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[vinwarrior]

A Turian sits in his Mako, his only move is the shaking of his hand against his cold Avenger, he sat still as his mako rumbled agaist the dirt of London, than boom. An explosion hits narrowly missing the vehicle, a Salarian looks at him with a cold, dead stare, he then turns his attention to his grenade, twiddling and tinkering with it as the turian looks onward, then a loud Thump... The vehicle hit a rock in a blaze of fire, electricity, and rubble, the mako is covered in dirt and ash from the dead bodies, the turian gets up off the floor with a buzzing in his ears and numb hands, startled, he shakes his head and gets up quickly, he then step on the floor to accidentally step on a body, he falls over in the smoke filled vehicle, he then looks at the shattered Salarian head right next to his on the floor, cold, and with a fear-filled look on it's face, the Turian sends out a light scream and gets up, to see a floor filled with bodies, he then sees a Human emerge from the smoke in the vehicle, he takes off his helmet, he looks tired, but he seems fearful, he looks at the Turian and asks how many in a low tone coughing voice, as blood flew from his severed finger, the turian put up six fingers, the human nods his head and then bangs it against the wall, all of a sudden, a chill goes behind the turian's head and his blood runs cold, hoping for it to be a squadmate, he turns but before he can make it a large scream goes for blocks, he looks behind ready to fight, but sees nothing, he pulls out his Predator, to find only four faint shots left in the chamber. He carries it by this side limping outward, as he looks, it seems no enemies are near, he turns once again feeling the cold chill. This time stronger than the last, he grabs his sidearm ready to pull it out and kill, he remembered on palaven what would happen if he wasn't ready. He turns and fires his four rounds, only to have shot at the emptyness of the fallen city. The turian angry and startled makes his way on the streets to a Sword, next to it the fallen body of a phantom, he had recognized the Phantoms because he fought them on Palaven, he noticed that the body had no gun wounds, but a large hole going through the abdomen, he took the helmet off to see if there was a radio, to find the face looking just like husk, it startled him and as he went to touch the radio, the creature growled at him and he fell back in fear, it got up and was chasing him all while hissing. It jumped on him and as the turian closed his eyes to give up the husk fell face flat on him. Opening his eyes again, this time being happy, he moved back and let the husk fall to the cold ground, he than got up and let out a silent "hmph" and kicked it. He looked around to find the killer, up in the distance a faint shadow held against a battered column, he pulled a small Phalanx from the floor and fired up on the column which sent the mysterious figure out of Tactical Cloak, the actual figure startled the Turian, it was a Geth, dressed in black, with a Black Widow, he could see why no one had found it yet, it was so well hidden in the blackness of the building's shadows. The Geth stood up on his porch, it went back into cloak and the Turian yelled for it to come out, the yells echoed and were almost louder then the Reapers firing on the evac shuttles, he then gave up and out of nowhere the cold chill returned, this time he knew something was there, he felt it's breath on him, turned around to find a Banshee right behind him, it grabbed him by the throat, it examined him before grabbing his head and pulling it's other arm back to strike his stomach, but before it could the Geth fired on it bashing a huge bullet into it's skull, the banshee screamed and fell backward in pain, he picked up his Sword and impaled it in the chest as it screeched again and turned it's head, the Turian stood on top of it as it dissapeared to ash and he fell flat on the floor. the Geth once again looked at the Turian through the scope, it aimed at him and he ducked as it shot two Cannibals behind him. As he stood breathless staring at the Geth who stared back, the ground began to rumble as two shuttles passed by, one was obliterated into pieces right above the Turian the other making out of the destruction but soon being chased by two Harvesters, the Turian narrowly evaded large pieces of rubble and after held out his hand in sorrow for the ashes falling like snow everywhere, he grabbed one as he clutched it and closed his eyes, only feeling pain and anguish, he fell to the floor and sat as tears shed, he remembered Palaven, and his squadmates dying right in front of him, he let out a small, "I'm sorry" as he pulled out his phalanx, carefully looking at it, and putting it at his chest, as he was pushing the trigger, a faint rumble began as two makos swooped by and landed right near him, almost crushing him, he got up as a mixture of Alliance, Krogan, and Turian soldiers charged in, a human leading the group, in tattered cloths utilizing a Venom shotgun, walked over to him he pulled out an Hornet SMG he had picked up earlier, and he gave it to the Turian, both were locked in a stare almost as though they were old friends, the human let out a faint smile to the Turian, the Turian put his hand on the Human's shoulder, than they moved the Turian almost prying his eyes to the Geth, the Geth got up and turned, the letters GUARDIAN scrolled on his back, than he seemed to dissapear leaving only his Widow on the floor, the Turian felt almost like a burst of confidence, than he remembered that same geth from Palaven, in his squad, he also remembered that the Geth armed the bomb and died to save a city on Palaven, he couldn't believe what had happened, now a smile showed through across his face, a krogan ran up to his, the krogan let out a small faint laugh and than growled at him, the Krogan smiled as did the turian and they rushed into battle, the Turian utilizing his Hornet, the only thing that kept him moving was the unity this war brought, he thought about the Geth, and he ran valiantly into battle, as he was holed up in a corner keeping his smile, a Brute toppled him, he fired back as a Human fired an ML-77 Missile Launcher dead into the brute's two eyes, he got up with dirt and ash on his face, still smiling, and moved on, for a second he passed an Alliance Soldier, the Soldier held the words N7 on the soldier's chestplate, then moved on into the dust, only nodding at the turian, he believed he had just seen Commander Shepard, but before the smile could show through once again he witnessed a soldier get mauled by a husk, an army of husks approached him and the few ragtag soldiers left, they fought valiantly, holding off with glowing ash surrounding them, it went down fast from ten, to five, to eventually only one, the Turian pulled out his Sword, he knew for one last time, impaling two husks in a rage, he then got toppled my one who cut his face, he didn't care about the blood he grabbed the husk by his engineered expressionless face and threw him against a wall valiantly shouting "COME ON!!!!" Than all of a sudden a verge of red light came through the entire city and beyond, sending out a violent surge killing every reaper there was, he knew victory had come, he screamed out of joy, and than sat down laying his Sword into the dust as he walked away, shuttles soon swarmed the city streets, picking up alive civilians and soldiers in hordes. He was called by a pilot  as he said to wait one minute, he took four sets of Tags and laced themn around his sword leaning to the left. Than in a burst rushed toward the shuttle, he asked where he was going and the pilot said Palaven, he put on his signature smile again and cheered, he looked at the survivors, and than picked up a child as he put him on his shoulder. After seeming like almost endless hours to the Turian, he arrived on Palaven, while most saw ruins, he saw a future, he than took a shuttle to see Turian Command, who was meeting with the alliance, he walked down the nice and polished clean hallway to see at least four humans and turians talking aimlessly about the future, they paused in silence as he walked in, almost staring at him as though he was a reaper, they were not used to seeing Turian soldiers, he only asked for the names of every Geth since the Commander allied them. On the list one was named Guardian, it listed killed in action in bold words next to the name, it than said the date, a month before the attack on earth, he knew it was a miracle, he either survived or he just saw a spirit, "but a spirit of a machine?" he though "That's impossible." Command still stared with an almost pitiful emotion to the soldier, he smiled still and walked out as he reached a memorial wall, a very large memorial wall from the war, the Geth's name was there, he put his head on it and walked out. You could see the heavy emotion on his face he knew he had lost a friend. As he left he bumped into a soldier with ragged clothes on, like he just returned from hell, he looked back at the Turian, he knew who he was, he could only smile and remember the Turian from earth.

Modifié par vinwarrior, 25 mars 2013 - 06:46 .

[N7 Panda]

Holy wall of text Batman! Might want to break it up a bit, otherwise, nice.

Modifié par N7 Panda, 25 mars 2013 - 08:40 .

[vinwarrior]

N7 Panda wrote...

Holy wall of text Batman! Might want to break it up a bit, otherwise, nice.

Thanks for the feedback. I will take it into consideration next time, thank you for reading,