Mass Effect Group Story: The Battle at London Discussion Thread
#476
Posté 21 août 2013 - 07:05
Waiting just for Shotgun J to look over a part I wrote involving one of her characters and then mine goes up.
#477
Posté 21 août 2013 - 07:23
The twist?
Harvey's a giant flying Reaper........
.......
....
And he can totally tell you that.... "The evil tax man has stolen grandma's diamond tiara which could pay her debt to the country but she keep's out of sentimental value and if we stop him before he get's to the bridge we can get it back and have some guy we never met before show up and say it's all been a horrible misunderstanding and they actually owe Grandma money so she can keep the house'..... all with a look.
#478
Posté 22 août 2013 - 11:51
Wyld meet's Steiner and Babylon who fills her in with a brewing situation they might use to their benefit.
Wyld learns who the two faction's are.
Steiner and Wyld do not get along.
And why did the Krogan cross the road?
Oh.... and Babylon is revealed to be underqualified..... but is a great shot with Rockets apparently in her bumblebee armour.
Modifié par Redbelle, 22 août 2013 - 11:52 .
#479
Posté 22 août 2013 - 04:23
Steiner...hah. I really imagined him initially as very different. This should be entertaining.
Wyld learns who the two faction's are.
Dun dun! So....I see what you did there.
Steiner and Wyld do not get along.
This should be very entertaining.
And why did the Krogan cross the road?
I thought the answer was, "To punch a thresher maw."
Oh.... and Babylon is revealed to be underqualified..... but is a great shot with Rockets apparently in her bumblebee armour
The women apparently have it all in this story. Really, and to top it off with fancy bumblebee armor. jealousy.......
Modifié par Kel Riever, 22 août 2013 - 04:24 .
#480
Posté 22 août 2013 - 05:53
Lot's of pocket's! The man love's pocket's.
Gah. Now I have to start asking myself.
<gollum voice> What's the nasty Steininses got in his pocketsies?
#481
Posté 22 août 2013 - 09:36
#482
Posté 22 août 2013 - 10:00
I've narrowed it down to A-bee..... which potentially references Lincoln.
Or Bab-bee..... Which mean's Rothan will have competition for group baby status now he's leveled up and added more point's to his man mode. Which doesn't matter because Wyld was going to give him a new nickname too.
Also glad to see Zee and Nay holding up the camp passion end. Also loved that it ended with a boom.
I'll be posting something more for Wyld tomorrow. And she'll be starting a trend of using Mako's to send voice letter's to others.
Mako's. Keeping the Royal Mail going in the face of Reaper invasion's!
Modifié par Redbelle, 22 août 2013 - 10:04 .
#483
Posté 22 août 2013 - 10:31
Kel Riever wrote...
Wyld meet's Steiner and Babylon who fills her in with a brewing situation they might use to their benefit.
Steiner...hah. I really imagined him initially as very different. This should be entertaining.
Wyld learns who the two faction's are.
Dun dun! So....I see what you did there.
Steiner and Wyld do not get along.
This should be very entertaining.
And why did the Krogan cross the road?
I thought the answer was, "To punch a thresher maw."
Oh.... and Babylon is revealed to be underqualified..... but is a great shot with Rockets apparently in her bumblebee armour
The women apparently have it all in this story. Really, and to top it off with fancy bumblebee armor. jealousy.......
I had a long hard think about who Steiner could be.
I didn't want him to be as Baldurjack. I also didn't want him to be a noble paragon of military awesomeness. I didn't want him to act the hero everyone said he was
That's when I wrote for him and discovered his voice of being a hyper critical mother hen. Someone who will bend another to his will so he can look after them better.
And Babylon's Bee armour just came about from needing her to stand out among the rest of the soldier's. I'll have to flesh out her abilities though. At the moment she's established as being a rocket firing election advisor....... she's got alot to get written about herself.
And Steiner's got some hard decision's to make if he want's to measure up as a resistance hero now Wyld's there to compete for Babylon's attention.
#484
Posté 23 août 2013 - 12:51
#485
Posté 23 août 2013 - 05:57
#486
Posté 23 août 2013 - 06:07
One day my bass drum went rolling down the stairs after the strap snapped and broke the glass in the front door.
@kel I'm not changing her name. Just giving her something else to call her. The same way Jerry-Ann shorten's it to Jan.
#487
Posté 23 août 2013 - 06:29
Sitting in a tree,
K.I.S.S.I.N.G.
Come to Camp Passion....um, Bastion:innocent:. We need all the help we can get!
Modifié par Redbelle, 23 août 2013 - 06:29 .
#488
Posté 23 août 2013 - 10:44
#489
Posté 23 août 2013 - 10:47
Redbelle wrote...
Rea and Rothan,
Sitting in a tree,
K.I.S.S.I.N.G.
Come to Camp Passion. Bastion:innocent:. We need all the help we can get!
Aaww..I was chearing for those two ever since they got separated in the uunderground
#490
Posté 23 août 2013 - 12:05
And the party split?
ARE THEY CRAZY!!! Everyone know's what happens when the party splits up!
#491
Posté 23 août 2013 - 12:09
Fro.... which should be from.
And stroy.....as in history. Story etc..... It's the keyboards fault. It has it in for me!
@FF Soon as those two get to Bastion I'll leave corrupting their fragile delicate little romance in the incapable hands of Percy. Spurred on by Zia. Mwahahaa! Is there no torment Percy is to be spared?
Modifié par Redbelle, 23 août 2013 - 12:09 .
#492
Posté 23 août 2013 - 02:04
#493
Posté 23 août 2013 - 02:06
#494
Posté 23 août 2013 - 02:29
@Shotgun J...it sounds like you have awesome stuff. I'm a little jelly
#495
Posté 23 août 2013 - 02:56
#496
Posté 23 août 2013 - 03:35
Kel Riever wrote...
@RedBelle and Furious F: I.....you know.....never you mind nuthin' Authors must be consulted.
@Shotgun J...it sounds like you have awesome stuff. I'm a little jelly
I'm just trying to keep in mind that Wyld still has Arkeer's pistol that ties her to Rothan's Asari friend.
And Wyld seriously needs to take Rea out for a girls night after all the stress she's been under. Sadly, Bastion has no fluffy pillows to fight with. Or a vid screen to watch slushy romance flicks. And Wyld's not big into makeup.
On the other hand, there might be a gun range and some Mako or Kodiak racing. Or failing that. A wall to climb. Rea could probably drive Wyld up a wall. She'd be surprised to see how fast I'd bet.
#497
Posté 23 août 2013 - 03:40
Kodiak racing....that's gotta end badly....
Driving up a wall?
#498
Posté 23 août 2013 - 03:59
#499
Posté 23 août 2013 - 04:00
#500
Posté 23 août 2013 - 04:10
Kel Riever wrote...
There's like, a whole platoon of asari to have a slumber party with. Camp Bastion will never be the same. Like you said, worse, they are heavily armed, and there is no ice cream in sight.
Kodiak racing....that's gotta end badly....
Driving up a wall?
Gecko legs......
that go with the.....
Jazz Hands!!!!!





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