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[ShadowCatJen]

Writer's Notes: Alternate Universe. What if more than two Wardens survived Ostagar? A retelling of the Origins storyline where more than one hero decides the fate of Fereldan. Comments and critiques welcome.

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Link to The Migration
Part 1: The Mockingbird Kills
www.fanfiction.net/s/5665844/1/The_Migration

EDIT: Just linking everything for thread length sake

Modifié par ShadowCatJen, 09 avril 2010 - 04:34 .

[ShadowCatJen]

Part 2: The Griffon Leads the Mockingbird


  www.fanfiction.net/s/5665844/2/The_Migration

Modifié par ShadowCatJen, 09 avril 2010 - 04:35 .

[MarcusDeVarro]

wow

this is really good

can't wait to read more

[tevikolady]

Very nice!

[ShadowCatJen]

Part 3: Home of the Hawk

www.fanfiction.net/s/5665844/2/The_Migration

Modifié par ShadowCatJen, 09 avril 2010 - 04:35 .

[tallon1982]

I like where this is going

[MarcusDeVarro]

epic

just one word

[ShadowCatJen]

A/N: Oralyn is an Original Character, so no need to try and look her up anywhere. Thanks for the comments so far. Feedback is welcome.

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Part 4: Mockingbird Raids the Hawk Nest

www.fanfiction.net/s/5665844/4/The_Migration

Modifié par ShadowCatJen, 09 avril 2010 - 04:37 .

[AdorableAnarchist]

Ooo, liking this TONS!! Would like more please... I should be bak and ready to read it by 2PM EST. Thanks, k bai!

[Narise]

Excellent

[ShadowCatJen]

A/N: Yes, I know that in the game the attack happens on the same day Fergus leaves, but as stated before I'm changing times and distances to make some sense. Also making room for more story, so I hope you all can bare with. Thanks for the encouraging words so far.

Part 5: Flying Lessons

www.fanfiction.net/s/5665844/5/The_Migration

Modifié par ShadowCatJen, 09 avril 2010 - 04:38 .

[ShadowCatJen]

A/N: I've rewritten this part about four times now. I couldn't get it to "flow" right the first few times until I tossed in a minor character and made him more flirtatious. You'll see who he is when you read. If he seems a little off cannon it's because it was done on purpose.

Also, I always found it annoying that the biggest reaction you got out of anyone in the game for you playing a noble was "have I seen you at the Landsmeet?" One would think that being the son/daughter of a Teyrn, second family only to the king, and potentially one who might be the next Teyrn of Highever, you'd have met your future peers face to face by then, be acquainted with them at the very least. I know they couldn't expand on it in game due to story mechanics (it had to work with all the origins, after all), but since this is my take on it, I'm tweaking it to my liking. So there! Nyah!

Oh, and.... apologies on the length of this. I've even pared it down some by summerizing a few parts, but once I finally got rolling with it I just couldn't stop. I also couldn't find a spot in the story to break it up into two parts sooooo... yeah, there ya go.

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Part 6: Friends of the Hawk


www.fanfiction.net/s/5665844/6/The_Migration

Modifié par ShadowCatJen, 09 avril 2010 - 04:39 .

[ShadowCatJen]

A/N: I'd think I'd tag this section as being M rated due to violence and gore. Sorry if that offends. Pardon for the length again. Comments welcome. Good, bad, or indifferent.

Part 7: The Nest Torn Asunder

www.fanfiction.net/s/5665844/7/The_Migration

Modifié par ShadowCatJen, 09 avril 2010 - 04:40 .

[ShadowCatJen]

Since I'm getting the sense that my posts are too lengthy to read on these forums... here:

www.fanfiction.net/s/5665844/1/The_Migration

You can find all the parts above. I'll just bump this thread when there's an update.

[ShadowCatJen]

A/N: This is a companion story to go along with my other AU fanfic called The Migration. It was originally going to be part of the Migration story, but then I realized that it was cluttering up the situation with the main characters for both plots and could be placed separate from it. Decided to post it here in the Bioware forums on the same thread for practical reasons.

I was always dissatisfied with the way Fergus and the situation in Highever was treated in the game. That is to say, it was almost non-existent. Laid up with the Chasind for almost 2 years? Sorry, that doesn't fly with me. So I'm taking my out frustrations with it in this story. Very much a work in progress, very much AU with who I have survive. Comments very welcome. Good, bad, questions?

P.S. This story is also the reason why my next chapter to The Migration has taken so long to get out. I know, excuses, excuses.

Friends of the Hawk

Part 1: By a Sliver

www.fanfiction.net/s/5835129/1/Friends_of_the_Hawk

Modifié par ShadowCatJen, 09 avril 2010 - 04:42 .

[ShadowCatJen]

Edited post for proper formatting. i.e. you can actually read it now.

[ShadowCatJen]

Update for The Migration

A/N: The first section was inspired by some early DA:O fanart
from Aimo (aka Irma Ahmed). Those of you familiar with her work might
know which drawing I speak of. Also, for those who don't know, Ser
Gilmore's full name is Roland Gilmore. "Rory" to his friends.

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Part 8: Scattering to Safety

www.fanfiction.net/s/5665844/8/The_Migration


A link to the aforementioned pic:

aimo.deviantart.com/art/DA-As-the-castle-burns-134262503

Apologies if it's a repost and apologies to Aimo for posting without warning.

I've also edited the previous posts on this thread to just contain links. My word counts are apparently atrociously long.

..... comments are love. >.>

[ShadowCatJen]

I know I'm not as fast as others. Sue me. You can have my pocket lint.

Part 9: Eagle Sighting

Ostagar, at last. Glorious!

www.fanfiction.net/s/5665844/9/The_Migration

A/N: What's this? Yes! A part only a smidgen under 7000
words long. Wordy Girl is trying not to be so wordy. Our heroes are
finally at Ostagar, too. Apologies to any Glory seekers. You'll know
what I mean when you see it. Also, I appreciate the patience. I know
I'm not as fast as a lot of others around here so I want to thank
everyone who has me on alert. Thanks! Also, I kinda feel this chapter is admittedly not one of my best. Comments always welcome.

Modifié par ShadowCatJen, 30 avril 2010 - 03:03 .

[Gilgamesh1138]

I just found this thanks to it popping up in the forum. Went to FF, started to read and I am hooked.  I posted a review there, but wanted to say how much I enjoyed the first chapter.  

[ShadowCatJen]

Thanks! I hope you like the rest of it as well.

[Gilgamesh1138]

I know I will!

[ShadowCatJen]

Part 10 of The Migration up on FF.net.

www.fanfiction.net/s/5665844/10/The_Migration

Shorter than what I normaly have. It happens.

Modifié par ShadowCatJen, 07 mai 2010 - 04:49 .

[Gilgamesh1138]

Doesn't mean it isn't excellent. : D

[ShadowCatJen]

Thanks.

[ShadowCatJen]

Part 2 of Friends of the Hawk up on FF.net.

Part 2: Finding Direction

Here's a snippet:

Dairren was trying to calm the thundering in his chest with little success. The home of the woman he barged in on looked warm and cozy, but he felt a chill down his back as he heard the armored soldiers come to a stop just outside. Words were being said and he was certain he could hear the voice of the gruff sounding man.

Peeking out through a curtain, the woman who let him in looked outside through the window. Occasionally she glanced nervously back at Dairren, who was leaning with his back on the wall, still clutching to the burlap sack.

The voices outside became louder and heated until the woman gave a little gasp, "No, no, Ser Denny, calm your-." She gasped again when the voices became shouts.

It got Dairren to move. Nearing the window, he pushed aside some of the curtain to also peek out, the woman moving a little aside for him. What he saw made his blood go colder.

The men from Amaranthine had the man she called Ser Denny down on the ground and surrounded. They kicked, punched, and beat him mercilessly. Ser Denny, however, was not completely out of the fight. Giving a bit of a roar he lunged up and grabbed one of his assailants in a headlock, then proceeded to punch the soldier in the head repeatedly. The others grabbed at him, trying to overpower him. It took all of the men there to bring Ser Denny down to the ground again. A solid kick to his head finally made him slump to the ground, unmoving.

"Sweet Andraste," the woman whispered. "What in the world is going on?"

((EDIT: cut/paste fail, had to fix it

Modifié par ShadowCatJen, 01 juillet 2010 - 02:51 .