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[Hecthorn]

So, just discovered this one and decided to give my two cents...

As I'm no native speaker, I won't throw a stone at you for any mistakes in grammar or writing.

As for the story itself, it has to be said that it delivers a rather positive impression and it is also nice to see Alistair just as a side-character.
I have also thought about writing something on Morrigan, because I think her character has a huge potential, I'm looking forward to seeing what you can get out of this.

So much for the positive part :innocent:

You focus your wrting pretty much upon the actual plot and less on descriptions of feelings or looks of things (clothes, terrain etc).
I know too much of this can make the story boring or slow it down, but I also think that this is crucial to give the reader the "vision" of the stoy you have while writing it.

But that's just an opinion.

[MarcusDeVarro]

Sehr guter Freund

[The Gay Warden]

I appreciate the feedback.