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[Redbelle]

Hey SGJ? Is the musclebound Ranassa still around? Found the best intro music for her to make an entrance!

 

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

Hey SGJ? Is the musclebound Ranassa still around? Found the best intro music for her to make an entrance!

 

 

LOL. Yes, she's still around. I've actually finished "The Lost Asari." I've got one more chapter with Naleena. Then everything is on hold until Shepard, then there's another chapter w/ Jack, Ranassa & T, and epilogue. That one chapter is kind of important for everyone, so if you'd PM me your e-mail I'll send it to you for review. I sent a copy of it to Kel, and I've edited it a bit since then. It's the generic "ending," then you get to write however you want your sections to end.

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

Lucy: I swallowed a bug.

 

Beautiful.

[Redbelle]

Okay! Job done! Wyld is coming for Rea and Rothan!

 

And we are two soldier's down.

 

But what ever became of Rockwood?

 

Dun dun duuuuuuun!

 

Kel....... let's huddle.

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

It's okay, Wyld. Naleena would have done the same thing, too. It's a dirty job being a pragmatist.

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

And I posted the real chapter one of my section of the story since I can't really insert it, and if I did, no one would bother to read it. Now back to our regularly scheduled program.

[Redbelle]

Flashback to how this all started for the Sarge

[Kel Riever]

First, awesome Emperor's Angel...new writers and writing makes me very happy!

 

Second, SJ, I will get back to you on your latest email.  Just multitasking....

 

Third, RedBelle works diligently behind the scenes so that we may move forward.  Wanted you all to know because you don't see something doesn't mean work isn't being done!

[Redbelle]

<witchy cackle> Hubble Bubble Boooil and Trrrrouuuublllllle Yeeeeheeeeehaaahaaaaa!!!

 

Ahem.....

 

It's coming along nicely.

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

Much work is being done behind the scenes.

[Kel Riever]

RB, what do you think is the ETA for your piece?

[Redbelle]

Working on it now. Had alot of stuff thrown at me but I'm marking in the changes. Hope to have it up tomorrow once it's gone past your eyes and the next part in for review

[Kel Riever]

no problem.  I was going to go post but ended up having the weekend mug me.  So I'll post something up after you, in all likelyhood.

[Redbelle]

Revision is off for approval. Waiting for the go ahead.

[Redbelle]

Must........! Create.......! Content.......!

 

But House........ Falling........ apart........!

 

Must....... repair....... Ceiling!!!

 

And Stop........ Talking like...... Shatner!!!!!!

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

Sorry about your house.

 

Naleena takes care of things.... all kinds of things.... but she did that before, didn't she? Except now she does it for the Council. Congratulations, Naleena.

[Kel Riever]

I have to read.  Thanks for keeping things going you guys.  The latest I'll post is by Thursday, with something maybe referencing Clark.  Or if the Rea Rothan thing is ready to go, then that.

[Redbelle]

Next piece up. Wyld and Rea are having a head to head which hopefully.... isn't meant literally.

 

Kel, things are set for the two to come to a head. You want to liase on this?

 

@SGJ Nice to see Naleena now free of her past. Doesn't mean the Salarians are going to give up though. With their plans and the ones not yet uncovered they could tear the galatic union apart and put everyone on a level playing field.

 

But lets not forget our Mordins and other Salarians in all this. Chances are Naleena may be called into prevent Salarian lynch mobs from breaking out.

 

And all those Spectre Salarians too. Imagine her being partnered up with a senior Salarian Spectre. Buddy Cop Spectres!

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

There will be interesting times in the galaxy after the war, that is for certain. As far as the Council goes, Naleena is free of her past, but it doesn't mean the Salarians are going to forget. Not all Salarians are evil, just like not all Batarians are evil. 

 

I've got one more installment, then I've got to wait for Shepard to get on the Citadel. Once Shepard is on the Citadel, I've got that part covered. 

 

PS: I do see Naleena teaming with another Spectre in the future.

[Redbelle]

.......Blasto?

 

It's Blasto right?

 

Pleeeeease tell me it's Blasto!

[Redbelle]

"Hold up you hand."

 

"Is it up?"

 

"Now...... Hold your hand up to your ear and listen....."

 

"....... Do you hear it?"

 

"It's the sound I hear every day and if you concentrate hard enough and really try, you may hear it as well."

 

"It's the sound of progress. While it has been slow it has been inching forward steadily, at a crawl."

 

"Some might hear the huffing wheeze of a person staggering forward, determined to go the distance."

 

"Other's may perceive the creaking grind of wheels, or perhaps cogs grinding on one another in need of a little oil to free the mechanisims to spin freely once more."

 

"What I'm trying to say Stanley..... Is that everything is going to be aaaaall right. We're not finished with the story. And soon we'll have another slice ready for consumption by the general masses who want to know what fates lie in store for our intrepid heroes."

 

"But is their fate really fate when a controlling hand weaves their experiences and dictate's their thoughts and feelings on the matter? Just why is Lucy with Wyld? She's not the love interest! She's a distraction! It's a triangle between Naomi, Wyld and Zia! Lucy makes it square."

 

"And what about that Rockwood? With him along for the ride we have arrived at the uncomfortable realisation that we are moving within the confines of a Pentagon. Which is alright if you like an ornament. But can you imagine sitting on one for any length of time? We were better off with the square. At least we had a flat surface back then. Hmmm. Maybe a triangle isn't such a good idea either in that case. After all. A triangle is a triangle. No matter waht you do with it. At least if you increase the length of one side of a square you get a rectangle."

 

A then we arrive at the point in the story who has no other points to make a line. The Brigadier. Alone. One Man! Against the world...... of Reapers. He's not actually against the entire world since it has alot of people he would quite like to sit down and talk to at parties. But unfortunately for Baldurjack..... his death was preordained right back at the start of his creation. Which is really a matter of life imitating life some might say. But in stories we can get around that unfortunate truth and make things stand out as larger as life. So perhaps Baldurjack may yet escape his fate, or not."

 

*Guy's..... The narrator from the Stanley Parable is trying to break into the thread!!! He's stopped for a sip of water to clear the throat so I don't have long! Don't let him into the main! He's a terrible story teller who keeps breaking the forth wall!"

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

And Juliara T'siri is sitting on her next installment because there are very very few left, so she's not going to give you two so very quickly like that. 

 

I suppose she could do a "Mac Attack" and bring you up to speed on some of the progress from our intrepid Bloodpack squad led by Gnish. See Gnish has a job to do and doesn't want Aria to kill him/her/it, whatever Vorcha are called. I think they're "it." Gnish is supposed to meet up with Shepard. We don't know if he does. He might get killed by a Reaper destroyer, or worse. Worse? How could things get any worse? Or Gnish might survive. It could get interesting. "Shepard! Aria send help. Now we kill them! Ahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!" Gnish knows enough to stay off the ramps. Not good. No cover.

 

So, Lucy is a distraction. But Lucy is fun. I love Lucy. That was a TV show. Rockwood? I his existence with no one left around to control him except for a certain Belle of Red. He says little. So ... Rockwood could be used as a lead magnet at some point if needed.

[Kel Riever]

Thanks RB, sent you my response.  Will be writing next week early now, sorry.  Looking forward to everyone's next part!

[sH0tgUn jUliA]

Gnish makes it to reinforce Shepard because he's more afraid of Aria than Reapers. It makes sense in a Vorcha sort of way. He may be crazy but he's not stupid. Or is it he may be stupid but he's not crazy. Whatever. Shepard finds out what is going on. Joker has some fun. Mac attack is finished.

[Kel Riever]

Gnish has 20 years to live on average.

 

He doesn't have time to think.