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[Tasmen]

...first time.  What happens when a female warden and Alistair finally decide to do the deed?

Petals in the Wind

Note:  This is rated M for like totally mature and sexual situations == if such things offend your sensibilities (and you are UNDER the age of 18), don't read! . 

Modifié par Tasmen, 17 janvier 2010 - 09:42 .

[The Gay Warden]

Can I just ask what the women see in Alistair?

It's good writing, I'll admit... and I get that Alistair is funny, but it looks to me like he's becoming the new Edward Cullen. What's wrong with Zevran?

EDIT: Just read a bit more... is this your writing? If so... it seems a bit... how do I put this... perverted? It's romantic, sure, I'll give it that (and I hope that's what you were aiming at) but there are some aspects to the writing that made me feel as if I were reading a pornography. :/ But I will admit it's good writing and has potential. Keep at it.

Modifié par The Gay Warden, 17 janvier 2010 - 08:33 .

[Malaia]

Dude...you think that was Alistair fandom? oO *boggle* As in you think THAT is how women fantasize their first time? I realize you tout "gay" as your moniker, but my best friend and HIS husband would be like WTF DUDE women aren't that stupid.



=D

Trust me..this wasn't Alistair love.

[Tasmen]

The Gay Warden wrote...

Can I just ask what the women see in Alistair?

It's good writing, I'll admit... and I get that Alistair is funny, but it looks to me like he's becoming the new Edward Cullen. What's wrong with Zevran?

EDIT: Just read a bit more... is this your writing? If so... it seems a bit... how do I put this... perverted? It's romantic, sure, I'll give it that (and I hope that's what you were aiming at) but there are some aspects to the writing that made me feel as if I were reading a pornography. :/ But I will admit it's good writing and has potential. Keep at it.

Ok, yes it is my writing and yes it is supposed to be a little off....  I totally intended it to be a bit shall we say tongue in cheek.  First times are not always the most wonderous experiences.  Nothing is wrong with Zevran, but hey, he wouldn't be so awkward during a lady's first time, would he?  Trust me, I have a LOT of Zevran love in me.  I am far far kinder in my writing to Zev than I have EVER been to Alistair.

So yeah, on what Mal said, this wasn't meant to be total Alistair love.  And vampires don't sparkle.....

[The Gay Warden]

Hmm. Still, it was very good writing... given my youth, I probably wouldn't have been able to enjoy (or understand) the way an adult would, but good job.

Modifié par The Gay Warden, 17 janvier 2010 - 08:43 .

[Tasmen]

The Gay Warden wrote...

Hmm. Still, it was very good writing... given my youth, I probably wouldn't have been able to enjoy (or understand) the way an adult would, but good job.

Aw thanks..  Honestly, I just wrote the piece to have some fun.  You were right talking about the fandom out there.  (Though I think you edited some of your comments out.)  

[Malaia]

Dear Gay Warden, Please avoid my fic at all costs if you think TAS's felt like pornography. ANd that includes my m/m slash.

[The Gay Warden]

Perhaps I will, but maybe I'll take a gander anyways, hmm? And to Tas, yes, I did edit some out seeing as I thought Mala was you... same Profile Pictures and all, it can get a tad confusing.

[Tasmen]

The Gay Warden wrote...

Perhaps I will, but maybe I'll take a gander anyways, hmm? And to Tas, yes, I did edit some out seeing as I thought Mala was you... same Profile Pictures and all, it can get a tad confusing.

I completely blame the forums inability to let me use a real icon from a game character for the icon similarity   I would love to have something more unique than a craned neck Carth picture.

[The Gay Warden]

Speaking of Carth... the fangirls in KOTOR loved him, too. *sigh*

[Malaia]

Here I hope this helps and seriously Gaywarden - my fics are much more...in depth than hers...and if hers embarrassed you then mine will make you crawl under your bed screaming "mommy".



Tas's story is very close to what most romances are, in fact most of them use the "co.." word and "di.." word ... keepin it clean here for ya Tas =)



That's personally not a preference of mine, using those words, but it's very common in romances nowadays.



We women arent the fainthearted gals of yesteryear.



PS: Speaking as a ****hag, gay warden, if you are that young, you're in for a real shockaroo in the gay community.

[The Gay Warden]

I'm not gay, my name is simply as it is because I thought it was hysterical. I am straight.

PS - It's not that I'm too "immature" or "unprepared" for the reading, just that I don't have any personal expierence yet and probably won't until a few more years when, and if, I get married. I'm only a freshman in Highschool at the moment, but I've got a more mature mind than most kids my age. It's just simply hard to take something seriously, espcecially when it's a mature topic like sex (and a detailed one at that), when I myself have never done such a thing before.

Modifié par The Gay Warden, 17 janvier 2010 - 09:10 .

[EdjeSwift]

Well done Tasmen, quite funny.

[Malaia]

Good gawd freshman in high school *smacks hands away from keyboards* back away from my fic! Away! Bad bad young man!

[The Gay Warden]

Hmm. And yet you act more immature than I. What does that tell you?



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I've already gandered at your fanfic... I even left a comment a few days ago, leaving a compliment.

[Maria Caliban]

The Gay Warden wrote...

EDIT: Just read a bit more... is this your writing? If so... it seems a bit... how do I put this... perverted? It's romantic, sure, I'll give it that (and I hope that's what you were aiming at) but there are some aspects to the writing that made me feel as if I were reading a pornography. :/ But I will admit it's good writing and has potential. Keep at it.

It's a story about two people having sex for the first time. Yeah, it's like a porn because it's a sex story.

I have no idea how you could find it perverted though. It's about as vanilla and basic as you can get.

Modifié par Maria Caliban, 17 janvier 2010 - 09:21 .

[The Gay Warden]

I won't bother explaining.

[Malaia]

No offense, but while it's lovely you liked my fic, I am mortified a 14 year old read my stuff. Truly mortified. And if I could I would grab your ear and pull you away from the computer. oO

[The Gay Warden]

I'm fifteen.

[CID-78]

The Gay Warden wrote...

I'm fifteen.

then you should be banned from this forum it's has a age limit. so do the game.

[tevikolady]

The Gay Warden wrote...

I'm fifteen.

egads. . .

[AdorableAnarchist]

Back to the fic at hand, I just laughed myself hoarse! "Forget the Blight. Elishka was going to get lucky tonight." I loved the tongue and cheek voice -- it really worked for a young girl, head full of silly romance tripe, gearing up for the first time. More importantly, it made me remember back to the Stone Age and some personal experiences, which made me laugh even harder.



Brava! Well done!

[ReubenLiew]

The sure sign of maturity is the ability to put away such immature things.
Such as the fear of immaturity and the need to be very grown up.

[Sialater]

Meh, maturity is overrated anyway.



I enjoyed it, it was funny.

[Miliat]

Haha I giggled a lot. Well done.