Took me about five hours to pose and tweak in GIMP. Fully up to getting ideas as to how I could improve in the future. Unfortunately I can't access my saves with the scene, cause Gmod 13's stupid like that.
Just a multiplayer influenced Gmod scene
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cegr25
, avril 19 2013 05:06
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Posté 19 avril 2013 - 05:06
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Took me about five hours to pose and tweak in GIMP. Fully up to getting ideas as to how I could improve in the future. Unfortunately I can't access my saves with the scene, cause Gmod 13's stupid like that.
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Posté 19 avril 2013 - 04:36
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I'm having a hard time understanding what I'm looking at on account of the over use of brown.
(That a texture/filter that is all over the image? It's obstructing dark areas and almost blending the colors of the reaper flesh into the humans. It's hard to see the corpse detail. The ground could use some blood---but I'm always mentioning that everything always needs more blood though.)
The guy with the sword... I know what pose you are aiming for, but such a pose is normally used with much longer weapons (Staff, Pipe, etc.) he looks a little rigid. (sort of stands out because of it)
I like the guy with the banshee, but I can't find a hand what suggests he is holding her up. (he is meant to look like he is holding her like his babe right?)
The crouching girl, and this is what I meant with the filter, is hard to see, her head clashes with the rest of her because it's not effected by the filters color like black is.
It's hard to make out that the main gun bro is even stepping on that corpse also because of the filter.
One other thing is it's strange how they all have dark hair.
I like the concept of the image, I just wish I could see the image better. c:
(That a texture/filter that is all over the image? It's obstructing dark areas and almost blending the colors of the reaper flesh into the humans. It's hard to see the corpse detail. The ground could use some blood---but I'm always mentioning that everything always needs more blood though.)
The guy with the sword... I know what pose you are aiming for, but such a pose is normally used with much longer weapons (Staff, Pipe, etc.) he looks a little rigid. (sort of stands out because of it)
I like the guy with the banshee, but I can't find a hand what suggests he is holding her up. (he is meant to look like he is holding her like his babe right?)
The crouching girl, and this is what I meant with the filter, is hard to see, her head clashes with the rest of her because it's not effected by the filters color like black is.
It's hard to make out that the main gun bro is even stepping on that corpse also because of the filter.
One other thing is it's strange how they all have dark hair.
I like the concept of the image, I just wish I could see the image better. c:
Modifié par Data7, 19 avril 2013 - 04:38 .
