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Mass Effect Group Story: The Battle at London Discussion Thread
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#126
Posté 06 juillet 2013 - 08:43
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shotgunjulia, I sent you a friend request so that we could communicate through pm about the RPG. Also, it's a requirement that you have to create an application for your character before posting. You can continue posting, but please create an application soon. You can how to on the first page, first post on this thread.
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#127
Posté 07 juillet 2013 - 07:39
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Okay, here's mine.
Name: Shayrana
Race: Asari
Age: 139
Gender: F
Sexuality: Any
Anything Special?: Ardat Yakshi Syndrome Type 1. Received Genetic treatment before the war. Stopped after the war started and put on meds to manage the syndrome. The meds prevent it from getting worse. Prognosis: Should resume genetic treatment as soon as possible for complete and permanent resolution to genetic problem. She will be be able to bond, but will be sterile herself. Should she stop the medications, her condition could worsen. She would not be a danger like the type 3, but the gene therapy would no longer work.
Family: Father is unknown Asari. Mother ran a brothel in Serrice. No known siblings.
Likes: Music, Art, Dancing. Learned martial arts like a dance.
Dislikes: Violence.
Personality: Wants to help people.
History: She became a commando after she read about the Battle of the Citadel. She feared the end was coming and wanted to defend her home world. Even though she hates violence, she knew that if her people failed it would be the death of all of them.
RP Sample: "I think most are dead." Shayrana replied. "I've been unconscious, and I don't know what's happened. What color are my eyes?"
Name: Ereba (no relation to the Blue Rose)
Race: Asari
Age: 120
Gender: F (of course)
Sexuality: Any
Anything Special? Dyed her scalp purple and white once.
Family: Father is Krogan; Mother Asari. Ereba's maternal grandfather was Quarian. Parents are still together and fighting in the war.
Likes: Guns. Girls. Boys. And Guns.
Dislikes: People who get in her way.
Personality: She's quite butch and keeps trying to get the squad into headbutting before combat to get their spirits up. She intends to win this war and live to tell about it. She's a rough and tumble as the next Krogan, but then she's always been Daddy's girl. He taught her how to shoot a pistol when she was 20.
History: She spent her youth learning how to handle a gun and hunting, not off shaking her ass in a sleazy bar somewhere. She's a survivalist type. In her second commando training mission, she used a cloaking unit she'd stolen from an Alliance Infiltrator while getting him used to some of the Asari "benefits" the night before, and took out the entire opposing unit herself. That stunt got her into trouble with her CO and a pat on the ass from her DI. "We're Commandos! We improvise!"
RPSample: "Well, our arsenal improved, anyway." Spc. Ereba said showing her new found Black Widow. "Made my panties wet when I saw it laying on the ground. Thermal scope, rapid fire semi-automatic, armor piercing rounds. Smack a warp on a brute and this baby can take it down in a hurry."
Name: Shayrana
Race: Asari
Age: 139
Gender: F
Sexuality: Any
Anything Special?: Ardat Yakshi Syndrome Type 1. Received Genetic treatment before the war. Stopped after the war started and put on meds to manage the syndrome. The meds prevent it from getting worse. Prognosis: Should resume genetic treatment as soon as possible for complete and permanent resolution to genetic problem. She will be be able to bond, but will be sterile herself. Should she stop the medications, her condition could worsen. She would not be a danger like the type 3, but the gene therapy would no longer work.
Family: Father is unknown Asari. Mother ran a brothel in Serrice. No known siblings.
Likes: Music, Art, Dancing. Learned martial arts like a dance.
Dislikes: Violence.
Personality: Wants to help people.
History: She became a commando after she read about the Battle of the Citadel. She feared the end was coming and wanted to defend her home world. Even though she hates violence, she knew that if her people failed it would be the death of all of them.
RP Sample: "I think most are dead." Shayrana replied. "I've been unconscious, and I don't know what's happened. What color are my eyes?"
Name: Ereba (no relation to the Blue Rose)
Race: Asari
Age: 120
Gender: F (of course)
Sexuality: Any
Anything Special? Dyed her scalp purple and white once.
Family: Father is Krogan; Mother Asari. Ereba's maternal grandfather was Quarian. Parents are still together and fighting in the war.
Likes: Guns. Girls. Boys. And Guns.
Dislikes: People who get in her way.
Personality: She's quite butch and keeps trying to get the squad into headbutting before combat to get their spirits up. She intends to win this war and live to tell about it. She's a rough and tumble as the next Krogan, but then she's always been Daddy's girl. He taught her how to shoot a pistol when she was 20.
History: She spent her youth learning how to handle a gun and hunting, not off shaking her ass in a sleazy bar somewhere. She's a survivalist type. In her second commando training mission, she used a cloaking unit she'd stolen from an Alliance Infiltrator while getting him used to some of the Asari "benefits" the night before, and took out the entire opposing unit herself. That stunt got her into trouble with her CO and a pat on the ass from her DI. "We're Commandos! We improvise!"
RPSample: "Well, our arsenal improved, anyway." Spc. Ereba said showing her new found Black Widow. "Made my panties wet when I saw it laying on the ground. Thermal scope, rapid fire semi-automatic, armor piercing rounds. Smack a warp on a brute and this baby can take it down in a hurry."
#128
Posté 07 juillet 2013 - 07:47
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Accepted, shotgun! Love them both! XD
#129
Posté 07 juillet 2013 - 02:44
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Name: Brigadier Baldurjack Baldwin the Forth
Race: Human
Age: 42
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Hetero
Anything Special?: His names not really Baldurjack, Baldwin and he's not a Brigadier. That's just what he tells people
Family: Mother and father, with 3 elder brothers and one younger sister
Likes: Being respected
Dislikes: People showing him up
Personality: Neurotic
History: The man who would become known as Baldurjack has no history beyond rumours and heresay. Some say he appeared from nowhere. But before he appeared, he was the second youngest of a career military family. Naturally gifted, he sought to follow in the footsteps of his brothers who, like there father, served in the alliance navy.
The father was courtmarshalled, long before Baldwin could sit the entrance exam. And if rumours are true. He sat the entrance exam no less than five times. Each time setting a record for the worst score in the history of the exam.
What happened between then and now is lost to the ages. But in Earth's hour of need during the Reaper invasion, Baldwin stepped forward and took action in the battles.
History however is uncertain if Baldwins action's were a hindrance, or proved to be a guiding force of the effort's of the troops on Earth. All that is certain is that he was there at the start of the invasion. And died shortly before it finished.
RP Sample: "Chaps! We have a sticky situation here. The enemy outnumber us fifty to one. And I'm sure you all know that if they take us alive or dead, they will feed us into their goo machines and liquify us till we are nothing more than paste."
Baldurjack stopped talking into the broken mirror above the sink and looked at himself. His bushy mustache, while a neccessary part of the image, was making him look weak jawed. That would never do.
He jutted his chin out, stood up straight and threw back his shoulder's. That's it Baldurjack...... No. He thought. Briiiiigadiiiiier Baldurjack Baldwin the Forth! Of her Majesties Space Berret's!
Rolling and empathising his vowels, he put his prompt cards into his breast pocket of his recently acquired uniform. It was perfect. He had to cut the label off saying which rental shop he'd stolen it from but since the planet was being shot to hell he thought no one would miss it.
He clicked his heels together and nodded at his golden labradour laying down by his feet. "Come along Dougal! No time for dawdling. there's a war on you know"!
"Of course master". Said Dougal rising from the ground. "And if I may say, I am honoured to be by your side in your time of need".
"That's the spirit ol'chum". Baldurjack nodded. Grateful that his old labradour, dead for twenty years, had returned to his side. "You and me boy! We'll show the rotter's that you don't kick sand in the face of the human race"!
"Yes". Said Dougal as his eye's glinted yellow for a fraction of a moment.. "We certainly will".
Race: Human
Age: 42
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Hetero
Anything Special?: His names not really Baldurjack, Baldwin and he's not a Brigadier. That's just what he tells people
Family: Mother and father, with 3 elder brothers and one younger sister
Likes: Being respected
Dislikes: People showing him up
Personality: Neurotic
History: The man who would become known as Baldurjack has no history beyond rumours and heresay. Some say he appeared from nowhere. But before he appeared, he was the second youngest of a career military family. Naturally gifted, he sought to follow in the footsteps of his brothers who, like there father, served in the alliance navy.
The father was courtmarshalled, long before Baldwin could sit the entrance exam. And if rumours are true. He sat the entrance exam no less than five times. Each time setting a record for the worst score in the history of the exam.
What happened between then and now is lost to the ages. But in Earth's hour of need during the Reaper invasion, Baldwin stepped forward and took action in the battles.
History however is uncertain if Baldwins action's were a hindrance, or proved to be a guiding force of the effort's of the troops on Earth. All that is certain is that he was there at the start of the invasion. And died shortly before it finished.
RP Sample: "Chaps! We have a sticky situation here. The enemy outnumber us fifty to one. And I'm sure you all know that if they take us alive or dead, they will feed us into their goo machines and liquify us till we are nothing more than paste."
Baldurjack stopped talking into the broken mirror above the sink and looked at himself. His bushy mustache, while a neccessary part of the image, was making him look weak jawed. That would never do.
He jutted his chin out, stood up straight and threw back his shoulder's. That's it Baldurjack...... No. He thought. Briiiiigadiiiiier Baldurjack Baldwin the Forth! Of her Majesties Space Berret's!
Rolling and empathising his vowels, he put his prompt cards into his breast pocket of his recently acquired uniform. It was perfect. He had to cut the label off saying which rental shop he'd stolen it from but since the planet was being shot to hell he thought no one would miss it.
He clicked his heels together and nodded at his golden labradour laying down by his feet. "Come along Dougal! No time for dawdling. there's a war on you know"!
"Of course master". Said Dougal rising from the ground. "And if I may say, I am honoured to be by your side in your time of need".
"That's the spirit ol'chum". Baldurjack nodded. Grateful that his old labradour, dead for twenty years, had returned to his side. "You and me boy! We'll show the rotter's that you don't kick sand in the face of the human race"!
"Yes". Said Dougal as his eye's glinted yellow for a fraction of a moment.. "We certainly will".
#131
Posté 07 juillet 2013 - 05:09
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Kel Riever wrote...
Lol! Oh, yes, this'll be good
Well, the Mako was said to have a prisoner, and the OP said we could have two characters if we wanted.
I've been trying to figure out if I want a second, and if i did, should it be Tik-Tok, the last Geth in the galaxy, (not upgraded, denied upgrades and views the upgraded Geth as heretics for denying it access to the consensus. Also unaware that it is losing programs, owing to a Geth form of alzheimer's).
Momma. The AI Gizmo put in the Kestrel who can worm her way into other other hardware, meaning she is part helmet, and vehicle. (And also, only able to converse with someone wearing the helmet, leading to alot of talks with thin air).
Or an as yet unamed guy who is a sky boarder and was about to make an orbital drop, past the battle in orbit, to 'do his part' for the battle for Earth. (Haven't fleshed him out yet).
But ultimately, those guy's don't feel like they'd fit into the story, aside from being another pair of boots on the ground.
So, Brigidier Baldurjack Baldwin the forth was born. A man who wants to do good. But ultimately, begs the question of whose side he's on.
Hehhhehheee......
Heeehhehaaahaaaaa
Mwhaahaa
MWWHAAAHAAAHAAHAAAAA!!!
oh wait, he has to be accepted first.
Drat.
#133
Posté 08 juillet 2013 - 06:45
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Tempted, but now Wyld's on the way to the Mako I really want to bring the Brigadier to the front spotlight before she does anything else.
Just waiting to hear that he's been accepted before I write for him.
His introduction has soooo many possibilities. But choosing at what time and place to drop him in..........
That's proving a challenge.
Just waiting to hear that he's been accepted before I write for him.
His introduction has soooo many possibilities. But choosing at what time and place to drop him in..........
That's proving a challenge.
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#134
Posté 08 juillet 2013 - 11:14
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Redbelle wrote...
Name: Brigadier Baldurjack Baldwin the Forth
Race: Human
Age: 42
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Hetero
Anything Special?: His names not really Baldurjack, Baldwin and he's not a Brigadier. That's just what he tells people
Family: Mother and father, with 3 elder brothers and one younger sister
Likes: Being respected
Dislikes: People showing him up
Personality: Neurotic
History: The man who would become known as Baldurjack has no history beyond rumours and heresay. Some say he appeared from nowhere. But before he appeared, he was the second youngest of a career military family. Naturally gifted, he sought to follow in the footsteps of his brothers who, like there father, served in the alliance navy.
The father was courtmarshalled, long before Baldwin could sit the entrance exam. And if rumours are true. He sat the entrance exam no less than five times. Each time setting a record for the worst score in the history of the exam.
What happened between then and now is lost to the ages. But in Earth's hour of need during the Reaper invasion, Baldwin stepped forward and took action in the battles.
History however is uncertain if Baldwins action's were a hindrance, or proved to be a guiding force of the effort's of the troops on Earth. All that is certain is that he was there at the start of the invasion. And died shortly before it finished.
RP Sample: "Chaps! We have a sticky situation here. The enemy outnumber us fifty to one. And I'm sure you all know that if they take us alive or dead, they will feed us into their goo machines and liquify us till we are nothing more than paste."
Baldurjack stopped talking into the broken mirror above the sink and looked at himself. His bushy mustache, while a neccessary part of the image, was making him look weak jawed. That would never do.
He jutted his chin out, stood up straight and threw back his shoulder's. That's it Baldurjack...... No. He thought. Briiiiigadiiiiier Baldurjack Baldwin the Forth! Of her Majesties Space Berret's!
Rolling and empathising his vowels, he put his prompt cards into his breast pocket of his recently acquired uniform. It was perfect. He had to cut the label off saying which rental shop he'd stolen it from but since the planet was being shot to hell he thought no one would miss it.
He clicked his heels together and nodded at his golden labradour laying down by his feet. "Come along Dougal! No time for dawdling. there's a war on you know"!
"Of course master". Said Dougal rising from the ground. "And if I may say, I am honoured to be by your side in your time of need".
"That's the spirit ol'chum". Baldurjack nodded. Grateful that his old labradour, dead for twenty years, had returned to his side. "You and me boy! We'll show the rotter's that you don't kick sand in the face of the human race"!
"Yes". Said Dougal as his eye's glinted yellow for a fraction of a moment.. "We certainly will".
Accepted! Wow, he seems awesome!
#136
Posté 09 juillet 2013 - 03:08
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Sumthing wrote...
Is this too late to join?
No, as long as you keep up with the story
#137
Posté 09 juillet 2013 - 09:32
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Hey people! Glad to see the story continues to develop. This is my reading in the shade as I'm sipping cold beer under the pine tree
As I said, won't be home until the first of August so I won't be posting any new material...could do it via phone but that tends to be a bit frustrating, besides it's time for R'n R.
If any of you care to write Zia and Naomi, you're welcome to do so...Redbelle I'm looking at you since you've done such a fine job so far
Just remember she's a fury so throw her an occasional banshee or a brute to play with
Cheers people! Have a great summer.
As I said, won't be home until the first of August so I won't be posting any new material...could do it via phone but that tends to be a bit frustrating, besides it's time for R'n R.
If any of you care to write Zia and Naomi, you're welcome to do so...Redbelle I'm looking at you since you've done such a fine job so far
Just remember she's a fury so throw her an occasional banshee or a brute to play with
Cheers people! Have a great summer.
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Posté 09 juillet 2013 - 10:48
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Roger Wilco M'boy!
<sounds of a tussle>
Sorry, that was Baldurjack. <off to the side> YOU ARE NOT!!! TO TALK!!! TO THE GROUP!!!
......ahem........
Right. I'll drive Zia for a bit. I've been trying to give her some development..... without giving her some development so she's ready to be molded to the creators standards, but if you say it's ok I'll start to give her a more active role.
So far she's been riding shotgun in what she see's as a gangsta wagon....... And she has a connection to T'loak? And Naomi is her padawan with a crush?
Hmmmmmm.
<sounds of a tussle>
Sorry, that was Baldurjack. <off to the side> YOU ARE NOT!!! TO TALK!!! TO THE GROUP!!!
......ahem........
Right. I'll drive Zia for a bit. I've been trying to give her some development..... without giving her some development so she's ready to be molded to the creators standards, but if you say it's ok I'll start to give her a more active role.
So far she's been riding shotgun in what she see's as a gangsta wagon....... And she has a connection to T'loak? And Naomi is her padawan with a crush?
Hmmmmmm.
#139
Posté 09 juillet 2013 - 02:56
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FuriousFelicia wrote...
Hey people! Glad to see the story continues to develop. This is my reading in the shade as I'm sipping cold beer under the pine tree
As I said, won't be home until the first of August so I won't be posting any new material...could do it via phone but that tends to be a bit frustrating, besides it's time for R'n R.
If any of you care to write Zia and Naomi, you're welcome to do so...Redbelle I'm looking at you since you've done such a fine job so far
Just remember she's a fury so throw her an occasional banshee or a brute to play with
Cheers people! Have a great summer.
Glad to hear you are reading!
#140
Posté 09 juillet 2013 - 09:18
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Honestly, As great as the soon to be making an appearence Brigidier is to write for, I have to say.........
His introduction is proving hard.
I'm tempted to leave him out of any groups while he get's to do some stuff........... but I really want to introduce him as being the prisoner in the Mako.
His introduction is proving hard.
I'm tempted to leave him out of any groups while he get's to do some stuff........... but I really want to introduce him as being the prisoner in the Mako.
#141
Posté 10 juillet 2013 - 02:59
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Check our group for an update on FavoriteHookerontheCitadel. He says he'll be posting soon. In the meantime, can't wait to see whoever is writing next!
#142
Posté 11 juillet 2013 - 02:55
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Before you ask, yes I am very proud of my 2 turian names. Elederis immediately came to me, and now I think there should be a Three Musketeers movie with Garrus, Sidonis, and Elderis. Also, in decided who should split up with who, I figured that Rea and Rothan going under was a given, since Rothan has to work on the missles and it was Rea's idea, and Arkeer probably needs to do some of the heavy lifting, so hopefully MrStoob doesn't mind writing for the above ground group, but if you don't want Elaine there, just let me know and I'll change it.
Starting to enjoy writing for Grelk. Might keep him alive if no one else kills him.
Starting to enjoy writing for Grelk. Might keep him alive if no one else kills him.
#143
Posté 11 juillet 2013 - 02:27
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Right then
The Brigadier and the Corpsman have locked horns.
The Mako is being repaired which should give the chance for some interrogation of the characters.
And a new threat has been alluded to, which shall be expanded upon. But for now.......
Zombie husks. A bite will turn you......... veeeeeery slowly. (Well they are only little).
The upside is that soon Jan will have the Mako sent off towards the beam and people will have a mobile stock wagon trundling through the war torn streets of London like an ice cream van while it makes it's way to the beam assualt staging ground.
The Brigadier and the Corpsman have locked horns.
The Mako is being repaired which should give the chance for some interrogation of the characters.
And a new threat has been alluded to, which shall be expanded upon. But for now.......
Zombie husks. A bite will turn you......... veeeeeery slowly. (Well they are only little).
The upside is that soon Jan will have the Mako sent off towards the beam and people will have a mobile stock wagon trundling through the war torn streets of London like an ice cream van while it makes it's way to the beam assualt staging ground.
Modifié par Redbelle, 11 juillet 2013 - 02:28 .
#144
Posté 12 juillet 2013 - 07:23
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Excellent posts, Red, Kel and Kham! And, let's see, about the new group of misfits in the tunnels, I'll have to try to make a post and do some writing for them, though that'll be difficult for me. Luckily Kel has given me something to work with, lol.
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Posté 12 juillet 2013 - 02:55
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I'll have to start bringing Zia into the mix.
She's been on the fringes for so long that she's getting restless and pushy.
She's been on the fringes for so long that she's getting restless and pushy.
#146
Posté 12 juillet 2013 - 07:31
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Loving where this underground stuff is going. Some crazy chaos is about to erupt, I can feel it coming.
#147
Posté 12 juillet 2013 - 07:57
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Aha! The Ritz hotel has an underground entrance not far from it! I'm sure a heavy canon will widen out the entrance!
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Posté 12 juillet 2013 - 09:44
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How do you get a Brigadier to open up to the person charged with taking names and chewing bubblebum......
Well, at first, the biotic haymaker seemed like a good approach.
But then again, Wylds not really had time to tell of what I've been alluding to as her recent history concerning what happened on the Citadel. (Zia might find it interesting too, since part of it relates to Aria). All to gain a Brigadier's trust.
So I'm going off on how Jerry-Ann got her legs. and became the amazing........... Spider-Jan.
(note..... she's not really Spider-Jan but I've been sitting on that one for two weeks and I'm only so good for not using this stuff).
*edit Come to think of it Gecko-Jan would be more accurate but meh. She's Spider-Jan now! The name is out the bag!
Well, at first, the biotic haymaker seemed like a good approach.
But then again, Wylds not really had time to tell of what I've been alluding to as her recent history concerning what happened on the Citadel. (Zia might find it interesting too, since part of it relates to Aria). All to gain a Brigadier's trust.
So I'm going off on how Jerry-Ann got her legs. and became the amazing........... Spider-Jan.
(note..... she's not really Spider-Jan but I've been sitting on that one for two weeks and I'm only so good for not using this stuff).
*edit Come to think of it Gecko-Jan would be more accurate but meh. She's Spider-Jan now! The name is out the bag!
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#149
Posté 14 juillet 2013 - 04:03
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Due to time constraint's I'l have to split Wylds past citadel experience into piece's. I'm racing through it as fast as I can to bring it back to Earth, but we haven't gotten to the photographs yet.
Just an accidently discharge and the sudden view of how quickly Wyld can go from being in charge to helpless. As well as a view of her more lonely side when she's not focusing on being work orientated
Just an accidently discharge and the sudden view of how quickly Wyld can go from being in charge to helpless. As well as a view of her more lonely side when she's not focusing on being work orientated
#150
Posté 14 juillet 2013 - 05:43
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I'm worried that my writing crew has been tackled by a bad case of time constraints. Mr. Stoob, Khambilo, FavoriteH, where are yuuu!?
