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Due to a misunderstanding, my old thread social.bioware.com/forum/1/topic/323/index/15140171/ got closed. I was told by the moderator to simply re-create the thread. so here it goes I suppose. For the original intent of this please view my old thread, but this one is the one that will remain open. If a moderator believes this belongs in the ME3 Fan Creations section, you are welcome to move it. However, this is not ME3 related content.

This is the artwork I had posted before the misunderstanding.

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To quote my old thread: 

´´Here's a work in progress. My idea of the female lead, still need to make several outfits and color in the one she's currently wearing. Pirate/Bounty Hunter idea in my head while drawing it.´´

Once again, feedback appreciated.

Modifié par JustGiveItUp, 11 mars 2013 - 05:57 .


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Wuartz

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I love all your artworks! The female lead is your best yet! Is she a squadmate, or the new " Shepard"?

If you want inspiration, here's some:

Human male Engineer, a smart Irish dude that has developed new omni-technoloy and owns a corrupted company. Has omni-glasses.

Human female Adept, an Indish girl. Explorer, cartographer. Wants to discover new places in the galaxy.

Batarian male Infiltrator, a former Hegemony soldier that wants to reform the batarian government into something better. Has an attitude, and not a clean history, but wants to do good and improve human-batarian relationships.

Salarian female Sentinel, daughter to the most powerful salarian Dalatrass and one of few salarian biotics. She is considered a royalty on her homeworld, a salarian "princess". She has a deep hatred for krogan that has to be fixed.

Krogan male Vanguard, a krogan born and raised in the worst ward of the Citadel. Wrestling champ and a celebrity. Has very powerful biotics because of a new dangerous drug. Surprisingly kind and formal personality, regrets taking the drug everyday.

Turian female Soldier, daughter (or granddaughter) of the rogue Council spectre Saren. Has a tough and quiet personality, but if you get to know her, she opens up.

Just some ideas.

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JustGiveItUp

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Thank you so much for the feedback, I really, really appreciate it.

For now she'd be the ''female Shepard'' but not Shepard at all. Still trying to find a backstory for the main. Pirate? Bounty Hunter with Spectre status? lol so many possibilities. Maybe I should give the main a Pyjak sidekick for the heck of it.

Those are some amazing ideas you got there, I like them a lot, might try some out like the cartographer one, that's amazing.

Good going there with the ''formal'' Krogan as well, I want to give the Krogan squadmate that ironically classy personality for a change hah, yet still a badass.

A volus mafia lord also came to mind for the lols.

For the female turian, that works very well, I get the Nyreen-ish vibe which is nice since I wish we would've seen more of that character.

Any reference for the appearance of any of them? A specific mixture of certain armor/clothes? Heck, even hairstyles for the humans, anything will do.

Keep it coming and again thank you!

Modifié par JustGiveItUp, 10 mars 2013 - 04:21 .


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JustGiveItUp wrote...

Thank you so much for the feedback, I really, really appreciate it.

For now she'd be the ''female Shepard'' but not Shepard at all. Still trying to find a backstory for the main. Pirate? Bounty Hunter with Spectre status? lol so many possibilities. Maybe I should give the main a Pyjak sidekick for the heck of it.

Those are some amazing ideas you got there, I like them a lot, might try some out like the cartographer one, that's amazing.

Good going there with the ''formal'' Krogan as well, I want to give the Krogan squadmate that ironically classy personality for a change hah, yet still a badass.

A volus mafia lord also came to mind for the lols.

For the female turian, that works very well, I get the Nyreen-ish vibe which is nice since I wish we would've seen more of that character.

Any reference for the appearance of any of them? A specific mixture of certain armor/clothes? Heck, even hairstyles for the humans, anything will do.

Keep it coming and again thank you!

Pyjak sidekick, that would be something! :lol:

Thanks for the comments! I love developing characters and personalities, so it was fun writing these ideas. I'm worse with appearances and designing however, so I'm afriad I can't help you there. The cartographer was, as stated, indian and might have a little innocent but confident look to her. And I imagine the salarian to have a white skin. But I definitely believe you can cook something better up. :happy:

You have a talent. The artworks look professional. You should try searching for a job as a designer!

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Haha yeah, I'll sketch up the pyjak and add it on her shoulder or something, it'll look cool. And thank you for the encouraging words. I wish I could work for a big videogame company like BioWare but it does not seem within my reach just yet, but one can dream. In the meantime I am content sketching up ideas of future characters. (:

Here's a flat color test for the outfit, I can't decide which one to go for. The black/darker ones scream ''Agent'' to me while the lighter colors, particularly the bottom ones give me a Bounty Hunter/Pirate vibe.

Feedback super appreciated, please make sure you right click + view image to view it in fullsize.

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My idea for those transparent gloves came from the material that makes any substance just slide off it without them getting dirty. I imagined there would be blood and a lot of shooting so it would literally be to avoid getting her ''hands dirty''.

Modifié par JustGiveItUp, 11 mars 2013 - 06:03 .


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Jaron Oberyn

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Like it, can't wait to see it with all the details. Keep it up. :)

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Thank you! I want to add all the details but I'm really torn about which color combination to use as the base and what each of them say about the character lol.

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The black/blue design is my favourite. The black/green also looks nice.