Allan Schumacher wrote...
Take into account the character's traits and developments up until that point, and take an educated guess at what such a character would do.
What influences the educated guess? What makes a guess educated rather than random?
Dunno about him but when I write a character I come up with a background for him / her, a generic personality, some generic way of responding to the world.. And that is the "educated" part, i.e. based on those initial parameters how will he or she act when X happens ?
Lets look at Sigrun, for instance
Background: Casteless dwarf, got in trouble, is on Legion of the Dead because of said trouble
Personality: Based on her background, Sigrun knows hardship. Has it made her bitter ? Angry at the world, chip on her shoulder ? Broken ? Numb ? All possible but done to death..
So let's make this little dwarf girl strong and unbreakable, no matter what gets thrown at her. She has a great deal of emotional pain on her past but she is a survivor so she can either be numb or stoic, i.e. she either distances himself completely from her emotions or she "just get over it" and forges on. Let's go with stoic. She can deal with pain and hardship but she still is affected by it.
We decided for no chip on her shoulder and she is on Legion of the Dead, helping all dwarves survive a bit longer by killing Darkspawn till she dies. So if a) she isn't numb, i.e. she still allows herself to feel emotion and

her "profession" is helping her people, then it flows very well that Sigrun has a lot of empathy for her people. We could make Sigrun be "dwarf centric" and only care about dwarves problems, being a higly empathetical humanoid when it comes to dwarves but completely unconcerned about other races (Dalish elves anyone ?). Nah, that is selling Sigrun short, lets make her less myopic. Sigrun is a "hero" in the sense that she fights to the death to protect all peoples of Thedas and empathyzes with all who suffer.
That could make hear gooody goody two shoes but she is a bad arse dwarf who kills darkspawn for a living so no, it deosn't make sense for Sigrun to be "Mother Theresa". She can and will hurt and kill monsters or bandits if it is necessary to protect her squad. Mmm.. too many "hero" ingredients here. she could be the Warden with this bio. How can we make her stand out ? Well we have a dark hurtful past, we have strength but we also have a doomed future. She is fighting to the death. She will never have family, kids, learn to paint or sing or be able to study.. Dark past and even darker future, spent on a hellhole fighting monsters. And not bitter... She is stoic and practical after all, so no point on dwelling on the negatives. That would make her resigned to her fate, seeing no point in throwing her hardship on people's faces.
Aha! lets make her cheery and sunny and a breath of fresh air.. Would balance a bit of the sadness and drama of her past and future, bringing a nice contrast: unbelieveably dark future x preppy and cheery demeanor is new, most doomed characters are the "dark and broody" type.
Her ceerfulness might be genuine or might be a shield she uses to keep her inner suffering private, bottled up, which allows her to stoically move on with her "life". Or both. She is practical, sees no point in dwelling on negatives. She is doomed, but she doesn't have to spend her days moping. All her squadmatesare there to die just like her, what is the point of repeating the obvious ? Weakens the squad and makes her weaker if she spends her energy on "what could have been" instead of on repairing her armors and weapon and getting ready for the next battle.
Ok, now we made Sigrun, a cheeful and funny dwarf gal, with a sad past and strong as nails.
She gets kidnapped by darkspawn and separated from her squad, and a bunch of humans save her. WWSD now ? (what would Sigrun do now) ? Sigrun, the dwarf gal we described just above, what would she do if she finds herself rescued by a bunch of humans while in the middle of a scuffle with darkspawns ?
a) Say thanks (empathy, cheefulness)

Go back to fight darkspawn and rescue her team (resigned to be Legion of the Dead and to dying, empathetic with her squad mates)
c) Not ask for help. (No point: She is practical so she knows it is suicide. Only a mad dwarf like her would go back into Kal Hyrol crawling with darkspawn as it is right now. Suicide ? Well she is "dead" already so no biggie - for her - but her human rescuers are not Legion of the Dead and will probably object if asked to join a hopeless mission)
/ shrugs
That is how I write anyway
Modifié par Renmiri1, 07 avril 2013 - 06:31 .