The Templar Order is wiped out. Whatever arises thereafter is wholly divorced from the Chantry. This is non-negotiable. The commander and First Enchanter will both be part of the Circle, in different offices. Blood magic will not be an automatic death sentence, but will require assessment to be allowed to use. The Harrowing will not involve death as a potential penalty. Your "chantry" mention of checking in will be replaced by Mage's Collective-esque way stations.Palidane wrote...
Ok, a question to all the pro-mages out there: would you be willing to accept a reformed circle system?
For example, when a young mage is discovered, he is brought to the Circle for training. There's no choice in this, but parents can come and visit him. Templars are not allowed inside the tower without the express permission of the First Enchanter. On the other hand, mages are not allowed outside the tower without the Knight Commander's OK. Young mages get to be educated about their magic and learn to use it wisely. Students can take field trips and go places, they just have to have an escort. If they pass their harrowing and get the First Enchanter and Knight Commander's ok, they can move to wherever they want. They have to check in with the local chantry whenever they're travelling and have to have yearly inspections by local templars, but other than that are free to go about their business.
Would that be acceptable? Maleficars either fail the harrowing or get a Templar hit squad after them, and law abiding mages get to have normal lives. Common people don't have to worry about an abomination coming out of nowhere and burning the village down, and Templars aren't constantly at odds with the mages.
Beyond that, it's acceptable for the time being. I'll need to read it again, in all likelihood; there may be things I've missed.





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