Given that the sea is contained within a larger underground manmade structure. You could find a river of more Dragon's teeth leading away through branching tunnels and section's where Brute's have knocked through. If their are more dragon's teeth than space in the open section they'd have to overflow somewhere.
Mass Effect Group Story: The Battle at London Discussion Thread
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Okay, we've got it covered.
Rothan is already there.. I've got to get the lead out of my ass
* I'll get my group there today, and Ereba will plant charges. They won't see her. She'll be cloaked. And she's not going to be looking for them. I'm imagining this place is huge. The group will be hiding. They will see Moaning Myrtle.patrolling so they will not contact Ereba. I'm imagining there are support columns in the cavern interspersed around the spikes and a main central support column.
Blowing the central one would collapse the whole thing but that's probably the strongest column of them all. So blowing all of the other columns would accomplish the same thing and leave the central column standing. It would still be useless. Jack will have the detonator just in case.
Blowing the processor would definitely weaken everything in the area. I'm thinking she's going to take the Cain in there and set it to overload -- it's the only way to be sure. On her way out she will see Rea and Rothan and she herself will begin to run and will tell them to "RUN!" This of course alerts Myrtle, and is AQ's cue.
Rothan is already there.. I've got to get the lead out of my ass
* I'll get my group there today, and Ereba will plant charges. They won't see her. She'll be cloaked. And she's not going to be looking for them. I'm imagining this place is huge. The group will be hiding. They will see Moaning Myrtle.patrolling so they will not contact Ereba. I'm imagining there are support columns in the cavern interspersed around the spikes and a main central support column.
Blowing the central one would collapse the whole thing but that's probably the strongest column of them all. So blowing all of the other columns would accomplish the same thing and leave the central column standing. It would still be useless. Jack will have the detonator just in case.
Blowing the processor would definitely weaken everything in the area. I'm thinking she's going to take the Cain in there and set it to overload -- it's the only way to be sure. On her way out she will see Rea and Rothan and she herself will begin to run and will tell them to "RUN!" This of course alerts Myrtle, and is AQ's cue.
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Posté 10 août 2013 - 05:24
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#329
Posté 10 août 2013 - 07:52
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You said it was a Cadillac, right? Did you specify the color?
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Posté 11 août 2013 - 05:39
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Awesome, happy to hear. And 'Momma!' Simply the best. I would not want to mess with that...
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Posté 11 août 2013 - 07:30
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I had to quickly go back to our Sarge for the story flow. I've got another installment I'll try to get out today with Ereba.
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Posté 12 août 2013 - 04:12
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And that is as far as I can go for now. Well I can continue with the Sarge, but the main group? My group is set up and waiting. The timer is ticking. Michelle Bay is waiting for her cue.
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Posté 12 août 2013 - 05:01
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So, all of that leaves the question of want the misfits should do.
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Posté 12 août 2013 - 05:27
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Ereba was seeing some movement, but couldn't make it out. That movement was Rea. Ereba's power cell was too low and she couldn't take the chance to look. Had to focus on the mission.
* The Cain has been set to overload.
* Ereba is escaping from the processor and is about to hit a dead run as fast as she can through that stuff. She's in a "freeze frame" right now.
* Rothan needs to arrive on the scene to rescue Rea.
* Shayrana will see them through the scope and tell Ereba who will decloak and tell them "RUN!! This way!!"
* Myrtle is right up at the processor and starts teleporting to the middle.
* AQ will run an throw grenades and distract Myrtle who will do her thing, and he will kill Myrtle.
* "Michelle Bay" then sets off the pyrotechnics inside the Processor when the Cain explodes next to the plasma conduit. -- it will be spectacular. That Reaper controlling it is gonna feel this.
* Rocks will start to fall from the ceiling then as Ereba, Rea, and Rothan are almost out of the Cavern. Jack hits the detonator. and the roof of the cavern collapses.
This would look great on screen.
The rest of the misfits? I'm sure you'll hear the noise. You can come check it out. I'm sure there's some new holes that got made. Maybe you could even get topside if you want. Or stay in the sewers.
* The Cain has been set to overload.
* Ereba is escaping from the processor and is about to hit a dead run as fast as she can through that stuff. She's in a "freeze frame" right now.
* Rothan needs to arrive on the scene to rescue Rea.
* Shayrana will see them through the scope and tell Ereba who will decloak and tell them "RUN!! This way!!"
* Myrtle is right up at the processor and starts teleporting to the middle.
* AQ will run an throw grenades and distract Myrtle who will do her thing, and he will kill Myrtle.
* "Michelle Bay" then sets off the pyrotechnics inside the Processor when the Cain explodes next to the plasma conduit. -- it will be spectacular. That Reaper controlling it is gonna feel this.
* Rocks will start to fall from the ceiling then as Ereba, Rea, and Rothan are almost out of the Cavern. Jack hits the detonator. and the roof of the cavern collapses.
This would look great on screen.
The rest of the misfits? I'm sure you'll hear the noise. You can come check it out. I'm sure there's some new holes that got made. Maybe you could even get topside if you want. Or stay in the sewers.
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Posté 12 août 2013 - 03:38
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I'm in tears laughing at the latest Baldurjack installment. Tears!
At SJ nice job, too. Those asari kick serious blue butts.
At SJ nice job, too. Those asari kick serious blue butts.
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Posté 12 août 2013 - 05:19
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Glad you enjoyed it. The fate of Baldurjack was something I wanted to do alot earlier. But with all the serious stuff to get out the way, like Zia and Wyld's relationship issues, he got buried under that and giving Wyld new direction.
Anyway. At last, I got to write more Baldurajck. But that's also the problem. What comes next for our dashing Brigidier is his deconstruction. And the first time I wrote that scene it read in the same vein as someone who discovered Santa isn't real.
Baldurjack is currently in a bit of a bind. He's lost Dougal. He's lost the group. He's injured and alone. So things are going to have to get a little heavy for him. Just not exceptionally heavy.
He's also got to meet someone he looks up to who unwittingly put him on his path. As well as reveal his real name.
So Baldurjack's got alot to go through. And keeping the pacing is proving tricky.
Anyway. At last, I got to write more Baldurajck. But that's also the problem. What comes next for our dashing Brigidier is his deconstruction. And the first time I wrote that scene it read in the same vein as someone who discovered Santa isn't real.
Baldurjack is currently in a bit of a bind. He's lost Dougal. He's lost the group. He's injured and alone. So things are going to have to get a little heavy for him. Just not exceptionally heavy.
He's also got to meet someone he looks up to who unwittingly put him on his path. As well as reveal his real name.
So Baldurjack's got alot to go through. And keeping the pacing is proving tricky.
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Posté 13 août 2013 - 01:26
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Well, I figured I could pick up some more about our Sarge. 
Loved the last piece about Baldurjack.
Loved the last piece about Baldurjack.
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#339
Posté 13 août 2013 - 08:31
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sH0tgUn jUliA wrote...
Well, I figured I could pick up some more about our Sarge.
Loved the last piece about Baldurjack.
Thanks, and if you need someone to get that cast off. Wyld's got an axe.
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Posté 13 août 2013 - 08:04
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New post up.
And it's time to break down Baldurjack.
This is the third stab I've had at writing this encounter. It went from.....
Baldurjack being a spineless whiner.
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Baldurjack being boring.
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How to become a Baldurjack without referencing Baldur's Gate or Samurai Jack. (No really).
As for who I used to base him on........
And it's time to break down Baldurjack.
This is the third stab I've had at writing this encounter. It went from.....
Baldurjack being a spineless whiner.
to
Baldurjack being boring.
to
How to become a Baldurjack without referencing Baldur's Gate or Samurai Jack. (No really).
As for who I used to base him on........
#341
Posté 14 août 2013 - 03:31
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And so it begins....
A Reaper is getting very curious and very distracted.
A Reaper is getting very curious and very distracted.
#342
Posté 14 août 2013 - 04:36
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I'm working to get something up in a couple of hours.
#343
Posté 14 août 2013 - 05:26
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I'm liking all the activity of late.
The tension.....
The revealing of the past.......
The promise of Michael Bay!......(I may have misunderstood MB's involvement in all this but I stand by every misunderstanding I've made).
Honestly, I'm glad thing's have found some momentum because this Baldurjack direction is proving hard to write. I think I'll do one more post to position him for the final push, (whenever that may be..... just not to soon I hope).
Because I really want to get back to Wyld.
The tension.....
The revealing of the past.......
The promise of Michael Bay!......(I may have misunderstood MB's involvement in all this but I stand by every misunderstanding I've made).
Honestly, I'm glad thing's have found some momentum because this Baldurjack direction is proving hard to write. I think I'll do one more post to position him for the final push, (whenever that may be..... just not to soon I hope).
Because I really want to get back to Wyld.
#344
Posté 14 août 2013 - 06:01
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Well, I posted. Had to have Rea at least semi-lucid about the world around. It is all working out great as far as I can tell. I don't know what Khambilo and Shotgun J have planned (well maybe a little on SJ's part) but somethin needs to go all up in fire!
Hey, if the Baldurjack thing is tough, dontcha worry. Go back to Wyld for a bit!
Hey, if the Baldurjack thing is tough, dontcha worry. Go back to Wyld for a bit!
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Posté 14 août 2013 - 06:39
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I've just been watching youtube clips of Atlantic Rim where they detonate the nuke.
I could not stop laughing throughout.
Sorry. Had to share.
I could not stop laughing throughout.
Sorry. Had to share.
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Posté 14 août 2013 - 08:07
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I'm in an appropriately silly mood that when I read this line in the rpg thread, I wondered why Zia didn't warp Radcliffe right there in his office. Right after I stopped laughing at the mental image of Zia forming a mental image of what Wyld and Radcliffe had been getting up to
"I thrust her enough not to go throughout the whole thing again with you".
Was there a scene with Wyld and Radcliffe none of us saw? Because I had an idea that sort of went in that direction but got cancelled after Zia went to see Wyld in the Brig and got locked up with her in there.
And please..... don't change this. It's a great line! It can be Radcliffe's freudian slip that he doesn't notice and Zia is to polite to point out.
"I thrust her enough not to go throughout the whole thing again with you".
Was there a scene with Wyld and Radcliffe none of us saw? Because I had an idea that sort of went in that direction but got cancelled after Zia went to see Wyld in the Brig and got locked up with her in there.
And please..... don't change this. It's a great line! It can be Radcliffe's freudian slip that he doesn't notice and Zia is to polite to point out.
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#347
Posté 14 août 2013 - 08:53
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lol. I totally read over that one and missed it.
Oh, just waiting for the mighty group of writers to splode things. But not quite like the nuke in Atlantic Rim, which I just looked up for that one scene.
I'm telling you, there was some anti-gravity being used there...
Oh, just waiting for the mighty group of writers to splode things. But not quite like the nuke in Atlantic Rim, which I just looked up for that one scene.
I'm telling you, there was some anti-gravity being used there...
#348
Posté 14 août 2013 - 09:30
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Radcliffe's turning into a bit of a stud in the discussion thread
#349
Posté 14 août 2013 - 10:22
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Well, we found out Sergeant Soniri was Naleena in at least one of her aliases or was that her real name... I think it might have been her real name... yet her family name remains a mystery, but we found out how the sociopath became a Commando.
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Posté 15 août 2013 - 05:52
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Redbelle wrote...
I'm in an appropriately silly mood that when I read this line in the rpg thread, I wondered why Zia didn't warp Radcliffe right there in his office. Right after I stopped laughing at the mental image of Zia forming a mental image of what Wyld and Radcliffe had been getting up to
"I thrust her enough not to go throughout the whole thing again with you".
Was there a scene with Wyld and Radcliffe none of us saw? Because I had an idea that sort of went in that direction but got cancelled after Zia went to see Wyld in the Brig and got locked up with her in there.
And please..... don't change this. It's a great line! It can be Radcliffe's freudian slip that he doesn't notice and Zia is to polite to point out.
I was refering to the story how they met and what went on on their adventure
