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[sH0tgUn jUliA]

RB: Okay, I see where you guys are going. The key to processing stations are a Cain on overload and a s***load of semtex, detonators (you need them for the semtex because it won't detonate without a detonator) and run like hell before that Cain goes. Because if something is watching you guys down there, and that stuff is what I know it is, we can't help you.

But if you look real carefully when you come out of that crawl area, to your left there's a weapons locker where some terr0rists left a Cain and about 20 lbs of 5emtex. Zee just has to pick the lock on it. Best not to ask where they got the Cain.

[favoritehookeronthecitadel]

Hey, again sorry for the lack of a role in this part. I've just been so busy with work and school, lol. Thinking about adding a new character because I'm kind of in writer's block with the too-badass-for-a belly button Krogan.

[rogo95]

 Sup. I know I havent posted anything is about forever. I've had to become a full time carer for my mum.

soooo...... if any one wants to take control of Rob his Dog and Dex feel free.

i had plans for character development and plot and that but i dont have time to do it and bastions rollin out anyway.

notes on characters

Rob is willing to do morallly abigous things. for example, come accross indoctronated wemon and children? alliance wouldnt kill them. but rob would pull the trigger on them because he has to. they are the enemy. he also carries proxy recon and cain trips mines as well as ALL THE GRENADES. rob is a biotic but can only charge and do small novas when he punches people. sometimes they explode. but he doesnt use biotics unless its do or die. literally. dog has his own kinetic barrier and like blueberry flavouered rations.

Delexia is a noob when it comes to fighting. when her unit when dirtside they where killed,  she ran sole surviver and all that. she never felt like she belonged in the cabals close knitt ranks as she was a newbie but all that is in her character bio.....that i posted........somewhere.

i had a scence planned where Dex amd Rob a pretty f*cked. dex froze while fighting ravagers (rachni) and rob had to charge her to knock her into cover, then he got blasted. you know like taking a bullet. while cowering in cover with rob out of action. he gave her a speach that went like. "you are private delexia of the turian cabals. you are palavens elite. you are a menber of the turian hierarchy. f*uckin act like it." she then kills everything. and drags robs dyin *ss to bastion where he's saved by doctor ben. rob has respect for her and from then on they have each others back till the end. Dex then has a unit to belong to and Rob has a voice of reason and goodness and all that.

the reason he took the ravager to the face was because she has a familly to get back to somethig Rob never had, so in his eyes she is worth more than him hence the saving.

if anyone does want to continue One Man and His Dog and a Turian's story then good. any questions let me know but if you dont get an answer in time what you do is fine.

Rob and Dex dont romance each other.

yup thats all. still mangaging to read the story posts people put up and I'm enjoying them. It's nice to get a break.

so thanks guys and girls and others. keep it up!..... or I'll find you.

Modifié par rogo95, 30 octobre 2013 - 04:10 .

[Kel Riever]

@FavoriteH and rogo95: Good to hear from and no problems. FH, if you want to have Arkeer around as a character, I'm sure Kham and/or I have no problem fitting him in. @Rogo, good luck with the care and I will try to fit something in one of the stories about your characters.

[DesioPL]

Okay i thinking for change the character, since first idea is so much stupid... I workin on that. And health issues are gone.

[Redbelle]

@Kel

If you do anything with Gizmo, amke sure his latest friend, Groon the Krogan child is with him.

They bicker a lot. But they can't seem to get away from one another.

[Kel Riever]

@Desio awesome, pleased to hear you are feeling better!

@RB, I will. He wasn't around currently, and I wasn't planning on doing anything immediately with him. Its just that The Misfits, at least the human group, is definitely up to some self preservation and they plan on taking their pals with them!

[Redbelle]

At that moment Baldurjack tapped Hugh on the shoulder.

"Hugh, my boy.... You remind me of myself when I was your age.... Come with me! And I'll make you a man"! He smiled. "Even if it kills you"!

[Kel Riever]

I think Hugh would be very scared of Baldurjack...

[Redbelle]

It's the mustache right?

Don't worry. Hugh will be able to grow one to...... One day.

Heheheheh.

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

I see what RB is doing. Great idea. And very tongue in cheek. I'm going to add some atmosphere as well.

[Kel Riever]

Atmosphere... Okay, my next part is off to Kham for review!

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

You know, a little soundtrack for your reading background, and where we ripped off something.

[Kel Riever]

Sure! Are you saying I should put the soundtrack I am thinking of in or do you have recommendations?

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

Yeah, you know something that fits what you're writing at the moment. Like I think Ranassa said some cheesy line when she tossed that incendiary at the end of the underground battle? I should have stuck this one in. http://youtu.be/SHhrZgojY1Q?t=7m44s It was a CSI Mass Effect moment.

Modifié par sH0tgUn jUliA, 01 novembre 2013 - 11:08 .

[Kel Riever]

Well okay then. Going to backtrack and put some music in for key parts!

Also, how do I have the words I want show up when linking to a URL?

[Redbelle]

type sithout any spaces, [ url=(insert web link here) ]

Then space and write what you want. Then space again

Then end it with [ /url ]

Failing that, read this guy.

Modifié par Redbelle, 02 novembre 2013 - 12:09 .

[Kel Riever]

Okay! Got it to work. Thank you. The one piece of music I have right now is, of course, for the most important scene written for Rea so far...

Finally...

I put it about half way down into the piece - you'll see it - where it becomes pertinent.

Repeat as necessary throughout the scene...

Modifié par Kel Riever, 02 novembre 2013 - 01:38 .

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

So here it is....

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

And another Important Scene.

Zaeed's scene.  

And the birth of Sgt Soniri. 

Modifié par sH0tgUn jUliA, 02 novembre 2013 - 09:58 .

[Kel Riever]

Haha! Yes, I went back and read them with music...

the part I wrote with Kham had a big error so I just sent him a second draft and he'll get back to me on it.

Modifié par Kel Riever, 02 novembre 2013 - 09:39 .

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

Kel check the birth of the sarge.

[Kel Riever]

Nice. Yes, see that one is perfect.

[Kel Riever]

Okay, I think I am about to post a part that Kham and I did. I just thought he was going to give met the final word on it but he may have already. Have to go back and reread a PM

[Kel Riever]

All right! Nice post SJ. And your reference to the thresher maws helps.