a cool gentle breeze. The stars shined up in the heavens like tears from the Maker himself for his beloved Andraste. She stared for a long time until she saw two faces peering at her, Duncan and Alistair. It was at that moment she realized it was not a dream but a reality. She remembered Daveth’s pain and Jory’s plead to be set free. She remembered everything.

“Now you are one of us.” Duncan said softly, “Welcome.”

Welcome indeed…A bloody hangover is what I have...

Duncan took her hand and helped her up as Alistair steadied her by putting a hand on her shoulder. He sighed, “Two more dead…At my joining only one of us died.”

Evelyn put her fingertips on Alistair’s lips then gestured with one finger to her own for him to be silent. Duncan seemed amused but he didn’t say anything. He looked at Evelyn, “How do you feel?”

She looked at Duncan then moved her fingertips from Alistair’s lips, “I feel like I lost a drinking game to a dwarf…Then was run over by a pack of mabari before being dropped down a cliff, but other than that I’m just peachy.”

“I see her sharp tongue is still there.” Alistair mused before he noticed those blue eyes on him. He shuddered, “It just got cold again.”

Duncan shook his head knowing the two of them were going to be trouble for each other. He gently patted Evelyn’s shoulder, “Once you feel up to it the King has requested you come to the meeting. I have no idea why he wants you there.”

“Oh wait a tic.” Alistair moved to get a small pendent and handed it to her, “It’s a reminder of your Joining. We never forget those who lost their lives so we take a bit of the blood and put it in this.” He showed her his, “Keep it close to your heart.”

Evelyn took it carefully then examined it. The tainted blood within was black and she wondered if her blood looked like this now. She sighed then put the pendent on.

As Duncan looked at Evelyn he saw her eyes and the sadness in them which struck him. He always had a spot for his recruits and could tell Evelyn was a bit shaken by what had happened. She had seen so much death and to see two more people die added to her misery. He put both his hands on her shoulders and spoke softly, “I did not want to kill Jory nor did I wish Daveth his fate.”

“I know…It’s just…” Evelyn frowned and sighed, “The witch…She said…”

Duncan seemed to know already and just nodded, “Take your time.” He turned and left her with Alistair. Dax barked at her then nipped at her fingertips as she stood there.

“What were you going to say?” Alistair asked as he looked at Evelyn curiously.

She didn’t look at him but stared at Duncan’s back. Her face still looked sad and part of Alistair wanted to hug her to tell her it would alright. She spoke up after awhile of silence, “She said that they were sadly irrelevant to the larger scheme of things…”

“You don’t think she foretold their deaths do you?” Alistair raised his brow then approached her. He turned her to look at him.

Her eyes met with his, “I don’t know what to believe anymore…What’s done is done.” She broke away from him then started to head out, “Come, Dax.”

As she left Alistair watched her as he whispered, “I hope you find yourself again… and soon.”

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The meeting was well underway by the time Evelyn arrived and the usual bickering was in full swing. She remembered the debates her father would have with Howe over certain situations. Her silent reverie was broken when Calian spoke to her, “I hear congratulations are in order.”

“Um..Thank you?” Evelyn replied in a confused manner.

Duncan broke in, “Pardon her, your majesty. She is still a bit worn from the Joining.”

Calian nodded and smiled as if he were proud of her. Evelyn paid him no mind as Loghain went over the plan with Calian. It seemed they were going to attempt to box in the darkspawn. The idea wasn’t bad but considering the layout of Ostagar she wondered if it was wise. She kept her mouth shut for the moment until there was mention of lighting a beacon on the Tower of Ishal.

“I want Evelyn and Alistair lighting the beacon.” Calian said without hesitation and looked at her.

Evelyn raised her brow, “Surely I can light the beacon on my own.”

“No, I want you to go with Alistair.” Calian replied.

“Your majesty the Circle can…” Uldred began before he was cut off by the Revered Mother.

“Silence mage. You won’t be allowed near that beacon.”

Evelyn rolled her eyes at the whole scene before Calian slammed his hand on the table, “It’s been decided. The Wardens will light the beacon.”

The bickering stopped immediately and all eyes were on Calian. He looked at each other them, “Lets get everyone ready. Tonight we end this Blight.”

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Evelyn stood beside Alistair as Duncan looked at them, “You know the plan, Evelyn. You and Alistair will go to the tower and light the beacon.”

“What!?” Alistair narrowed his eyes as if he had been insulted. He shook his head, “I’m not going into battle?”

“No.” Duncan said flatly, “The King has request you and Evelyn go light the beacon.”

“We should be fighting in the battle…” Evelyn muttered.

“That is not your decision. We will abide by the King’s order and you will do as told. Darkspawn or no.” Duncan stated as he stared both of them down like a father dealing with petulant children.

Alistair made a face, “Well if the King ever asks me to put on a dress and dance the Remigold I’ll have to draw the line…Darkspawn or no.”

“Oh I’d love to see that.” Evelyn grinned at Alistair as she looked him over to size him up for a dress.

He smirked back at her, “For you I’d consider it…But it’d have to be a pretty dress.” Alistair jokingly shimmed, “I could see it now, me shimming down the line while the darkspawn roll with laughter.”

Evelyn laughed before she noticed Duncan’s expression. She cleared her throat but couldn’t stop smiling.

Duncan just sighed and shook his head. Even he cracked a slight smile at Alistair’s joke. He looked at them seriously, “You have your orders.”

“We know what to do.” Evelyn assured him and gave him a mock salute much like Daveth would have.

Duncan just smiled a bit at them both then headed off to join the army that was gathering for the assault. They watched him go before Alistair spoke, “We should get going to the Tower of Ishal.”

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The stars shined up in the heavens like tears from the Maker himself for his beloved Andraste




Heheh...nice....looking good Talon....keep it up :)

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:blush: Thank you :blush:

I'll try harder next time ^_^

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He AND Zevran in the same camp???? I think my PC would have a permanent blush.

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I like this Fanfic.

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Sialater wrote...

He AND Zevran in the same camp???? I think my PC would have a permanent blush.


I challenge someone to write that fanfic lmao

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tallon1982 wrote...

Sialater wrote...

He AND Zevran in the same camp???? I think my PC would have a permanent blush.


I challenge someone to write that fanfic lmao



I dunno if my skill is up to THAT. LMAO 

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Methinks a thread of what would Daveth and Zev talk about at camp is needed.

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The female PC's backside, Leliana's legs... Morrigan's lack of shirt... Wynne's magical bosom...

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How many herbs to take...How long as Leliana gone without...Does Wynne's magic provide enhancements

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You have such a dim view of men tsk :P hehe....



Talons lovely hairdo would surrely be included in the topic of convo :)

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Hey I've got Princess Leia envy ok? lol

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lol aye thats perfectly ok with moi :)