Chapter 22
Lost Innocence - WIP Updated 3/1
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#127
Posté 09 février 2010 - 09:56
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Hmmm... .and who was she deluding herself about marrying, I wonder...
#129
Posté 09 février 2010 - 10:02
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Didn't think you would... hehehe
#130
Posté 09 février 2010 - 10:04
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I think I'll let you figure out who it is but I will not confirm or deny it
#131
Posté 09 février 2010 - 10:07
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I'm pretty sure who's shield bashed his way to that altar....
Unless she had a thing for Gilmore...
Unless she had a thing for Gilmore...
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Posté 10 février 2010 - 07:48
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Chapter 21 was similar to what I saw in DAO with only a few exceptions. Chapter 22 was more unique. I like that.
#134
Posté 10 février 2010 - 08:15
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I'm having to tinker with the others a bit more...I know what to do with Wynne and Alistair it's just a matter of fleshing it out. The other two well...I'll have to see what comes to mind.
#135
Posté 10 février 2010 - 09:20
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I liked this. I never really thought about what my characters would have seen in the Fade... Interesting.
#136
Posté 10 février 2010 - 10:00
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I'm glad you liked it. When I first saw the Fade sequence in the game I thought this is a cool concept but I don't get why I'd see Duncan. And when I read the Calling I was like why didn't the Fade play out like this instead? So I decided to go that route because it just seemed more logical in my mind to put something you desire in front of you.
#137
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Posté 11 février 2010 - 02:17
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tallon1982, you aren't the fool. I AM! I've been lying to myself all this time!
#139
Posté 15 février 2010 - 06:44
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#140
Posté 16 février 2010 - 01:49
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Very effective... Woah! You were right! I got pressies in stories tonight!
#142
Posté 16 février 2010 - 03:25
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I prefer your version of the Fade.
#143
Posté 16 février 2010 - 06:13
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LOL I'd have to thank David Gaider for the inspiration on it. The Calling is a big influence here.
#144
Posté 17 février 2010 - 08:06
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#145
Posté 17 février 2010 - 08:42
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Ooo, liked it!! And yet, I'm sad for the big oaf.
#146
Posté 18 février 2010 - 12:48
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lol that was somewhat the intent
#147
Posté 24 février 2010 - 12:21
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Just wanted peeps who are following this fanfic to know that I'm being a bit slow atm. I had some stuff come up and just lost the mojo for the fic. Once I get going again you'll see it here 
Sorry guys!
Sorry guys!
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Posté 24 février 2010 - 12:40
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No need to apologise Talon (and sorry not commented, have been keeping up when i can but also busy heheh)....
You go find your mojo....could be anywhere, of all the places i found mine, it was under the couch....
You go find your mojo....could be anywhere, of all the places i found mine, it was under the couch....
#149
Posté 24 février 2010 - 02:30
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With some hottie I bet lol *grins*
