This is all on the poll page but for the sake of not making this a post with nothing but a single link in it I'll repeat it here. I've been working on a project for the past 4 months which is essentially a system for writing interactive stories. I recently brought it to the point where I could convert stories into a set of web pages and now that I'm here I've encountered in interesting question. Is it better to write stories like this from a first person or third person perspective?
In order to answer this I've written two short stories. Or more accurately, I've written the same short story twice. Once from each perspective.
You can find the first person version here:
http://ithinktoomuch...irst/start.html
And the third person version here:
http://ithinktoomuch...hird/start.html
Please vote for the style that you prefer.
PS: I apologize in advance for the various typos and grammatical errors. The way that the story was written makes it difficult to proof read and spell check.
Modifié par FredLOMD, 23 mai 2013 - 03:40 .
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