Yeah, and I was young in the 80s, too. Do you know Sigourney Weaver is 64? Holy crap! That wasn't supposed to happen. I mean it's like I just watched Aliens about a month ago and she was like 36 in that. WTF? That's just wrong. And I remember big hair in the 80s. Big hair. I have a lot of it. You talk about big hair I just had to back brush with a little hairspray and flip my head back. Now it's all gray. It sucks. And I got fat.
Mass Effect Group Story: The Battle at London Discussion Thread
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#1352
Posté 21 novembre 2013 - 09:46
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Aw! Wait hold on....
Okay, I do kind of miss the 80s. And yeah, I can look at them with a sense of humor like these guys:
My part went up but it was cut down just to get something there. More tomorrow.
Okay, I do kind of miss the 80s. And yeah, I can look at them with a sense of humor like these guys:
My part went up but it was cut down just to get something there. More tomorrow.
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Posté 22 novembre 2013 - 07:22
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Nice. Here's some incentive Kel....
now write something.
Redbelle, want to spend some money?
now write something.
Redbelle, want to spend some money?
#1354
Posté 22 novembre 2013 - 08:10
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I have been incentivized! The next part is up.
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Posté 23 novembre 2013 - 07:15
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Good because I was going to incentivize you with some
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Posté 24 novembre 2013 - 02:25
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Will be writing my next part tomorrow. Today might be some prep work...I just predict nothing will hit the screen until Monday. Music = awesome!
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Posté 25 novembre 2013 - 03:47
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Yes. Because Pat Benetar is amazing 
Okay, not that I am totally innocent...speaking of...but in the interest of keeping things moving, I'll do the rollout this week if RedBelle can't get to it and maybe we can write around it.
Today I'll be putting in a bit about the Reaper, and while I'm hoping to hear from Kham, there's a bit on Rea and Rothan that can be posted tomorrow. So, it is Thanksgiving week here in the states, but I think I will be able to get another 2 pieces in by week's end. That way we can mush this thing along.
Unless anyone disagrees. If so, please say. Thanks!
Otherwise, something is coming...
(user AndreasShepard did the art)
Okay, not that I am totally innocent...speaking of...but in the interest of keeping things moving, I'll do the rollout this week if RedBelle can't get to it and maybe we can write around it.
Today I'll be putting in a bit about the Reaper, and while I'm hoping to hear from Kham, there's a bit on Rea and Rothan that can be posted tomorrow. So, it is Thanksgiving week here in the states, but I think I will be able to get another 2 pieces in by week's end. That way we can mush this thing along.
Unless anyone disagrees. If so, please say. Thanks!
Otherwise, something is coming...
(user AndreasShepard did the art)
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Posté 25 novembre 2013 - 08:24
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Oki doki!
I've finally gotten the rolloout started......
What I've done is stagger the rollout so that if anyone else wants to write, or is in the middle of writing a rollout, then the scene can happen since the rollour is happening in stages so as to avoid all their forces getting hit while the wider perimter is secured and the scouts start beaming info to the commanders on where to go.
The Misqueen finally has her motivations laid bare..... it kinds of comes out the blue, but I had to rush several apects of her stroyline because I'm soooooo far behind in writing...... I'll probably never bring her up again.
All this means..... Now that's all out the way..........I get to write for Wyld and Zia again!
YAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!
I've finally gotten the rolloout started......
What I've done is stagger the rollout so that if anyone else wants to write, or is in the middle of writing a rollout, then the scene can happen since the rollour is happening in stages so as to avoid all their forces getting hit while the wider perimter is secured and the scouts start beaming info to the commanders on where to go.
The Misqueen finally has her motivations laid bare..... it kinds of comes out the blue, but I had to rush several apects of her stroyline because I'm soooooo far behind in writing...... I'll probably never bring her up again.
All this means..... Now that's all out the way..........I get to write for Wyld and Zia again!
YAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!
Modifié par Redbelle, 25 novembre 2013 - 08:25 .
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Posté 26 novembre 2013 - 04:43
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Kel Riever wrote...
Yes. Because Pat Benetar is amazing
Okay, not that I am totally innocent...speaking of...but in the interest of keeping things moving, I'll do the rollout this week if RedBelle can't get to it and maybe we can write around it.
Today I'll be putting in a bit about the Reaper, and while I'm hoping to hear from Kham, there's a bit on Rea and Rothan that can be posted tomorrow. So, it is Thanksgiving week here in the states, but I think I will be able to get another 2 pieces in by week's end. That way we can mush this thing along.
Unless anyone disagrees. If so, please say. Thanks!
Otherwise, something is coming...
(user AndreasShepard did the art)
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Posté 26 novembre 2013 - 01:58
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I've been googling all our character's names..........
.......It's a slow day.
*edit Turns out Rothan refer's to a bike...... Rea likes to ride Rothan....'s bike.
.......It's a slow day.
*edit Turns out Rothan refer's to a bike...... Rea likes to ride Rothan....'s bike.
Modifié par Redbelle, 26 novembre 2013 - 06:07 .
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Posté 26 novembre 2013 - 06:56
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*Voiceover*
Last time...... on ME TBAL.
Wyld and Zia had gone on a mission to recover the kidnapped Naomi from Zia's Sisters of Fury. In a dramatic confrontation Zia managed to kill one of her sisters, leaving her adrift as she looked on the hands that had taken the life of one those she known since childhood.
Wyld meanwhile took the time to recover from her near death experience before rejoining the fight. Comitted to her new role as a commander over her career of a medic.
Together with Momma, the AI embedded in the converted cadallic named the Bucky Valkyr, they followed a distress signal to an abandoned shopping mall where the signal eminated.
Sneaking in underground they managed to gain entry without giving away their presence. Or so they think.Who knows what danger's they face inside the citadel of shopping! Of the obstacles the final Red sand addicted Sister of Fury will pose!
Tune in next time! Same Wyld Time! Same Wyld Channel!
<Begin humming soundtrack to 60's Batman now for added effect>
Last time...... on ME TBAL.
Wyld and Zia had gone on a mission to recover the kidnapped Naomi from Zia's Sisters of Fury. In a dramatic confrontation Zia managed to kill one of her sisters, leaving her adrift as she looked on the hands that had taken the life of one those she known since childhood.
Wyld meanwhile took the time to recover from her near death experience before rejoining the fight. Comitted to her new role as a commander over her career of a medic.
Together with Momma, the AI embedded in the converted cadallic named the Bucky Valkyr, they followed a distress signal to an abandoned shopping mall where the signal eminated.
Sneaking in underground they managed to gain entry without giving away their presence. Or so they think.Who knows what danger's they face inside the citadel of shopping! Of the obstacles the final Red sand addicted Sister of Fury will pose!
Tune in next time! Same Wyld Time! Same Wyld Channel!
<Begin humming soundtrack to 60's Batman now for added effect>
Modifié par Redbelle, 26 novembre 2013 - 06:56 .
#1364
Posté 26 novembre 2013 - 08:59
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Posté 26 novembre 2013 - 09:16
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Scene's we never got to see. Scene...... <shrugs>
The Valkyr roared through the camp as Zia drove it to the front gate with Wyld gripping the seat. "Zee"! She yelled. "Your going to fast! You'll kill us both"!
As Zia turned a sharp corner a woman stepped out in front of the Valkyr's path. Seemingly from nowhere and Zia slammed on the brakes. The front end dipped as the rear wheels came up and the Valkyr's front wheels came to rest mere inches from the woman who stood, gawking.
Raising herself up from the driver's seat Zia looked over Wyld and, deciding that praying equaled okay in her book, leaned over the side to yell. "You! Yes you! The moron with the SMG! What's your name"?
The woman, who had nearly recovered her wits, stammered out. "S.... Simpson".
"Simpson eh"?
By now Simpson had gathered herself and walked around to face Zia, her face turning red with barely contained fury. "Those things on either side of the wheel......". She said angrily. "Are indicator stalks......". She paused for a moment. "USSSSSE THEEEEEEMMMMM"!!!!!!! And with that she turned on her heel and stalked away.
Zia sank back into the driver's seat and, looking over at Wyld, cocked her head towards the retreating figure. "Good luck marrying her off".
The Valkyr roared through the camp as Zia drove it to the front gate with Wyld gripping the seat. "Zee"! She yelled. "Your going to fast! You'll kill us both"!
As Zia turned a sharp corner a woman stepped out in front of the Valkyr's path. Seemingly from nowhere and Zia slammed on the brakes. The front end dipped as the rear wheels came up and the Valkyr's front wheels came to rest mere inches from the woman who stood, gawking.
Raising herself up from the driver's seat Zia looked over Wyld and, deciding that praying equaled okay in her book, leaned over the side to yell. "You! Yes you! The moron with the SMG! What's your name"?
The woman, who had nearly recovered her wits, stammered out. "S.... Simpson".
"Simpson eh"?
By now Simpson had gathered herself and walked around to face Zia, her face turning red with barely contained fury. "Those things on either side of the wheel......". She said angrily. "Are indicator stalks......". She paused for a moment. "USSSSSE THEEEEEEMMMMM"!!!!!!! And with that she turned on her heel and stalked away.
Zia sank back into the driver's seat and, looking over at Wyld, cocked her head towards the retreating figure. "Good luck marrying her off".
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Posté 26 novembre 2013 - 10:02
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Scenes we never got to see:
Elaine looked down at her gun, her uniform, and then at Zia in front of her.
Zia looked down at her gun, her uniform, and then Elaine in front of her.
Both got cross and yelled at the same time, "Oh great! And I just got this outfit yesterday!"
Elaine looked down at her gun, her uniform, and then at Zia in front of her.
Zia looked down at her gun, her uniform, and then Elaine in front of her.
Both got cross and yelled at the same time, "Oh great! And I just got this outfit yesterday!"
#1367
Posté 26 novembre 2013 - 10:03
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I'll post up the next Rea/Rothan part tonight. It needed what I just wrote to set the scene a little. Plus, you know, dat characters! 
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Posté 27 novembre 2013 - 08:20
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That last one Kel, with the Starscreamer? f***in good. This is the only thing that can express it.
When the screamer.... levels.... out.
When the screamer.... levels.... out.
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Posté 27 novembre 2013 - 03:21
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sH0tgUn jUliA wrote...
That last one Kel, with the Starscreamer? f***in good. This is the only thing that can express it.
When the screamer.... levels.... out.
(This was another piece that Khambilo and I went back and forth with, so he deserves credit too)Thank you.
P.S. I did check that thread out and your responses SJ. Too many others to read but its a great idea and of course, my favorite was the response to the Star Child
Modifié par Kel Riever, 27 novembre 2013 - 03:34 .
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Posté 27 novembre 2013 - 04:54
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Scenes we never got to see:
Corporal Banes: Hey Ranassa! Have you ever been mistaken for a man?
Ranassa: No. Have you?
Corporal Banes: Hey Ranassa! Have you ever been mistaken for a man?
Ranassa: No. Have you?
#1371
Posté 28 novembre 2013 - 04:57
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Javik: Look into my eyes.
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Posté 29 novembre 2013 - 03:09
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Hey, I'll be writing but 'vacation' time really isn't a vacation much for me. There will be a few scenes coming where combat is going to get more intense and I will also be writing Rea stuff alongside when I can get with Kham on it.
Looking forward to all the words.
Looking forward to all the words.
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Posté 29 novembre 2013 - 06:06
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Shops you'd like to see..... since Wyld and Zia are in a shopping centre.......
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Posté 29 novembre 2013 - 06:25
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Something suitably British...like a cricket shop
Or make SJ happy...a golf store.
I'm also pitching for a VI store, just so a standing VI could say something ridiculous or eerie
Or make SJ happy...a golf store.
I'm also pitching for a VI store, just so a standing VI could say something ridiculous or eerie
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Posté 29 novembre 2013 - 08:06
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Kel Riever wrote...
Something suitably British...like a cricket shop
Or make SJ happy...a golf store.
I'm also pitching for a VI store, just so a standing VI could say something ridiculous or eerie
I have this mental picture of the Shepard VI engaged in a battle of wit's with Momma while the centre's getting shot to pieces around them.
