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[Sialater]

That was sweet!

[AdorableAnarchist]

Loved it!

[Jules8445]

Ahhhh! Tallon, I love this chapter! I'd wondered how Alistair got the rose. I'm caught up with your chapters, so you better keep me busy!

[tallon1982]

Thank you =) I figured someone has to tell his side lol

I'll try to get another chapter out this week. I've got a few ideas stewing in my head right now.

Modifié par tallon1982, 25 janvier 2010 - 11:54 .

[ReubenLiew]

And so begins a great love story. *nods*

[tallon1982]

ReubenLiew wrote...


And so begins a great love story. *nods*

You could say that but every love story has its bumps. Take it as you will lol

[AdorableAnarchist]

tallon1982 wrote...

ReubenLiew wrote...


And so begins a great love story. *nods*

You could say that but every love story has its bumps. Take it as you will lol

Heh heh heh, she said "bumps."

[tallon1982]

Bump bumpity bump bump bump!



There ain't nothing wrong with a little bump...and... *whistles*

[AdorableAnarchist]

*whistles right along with Tallon* Yup, not a blasted thing wrong at all.....

[ReubenLiew]

Bump that bumping bumper!

[tallon1982]

I'd rather bounce the bumper but that's another topic .... or is it? *shifty eyes*

[AdorableAnarchist]

I don't know... Bumping the bouncer can be fun too...

[tallon1982]

Boing! I can keep going all night too...*evil grin*

[tallon1982]

Chapter 15

[AdorableAnarchist]

YAY!! This made up for falling down the stairs this morning! I love your writing, Tallon.

[Sialater]

I need to remember to reject Lelianna at the Tavern the first time around just to hear that conversation.

[tallon1982]

I hope you are okay AA! Falling down the stairs is so not fun. Been there and done that in my own house lol. I'm glad the chapter made your morning though =)



As for the conversation...You so need to do it lol. It's worth seeing Alistair move his hands and make a face while saying that quote about Leliana. She does cross her arms hearing him say it too lol.



I'm sorta throttling back on how many chapters I write out now because I want to make sure they are worth posting lol. So the next one which obviously adds Sten to the group needs extra care. I want to do him justice afterall.

[tallon1982]

Chapter 16

It is a bit shorter than a few other chapters but I didn't feel like dragging it out for the sake of word count. I'm fairly certain the next few chapters will be much longer. Also forgive the lack of imagination in this one. I haven't been very inspired the last few days. Writer's block is a biatch lol.

[Kulkodar]

aw... break that block! Seriously, though, this was a nice intro to Sten joining the party and the dwarves entering the tale. I'll be patient (ha ha, I'll try anyway).

[tallon1982]

LOL I'm sure I'll get something to break it eventually. Hm...camp scene anyone? lmao

[MarcusDeVarro]

ah camp time, good times good times

[Tasmen]

tallon1982 wrote...

Chapter 16

It is a bit shorter than a few other chapters but I didn't feel like dragging it out for the sake of word count. I'm fairly certain the next few chapters will be much longer. Also forgive the lack of imagination in this one. I haven't been very inspired the last few days. Writer's block is a biatch lol.

It's not the number of words that count so much as what you say with them   Don't let silly things like word count hold you back!

[tallon1982]

True enough. All my chapters are different word counts lol.

[MarcusDeVarro]

yea i mean look at New Moon

sold so many copies and i think like 5 pages had only one word on em

so yea it is what you say with your words

good advice Tas

[tallon1982]

I still have yet to read that series. I'm busy with Percy Jackson...yea yea flame me!