Crucible...not really a deus ex machina
#1
Posté 25 avril 2013 - 11:01
While the writers may not have planned this far ahead...
...Anderson theories that the information stored in the beacon on Eden Prime could be blue prints for some ancient weapon of mass destruction.
Of course...that wasn't the information in that beacon...but the crucible itself was indeed blueprints of some ancient weapon of mass destruction found in the prothean archives on Mars.
I just find it odd that I have never seen anyone mention that when they complain about the crucible being a deus ex machina.
#2
Posté 25 avril 2013 - 11:07
For example in MEHEM, it gets rid of that Deus Ex Machina feel, and the crucible just blows up Reapers, which is exactly what we've assumed since the start of ME3.
(Note: I do not endorse MEHEM in any way, shape, or form, it's just an example)
#3
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Posté 25 avril 2013 - 11:08
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Modifié par Finn the Jakey, 25 avril 2013 - 11:11 .
#4
Posté 25 avril 2013 - 11:10
It probably hasn't been brought up because it doesn't add anything, it was an off-hand remark meant to give a potential motivation for Saren.
Though I wouldn't be surprised if people started using this as 'proof' that the series was meticulously planned from the beginning.
#5
Posté 25 avril 2013 - 11:11
#6
Posté 25 avril 2013 - 11:13
My point is simply that the idea of the protheans having blueprints for some ancient weapon of mass destruction has been there since the beginning.
Modifié par CDR David Shepard, 25 avril 2013 - 11:16 .
#7
Posté 25 avril 2013 - 11:14
The Night Mammoth wrote...
Though I wouldn't be surprised if people started using this as 'proof' that the series was meticulously planned from the beginning.
I dunno, I could see them having the rough idea of "a super weapon to defeat the Reapers that requires the Citadel" from the beginning.
#8
Posté 26 avril 2013 - 12:10
Anyway, even if it's not a DEM, that sure as hell doesn't mean it's good. Even if it was introduced at the very beginning of ME 1, a generic 'kill the Reapers' weapon would be very mediocre.
Modifié par David7204, 26 avril 2013 - 12:12 .
#9
Posté 26 avril 2013 - 12:35
In ME3 itself, it's introduced sufficiently early enough to not qualify as a Deus ex Machina.
However, if you're looking at the trilogy as one entire story, then you can make a pretty decent argument that it is one, as it pops up with zero foreshadowing at the start of the third act when the major conflict has begun and the protagonists have no way out.
#10
Posté 26 avril 2013 - 04:29
At least it wasn't as transparently done as Stephen King did in 'The Stand'.
#11
Posté 26 avril 2013 - 07:39
We get to the third game, it turns out there's something that was not previously studied in the Prothean archive found on Mars, that something is a device that can defeat the Reapers, then it's built and used after all galactic civilization stands on the brink of destruction.
In ME3 it's more like Chekov's Gun, though, since it's hanging on the wall through the whole game and only fired at the end.
#12
Posté 26 avril 2013 - 07:42
grey_wind wrote...
Its nature as a DEM depends on whether you're judging it by ME3 alone or the entire trilogy.
In ME3 itself, it's introduced sufficiently early enough to not qualify as a Deus ex Machina.
However, if you're looking at the trilogy as one entire story, then you can make a pretty decent argument that it is one, as it pops up with zero foreshadowing at the start of the third act when the major conflict has begun and the protagonists have no way out.
This.
#13
Posté 26 avril 2013 - 07:51
The Catalyst in the form of the Starchild proposing three instead of one option is pure DEM. As someone else mentioned you already accomplished everything in the scene with TIM and Anderson. Turning pushing a button into a long dialogue with a formerly unknown force is kind of how Greek drama usually worked out.
#14
Posté 26 avril 2013 - 08:05
#15
Posté 26 avril 2013 - 08:09
How does the introduction of the Catalyst solve anything? It doesn't. The Crucible could have just fired and killed all the Reapers. The Catalyst introduces new problems, not solutions.
Modifié par David7204, 26 avril 2013 - 08:10 .
#16
Posté 26 avril 2013 - 08:12
David7204 wrote...
The Catalyst is absolutely not a DEM.
How does the introduction of the Catalyst solve anything? It doesn't. The Crucible could have just fired and killed all the Reapers. The Catalyst introduces new problems, not solutions.
The Catalyst solves the problem of there being a Shepard and a continuing Mass Effect universe.
#17
Posté 26 avril 2013 - 08:22
But the elevator is. 'The Crucible's not firing. The only person who could reach it fails. How do we solve this?' And then a platform raises Shepard into the air.David7204 wrote...
The Catalyst is absolutely not a DEM.
How does the introduction of the Catalyst solve anything? It doesn't. The Crucible could have just fired and killed all the Reapers. The Catalyst introduces new problems, not solutions.
#18
Posté 26 avril 2013 - 08:27
Modifié par David7204, 26 avril 2013 - 08:28 .
#19
Posté 26 avril 2013 - 08:45
Bull. I expected Bilbo to not die at the Battle of Five Armies because Bilbo still had a character arc to resolve. But the eagles were still a DEM.David7204 wrote...
That would only be true if players expected the Crucible to not fire. If they expected it to be worthless. And they don't. Suppose you paused the conversation right after Hackett says the Crucible isn't firing. If you asked players if the Crucible is going to be activated somehow or not, they would almost certainly answer yes, despite there being nothing happening right at that moment. They know the story wouldn't focus so much on it so much to have it be worthless.
#20
Posté 26 avril 2013 - 08:54
#21
Posté 26 avril 2013 - 08:56
#22
Posté 26 avril 2013 - 08:58
#23
Posté 26 avril 2013 - 09:00
David7204 wrote...
The Catalyst is absolutely not a DEM.
How does the introduction of the Catalyst solve anything? It doesn't. The Crucible could have just fired and killed all the Reapers. The Catalyst introduces new problems, not solutions.
You get a literal deus lowered onto the stage without which the plot won't resolve and who subverts the end so it won't work without its divine consent. It's actually worse that the plot could have been resolved without this interruption.
I have to say, Shepard and Anderson dieing thinking they saved the world when they didn't would have been emotionally strong tragic end (even though a dick move) so this addendum is a pretty literal implementation of the deus ex machina.
Modifié par Mangalores, 26 avril 2013 - 09:02 .
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Posté 26 avril 2013 - 09:00
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Posté 26 avril 2013 - 09:08
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