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[Abraham_uk]

A few changes (formatting only)

AnimaMachinae wrote...

Alliance Synthetic Engineer

(Concept: I wanted to make the engineer less orientated to melee combat that would first use a transmittable virus which then "marks" targets for the turrets to fire specifically at.The synthetic has repair Matrix that works with the turret. In close proximity the turret slowly repairs itself if effect ison


Powers

Manta Turret
Viral upload
Repair Matrix
Fitness (same as other classes)
Engineering Mastery

(does not use the biotic pulse in melee rather uses its blade)

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Manta Turret:

Pop up a little turret similiar in animation to the N7 Demolisher's own supply pylon. Fires on its own, but will fire at virally effect targets for extra damage (30% extra). Fires a stream of rounds for 3 secs
Damage: 500 in 3 secs
Health: 250
Recharge 20 secs

Rank 1: Unlock
Rank 2: Damage Bonus + 10%
Rank 3: Health bonus +25%

Rank 4a: Damage increased by 10% (additionally)
Rank 4b: Duration of firing increased by 60%

Rank 5a: Defensive proximity: all damage taken reduced by 10% when in close proximity to turret.
Rank 5b: Health increased by 100%

Rank 6a: Arc Projector. Alongside the machinegun the turret is upgraded with an arc turret which does the damage amount of damage to shields/barriers as the turrets current output. Can jump to other targets but will only damage them by 5% of output. Primes.
Rank 6b: Firestorm Missile Battery: Self explanatory function. Damage armour equal to output of turret. Splash damage from current target 10% output within a 5m radius. Primes.

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Viral Upload:

Infect a target with a virus which slows down target by 20% and reduces accuracy by 30%. No Damage purely a support skill and the actual "damage" this skill is indirect i.e the turret fires at the enemy targets marked. Viral targets are seen with a green tinge.
Recharge 9 secs
Duration 20 secs

Rank 1: Unlock
Rank 2: Damage Bonus + 5%
Rank 3: Recharge bonus 20%

Rank 4a: Rate of gestation decreased by 20%
Rank 4b: Damage increased by 20%

Rank 5a: Duration: time of effect increased by 100% recharge decreased by 30%
Rank 5b: Proximity infection: enemy targets within 5m radius decreases damage by 10%

Rank 6a: Viral Cascade: if target dies under effects spreads to 2 other targets. Turret will target closest enemy.
Rank 6b: Squad awareness: once used an area of 40m will be revealed other enemy targets will be seen for 30 secs.

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Repair Matrix. Rate of shield repair will be equal to turret.

Epic concept!
Reminds me of the Cerberus Engineer.

Love the turret.

Viral upload seems pretty useful.
Main trouble is, despite being a very useful ability, many less experienced players will probably skip since they'll wrongly assume it's useless.

Repair Matrix and turret have a great synergy.

Great kit. This is to be added to my list of hyperlinks.

Modifié par Abraham_uk, 25 avril 2013 - 01:41 .

[Abraham_uk]

24 kits left!

 Remaining kits (excluding reservations that have been made)

Raloi: Soldier, Engineer, Adept, Vanguard
Elcor: Engineer, Infiltrator (I'm curious about this one), Adept, Vanguard
Hanar: Soldier, Sentinel, Engineer, Infiltrator, Vanguard
Rachni: Soldier, Infiltrator

Critters: Klixen, Varren and Nathak




Reservations for the following kit concepts:


Reserved by Phoenix: Alliance Synthetic Vanguard (with biotic powers), Rachni Sentinel, Rachni Engineer

Reserved by Soja 57: Raloi Infiltrator

Reserved by Alias of All: Rachni Adept, Rachni Vanguard

I'm really looking forward to what Phoenix, Alias and Soja will do with these concepts.
The first ever biotic robot (Alliance Synthetic Vanguard) sounds exciting.

Keep up the good work!

Modifié par Abraham_uk, 25 avril 2013 - 01:57 .

[TheAshenPhoenix]

 Holy Crap UK, you spelled my name right!!! 

Anyway, I'll be getting to the Synthetic Locust Vanguard soon, but I just did some more character for wokr another DLC. So for now have a bump instead 

[Abraham_uk]

TheAshenPhoenix wrote...

 Holy Crap UK, you spelled my name right!!! 

Anyway, I'll be getting to the Synthetic Locust Vanguard soon, but I just did some more character for wokr another DLC. So for now have a bump instead 

I should have realised with the name "abraham_uk" that I would be representing the United Kingdom.

[TheAshenPhoenix]

Abraham_uk wrote...

TheAshenPhoenix wrote...

 Holy Crap UK, you spelled my name right!!! 

Anyway, I'll be getting to the Synthetic Locust Vanguard soon, but I just did some more character for wokr another DLC. So for now have a bump instead 

I should have realised with the name "abraham_uk" that I would be representing the United Kingdom.

Huh? I just meant it more so I didn't say your full name, like you call soja57 soja and me Phoenix. Not calling you the actual UK

[Abraham_uk]

TheAshenPhoenix wrote...

Abraham_uk wrote...

TheAshenPhoenix wrote...

 Holy Crap UK, you spelled my name right!!! 

Anyway, I'll be getting to the Synthetic Locust Vanguard soon, but I just did some more character for wokr another DLC. So for now have a bump instead 

I should have realised with the name "abraham_uk" that I would be representing the United Kingdom.

Huh? I just meant it more so I didn't say your full name, like you call soja57 soja and me Phoenix. Not calling you the actual UK

Don't worry. We're cool. The Ashen Phoenix.

Modifié par Abraham_uk, 26 avril 2013 - 12:44 .

[TheAshenPhoenix]

Are we allowed any repeats? Because /me was a bit slow on the draw but could make some epic awakened collectors. If not then that's understanable, after all this thread is just about creating new characters for the ones that are missing. Anyway, I was able to get around to making this epic vanguard for you guys, hope you enjoy!


Alliance synthetic "Locust" Vanguard

Health 500
Shields 600

Concept: Using micro mass effect generators wired throughout the unit, the locust is able to "create" it's own biotics through element zero manipulation in the same way an organic would. Except inctead of electricity from the nervous system of the brain, it uses electrical current generated from within it's body.

The Locust is an experimental, highly vicous synthetic. Using their biotics and robotic nature to their full and brutal advantadges, these unit's are truly feared on the battlefield, bringing in their lethal Locust gauntlets for which they are named, specially crafted combat knives that closely resemble needles on their right arms (not shown in picture :/) to drain the life from enemies in a similar fashion to the Geth Juggernaut. As well as even ripping apart their own body with biotics to move faster and reduce damage while closing in on a target. The Locust specializes on closing in on targets and swiftly destroying them before moving onto the next, hopping around the battlefield and leaving a swath of destruction behind it.

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Special characteristics:

Heavy melee: replaced by Locust needle strike, the Locust unit strikes the enemy with their needle, healing them for a certian amount of shields. If the enemy struck is human sized, the Locust unit will instead lift them up with the arm that uses the needle and you can continuously hold the heavy melee button to asorb shields in the same fashion as the juggernaut melee (making the target unable to do anything). However for anything bigger the unit will do a standard strike. heavy melee restores 180 shields per second
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Powers:

Phase Shift: Biotically destroy your robotic frame at the molecular level using rapidlly shifting mass effect fields, then suspend them around you in low mass effect field so you may reassemble yourself later. Doing this causes your form to scatter around you in mist like particles, making you nearly impossible to hurt with conventional weapons. you also drastically incrrease your speed, cannot attack, and gain a biotic teleportation technique. Using any attack during this mode will cause you to break out of the phase shift immediatly

Mechanics: for this mode your heavy melee is replaced by a biotic teleport in the direction you choose. I would have just put this on (insert you omni-button for dodge here) but the dash goes farther than a fury dodge and I din't want the omni-button making you teleport far away from someone you were trying to revive. Shields do not regen while in phase shift, you also become as resistant to stun as a juggernaut.

Rank 1: damage redutction 45% speed increase 20% biotic teleport distance 4M recharge speed 14 seconds (activates upon coming out of Phase shift)

Rank 2: increase damage reduction by 10%

rank 3:  increase teleportation distance by 1.5M

Rank 4: A. increase damage reduction by 15%

               B. gain 15% DR for 10 seconds upon coming out of phase shift

Rank 5: A.  weapon damage increased by 25% for 5 seconds after coming out of phase shift

               B. speed increased by an addtional 15%

Rank 6: A. fully disassemble yourself upon entering Phase Shift, increasing DR by 30%. however this means it will also take more time to reassemble yourself and you CANNOT attack (meaning if you try to attack you'll merely do nothing, not come out of phase shift) and coming out of phase shift take 2 seconds. teleportation distance increased 2M

                B. Melee damage increased by 40% for 5 seconds upon coming out of phase shift, killing an enemy within 3 seconds of coming out of phase shift has a 70% chance to reset your power timer.
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Locust grenades: lob this grenade filled with self-replicating nanobots at the enemy and watch as the nanobots attack your enemy. the damage starts off low, but starts to get larger and larger as the nanobots replicate and there are more to attack the enemy, leading to large amounts of damage being dealt before the nanobots self-deactivate.

Rank 1: can carry 1 grenade, radius 3M damage 30 per second, replication damage increase 20 per second for 5 seconds, duration 8 seconds

Rank 2: increase initial damage per second to 35

Rank 3: increase amount of grenades carried by 2

Rank 4: A. increase duration by 5 seconds

               B. increase replication damage increase to 40 per second

Rank 5: A. increase amount of grenades carried by 2

               B.increase radius by 2M

Rank 6: A. nanobots sabotoge and corrode enemy weapons. decreasing afflicted enemy damage by 35% for dration of the power, weakens armor by 30%

               B. instead of self deactivating, the nanobots self destruct at the end of their duration, dealing 500 damage to each enemy afflicted

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Biotic charge

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Well, there you have it, I know it's kind of convoluted, but I like it! This thign was a bit hellish to make so I sure hope you guys like it as much as I do, it's probably one of my most out there concepts I'll say that much. I really like all things I put in this character and how they come together.

[Abraham_uk]

This thread's first Biotic Robot is complete.

Phase Shift and Locust Grenades are both facinating concepts.
Sadly I can't comment on whether or not the stats are balanced (that is more Soja 57's department).

But the concepts are great.

The Phase Shift's mechanics add a new style of play.
Though I'm unclear about a few things.

When are you unable to do anything?
What can you and can't you do whilst mode is active?


The Locust Grenades are excellent. Nanobots that damage and sabotage enemies.
They are similiar to inferno grenades but with a more futuristic spin.

Your kit is more than good enough to be added.
Congratulations!

Modifié par Abraham_uk, 26 avril 2013 - 07:15 .

[Abraham_uk]

About "repeats", I do have a thread where you can post repeat ideas.

I have a no restrictions create your own character thread.
Feel free to go CRAZY.

Modifié par Abraham_uk, 26 avril 2013 - 07:28 .

[TheAshenPhoenix]

Abraham_uk wrote...

This thread's first Biotic Robot is complete.

Phase Shift and Locust Grenades are both facinating concepts.
Sadly I can't comment on whether or not the stats are balanced (that is more Soja 57's department).

But the concepts are great.

The Phase Shift's mechanics add a new style of play.
Though I'm unclear about a few things.

When are you unable to do anything?
What can you and can't you do whilst mode is active?


The Locust Grenades are excellent. Nanobots that damage and sabotage enemies.
They are similiar to inferno grenades but with a more futuristic spin.

Your kit is more than good enough to be added.
Congratulations!

You are unable to do anything while Phase shift is active (but without the last upgrade you'll merely come out of phase shift if you do anything, like with tactical cloak if you shoot/use a power)

You cannot do ANYTHING except move and use phase shifts teleportation while Phase shift is active, that's the whole point, you gain massive DR and speed, but you cannot attack in any way shape or form while still remaining in phase shift

Thanks for the compliments as well.

Modifié par TheAshenPhoenix, 26 avril 2013 - 08:44 .

[Abraham_uk]

Thanks for the clarification.

So basically Phase Shift is Banshee mode without the screeching.
Awesome!

[TheAshenPhoenix]

Haha I hadn't thought about it like that but yeah kind of...

** realizes heavy melee allows Locust to pick up humans and stab them with long pointy object attached to their arm**

Ermm....

** realizes Locust has a DoT move **

Wait a minute...

** swarm mode allows you to teleport from out of nowhere and pick up an enemy while they are helpless to do anything**

MY GOD. I've created a Banshee without even knowing it!!

[Abraham_uk]

 The entire Opening Post is complete!

The only blanks left are with the races that haven't been introduced yet.


The likes of:

Legion of Rannoch,
Soja 57,
The Ashen Phoenix,
Stysaiq,
Data 7,
Alias of All,
3D Matt,
Illusiveman Jr,
Spaced Brain (deviant artist),
Jon The Wizard,
AnimaMachinae,
Ultimate Pheer,
Draining Dragon
Tharigorichiban
and
Chaotic Insanity

have all contributed some epic ideas.

I of course contributed my own ideas tooB).


So big thanks to all of you.
You have made this thread epic!
You inspire me and most importantly, you inspire each other!


Now for the second post. We have a fair number of concepts to be filled in.:happy:

[AnimaMachinae]

TheAshenPhoenix wrote...

Haha I hadn't thought about it like that but yeah kind of...

** realizes heavy melee allows Locust to pick up humans and stab them with long pointy object attached to their arm**

Ermm....

** realizes Locust has a DoT move **

Wait a minute...

** swarm mode allows you to teleport from out of nowhere and pick up an enemy while they are helpless to do anything**

MY GOD. I've created a Banshee without even knowing it!!

Good. Would expect a lot of fun from that gameplay. For enemy targets however. Problematic

[Abraham_uk]

I would love to out Banshee a Banshee.

[Abraham_uk]

New Sections


Ex-Cerberus
Ex-Reapers (Like Awakened Collectors)

Talon Mercenaries
Blood Pack Mercenaries
Blue Suns Mercenaries
Eclipse Mercenaries
Category 6 Mercenaries

Create Your Own Race (check out this thread for inspiration)

Modifié par Abraham_uk, 26 avril 2013 - 11:54 .

[TheAshenPhoenix]

Abraham_uk wrote...

I would love to out Banshee a Banshee.

 




Also just becuase



I'm defineitly going to have some fun with the ex-cerberus and eclipse

[Abraham_uk]

There are so many possibilities with the inclusion of old mercenary factions.

Take a look.
See what you can do.


Remember.
If you have a great idea that needs time to be developed, make a reservation as soon as possible.

If someone beats you to the punch, you'll probably feel very annoyed.

Modifié par Abraham_uk, 27 avril 2013 - 12:22 .

[TheAshenPhoenix]

I will be reserving the Ex-cerberus soldier, Eclipse engineer, and... the Ex-Reaper Husk. You can drop my reservation for the Rachni engineer, I only really had ideas for a sentinel (and to feel like I'm not just trying to imperialize this thread with reservations, though now we have more than enough with the mercenaries.)

[Abraham_uk]

TheAshenPhoenix wrote...

I will be reserving the Ex-cerberus soldier, Eclipse engineer, and... the Ex-Reaper Husk. You can drop my reservation for the Rachni engineer, I only really had ideas for a sentinel (and to feel like I'm not just trying to imperialize this thread with reservations, though now we have more than enough with the mercenaries.)

Looking forward to it.

[AnimaMachinae]

Does ex-cerberus mean organic and synthetic troops? or just organic?

[Soja57]

Cancelling reservation of Raloi Infiltrator in favor of a Raloi Engineer. Creating in Engineer is more versatile than an Infiltrator, as the latter class is somewhat restricted to having some type of cloaking power (Tactical Cloak, Predator Camouflage from Ultimate Pheer's Volus Predator Infiltrator, etc.).

[Soja57]

Raloi Zealot Engineer

Raloi Background Lore Entry

Raloi zealots were members of the early resistance that sparked the Turvessian Revolution. These Raloi in particular are known for their advanced fabrication techniques: using their omni-tools to assemble objects from common materials. Their expertise is evident in their fabrication of accurate and durable engineering tools at the touch of their omni-tool. Now, the Raloi zealots focus their expert knowledge on weapon construction, often adapting their own engineering tools to fit the battlefield of the Reaper War.

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Shields: 500
Health: 500

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Powers

Overload


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Disc Blade


Fire a lethal, fast-flying disc blade that cuts through an infinite amount of enemies until it hits a wall (including Guardian shields). Re-use the power to recall the disc blade to damage enemies on its return journey (ignores walls between recall point and player). Cooldown begins only after recovering the disc, and disc automatically returns if not recalled after a few seconds. Can detonate tech combos.

Base Damage = 300 Damage (Can stack from combining original trajectory with recall trajectory)
Disc Width = 1 Meter
Projectile Speed = 60 Meters per Second (2x faster than Warp, Incinerate, etc.)
Auto-Recall Time = 5 Seconds
Base Cooldown = 8 Seconds

Rank 2 = Damage: +20% Base Damage
Rank 3 = Disc Width: +0.5 Meters

Rank 4a = Damage: +30% Base Damage
Rank 4b = Energy Pulse: Releases an energy pulse per hit and at the recall point, dealing Total Damage within a 3-Meter Radius

Rank 5a = Damage Combo: Every enemy hit adds an additional 50% of Total Damage to the next target (dealing more damage to consecutive enemies)
Rank 5b = Disc Width: +0.75 Meters

Rank 6a = Triple Blades: Fires two additional blades that travel 15 degrees apart from the original disc, at the cost reducing Total Damage by 40%
Rank 6b = Bleed Damage: Deals 1.5x Total Damage over 8 seconds to every enemy hit (including enemies hit by Energy Pulse evolution)

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Cryo Grenade


Unleashes a cloud of cryogenic gas that snap freezes enemies within the vicinity while weakening armor. The cryogenic cloud remains in the area for a duration, freezing and weakening the armor of additional enemies that enter the cloud. Damage only applies when the grenade is first detonated. Primes any affected enemy for a cryo explosion.

Damage = 500 (1.5x multiplier vs armor, barriers, and shields)
Freeze Duration = 5 seconds (Is also the value for the cryogenic cloud duration)
Impact Radius = 6 meters
Armor Weakening = 25%
Movement Speed Penalty = 20%
Grenade Capacity = 1

Rank 2 = Capacity: +1 Max Grenade Capacity
Rank 3 = Damage: +20% Base Damage

Rank 4a = Damage: +30% Base Damage
Rank 4b = Radius: +2 Meters

Rank 5a = Capacity: +2 Max Grenade Capacity
Rank 5b = Enhanced Freeze: +50% Duration, +25% Movement Speed Penalty

Rank 6a = Flash Freeze: Cryogenic cloud destablizes at the end of its duration, snap freezing upon itself and shattering to deal 80% of Total Damage within Maximum Radius
Rank 6b = Piercing Freeze: +25% Armor Weakening, +25% Base Damage

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Raloi Engineer (Uses the same passive bonuses as Male Quarian Defender)

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Fitness
Evasive Maneuver: Combat Leap

Melee: Default 3-hit combo

Heavy Melee: Chakram Attack
Flash fabricates a large chakram that levitates in front of you. The chakram spins at a rapid rate, cutting through flesh and metal to deal massive damage. The chakram remains for as long as the melee button is held.

Damage Per Second = 250 damage per second
Chakram Radius = 1 meters (placed 2 meters away from character, for a maximum range of 3 meters)

Fitness Tree (Uses the same Fitness tree as Female Quarians, Asari, Salarian, and Volus classes)

Modifié par Soja57, 27 avril 2013 - 11:56 .

[AnimaMachinae]

Mind reserving the Raloi sentinel?

[Abraham_uk]

AnimaMachinae wrote...

Does ex-cerberus mean organic and synthetic troops? or just organic?

Both.

Same applies to all of the mercenary groups.