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#101
MEUTRIERE

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As you likely already know, this stuff is gold.

Only fanfic writer I've ever actually liked.  Probably because I can relate your Resa to my Deòridh because I imagined the female Noble/Alistair romance nearly exactly the same, but even besides that, it's trés bien.

Keep them coming, pls?  :lol:

Modifié par MEUTRIERE, 11 février 2010 - 01:48 .


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AdorableAnarchist

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Meutriere, sorry for responding so slwly! Thank you for a kind review! The next part is ready to go up!

#103
AdorableAnarchist

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I am alive and writing! I've been busy dealing with family stuff and getting some grant proposals done. Add in strep throat and my laptop crashing (thankfully, repaired with no data loss! YAY!)... So, I'm back at it finally!



“Am I a fool?”
 
Resa arched a brow at Alistair as she looked up from her blade and whetstone. She grinned, “Do you really want me to answer that?”
 
He frowned and moved to sit next to her. Well, flopped down beside her was more like. She managed not to roll her eyes visibly as she quickly moved the dagger out of the way. Alistair’s shoulders slumped, “No, really, Resa. I should have known what would happen when I walked into that house.”
 
Ahh, now she understood. Resa set dagger and whetstone to one side and turned to face the defeated form of the Templar. She had wondered when this was going to come out. It had obviously been eating at him all evening. Seeing his unhappiness had all but convinced her to return to Denerim and speak with Goldanna once more. All right, perhaps “speak” was too broad a term. Maybe “break her like a piece of kindling” was more appropriate.
 
“Alistair,” she said, her voice gentle, “You went in believing the good in a person you had yet to meet. You reacted with dignity and honor when the expectation was revealed as false,” she laid her hand on his, “There is nothing foolish in that.”
 
He stared down at their hands for a moment. Alistair turned his hand to link his fingers with hers, “You were right. I need to start looking out for myself more, making more decisions. I can’t continue on pretending,” his voice trailed off.
 
“Can’t continue pretending that you won’t have to grow up and be king some day,” Resa asked, squeezing his hand as she moved to lean against him. She rested her head on his shoulder and he turned to place a kiss on her hair.
 
“You will keep me from doing something foolish, like trying to read a map, right,” Alistair found it easier to smile and joke with her small frame resting comfortably against him.
 
Resa chuckled softly, and nodded, “Of course. You once told me that such things lead to you losing your pants,” she paused and slanted a glance up at him through her lashes, “Although, in the right circumstance, that might not be so bad.”
 
Alistair cleared his throat nervously, “Yes, well, it would have to be a very special circumstance.”
 
He watched as Resa’s smile took a decidedly wicked cast, “Let’s work on finding that circumstance, shall we?”
 
Alistair gulped and shifted. When she looked like this, firelight dancing over her skin and sparkling in her dark eyes… Eyes that seemed to hold secrets he would be both blessed and damned to learn… He cleared his throat once more and Resa laughed. She leaned up and teasingly brushed her lips against his, “I leave you to figure out the circumstances,” she stood in a single, fluid motion that made his mouth go dry.
 
“After all, they are your pants.”
 

#104
Freckles04

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Cute. I love seeing Alistair flustered. Good thing he spends a lot of the game that way... ;)

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tallon1982

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LOL should steal his pants while he's sleeping ha ha!

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Sialater

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I second that, Tallon!

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Briiel

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OMG LOVE IT <3

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Sisimka

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Very cute. :)

#109
Jannamarie

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Made me do an evil grin. Waiting for the pants off scene.

Modifié par Jannamarie, 16 février 2010 - 12:45 .


#110
AdorableAnarchist

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Thanks, guys! I hope to get the pants off scene written very soon!

#111
jenovan

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Nice to see ya back, AA! :D

Hee, flustered Alistair is so adorable. XD Hopefully he'll strike upon a suitable circumstance soon. ;D



As an aside, I love the little physical elements in there, the gestures and touches and so on. Sometimes those can get really distracting, but you handle them really well and there's just enough to paint a scene in one's head :3

#112
AdorableAnarchist

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Thanks, Jenovan!! I try to capture what I see in my head. Sometimes it works, sometimes it sucks. LOL Right now, writing little bits is a huge help in prepping for working on a new real life project I have coming up.

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Shadow of Light Dragon

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Commented on FF.Net but will say it again here: Lovely read. ^_^



(Alistair doesn't need his pants anyway...)

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Inzhuna

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Hehe, that was another great little vignette ;) Leaves wanting more! :D