If you need her that's not a problem.
But she's got some house cleaning to do before she leaves the hospital grounds.
For one thing, she needs to organise the troops to prepare for relief to come while also hand over her findings to the senior medical corpsman about missing equipment.
Also, since Wyld is in on it with the Spectre thing, I think she might point out to, Marisa or Naleena, that just becasue her medical history has been altered, doesn't mean she's in the clear as Wyld can point to all the individual accident reports one gather's over a life time saying that Soniri experienced this injury, leaving this scar. Or was on this medication that leaves this trace in the body etc etc.....
Basically, Wyld can point to Naleena's own body as being able to tell a tale of the route she's travelled through life. Injuries that have healed and scars in certain places. The proficiency at which those injuries were healed, etc etc, as well as Wyld being able to tell how old the injuries are since she has experience in that field. And while the offical medical record was changed. Without more in depth manipulation of her records, she's still vunerable to discovery.
Or to put it another way.
she can run from the STG. But she can't run from their accounting.
Also, don't worry about Wyld getting shot and losing Momma. That was dealt with back with Babylon and Steiner when Wyld sent the wounded away in Momma's care after they drove off a harvester.
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#677
Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 08:41
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FuriousFelicia wrote...
I was meaning to make a sketch of the camp way back but it wasn't convenient then.
I could do it if you want..
I'm still not sold on drawing out the camp as having a loose, mental picture allows for more leeway for the writer to write without tripping upover details.
Basically, if the Motor pool and Medical tent are next door, but the character walks the length of the camp to reach one from the other, then either the camp is really small, or the character first walked from one end of the camp tothe other before they went to where they wanted to go.
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Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 10:03
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Redbelle wrote...
If you need her that's not a problem.
But she's got some house cleaning to do before she leaves the hospital grounds.
For one thing, she needs to organise the troops to prepare for relief to come while also hand over her findings to the senior medical corpsman about missing equipment.
Also, since Wyld is in on it with the Spectre thing, I think she might point out to, Marisa or Naleena, that just becasue her medical history has been altered, doesn't mean she's in the clear as Wyld can point to all the individual accident reports one gather's over a life time saying that Soniri experienced this injury, leaving this scar. Or was on this medication that leaves this trace in the body etc etc.....
Basically, Wyld can point to Naleena's own body as being able to tell a tale of the route she's travelled through life. Injuries that have healed and scars in certain places. The proficiency at which those injuries were healed, etc etc, as well as Wyld being able to tell how old the injuries are since she has experience in that field. And while the offical medical record was changed. Without more in depth manipulation of her records, she's still vunerable to discovery.
Or to put it another way.
she can run from the STG. But she can't run from their accounting.
Also, don't worry about Wyld getting shot and losing Momma. That was dealt with back with Babylon and Steiner when Wyld sent the wounded away in Momma's care after they drove off a harvester.
But once she becomes a Spectre she becomes above STG and gets in deep with the Council, and eventually gets yet another new identity and becomes the next Aria T'Loak.
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Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 10:51
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When does she become a spectre?
Because if she is one now, then she's above the law.
If not, and she's a candidate, then she's not above the law. Just well protected by having someone who knows the law who will speak for her. But not protected by the council.
Which means......
One Salarian! Alone!From the STG! Bucking the rules to track down a fugitive on the run! Wear's Sunglasses! Has a, YEEEEAAAAHHHHH! ringtone on his Omnitool that he calls himself on oaccasion.....!
I don't know how Spectre's are given their status, but until she is officially given that status, she's vunerable. Whether there is anyone who can, or knows about her now, and can make use of that time window is another matter.
If not, then she's in the clear.
Just an idea that you could run with if it takes your fancy. A game of cat and mouse. Though given Soniri's violent tendencies I'm guessing the cat would get shot and scrunched up into a little biotic ball of flesh.
Speaking of, Wylds going to have to have a little chat about curbing those tendencies since Bastion is a more tightly ran military facility where you can't just get away with killing people. And the Tee-Eff and Misfit's would probably provide more reason than most to spark a violent reaction.
Basically, Wyld needs the military working to police the new army they've gathered. And as long as Soniri wears a uniform, Wyld need to give her a heads up that she's got to toe a certain military line or find herself under more scrutiny than she'd want from a base commander who holds everyone, including himself, to certain standard.
The fisticuffs at the shower came and went because Radcliffe understands the troops need to let off steam. Serious injuries would be something he'd crack down on.
Because if she is one now, then she's above the law.
If not, and she's a candidate, then she's not above the law. Just well protected by having someone who knows the law who will speak for her. But not protected by the council.
Which means......
One Salarian! Alone!From the STG! Bucking the rules to track down a fugitive on the run! Wear's Sunglasses! Has a, YEEEEAAAAHHHHH! ringtone on his Omnitool that he calls himself on oaccasion.....!
I don't know how Spectre's are given their status, but until she is officially given that status, she's vunerable. Whether there is anyone who can, or knows about her now, and can make use of that time window is another matter.
If not, then she's in the clear.
Just an idea that you could run with if it takes your fancy. A game of cat and mouse. Though given Soniri's violent tendencies I'm guessing the cat would get shot and scrunched up into a little biotic ball of flesh.
Speaking of, Wylds going to have to have a little chat about curbing those tendencies since Bastion is a more tightly ran military facility where you can't just get away with killing people. And the Tee-Eff and Misfit's would probably provide more reason than most to spark a violent reaction.
Basically, Wyld needs the military working to police the new army they've gathered. And as long as Soniri wears a uniform, Wyld need to give her a heads up that she's got to toe a certain military line or find herself under more scrutiny than she'd want from a base commander who holds everyone, including himself, to certain standard.
The fisticuffs at the shower came and went because Radcliffe understands the troops need to let off steam. Serious injuries would be something he'd crack down on.
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#680
Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 12:32
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Done :-D
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Anyway, check it out. The layout is very simple. I didn't amagine tents but they could exist. We can agree to keep it or throw it away.
I just pictured it like an supper entrenched urban position. The aleys and passages have all been sealed, and main roads are blocked with gates and turrets.
The infirmary is well equipped, and there are loads of supplies.
The pub is also a kitchen and a source of war stues and home made chow.
If it's a no go, I'll delete it from the group. No problem:wizard:
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Anyway, check it out. The layout is very simple. I didn't amagine tents but they could exist. We can agree to keep it or throw it away.
I just pictured it like an supper entrenched urban position. The aleys and passages have all been sealed, and main roads are blocked with gates and turrets.
The infirmary is well equipped, and there are loads of supplies.
The pub is also a kitchen and a source of war stues and home made chow.
If it's a no go, I'll delete it from the group. No problem:wizard:
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Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 12:44
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Oh man I love the new instalments everyone. The krogans are just awesome. Good point Red calling them grumpy old chaps. They are great.
Naleena is awesome and it makes sense for her to keep the name. Two flies with one blow. Marissa gets what she wants, Naleena is 'dead' for everyone after her...hmmm if only it was that simple
Naleena is awesome and it makes sense for her to keep the name. Two flies with one blow. Marissa gets what she wants, Naleena is 'dead' for everyone after her...hmmm if only it was that simple
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Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 01:02
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@everyone
Check it out and if you don't like it or just want freedom, I'll delete it. No prob.
Having no solid picture of the camp is good for writing freedom but it can also benefit us since we're a group and we're all gonna be describing the same thing. So having a clear layout can be good.
So Kel can for instance describe that Rea walked from infirmary to the HQ for five minutes, and I'll say Zia just walked across the road to do the same thing. So having a map is kinda good.
Whatever democracy decides
Check it out and if you don't like it or just want freedom, I'll delete it. No prob.
Having no solid picture of the camp is good for writing freedom but it can also benefit us since we're a group and we're all gonna be describing the same thing. So having a clear layout can be good.
So Kel can for instance describe that Rea walked from infirmary to the HQ for five minutes, and I'll say Zia just walked across the road to do the same thing. So having a map is kinda good.
Whatever democracy decides
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Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 01:02
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WOW, lots of posts here. I want to jump in:
@FF and RedBelle: I am exactly between you two in your idea of the camp, and I think both your points can be included. The diagram in the group is good to me. Important points are we all have common reference points to where things are, yet the diagram is open enough (or editable enough) to add things. These are multi story buildings here, so more can be packed in. There should just be enough ground area for assembly for things coming to the camp like Primes and Tomkahs and very venerable warlords.
Thank you for the comments on the krogan. That's the second so apparently they are a hit. Meaning, if you want to use em, go right ahead. I'm doing my best to make them crusty. Oh, and Kham I believe laid claim to name the legendary warlord. As you can tell, he's sort of like Chuck Norris....at least the myth of him is....
@FF and ShotgunJ: You both can be correct, too. I find that on one hand while people can be specifically hunted down, it is sort of an "Eye of Sauron" thing and I would imagine people like the 'sarge' take advantage of that. Being in finance, for example, there's the Bernie Madoff scandal, there's a bunch of other busted people you never heard the name of, and then there's the guys who got away with it. Government can't catch everyone, so they focus on the important ones or the ones that set an example. They also focus on those who flaunt themselves because they give others the impression they can do illegal things. If sarge has been smart enough to lay low when things come up like the media laden robbery she performed, sure if someone was delving, they could unbury her past. But if not, and you know there is a Reaper war going on, she could get by I would think...and afterwards, it may be too late....these are just my thoughts and I am not trying to disagree with anyone.
@serotonenjunkie: I nicknamed the camp, Camp Passion for a reason. There's a lot of fighting, and tenderness and yelling, and cursing and tom foolery and drinking. Its like a party! Okay, maybe not like a party. But I'm beginning to wonder...
Anyway, awesome entries you people. I strive to keep pace with your interesting stories. MOAR PLZ!
@FF and RedBelle: I am exactly between you two in your idea of the camp, and I think both your points can be included. The diagram in the group is good to me. Important points are we all have common reference points to where things are, yet the diagram is open enough (or editable enough) to add things. These are multi story buildings here, so more can be packed in. There should just be enough ground area for assembly for things coming to the camp like Primes and Tomkahs and very venerable warlords.
Thank you for the comments on the krogan. That's the second so apparently they are a hit. Meaning, if you want to use em, go right ahead. I'm doing my best to make them crusty. Oh, and Kham I believe laid claim to name the legendary warlord. As you can tell, he's sort of like Chuck Norris....at least the myth of him is....
@FF and ShotgunJ: You both can be correct, too. I find that on one hand while people can be specifically hunted down, it is sort of an "Eye of Sauron" thing and I would imagine people like the 'sarge' take advantage of that. Being in finance, for example, there's the Bernie Madoff scandal, there's a bunch of other busted people you never heard the name of, and then there's the guys who got away with it. Government can't catch everyone, so they focus on the important ones or the ones that set an example. They also focus on those who flaunt themselves because they give others the impression they can do illegal things. If sarge has been smart enough to lay low when things come up like the media laden robbery she performed, sure if someone was delving, they could unbury her past. But if not, and you know there is a Reaper war going on, she could get by I would think...and afterwards, it may be too late....these are just my thoughts and I am not trying to disagree with anyone.
@serotonenjunkie: I nicknamed the camp, Camp Passion for a reason. There's a lot of fighting, and tenderness and yelling, and cursing and tom foolery and drinking. Its like a party! Okay, maybe not like a party. But I'm beginning to wonder...
Anyway, awesome entries you people. I strive to keep pace with your interesting stories. MOAR PLZ!
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Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 01:14
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@Kel
Exactly. The layout is just a reference on how the camp looks from birds view, and there's more than enough space for expansion. I'm talking about the things you'd like to add. But at least this way we all have a good idea of what's where.
The krogans are great, I'm impatiently waiting for Rea and Rothan to open up (or should I say Rea to open up) The Soniri duo is awesome, the sarge is one mean chick, and she and Zia have a lot in common. Only she's like 272 years older and more expirienced
@Julia
Did Naleena have any dealings with Aria considering her criminal past?
Exactly. The layout is just a reference on how the camp looks from birds view, and there's more than enough space for expansion. I'm talking about the things you'd like to add. But at least this way we all have a good idea of what's where.
The krogans are great, I'm impatiently waiting for Rea and Rothan to open up (or should I say Rea to open up) The Soniri duo is awesome, the sarge is one mean chick, and she and Zia have a lot in common. Only she's like 272 years older and more expirienced
@Julia
Did Naleena have any dealings with Aria considering her criminal past?
#685
Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 01:44
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@Kel
I tried, Wyld used Bastion as a spring board to go on another mission.... But alas. Her and Zia's Brig scene seems to have set the tone for this camp.
Maybe when the extra muscle comes in things will become more dramatic..... but right now, We're in our Citadel DLC phase.
That said, if you want to develop something that's less kiss kiss bang bang. And more Bang Bang Bang Bang...... (Down Zia, you know what I meant). Feel free.
Bastion's nearly ready for the influx of new troops that are not military anyway. It should change the atmosphere when the military are rubbing soldiers with armed civilian militia's who have all the guns and none of the training or discipline.
I tried, Wyld used Bastion as a spring board to go on another mission.... But alas. Her and Zia's Brig scene seems to have set the tone for this camp.
Maybe when the extra muscle comes in things will become more dramatic..... but right now, We're in our Citadel DLC phase.
That said, if you want to develop something that's less kiss kiss bang bang. And more Bang Bang Bang Bang...... (Down Zia, you know what I meant). Feel free.
Bastion's nearly ready for the influx of new troops that are not military anyway. It should change the atmosphere when the military are rubbing soldiers with armed civilian militia's who have all the guns and none of the training or discipline.
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Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 01:52
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Well the reason Bastio's not all boom boom, and more kiss kiss is becouse it's running silent as the good captain ordered, but I did mention that it's in a stage of alert now...
@Jan
Zia is currently dreaming of you ...I hope it makes you happy
@Jan
Zia is currently dreaming of you ...I hope it makes you happy
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Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 02:02
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To: Zia
From: Jan
Subject: You never return my calls.....
But the base is running silent so no hard feelings.
P.S. Did you ever get that message from Michael's? You'd better not be doing anything to strenuous. That's comes after I get back!
P.P.S. Have a tub of glue on standby. My armours cracked.
From: Jan
Subject: You never return my calls.....
But the base is running silent so no hard feelings.
P.S. Did you ever get that message from Michael's? You'd better not be doing anything to strenuous. That's comes after I get back!
P.P.S. Have a tub of glue on standby. My armours cracked.
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Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 02:12
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@Red
Well Radcliffe did say he had two makos inbound
I'm
P.S. Private Sully Petersen AKA "The armor man" is at your disposal. Hope he has a "just cuirass" edition for you
Oh and Zia's had it with hairy legs:whistle:
Well Radcliffe did say he had two makos inbound
I'm
P.S. Private Sully Petersen AKA "The armor man" is at your disposal. Hope he has a "just cuirass" edition for you
Oh and Zia's had it with hairy legs:whistle:
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#689
Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 02:15
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@Redbelle. I want you to know that though I may tease, I have no complaints.
Zero
At least you are sending letters. Let me show you what Rea's email looks like:
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To: Rothan
From: Rea
Subject: Feels
I 've been having some issues and they don't have anything to do with you. Wait, I mean, they do in that you're the one who got me out and, well, I'm having a hard time expressing...But wait, its not because you aren't listening,..wait...
*Are you sure you would like to delete this email?* *Yes*
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To: Rothan
From: Rea
Subject: Grrr
Wait, I mean grr because I'm still, not because like rawr. But maybe like rawr if you are like rawr. Um, wait, I want you to know I am a professional and I would never let something distract me from my work. This email is definitely not a distraction. It is a profesional courtesy to clear things up so we can do our jobs....you know, all stoically and removed like....
*Are you sure you want to delete this email?* *Yes*
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To: Rothan
From: Rea
Subject: Why can't you read my mind?
No seriously! No wait I know you did, and I was the one who closed things off. But, um, suit. Your suit was in the way of me of sharing my thoughts with you. Yes, that was it, and that's why I didn't, um, grr..I mean, grr not like r...
*Are you sure you want to delete this email?* *Yes*
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To: Rothan
From: Rea
Subject:
*Are you sure you want to delete this email?* *Yes*
...And so on....
Zero
At least you are sending letters. Let me show you what Rea's email looks like:
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To: Rothan
From: Rea
Subject: Feels
I 've been having some issues and they don't have anything to do with you. Wait, I mean, they do in that you're the one who got me out and, well, I'm having a hard time expressing...But wait, its not because you aren't listening,..wait...
*Are you sure you would like to delete this email?* *Yes*
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To: Rothan
From: Rea
Subject: Grrr
Wait, I mean grr because I'm still, not because like rawr. But maybe like rawr if you are like rawr. Um, wait, I want you to know I am a professional and I would never let something distract me from my work. This email is definitely not a distraction. It is a profesional courtesy to clear things up so we can do our jobs....you know, all stoically and removed like....
*Are you sure you want to delete this email?* *Yes*
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To: Rothan
From: Rea
Subject: Why can't you read my mind?
No seriously! No wait I know you did, and I was the one who closed things off. But, um, suit. Your suit was in the way of me of sharing my thoughts with you. Yes, that was it, and that's why I didn't, um, grr..I mean, grr not like r...
*Are you sure you want to delete this email?* *Yes*
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To: Rothan
From: Rea
Subject:
*Are you sure you want to delete this email?* *Yes*
...And so on....
#690
Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 02:23
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FuriousFelicia wrote...
@Red
Well Radcliffe did say he had two makos inbound
I'm
P.S. Private Sully Petersen AKA "The armor man" is at your disposal. Hope he has a "just cuirass" edition for you
Oh and Zia's had it with hairy legs:whistle:
Jans legs are all synthetic muscle fibre. Saves time and effort on shaving.
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Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 02:46
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You are also in safe hands with these..... um, legs. They won't snap a person in half unless she wants too. And she learned her lesson the first time it happened
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Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 02:50
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Hey but she still has her pelvis, right?
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Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 02:56
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Yep! Pic should still be up near the beginning.
The other chap she hospitalised, has the fractured remains of a pelvis......
......Good evening.
And Zia can postively attest, Jerry-Ann still has a working pelvis...... okay now this conversation's getting wierd.
Let's talk plumbing instead. :innocent:
The other chap she hospitalised, has the fractured remains of a pelvis......
......Good evening.
And Zia can postively attest, Jerry-Ann still has a working pelvis...... okay now this conversation's getting wierd.
Let's talk plumbing instead. :innocent:
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Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 02:58
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Ouch...a sudden buzz in Zia's ears folowed by total bliss as Wyld's body twiched in extasy..She kept her head on. Did I say Zia...
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Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 03:13
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Redbelle wrote...
Yep! Pic should still be up near the beginning.
The other chap she hospitalised, has the fractured remains of a pelvis......
......Good evening.
And Zia can postively attest, Jerry-Ann still has a working pelvis...... okay now this conversation's getting wierd.
Let's talk plumbing instead. :innocent:
I know, just wasnt sure
but switching to plumbing can feal even wierderB)
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Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 03:14
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Just throwing it out there. Shep can only be kept away from the destroyer for so long. Slowly the forces are gathering.....with you know, appropriate interludes. But still...
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Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 03:53
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Liara and Vega are pursuing Shepard now with a mob of NPC's and pitchforks.....
But of course, Vega may get called away again for some face time in the thread.
Leaving Liara to capture Shepard with a group of no name NPC's, which we all know are canon fodder.
And Liara has lost the element of surprise!
Thing's aren't looking good for our plucky hero's who want the thread to continue a little longer.
.......... We may....... need to call in Dougal for support.
Or Harvey, who is of course, injured but still mobile.
But of course, Vega may get called away again for some face time in the thread.
Leaving Liara to capture Shepard with a group of no name NPC's, which we all know are canon fodder.
And Liara has lost the element of surprise!
Thing's aren't looking good for our plucky hero's who want the thread to continue a little longer.
.......... We may....... need to call in Dougal for support.
Or Harvey, who is of course, injured but still mobile.
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Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 04:34
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Emily still isn't feeling at home yet. The last weeks/months she was being transferred from unit to unit, losing a lot of people, but the drive to end the invasion to save her girlfriend, whom she strongly misses,she wants to go on missions constantly, to get the feeling, that her actions matter and that the invasion will end sooner.
Now she is observing the new people surrounding her, keeping to herself, trying to figure out how they "work" on an emotional level. Bringing herself in will be the next step, but she doesn't want to rush in and take the group by storm.
Now she is observing the new people surrounding her, keeping to herself, trying to figure out how they "work" on an emotional level. Bringing herself in will be the next step, but she doesn't want to rush in and take the group by storm.
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Posté 07 septembre 2013 - 05:51
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That's fine. If you are having difficulty coming up with an entry point, feel free to post here and collaborate. Otherwise, go with whatever you feel best with and we'll eventually integrate. Despite restriction to some lore in Mass Effect, it is pretty open ended, and meant to leave room for being creative.
I'll send you a friend request and we'll get you in the group where we talk about things behind the scenes as well.
I'll send you a friend request and we'll get you in the group where we talk about things behind the scenes as well.
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