Aller au contenu

Photo

Mass Effect Group Story: The Battle at London Discussion Thread


  • Veuillez vous connecter pour répondre
1890 réponses à ce sujet

#1001
Redbelle

Redbelle
  • Members
  • 5 399 messages
Having fallen off the writing bandwagon abit I've thrown up some short's but sweet's. Finally getting the Tee-Eff and Misfit thing going.

And who like's Starship Troopers bootcamp?

#1002
sH0tgUn jUliA

sH0tgUn jUliA
  • Members
  • 16 818 messages
Me.

#1003
Kel Riever

Kel Riever
  • Members
  • 7 065 messages

Redbelle wrote...

Having fallen off the writing bandwagon abit I've thrown up some short's but sweet's. Finally getting the Tee-Eff and Misfit thing going.

And who like's Starship Troopers bootcamp?


Only if I'm the drill sergeant :D

Nah, seriously, get em into shape!  I don't think Rea is going to be too fond of whipping as a penalty, however.  Just sayin.

Everybody who has kept up writing, you are my collective heroes.  Onward!

Kham, I may be biased, but very cool :D.  (Shotgun J, RedBelle, Playoff52 and Favorite H look at me)   - What?!

#1004
Redbelle

Redbelle
  • Members
  • 5 399 messages
@Kel

Nothing..... nothing..... It's just.....

<fights to hold back the tears>

...... I thought we had something together!!!!

We shared a Kestrel!

#1005
Kel Riever

Kel Riever
  • Members
  • 7 065 messages
We had P....wait, that parts still coming.

I am so, so sorry....Hold on, you have Zia!

*Removes the dollar from RedBelle's begging can*

Rea says to Wyld, "Nah its cool gurl.  You know you are a fine, fine lass."

Modifié par Kel Riever, 02 octobre 2013 - 02:07 .


#1006
Redbelle

Redbelle
  • Members
  • 5 399 messages
Wyld think's it over...

"I'll take dat"!

Looks back down at that locator Zia gave her. "Ground control to Major Zee.... Come in".

Sit's back and consider's doing something about the possible locator in her Omni Axe fabricator program.

Modifié par Redbelle, 02 octobre 2013 - 05:59 .


#1007
Kel Riever

Kel Riever
  • Members
  • 7 065 messages
The schedule of posting looks like this, as RedBelle and I are about to wrap. I just posted the first bit of our last part (it was long, but worth it!), the second part will go up tonight or tomorrow. A sequestered Wyld and Rea in the initial part of the armory may go up next, latest by the next day (Friday) and with luck, there will be a move to a collaboration with Khambilo the day after that. Then I'll be locked in with Kham for a bit. But that will be how this rolls out from the perspective of posting. Its been a lot of work, but it has been super fun!

#1008
sH0tgUn jUliA

sH0tgUn jUliA
  • Members
  • 16 818 messages
And the Sarge gives the speech to the entire pub. (make sure you hit the link before you read the speech.) We're ready to do this thing.

And sorry I bailed on that intimate scene -- I've gotten two warnings for unrelated stuff in the past six weeks. I'm working on a project right now and I don't want to get banned, and trust me what I was seeing in my mind would have gotten the thread locked as well as me probably permabanned.

#1009
playoff52

playoff52
  • Members
  • 69 messages
Ill get a response in this morning when im off work.

#1010
Kel Riever

Kel Riever
  • Members
  • 7 065 messages
All right! We've got to get Jon in the mix!

#1011
Redbelle

Redbelle
  • Members
  • 5 399 messages
Liara was down and not moving. Vega was squatting down next to her, shaking her by her shoulder.

"C'mon Bluebell, don't do this to me"!

As he shook her, Tali appeared out of nowehere. "What's her problem"?

"She just collapsed! She won't wake up"!

"I know what she needs". Kneeling down next to her she upwrapped, what appeared to be cheese. Stinky Bishop if Vega's nose was any judge. "Rie and shine Liara". Tali said coyly as she wafted it under her nose.

Liara's nostrils flared and her head started movng side to side as she traced the passage of the food held under her nose, till suddenly her eye's shot open and she lunged forward. Grabbing the cheese in both hands and began stuffing it into mouth with both hands.

Vega looked on open mouthed as Tali patted him on the back. "I know you new". She said. "But trust me. Cheese is the best cure for what ails an Asari. They cured two of stress and fatigue at Bastion so it must be true"!

Modifié par Redbelle, 03 octobre 2013 - 09:46 .


#1012
Redbelle

Redbelle
  • Members
  • 5 399 messages
In tonight installment.......

Steiner's laid down the law the the Tee-Eff and the misfits. But did he really want to?

We met another young'un called Groon!

And..... not much else beyond.....

#1013
playoff52

playoff52
  • Members
  • 69 messages
x.x so i lied. I was too exhausted this morning after starting a revision on my book. Ill squeeze one in tomorrow, i have it off.

#1014
sH0tgUn jUliA

sH0tgUn jUliA
  • Members
  • 16 818 messages

Redbelle wrote...

Liara was down and not moving. Vega was squatting down next to her, shaking her by her shoulder.

"C'mon Bluebell, don't do this to me"!

As he shook her, Tali appeared out of nowehere. "What's her problem"?

"She just collapsed! She won't wake up"!

"I know what she needs". Kneeling down next to her she upwrapped, what appeared to be cheese. Stinky Bishop if Vega's nose was any judge. "Rie and shine Liara". Tali said coyly as she wafted it under her nose.

Liara's nostrils flared and her head started movng side to side as she traced the passage of the food held under her nose, till suddenly her eye's shot open and she lunged forward. Grabbing the cheese in both hands and began stuffing it into mouth with both hands.

Vega looked on open mouthed as Tali patted him on the back. "I know you new". She said. "But trust me. Cheese is the best cure for what ails an Asari. They cured two of stress and fatigue at Bastion so it must be true"!


I had to use it. I mean the Sarge was tired out from giving litle bits of confidence to the troops via biotics and the thing about fats and oils and cheese + some carbs was just the thing. We didn't have pizza, but poor Sid. I was looking for a way and you supplied the way. B)

#1015
Kel Riever

Kel Riever
  • Members
  • 7 065 messages
Hey, you figure all these soldiers are high calorie burners. And I can't imagine all those biotics not stacking on top of that burn. Its like the Michael Phelps diet :)

I'm waiting for Khambilo to look something over. Basically have one post ready to go and another 85% (I'm just making this up) ready to go. And then like a bunch more just waiting to hit the skillet!

#1016
Redbelle

Redbelle
  • Members
  • 5 399 messages

sH0tgUn jUliA wrote...

Redbelle wrote...

Liara was down and not moving. Vega was squatting down next to her, shaking her by her shoulder.

"C'mon Bluebell, don't do this to me"!

As he shook her, Tali appeared out of nowehere. "What's her problem"?

"She just collapsed! She won't wake up"!

"I know what she needs". Kneeling down next to her she upwrapped, what appeared to be cheese. Stinky Bishop if Vega's nose was any judge. "Rie and shine Liara". Tali said coyly as she wafted it under her nose.

Liara's nostrils flared and her head started movng side to side as she traced the passage of the food held under her nose, till suddenly her eye's shot open and she lunged forward. Grabbing the cheese in both hands and began stuffing it into mouth with both hands.

Vega looked on open mouthed as Tali patted him on the back. "I know you new". She said. "But trust me. Cheese is the best cure for what ails an Asari. They cured two of stress and fatigue at Bastion so it must be true"!


I had to use it. I mean the Sarge was tired out from giving litle bits of confidence to the troops via biotics and the thing about fats and oils and cheese + some carbs was just the thing. We didn't have pizza, but poor Sid. I was looking for a way and you supplied the way. B)


Babybell and cheese slices are now being carried by all field medics in case of a biotic burnout. :lol:

#1017
FuriousFelicia

FuriousFelicia
  • Members
  • 3 800 messages
Ok troops, the SoF thingy is going down..I'm writing it and it's gonna be long. I figured since we have a beam run to do, I should hurry up to get this out of the equation. Im struggling with the time (work related stuff) and I hope you can wait for this furious sanail :)

#1018
Redbelle

Redbelle
  • Members
  • 5 399 messages
With the Wyld and Rea field trip nearly over she's got a bit more freedom.....

Although the Arkeer and Rothan thing may pull her back, speaking of which.....

Did that really just happen? :blink:

Arkeer's either up or dreaming.... But I don't know what all the other writers have been planning!!! It's so suspensful!!!!!

Rothan just can't be dead. Think of Rea you plucky little Quarian! It's going to be a beutiful day tomorrow!

STAY AWAY..... FROM THE LIGHT!!!

Modifié par Redbelle, 04 octobre 2013 - 11:55 .


#1019
FuriousFelicia

FuriousFelicia
  • Members
  • 3 800 messages
Hmmm...now as I'm writing this biotic duel, it's impossible no one would hear flares blasting and walls cracking since it's happening in the camp.

#1020
Redbelle

Redbelle
  • Members
  • 5 399 messages
The Bob Marley appeal concert is in full swing.

Plus there's a lot of rifle chatter as Steiner puts the Misfit's and Tee-Eff through basic rifle training.

Plus whatever the Fleet maintenance team do to keep Mako's in fighting trim.

But while it's not exactly quiet. I'm guessing biotic boom's might catch someone's attention.

To which, the answer for the response would be to send a squad in and keep everyone else away.

The squad checks out what's going on, tries to report back. Get's hammered perhaps?

The battle rages on.

That said, if Zia wants a bit of privacy, just tell Momma to tell Radcliffe to keep everyone back as two rouge biotics are in the camp.

Modifié par Redbelle, 04 octobre 2013 - 01:16 .


#1021
Kel Riever

Kel Riever
  • Members
  • 7 065 messages
Hey! Glad you posted FH...!

Hmmn, the twist there...we have to figure that out. I presume you wanted Rothan wounded, so, here's what I think the rest of us have to do, basically....Rothan was located at the Armory...so, he did step away last to the communication area....which was supposed to be in the armory...however, there's no reason he couldn't have checked in to the infirmary to speak with Arkeer.

Then, of course, this big write up I've been working with RB on for the past week needs some steps added. 2 posts away from actually meeting with Rothan. That won't really happen with the event. In fiction world, that wound could be anything from severe to a close call that knocked Rothan momentarily unconscious.

Will PM Khambilo. This will take some working out to include everything.

#1022
Kel Riever

Kel Riever
  • Members
  • 7 065 messages
Oh yeah, I reread the last part of that...

SO, I put some suggestions to FH. Let's see what he says.

#1023
Kel Riever

Kel Riever
  • Members
  • 7 065 messages
There's going to be a minimum delay, I am sure, while this gets sorted. There's 2 sections I have ready to go but I am holding them for now.

#1024
playoff52

playoff52
  • Members
  • 69 messages
Need sleep terribly, I'll have a reply in later. Of that I'm certain @.@;;

#1025
FuriousFelicia

FuriousFelicia
  • Members
  • 3 800 messages
Ok post was up, now it's down. Stupid stupid forum formating. I'll get it all nice and ready to read in an hour or so when I get to my PC.

It's so frustrating....

I hope you like it even though it could use more biotics ;)

Modifié par FuriousFelicia, 04 octobre 2013 - 07:28 .