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[FuriousFelicia]

People, don't write directly on the forum. Copy paste it from word or something and then just fix formating if necessary.

[favoritehookeronthecitadel]

FuriousFelicia wrote...

People, don't write directly on the forum. Copy paste it from word or something and then just fix formating if necessary.

That's what I normally do lol. And serious LOL @ "people". XD

[Kel Riever]

Working on my next part. Basically designed to keep forwarding things for Rea's story while waiting to see what develops with some people who will be posting. I don't want to screw stuff up....

[Redbelle]

<..............trembles in suspense>

What happens next?

<Grabs and shakes the monitor>

WHAT HAPPENS NEEEEXT!!!

[FuriousFelicia]

The suspence is killing me

[Kel Riever]

Oh no! Sorry XD

Well, I'm writing. Just had a bit of a time speed bump and I did want to give a whole host of people the chance to move their story along too.

I mean, you know, I TRY to write as fast as Redbelle, but I canna doit!

[Redbelle]

It's ok. Don't worry. Take a deeeeeep breath.......................

.............

..........

And relax.

On that note I'm happy to say that Wyld and Zia have managed to seperate themselves without the aid of a crowbar before Naomi caught them at it.

And Wyld's got her spring in her step back!

Which lasted about as long as that MP took to let slip that everyone now knows she's CAT6......

Which in the next scene with Radcliffe, will require some explanation.

Oh, and I'm thinking of making that MP a named side character. He's been dissed by Zia and now he's been barked at by Wyld for being a really lousy performer whose going to be digging Krogan Latrines...... Which should come in handy because I'm planning on bring some Krogan into the base. Not now but later as Bastion fills.

But before that. I need to set Wyld on a new path regarding what she's going to be doing for the war effort when she and Zia aren't grabbing each other under cover and trying to not let on to Naomi that they're an item while Zia teaches Naomi how to be a kick ass Biotic.

Modifié par Redbelle, 05 août 2013 - 09:39 .

[Kel Riever]

Don't worry, its all fun. I just would like to write more. Not having a breakdown here XD

As a fan of asari commandos, I would like to say to Shotgun J...nice on the last installment! You have to watch that decades long combat experience in action....

Modifié par Kel Riever, 05 août 2013 - 10:37 .

[FuriousFelicia]

I've mentioned the MP's name ks Percy.

[Redbelle]

FuriousFelicia wrote...

I've mentioned the MP's name ks Percy.

Whew. That's good to know.

I been writing and took to calling him Pike.

Time for a rewrite

[FuriousFelicia]

Come on Red we all know you have the whole thing written down. You just copy paste parts of it as it goes

[FuriousFelicia]

I still have a couple of them retrospective posts to add so..tame it easy everyone

Modifié par FuriousFelicia, 06 août 2013 - 01:30 .

[Redbelle]

Honestly, I'm only just getting around to the Radcliffe conversation.

Thinking about splitting the Wyld/Zia partnership so they can go solo for awhile before returning and hooking back up at Bastion.

Not sure about that yet. Waiting to see how the idea pans out in the wider narrative.

[Kel Riever]

I'm predicting for the next 6-9 days real time, the Underground events will continue. Don't know how that exactly dovetails with everyone's plans. For me, I'm going to be slowing story time down for Rea as I have been. That doesn't mean stuff won't be happening or will be dull. It just means that the story time passing for Rea will not be moving fast, even if events are.

The ground war fighting to the conduit doesn't take a lot of time, it seems. As I recall, it is merely a matter of days, if that. Of course, there's some time after Shep rides the big beam to the Citadel, but I figured even once Shep is up there, it is only a matter of a few hours more.

So maybe next time we write, we can pick an earlier point in the storyline before London. That way we have scads of time to totally harass each other with our characters Well, we still could do that now. But you know how it is when something is fun...you just want to do it again!

[Redbelle]

The funny thing about Shepard.....

A character I rolled called Hit-Geth bush wacked him and locked him in a cupboard under some stairs of a burned out department store.

He'll keep till we're good and ready. Cause dammit. Who want's the fact's to get in the way of a good rpg when there is stuff to write!

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

Well, as you just saw, our sarge has a colorful past.... you'll find out more as her delirium gets worse on the way back to the hospital, and it is colorful enough to make Jack blush, and how she became a commando is a story unto itself.

Kel and I talked about this wing of the story. The Asari are not really about Shayrana and Ereba, but turned out to be about the entire unit. I took liberties to use some additional non-standard biotic skills not available in game like Flare (Aria's skill). She can't be the only asari with it, assigned it to T.

[Redbelle]

youtube geek week?

Remake of Knightmare!

Sweet bajeez life cannot possibly get much better than if Radcliffe smited poor Percy and gave his head to Wyld as an engagment gift!

[Redbelle]

New post up.

And I honestly saw this working out differently.

I saw Wyld being helped through her depression by Radcliffe. Thanks in no small part to his reaching out to her as she confessed she fell in love, only for Radcliffe to talk about the time he fell in love and the unfortunate tatoo that was put in an unfortunate place, written in Turian with an extra letter with no spaces.

But......... then I saw what FF was doing and had to change it completely since Zia's presence meant I had to give those two a scene, and they made up there giving Wyld her groove back.

Which I have to admit, was fun to write around. Cause I'd have just taken it straight to Radcliffe. this way I get to resolve the Zia/Wyld tension and have Radcliffe act as a mission hander outer.

Though next post Wyld needs to convince Radcliffe to get Zia out the brig.

Shouldn't be a problem when she point's out that Naomi is a potentially ticking time bomb and Zia is her pressure release valve.

[Kel Riever]

Probably not also a problem since the Turian Zia punched was more intent on teaching a lesson, not crippling anyone's unit by removing one very useful combatant. I'm pretty sure that once he's sure Zia knows which way to point the guns, he'll be happy to have someone with thank kind of fury (badam cha!) on his side again.

Sorry, Rea's brain might be cooked pretty soon. You enjoy it over there in Camp Passion

[Redbelle]

Well, I'm trying to free Wyld up for larking about duties again. Little less passion. Little more war. followed by passion. Then more War! Then passion and running away from the pipe bomb flinging biotic!

[favoritehookeronthecitadel]

I'm officially going to re-write my post tomorrow after I come back from a friend's. Sorry for my lack of updates guys, I plan to be writing almost as much as Redbelle, and being a bigger part of the team in general. Hopefully we can keep this going just long enough. It's a bit tragic that the London Battle only takes about, what, a bit more than several hours? Too bad it has to end at some point, lol.

Anyway, really enjoying everyone's posts. This just keeps getting better and better, lol.

And Kham and Kel, I especially thank you two for doing such a good job on Arkeer despite my absence.

[FuriousFelicia]

So that gives us just about what, 3 posts each?

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

And the Asari squad and Jack fell.... T is just saying "Told you so." are we equipped for the underground?

Sarge is on the way back to the hospital.....

Sarge would have been nice to have down there..... but Jack will do just fine.

Modifié par sH0tgUn jUliA, 07 août 2013 - 05:06 .

[Kel Riever]

@FuriousFelicia. I think we have more than that. The time frame I thought was actually in days. But I could be wrong. Anyway, a lot can happen in a few hours or days.

I'm going to post up some stuff in the group tomorrow. Maybe we can coordinate the timeframe and some of these beasties and conflicts we are in.

[FuriousFelicia]

That's a relief Kel. I need two (maybe 3) quick posts before I retutn to the future. Looks like Zia is still in the brig and is about to be released by Wyld, thank you very much Red
And I think Pepper and Gizmo are back..