I'm going to start on my next installment any time now, and later I will need some team brain work in deciding how to use the new revelation.
I'm quite sure you have an idea what is going to happen...if not, enjoy. Actually I'm a bit concerned that I might have pushed it a bit too far. (If you're guessing what's going on with Naomi)
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#527
Posté 27 août 2013 - 03:14
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Kel Riever wrote...
lol. I'm sorry the pub is so tempting. Of course, you could just, you know, get back to camp with your new entourage! I know, I know, it is going to take some time now....
My last post was an edit gone wrong. So sorry Red for not leaving your name up!
I've got a couple of those scattered through out the main thread. There mainly horrific formating error's where the forum tries to turn everything to columns.
Copying from a note pad document can help if your pasting into the reply box with the emoticon's underneath.
#528
Posté 27 août 2013 - 03:16
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FuriousFelicia wrote...
I'm going to start on my next installment any time now, and later I will need some team brain work in deciding how to use the new revelation.
I'm quite sure you have an idea what is going to happen...if not, enjoy. Actually I'm a bit concerned that I might have pushed it a bit too far. (If you're guessing what's going on with Naomi)
I know. I know.
Naomi says "Stop"!
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Then goes.
"HAMMER TIME"!
The husks then breakdown into street dancling while the sniper's boogie.
#529
Posté 27 août 2013 - 03:35
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Redbelle wrote...
FuriousFelicia wrote...
I'm going to start on my next installment any time now, and later I will need some team brain work in deciding how to use the new revelation.
I'm quite sure you have an idea what is going to happen...if not, enjoy. Actually I'm a bit concerned that I might have pushed it a bit too far. (If you're guessing what's going on with Naomi)
I know. I know.
Naomi says "Stop"!
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Then goes.
"HAMMER TIME"!
The husks then breakdown into street dancling while the sniper's boogie.
NO! And no Gangnam Style either!
Re: editing. Yeah? Can notebook help me fix accidentally hitting the quote button and posting?
#530
Posté 27 août 2013 - 06:58
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Well it can either go with unbeatable or a bit less unbelievable but the main issue stays the same, and it's quite remarkable. What would you prefer, should I tone it down a little or go all the way?
#531
Posté 27 août 2013 - 07:11
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Hmmmm.
I'd prefer Synth but if you want to go Dubstep, I'm down.
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Go with what your comfortable with and with something you can carry forward in the way you want.
I'd prefer Synth but if you want to go Dubstep, I'm down.
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Go with what your comfortable with and with something you can carry forward in the way you want.
#532
Posté 27 août 2013 - 07:15
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new character for mah story. shes gunna be used. thought you might want a heads up or summit.
Name: Delexia (shortened to Dex)
Race: Turian
Age: 19
Gender: female
Sexuality: heterosexual
Anything Special?: Biotic Cabal. Didn’t finish training due
to reaper invasion of everything
Family: parents sister and sister on Palaven
Likes: Exploring new cultures, meeting new people
Dislikes: Confrontation, arguing amongst allies
Personality: Delexia is a fairly naive Turian having never before left the safety of Palaven. Due to the reaper invasion and her inexperience in combat her first glimpse of the galaxy beyond her home world may
be her last.
History: Wanting to explore and see alien planets from a young age, Dex saw the Turian military as a chance to do just that. During basic training her biotic abilities manifested and she was reallocated to the Turian Cabals.
While receiving specialised training, the reapers hit Palaven and the Cabals were sent to help evacuate civilians in and around the capital Cipritine. Each team then boarded a shuttle to oversee the safety of the non-combatants. Dex was thrown into a Cabal made up of tight knit veteran Turians who saw Dex as a liability and as such never bonded with them properly.
RP Sample:
“Fall back” The order was bellowed.
Dexelia looked on in frozen horror as the reaper forces advanced. They had been sent to earth, covertly, ahead of hammer to gather intel on enemy strengths and positions to help deploy hammer in relatively quiet areas. Then they would meet up with the alliance for the assault on the beam. That was the plan. At least that was what she had been told. As the new girl to a veteran team she wasn’t considered a ‘proper’ squad member, therefore
wasn’t told everything. She hadn’t found her place in the team yet and it looked like she never would.
“Let’s go newbie we’re routed” the Captain said looking her in the eyes, which seemed to break the spell. Raising her Phaeston she squeezed off a few rounds at a brute that was bearing down on a squad member. Lenar, that was his name. Instead of hitting the brute the rounds clipped his biotic barrier, which flashed purple in response.
“Amateur!” he yelled angrily, over his shoulder and proceed to poison strike the brute, disappearing from sight and appearing behind the offending enemy. Who fell dead at his feet, the toxins had done their job. “The intangible is the unstoppable” he declared in victory. Then he took two ravage blasts to the face killing him instantly The captain hauled Dex to her feet
“Run” he shouted firing a poison gauntlet at a husk that got too close. “Go, now. That’s an order!” taking off as fast as she could, she ran in the opposite direction. Husks and a brute in hot pursuit.
Name: Delexia (shortened to Dex)
Race: Turian
Age: 19
Gender: female
Sexuality: heterosexual
Anything Special?: Biotic Cabal. Didn’t finish training due
to reaper invasion of everything
Family: parents sister and sister on Palaven
Likes: Exploring new cultures, meeting new people
Dislikes: Confrontation, arguing amongst allies
Personality: Delexia is a fairly naive Turian having never before left the safety of Palaven. Due to the reaper invasion and her inexperience in combat her first glimpse of the galaxy beyond her home world may
be her last.
History: Wanting to explore and see alien planets from a young age, Dex saw the Turian military as a chance to do just that. During basic training her biotic abilities manifested and she was reallocated to the Turian Cabals.
While receiving specialised training, the reapers hit Palaven and the Cabals were sent to help evacuate civilians in and around the capital Cipritine. Each team then boarded a shuttle to oversee the safety of the non-combatants. Dex was thrown into a Cabal made up of tight knit veteran Turians who saw Dex as a liability and as such never bonded with them properly.
RP Sample:
“Fall back” The order was bellowed.
Dexelia looked on in frozen horror as the reaper forces advanced. They had been sent to earth, covertly, ahead of hammer to gather intel on enemy strengths and positions to help deploy hammer in relatively quiet areas. Then they would meet up with the alliance for the assault on the beam. That was the plan. At least that was what she had been told. As the new girl to a veteran team she wasn’t considered a ‘proper’ squad member, therefore
wasn’t told everything. She hadn’t found her place in the team yet and it looked like she never would.
“Let’s go newbie we’re routed” the Captain said looking her in the eyes, which seemed to break the spell. Raising her Phaeston she squeezed off a few rounds at a brute that was bearing down on a squad member. Lenar, that was his name. Instead of hitting the brute the rounds clipped his biotic barrier, which flashed purple in response.
“Amateur!” he yelled angrily, over his shoulder and proceed to poison strike the brute, disappearing from sight and appearing behind the offending enemy. Who fell dead at his feet, the toxins had done their job. “The intangible is the unstoppable” he declared in victory. Then he took two ravage blasts to the face killing him instantly The captain hauled Dex to her feet
“Run” he shouted firing a poison gauntlet at a husk that got too close. “Go, now. That’s an order!” taking off as fast as she could, she ran in the opposite direction. Husks and a brute in hot pursuit.
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#533
Posté 27 août 2013 - 07:20
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took me forever to think of a good female turian name. in fact I'm now an old man with twelve grandchildren and an impressive stamp collection.
#534
Posté 27 août 2013 - 07:36
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I've been watching RollPlay hosted by JP McDaniel and I'd just like to get off my chest that all the stuff I had Wyld doing with Zia is, frankly, much more in keeping with a a healthy-ish relationship than JP idea of a healthy relationship. Who, it turns out, has the command power to make an male elf strip in front of a perverted 85 year old wizard with roaming finger's who then got out his magic staff. While the party watched.
All this in order to get the wizard to identify a crown and a necklace the elf modeled, in the natural, to see if there was magic in them.
@Rogo
Hazzah! We need more alien's ^^
All this in order to get the wizard to identify a crown and a necklace the elf modeled, in the natural, to see if there was magic in them.
@Rogo
Hazzah! We need more alien's ^^
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#537
Posté 27 août 2013 - 09:50
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Every RPG should let you know when gain extra stat's.
#538
Posté 27 août 2013 - 10:53
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New post up.
And Wylds having a helluva time trying to keep Babylon alive.
Her rifle seems intent on getting her killed.
And she takes one in the ribs. Which makes her Spider-Jan act a little tough to pull off as they are surrounded
And Wylds having a helluva time trying to keep Babylon alive.
Her rifle seems intent on getting her killed.
And she takes one in the ribs. Which makes her Spider-Jan act a little tough to pull off as they are surrounded
#539
Posté 28 août 2013 - 02:05
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@rogo: I like the new character. Yes, we need some new aliens!
#540
Posté 28 août 2013 - 03:56
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Okay it looks like Kham isn't going to give any input on Rothan, so I'm just going to move that story and conversation along and take responsibility for the consequences.
What other stuff am I supposed to do? Something with a ship? My brain is totally fried.
What other stuff am I supposed to do? Something with a ship? My brain is totally fried.
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#541
Posté 28 août 2013 - 06:11
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The ship was something else to do, if you had time, not necessary. I'll send you a message.
Go ahead and move it along. The rest of us can go along for the ride. Off to Camp Bastion or wherever.
Go ahead and move it along. The rest of us can go along for the ride. Off to Camp Bastion or wherever.
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Posté 28 août 2013 - 09:05
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Kel Riever wrote...
The ship was something else to do, if you had time, not necessary. I'll send you a message.
Go ahead and move it along. The rest of us can go along for the ride. Off to Camp Bastion or wherever.
Oh I remember now.... DA is going to take down a capital reaper with some help. Okay. Here's what I've got going on right now - remember, I'm retired:
* Writing the final song for my album -- this will be a down tempo kind of gothic metally ethereal electronica. zone out for 9 mins.
* Lengthening the next to final song for my album (a critic said due to others of the type of THIS song on the album -- there are two others -- being Euro-techno with long intros, that the intro on this one was too short, I need to lengthen the intro by about 3-5 minutes). This pushes the album length to about 75 minutes, 8 songs.
* Doing a "vanity" karaoke of Lacuna Coil's "Swamped" for a client -- there are none (fortunately I just happen to have accidently keyed nearly the exact drum pattern for my own song, and I use a very similar synth pad, and I have a guitar tuned in the low tuning, and I can sing the harmony vox) -- this isn't going to be cheap.
* The squad
* DA story
* Shepard's Trial for the rewrite group
I spent the day killing blackberry bushes (they're the wild kind, and are a noxious weed, and are relentless) that started coming over my fence. Then played 9 holes of golf this afternoon.
#543
Posté 28 août 2013 - 12:38
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Lacuna Coil is one of my favorite bands...
You sound like you have a busy schedule in a good way!
You sound like you have a busy schedule in a good way!
#544
Posté 28 août 2013 - 09:47
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Tears, SJ. Tears of laughter and sadness. My post! It is a shambles now! 
#545
Posté 28 août 2013 - 10:45
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Gotta roll with dem punches.
And did the group arrive at Bastion? I didn't catch the name of the camp they arrived at.
And did the group arrive at Bastion? I didn't catch the name of the camp they arrived at.
#546
Posté 28 août 2013 - 10:52
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Its fine. Its just a small jaw breaking punch 
Actually it is fine. These things happen. But there are tears, I tell you
Actually it is fine. These things happen. But there are tears, I tell you
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#547
Posté 28 août 2013 - 11:09
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If you wish to fuel those tear's I find sitting in a closet with a blanket over my head, whose sobs are occasionally muffled by the obstruction of shoveling icecream in my mouth........ works a treat 
#548
Posté 29 août 2013 - 11:05
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I actually figured you for a very cheerful person Red. No need for tears, we're not like the original ME writing team
No hollow endings in this saga
No hollow endings in this saga
#549
Posté 29 août 2013 - 11:41
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Very well! We shall have dancing girls and music amid laser light shows and neon drenched backgrounds.
#550
Posté 29 août 2013 - 12:59
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Very well! We shall have dancing girls and music amid laser light shows and neon drenched backgrounds.
If we go for control ending we could have Harbinger and his merry fellowship do the laser show:wizard:
