I've been on the Social Forums for quite some time, but I don't think I've ever looked at any section besides the Story and Campaign section for Mass Effect 2 and 3. This is the first time I've looked over the Fan Creations section, and I'm dissappointed that I haven't looked before; it's much more interesting than I thought it would be.
Going back to the reason I'm here, I would like some extra objectivity to a Fan Fiction story I've been writing for well over a year now. I feel it's been moderately successful, based off review and favorited numbers, but I want to improve it. Seeing as how many people in this section of the forums are veterans of the Fan Fiction idea, I'd love additional criticism of the story.
I've posted a link to the story below, and any useful criticism is welcome; I'd prefer not to have any Zoidberg-esque "Your story's bad and you should feel bad!" comments, but if you really feel it's necessary, than by all means, say so.
If anyone has a question regarding it, please don't hesitate to ask me.
Thanks!
http://www.fanfictio...nd-Forgiveness
Modifié par goose2989, 13 mars 2013 - 02:38 .
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