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dont read them, they will steal your life
i started reading twilight just for fun then before you know it im arguing with girls in my class why Jacob is better than Edward
Masculinity level dropping
Lost Innocence - WIP Updated 3/1
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tallon1982
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#102
Posté 02 février 2010 - 05:08
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LOL! I'd probably agree with you because from what I've seen of the trailers for the movies I can see Jacob being more manly if you will lol.
As for Percy Jackson I love how they are predictable and told in the first person view. It's just mindless fun for me and I need that right now. I finished reading a book called Dragonspell that was a riot. It just made me enjoy fantasy more.
As for Percy Jackson I love how they are predictable and told in the first person view. It's just mindless fun for me and I need that right now. I finished reading a book called Dragonspell that was a riot. It just made me enjoy fantasy more.
#103
Posté 02 février 2010 - 07:28
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Ahhh, kindred spirits! I love you guys. I read Twilight and enjoyed them because of the value they have to teens. I also think there's a little more to Stephanie Meyer's writing than people give credit. She's no Austen, but I don't think she's trying to be either.
As to which team I follow....I'm a big time Team Jacob. I like comfy and stable as opposed to exciting and mysterious. I think the two characters bring out the baser instincts in all of us.
As to which team I follow....I'm a big time Team Jacob. I like comfy and stable as opposed to exciting and mysterious. I think the two characters bring out the baser instincts in all of us.
#104
Posté 02 février 2010 - 07:41
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This thread is quickly approaching a point of no return, I suggest she get turned around before it's too late.
#105
Posté 02 février 2010 - 08:07
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TheMadCat wrote...
This thread is quickly approaching a point of no return, I suggest she get turned around before it's too late.
But there's a no u-turn sign! I don't wanna break the law! lol
#106
Posté 03 février 2010 - 10:18
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Just to give you all an update...I am working on the next chapter right now. I managed to get a second wind and believe this chapter will probably be the best one so far...well I hope it is anyway lol. Stay tuned!
#107
Posté 03 février 2010 - 11:07
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Okay here goes and I hope this will end my writing drought.
Chapter 17
I really hope this goes over well.
Chapter 17
I really hope this goes over well.
#108
Posté 04 février 2010 - 03:11
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Lovely chapter Tallon, as always! Can't wait to read the next. Love what you added to the nightmare! Can't wait for the next!
#109
Posté 04 février 2010 - 03:48
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Glad you liked it ^.^ It's just a taste of what I have planned for the Fade sequence too 
#111
Posté 06 février 2010 - 12:40
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#113
Posté 08 février 2010 - 07:37
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Oooo, tension in paradise! Yay!
#115
Posté 08 février 2010 - 07:43
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LOL
At least I didn't have him give her the rose yet lmao
At least I didn't have him give her the rose yet lmao
Modifié par tallon1982, 08 février 2010 - 07:46 .
#116
Posté 08 février 2010 - 07:48
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I can't wait to see her reaction to THAT!
#117
Posté 08 février 2010 - 07:52
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Bwahahahaha just think of Leliana's reaction
#118
Posté 08 février 2010 - 07:54
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She'll come up with a song. Suitably romantic and squishy.
#119
Posté 08 février 2010 - 08:00
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I was thinking more like ****slapping Alistair for taking the rose out of her garden lmao
#120
Posté 08 février 2010 - 08:18
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Nah, he was right about the rose's fate, after all. I think she'd think it terribly romantic. The last beautiful rose in Lothering exchanged between the two Grey Wardens... She'd definitely squee.
#122
Posté 08 février 2010 - 08:40
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That, too. If Leliana weren't also attracted to the Warden, she'd definitely be competition. LMAO
#124
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Posté 09 février 2010 - 01:48
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From what I've read, the characters sometimes act out of character. The story is written well, but the story itself so far seems nothing more than somebody else's playthrough of Dragon Age. Sometimes, the chapters just show what everyone else does in their playthrough with only a few exceptions.
#125
Posté 09 février 2010 - 01:51
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It's just my own interpretation of the story and things I wanted to see happen. It's not going to be totally linear like some stories can be. I guess you could say this is how I would have wanted things to go. I'm not going to stick to every little thing that was done in the game itself. If you think what I'm doing here is out of character then you're not going to like the next few chapters.
