(Are Spoilers Allowed in "Fan Creations"? anyway, this may contain a few spoilers)
Hi i need your advice everyone
im working on editing the whole trilogy into a series, i know it has been done before but i wanted to give it my own spin, also its a femshep version.
Im almost done, just a few more episode for 3, but i ran into a big debate with myself and i thought maybe you can help me.
Im not sure where to put the citadel dlc, at first i thought to incorporate it into the sroty, close to the end, like before Cerberus hq)
but now i think that maybe i sould use it like an epilogue to end things on a happier note, i was thinking to stat it with like a title card: "a few days before the final battle...." or something.
what do you think? where should it go?
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Omoikane22
, mai 15 2013 04:37
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Posté 15 mai 2013 - 06:45
MrStoob
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Unless it's an epilogue, it has no place in the trilogy imho. A fancy apartment, shore leave, parties, et al, right in the middle of the biggest war the galaxy will ever see? Unlikely. Citadel served its purpose as fan-service (which as a fan, I enjoyed) but little more.
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Posté 15 mai 2013 - 09:50
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The way I always play it, is that Hackett orders the Normandy to dock for repairs, while he formulates plans for the final assault on the Cerberus base. *spoiler* The events with the clone, and the party afterward, could be cut down to what you feel are the most important aspects for your character, and just act to tie up loose ends with Shepard and her crew.
In terms of the small scenes with your former crew, outside of your apartment, you can throw them in wherever you feel fits. Not all of it would probably be necessary (such as Zaeed playing the claw game) but you might want some of the scenes.
It all depends on which characters, you feel, are the most important to your Shepard's story - and which scenes you feel serve a purpose in the narrative, and which don't.
In terms of the small scenes with your former crew, outside of your apartment, you can throw them in wherever you feel fits. Not all of it would probably be necessary (such as Zaeed playing the claw game) but you might want some of the scenes.
It all depends on which characters, you feel, are the most important to your Shepard's story - and which scenes you feel serve a purpose in the narrative, and which don't.
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Posté 16 mai 2013 - 08:25
Omoikane22
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MrStoob wrote...
Unless it's an epilogue, it has no place in the trilogy imho. A fancy apartment, shore leave, parties, et al, right in the middle of the biggest war the galaxy will ever see? Unlikely. Citadel served its purpose as fan-service (which as a fan, I enjoyed) but little more.
That's basically what i thought
