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#1776
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Behold! Part one of two!

 

More to come tomorrow.



#1777
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Thanks for working on the writing, RB.



#1778
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Gotta keep this rolling. Once we get to the beam and beyond.... I think SGJ and I have a few ideas for epilogue material.



#1779
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Yeah, gang. I've got the final chapter with Shepard written. You'll love it.

 

Then there's the Epilogue.



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And Naleena stirs more trouble 



#1781
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Must read and catch up!



#1782
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Must keep story from slipping to page 2.... Must write another "Mac Attack." I'm thinking somewhere Edmonton.



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I'm working on the next part of Rea and Rothan atm. Getting to Wyld soon after. Then...... who knows. I've not planned that far ahead.

 

Though for some reason the epilogue material keeps building in my mind. Got alot of fighting to do till then



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Naleena's story arc is done, so I'm just waiting to drop Shepard + surprise installment (ending) and the epilogue stuff. Otherwise I'll do "elsewhere in the world," because the world is getting slaughtered. Isn't Jacob supposed to be in Rio or someplace? But who could be in Edmonton? Hmmm.... I'll have to think about this.... I've got it!



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New post. And the question, how does a Valkyr play football may finally be answered.



#1786
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That WAS awesome.

 

I have not abandoned the cause.  But the writing will continue after today.  At this point, the proof will be when I do it...I know...



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I'm still threatening the Mac Attack, Kel. 

 

Awesome, Redbelle.

 

Pre-ME3 Naleena in "Chasing Spectres"



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Alllllll-RIIIIIGGGGHHHHHHTTTTTT!!!!!

 

Glad to hear your rejoining the fray. After the screaming power slide across the floor and over the Valkyr I think Rea and Rothan needs their handler. Cause Wyld and Lucy just rammed an Oculus..... In da FACE!!!



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I'm highly tempted to luanch another character over in the other thread...... A pirate captain who has a small fleet at her disposal and networks on planets. Who is over theatrical..... kinda like a saner, more successful Baldurjack. Who loves making a scene.



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I started writing!

 

But it probably won't go up today.

 

Still, on my way!



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I'm highly tempted to luanch another character over in the other thread...... A pirate captain who has a small fleet at her disposal and networks on planets. Who is over theatrical..... kinda like a saner, more successful Baldurjack. Who loves making a scene.

 

Captain Jacqueline Sparrow? Naleena already has the starboard observation deck for her quarters. She wanted a place that looked out to the stars where she could meditate. She's the "lawful evil" type at this point, and it doesn't mean she likes it.



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Depending on how it plays out, you might enjoy talking to Amy's elder sister. She's had a hard life that stems from the Spectres. But now..... she might very well be the arms dealer Naleena needs ;p

 

Anyway. I'm writing up the final destruction of the Oculus and then we'll be free to rejoin the charge. I think we're getting close to the beam now.



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Because come rian or shine..... I'm getting Wyld to the beam! You hear me universe!!!! I'm getting..... hang on, phone. <muffled> Yeeeallow? Uh huh.... uh huh? Wha...... What are you?

 

<comes back> That was the universe..... it said..... "We'll see about that".



#1794
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Well, so, Wyld ... to ... the... beam?



#1795
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I'm standing on the plank.



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Wyld to the beam, though I though Kel had a piece he wanted to drop in. One more Oculus in the building to take care of, and one damaged one outside..... though that one could be overlooked I guess since it went sailing away after it's control planes got shot off.



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Yes, I have one piece to drop in!  Besides the one on Clark I just wrote.  I should get to that piece by Thursday, if you can write ahead and hold...or wait.

 

Sorry, I really have been attacked with work.  That seems to have ended for now.  Hope you enjoy what I did today!



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Love the last line XD

 

I'm going to finish off the Museum Oculus part then bring Wyld and Lucy back out. We can figure out where to go from there.



#1799
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Of the repeated edits I made, the last one is for two little bits to make sense in the timeline and for a certain SJ asari.



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:D Thanks. Clark won't regret it.

 

Between Clark and The Lost Asari if we could make a mini-series, with all the smoking involved, I think we could get funding from RJ Reynolds, and thus make HBO.