Mass Effect Group Story: The Battle at London Discussion Thread
#1001
Posté 01 octobre 2013 - 09:57
And who like's Starship Troopers bootcamp?
#1002
Posté 02 octobre 2013 - 01:46
#1003
Posté 02 octobre 2013 - 01:32
Redbelle wrote...
Having fallen off the writing bandwagon abit I've thrown up some short's but sweet's. Finally getting the Tee-Eff and Misfit thing going.
And who like's Starship Troopers bootcamp?
Only if I'm the drill sergeant
Nah, seriously, get em into shape! I don't think Rea is going to be too fond of whipping as a penalty, however. Just sayin.
Everybody who has kept up writing, you are my collective heroes. Onward!
Kham, I may be biased, but very cool
#1004
Posté 02 octobre 2013 - 01:38
Nothing..... nothing..... It's just.....
<fights to hold back the tears>
...... I thought we had something together!!!!
We shared a Kestrel!
#1005
Posté 02 octobre 2013 - 02:05
I am so, so sorry....Hold on, you have Zia!
*Removes the dollar from RedBelle's begging can*
Rea says to Wyld, "Nah its cool gurl. You know you are a fine, fine lass."
Modifié par Kel Riever, 02 octobre 2013 - 02:07 .
#1006
Posté 02 octobre 2013 - 04:39
"I'll take dat"!
Looks back down at that locator Zia gave her. "Ground control to Major Zee.... Come in".
Sit's back and consider's doing something about the possible locator in her Omni Axe fabricator program.
Modifié par Redbelle, 02 octobre 2013 - 05:59 .
#1007
Posté 02 octobre 2013 - 11:33
#1008
Posté 02 octobre 2013 - 11:34
And sorry I bailed on that intimate scene -- I've gotten two warnings for unrelated stuff in the past six weeks. I'm working on a project right now and I don't want to get banned, and trust me what I was seeing in my mind would have gotten the thread locked as well as me probably permabanned.
#1009
Posté 03 octobre 2013 - 06:35
#1010
Posté 03 octobre 2013 - 01:30
#1011
Posté 03 octobre 2013 - 09:12
"C'mon Bluebell, don't do this to me"!
As he shook her, Tali appeared out of nowehere. "What's her problem"?
"She just collapsed! She won't wake up"!
"I know what she needs". Kneeling down next to her she upwrapped, what appeared to be cheese. Stinky Bishop if Vega's nose was any judge. "Rie and shine Liara". Tali said coyly as she wafted it under her nose.
Liara's nostrils flared and her head started movng side to side as she traced the passage of the food held under her nose, till suddenly her eye's shot open and she lunged forward. Grabbing the cheese in both hands and began stuffing it into mouth with both hands.
Vega looked on open mouthed as Tali patted him on the back. "I know you new". She said. "But trust me. Cheese is the best cure for what ails an Asari. They cured two of stress and fatigue at Bastion so it must be true"!
Modifié par Redbelle, 03 octobre 2013 - 09:46 .
#1012
Posté 03 octobre 2013 - 09:14
Steiner's laid down the law the the Tee-Eff and the misfits. But did he really want to?
We met another young'un called Groon!
And..... not much else beyond.....
#1013
Posté 03 octobre 2013 - 10:44
#1014
Posté 04 octobre 2013 - 12:27
Redbelle wrote...
Liara was down and not moving. Vega was squatting down next to her, shaking her by her shoulder.
"C'mon Bluebell, don't do this to me"!
As he shook her, Tali appeared out of nowehere. "What's her problem"?
"She just collapsed! She won't wake up"!
"I know what she needs". Kneeling down next to her she upwrapped, what appeared to be cheese. Stinky Bishop if Vega's nose was any judge. "Rie and shine Liara". Tali said coyly as she wafted it under her nose.
Liara's nostrils flared and her head started movng side to side as she traced the passage of the food held under her nose, till suddenly her eye's shot open and she lunged forward. Grabbing the cheese in both hands and began stuffing it into mouth with both hands.
Vega looked on open mouthed as Tali patted him on the back. "I know you new". She said. "But trust me. Cheese is the best cure for what ails an Asari. They cured two of stress and fatigue at Bastion so it must be true"!
I had to use it. I mean the Sarge was tired out from giving litle bits of confidence to the troops via biotics and the thing about fats and oils and cheese + some carbs was just the thing. We didn't have pizza, but poor Sid. I was looking for a way and you supplied the way.
#1015
Posté 04 octobre 2013 - 05:25
I'm waiting for Khambilo to look something over. Basically have one post ready to go and another 85% (I'm just making this up) ready to go. And then like a bunch more just waiting to hit the skillet!
#1016
Posté 04 octobre 2013 - 06:23
sH0tgUn jUliA wrote...
Redbelle wrote...
Liara was down and not moving. Vega was squatting down next to her, shaking her by her shoulder.
"C'mon Bluebell, don't do this to me"!
As he shook her, Tali appeared out of nowehere. "What's her problem"?
"She just collapsed! She won't wake up"!
"I know what she needs". Kneeling down next to her she upwrapped, what appeared to be cheese. Stinky Bishop if Vega's nose was any judge. "Rie and shine Liara". Tali said coyly as she wafted it under her nose.
Liara's nostrils flared and her head started movng side to side as she traced the passage of the food held under her nose, till suddenly her eye's shot open and she lunged forward. Grabbing the cheese in both hands and began stuffing it into mouth with both hands.
Vega looked on open mouthed as Tali patted him on the back. "I know you new". She said. "But trust me. Cheese is the best cure for what ails an Asari. They cured two of stress and fatigue at Bastion so it must be true"!
I had to use it. I mean the Sarge was tired out from giving litle bits of confidence to the troops via biotics and the thing about fats and oils and cheese + some carbs was just the thing. We didn't have pizza, but poor Sid. I was looking for a way and you supplied the way.
Babybell and cheese slices are now being carried by all field medics in case of a biotic burnout.
#1017
Posté 04 octobre 2013 - 11:11
#1018
Posté 04 octobre 2013 - 11:53
Although the Arkeer and Rothan thing may pull her back, speaking of which.....
Did that really just happen?
Arkeer's either up or dreaming.... But I don't know what all the other writers have been planning!!! It's so suspensful!!!!!
Rothan just can't be dead. Think of Rea you plucky little Quarian! It's going to be a beutiful day tomorrow!
STAY AWAY..... FROM THE LIGHT!!!
Modifié par Redbelle, 04 octobre 2013 - 11:55 .
#1019
Posté 04 octobre 2013 - 01:00
#1020
Posté 04 octobre 2013 - 01:15
Plus there's a lot of rifle chatter as Steiner puts the Misfit's and Tee-Eff through basic rifle training.
Plus whatever the Fleet maintenance team do to keep Mako's in fighting trim.
But while it's not exactly quiet. I'm guessing biotic boom's might catch someone's attention.
To which, the answer for the response would be to send a squad in and keep everyone else away.
The squad checks out what's going on, tries to report back. Get's hammered perhaps?
The battle rages on.
That said, if Zia wants a bit of privacy, just tell Momma to tell Radcliffe to keep everyone back as two rouge biotics are in the camp.
Modifié par Redbelle, 04 octobre 2013 - 01:16 .
#1021
Posté 04 octobre 2013 - 01:35
Hmmn, the twist there...we have to figure that out. I presume you wanted Rothan wounded, so, here's what I think the rest of us have to do, basically....Rothan was located at the Armory...so, he did step away last to the communication area....which was supposed to be in the armory...however, there's no reason he couldn't have checked in to the infirmary to speak with Arkeer.
Then, of course, this big write up I've been working with RB on for the past week needs some steps added. 2 posts away from actually meeting with Rothan. That won't really happen with the event. In fiction world, that wound could be anything from severe to a close call that knocked Rothan momentarily unconscious.
Will PM Khambilo. This will take some working out to include everything.
#1022
Posté 04 octobre 2013 - 02:29
SO, I put some suggestions to FH. Let's see what he says.
#1023
Posté 04 octobre 2013 - 03:52
#1024
Posté 04 octobre 2013 - 04:30
#1025
Posté 04 octobre 2013 - 07:27
It's so frustrating....
I hope you like it even though it could use more biotics
Modifié par FuriousFelicia, 04 octobre 2013 - 07:28 .





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