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[Redbelle]

Quick Question. Is Rea on the Bastion side of the river of the Beam's side?

I need to know so I can place Wyld on the right bank.

[Kel Riever]

beam's side

[Redbelle]

Well! In that case! <quick post>

[Redbelle]

I have to admit. I may have messed up the pink cadallac bit..... I can't remember if it ever got that paint job......Probably not. I'll switch it back to Alliance camo colour later.

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

Redbelle wrote...

I see mine. Are you logged in?

It was offline for a while last night.

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

Okay, I've gone over the plot of our story.

Main Plot: Defeat the Reapers -- this is the backdrop. It's pretty much invisible. Each character has their own Sub-plot, then there are these Mini-plots.

Our writings are our characters' subplots, and I'm trying not to lose track of this. Funny thing though is that I just now figured out what each character's plot is or was.

My story is titled "The Lost Asari":

Protagonist: Naleena - Goal - she has to deal with Salarian Special Tasks Group. They've been dogging her since the beginning, and they're still dogging her. She may seem like an evil horrible person at times, but she's got a cause that seems noble, but it is self-serving as well. Will she succeed? I haven't decided. Which Game of Thrones character is she?

Marisa - She was just going to be a supporting character, but I fear her role has become deeper now that she got involved in this "buddy cop" section. She knows more than she thinks she does.

Errika - Heroism. The ditz everyone made fun of sacrificed herself so that the others might live. She had her kick ass moment and went out with nuclear fire.

Ereba and Shayrana -- Two deep characters. Theirs is a love story. You knew that didn't you.

Ranassa, T, Jack, Prangley, and the others - supporting characters.

The other question is will the story end with Shepard or will it end on its own? Decisions decisions decisions.

[favoritehookeronthecitadel]

I don't see it ending after the destruction of the Reapers- if anything, we could keep going for a few more months at least. We've done good this long. And hey, mash lasted 9 seasons. XD

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

Well, I've got the plot laid out for the ending. We'll have to huddle and there's a lot of potential intrigue.

[Kel Riever]

Hopefully a Sovereign class Reaper being shot down over London is enough for everybody to notice!

@SJ. Yes, a good enough reason to use PM or the group. Where do you want to discuss this?

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

I think a PM huddle would be best -- don't want to give anything away.

[Redbelle]

Pming. Hope to get some more writing done soon. Kel, I've sent you a collab piece to what you sent. Also.... Rothan's suit has company.

[Redbelle]

Nice to see the war continue on all the fronts.

Nice to see Radcliffe getting his Mako knocked over and damaged..... yet again!

Now I'm going to have to think of how Wyld can mess with his head over the radio!

The funny thing is..... she doesn't do it intentionally.

[Kel Riever]

Hopefully, a giant cloud of ash that covers everything for the time being isn't too over the top. It'll clear, just in case...

Anyway, thanks. Trying to just keep everybody written about still in the story and pertinent. Rea stuff like tomorrow.

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

Clouds of ash are good, especially when accompanied by large explosions. You know that. The solution to everything in this story is BAWOOOM!!!! Just ask Jack.

Nice addition.

The only thing is that Ranassa isn't going to get that gift that the Krogan was going to give her. He had a real ground pounder in mind for courtship. Instead he got blown up. Such is love in a Reaper war. "Hey honey, I was thinking about getting you flowers, but then I saw this Cain and I couldn't pass it up, so I got it for you. Do you like it?"

"Aw, hon, you shouldn't have. That was real sweet of you."

In another parallel dimension, maybe. And those little snippets, Kel, are very useful. I'm sticking them in the "book." Which by the way if it were to be in paperback would be around 450 pages, and that's just the Asari with the few overlapping story sections. It's at 333 pages @ 250 words per page and we just got on the Citadel. Ouch.

[Kel Riever]

Okay RB, check your PMs...

[Redbelle]

Kel Riever wrote...

Okay RB, check your PMs...

Done. Made a few suggestions for future use but what I read sounds great!

[Redbelle]

Rothan suddenly called out in horrer. "Momma! NO!!! Don't change that!......".

His voice modulator clicked and his normal tones was replaced by one that was lower. Sultry. Rumbling in the bass tones with a playful lilt.

"Setting". He finished. "Pour Fa Vour". He muttered clasping Rea's waist. "Well señorita, we have a problem. And one that we can not fix without an external interface, no"?

Rea found her heart beating a little faster as Rothan's new Spanish dialect and accent assaulted her ears like honey on the lips. "Say..... External interface again".

"Wha.... external interface? Si, we need one to tame the beast that is inside my suit before thing's get to far out of hand. You agree"?

"Rothan....". Rea replied. "Don't ever change".

Modifié par Redbelle, 30 janvier 2014 - 11:32 .

[Redbelle]

Aboard the Bucky Valkyr Momma felt Wyld pinging her on the communication channel reserved for emergencies. She opened the connection.

"Jerry-Ann"?

"Momma"!

"Do you require intervention"?

"Just killed a man"!

".......So no intervention"?

"Put a gun against his head"?

"One moment. Your vitals are coming in now".

"Pulled the trigger.....".

"All telemetry indicates a state of shock"!

"......now he's dead".

"Just take deep breaths and tell me what happened".

"Momma"!

"Go on".

"Life had just begun"!

"...... I'm not following".

"But now I've gone and thrown it all away"!

"A tad melodramatic today aren't we".

"MOMMA"!

"What"?

"Ooooo Ooo Ooo Ooooooo......"

"Riiiight. Checking helmet replay".

"Didn't mean to make you cry"!

"Oil leak, actually".

"If I'm not back again this time tomorrow......".

"Rewinding video playback".

"Carry on....."

".....Okay".

"......carry on".

"I'm doing it already! Just keep breathing".

"As if nothing really matters....."

"Checking victim against profiles....... YOU SHOT ARMITAGE"!!!

Modifié par Redbelle, 31 janvier 2014 - 08:51 .

[Kel Riever]

lol!

Meanwhile, I did post again (though it didn't bump on account of me inserting it into my accidental blank space left yesterday). Honestly, for the result and length of that last piece, I can't believe I spent a lot of time on it. Well, its done. Moving on!

Modifié par Kel Riever, 31 janvier 2014 - 09:36 .

[Kel Riever]

The more 'snow days' we have around here, the less I'm going to write. 'Time off' is not time off for me. Time off is time for me to have to do other things than write. So, yeah, being 'indoors' actually equates to less writing.

Anyway, instead of today, I will shoot for tomorrow for the next entry. Looks like there will be more 'happy snow days' on Wednesday, so honestly, this is just a continuation of two months of stupidity. Let me know when I can a) do my job and have time to write. Will 'vacation' until then

[Redbelle]

Till then just imagine.

Baldurjack!

Vs!

The Frankenreaper!

or Reaper Kong!

or The Abominable Reaper!

Stories he tells so vividly..... you'll believe he was there!

[Kel Riever]

Am writing the next part...sending for review to RB in a PM. Should be done tomorrow.

[Redbelle]

Uhhhh. Morning is a terrible time.

Looking over PM now. Looks like fun! A new location to thrash!

[Kel Riever]

okay, will continue writing. Got to my desk today.

[Redbelle]

YAY!!!

I wonder if Sputnik is in the building..... as well as Voyger with a note from the Asari saying....."Please try to keep your junk from cluttering up the space lanes.... someone nearly ran into this and clipped it.....We'll bill you for the damages"!