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I figured something disgusting needed to be put in, as if it wasn't bad enough. lol. And I thought the first minute of that soundtrack was appropriate there. Poor Ereba....

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Okay, I will be writing something for tomorrow.

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Life working against me. I started a bit and took longer than expected. Plus needs to be reviewed. Will finish that and do another piece tomorrow.

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Help me out! I need morale inspiration. Are any of the authors still out there?

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How about a scene where the Reapers are nearby and you attempt to have characters have a discussion on what to do, charades style!!!!

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Simpson mimed holding a gun by extending her two forefingers while she tucked the rest into her palm and jerked her hand up towards the Reapers.

The marine next to her shook his head and pushed his hand away from his body, spreading his fingers. Next, he brought both hands together and then pushed them away from one another spreading his fingers.

The Reaper next to them waved and then drew his hand above his head as he tilted his head sideways and lolled it's toungue out of it's mouth.

Simpson and the marine looked at each other as both crouched on the floor.

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I'm working on one, and just got hit with stuff. Kel, see your PM.

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Dun dun dun

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Sorry, been burned out. Still, awesome to see other stuff up. I have yet to finish the next Rea thing and just sent the first part of it to review for Kham. Will do my best to get something else up tomorrow though.

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Understand about burnout.

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PM's are off to two of you to review. @SJ, I have no doubt, given what you do. By the way, I will look at your stuff this eve.

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The reapers have been..... nerfed.... enjoy.

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Yeah, the next part is done, yet needs to be edited and I won't get to even read it through to do so for a few hours. Also, SJ, read the first part of what you sent me but not the second so will get back to you once I have.

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I was just surfing around on youtube and found that track for that bomb scene with Erikka, Seanne and the Krogan. It was sheer luck. The music I used was called "Discovery and Flight". That was some great music IMO. Here is his Youtube video page. Check it out. The guy is not getting the attention he deserves. http://www.youtube.c...thampton/videos

Modifié par sH0tgUn jUliA, 09 novembre 2013 - 06:09 .


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Padre's down.....

Yet his influence remains...... I need to name the head. I can't keep calling it the head. It needs a name like Momma.

Come to think of it, how did Momma get named? I need to go back and re-read how that happened

*Edit I was thinking of having Padre alive and having Doctor Ben remain behind to operate on him...... but no! I must wind down the list's of characters.

Modifié par Redbelle, 10 novembre 2013 - 09:11 .


#1316
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Bob.

I hate killing off characters.

Modifié par sH0tgUn jUliA, 10 novembre 2013 - 10:35 .


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Gotta be strong..... The sword of damocles hangs heavy, but it's what's best for the story.... and Padre doesn't really have anything more to offer. Sure, he could gather everyone in the drawing room and reveal the culprit..... but with the move out, it can't happen.

It gives other character's more chances to shine too. Though I can't kill off to many, They need to be able to dialgoue amoung each other.

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Erikka was expendable. I wasn't doing much with her, and I had to kill someone. Urdnot Xalrath had "red shirt" stamped all over him. Seanne? Well she was almost a red shirt in ME3 anyway if you couldn't find her. So that had to happen. Ereba is already a casualty of war.

The core squad is down to: Sarge, Ereba, Shayrana, Ranassa, and T.

So how about naming the head "Bob". You know after the head in "The Dresden Files"

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Hmmmmm. Bob........

It's sparking an idea.......

I looked back at Momma's creation and her name came from what Gizmo requested.

The head's essentially a skeleton key..... which is kinda funny now I think about it. Since he's just a head.

#1320
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Dear writers.

Yes, I intend to write again. I just won't probably post until Tuesday.

In the meantime, HWARE IS FURYVELICIO!?

Modifié par Kel Riever, 11 novembre 2013 - 01:39 .


#1321
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Mac Attack.

#1322
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Apple want our souls!!!

#1323
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I'm fried. I will get something in tomorrow but really its all f***ed up right now so I could use some support if others want to get installments in...regarding the camp moving out. Again, tomorrow will get one installment from me, maybe also wednesday.

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Oooh, Oooh, I'll tackle the roll out!

Babylon's got stuff to do before she has to play catch up to Steiner. Steiner's already moved out sooooo.......

Anyhow. The reasons for the murder's of the two hanged ones are coming. Ditto the one who did the deed. And the reason for Padre's demise.......

It was Radcliffe. In the Warehouse..... With the candle stick!

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I posted. Was going to add soundtrack stuff if coding didn't make me hate so much.

I have no respect for coding and the people who do it. None whatsoever.