I've had a lot of stuff going on. Me and my ex-girlfriend kind of went from possibly getting back together to ending things completely, so I'm trying to distract myself right now, but I will write something in the next two days.
Mass Effect Group Story: The Battle at London Discussion Thread
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#152
Posté 15 juillet 2013 - 07:30
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Greetings from the sunny adriatic coast! As you can amagine I'm enjoying my well earned holidays, and when I'm not swimming or partying, I read 
Nice to see things continue to develop in our little story. As I said, I won't be back until the 1. of August, and even if I had the time to write, it's near impossible to do so via mobile..
Redbelle you are awesome, and I love and appreciate you taking care of Zia and Naomi for me. Damn you wrote some of their lines as if you were reading my mind. Hope they are not much of a hindrance to you...must admit, I could never write something like that..
Zia and Naomi are acting just right.. (Wyld is kinda hot)
Nice to see things continue to develop in our little story. As I said, I won't be back until the 1. of August, and even if I had the time to write, it's near impossible to do so via mobile..
Redbelle you are awesome, and I love and appreciate you taking care of Zia and Naomi for me. Damn you wrote some of their lines as if you were reading my mind. Hope they are not much of a hindrance to you...must admit, I could never write something like that..
Zia and Naomi are acting just right.. (Wyld is kinda hot)
#153
Posté 15 juillet 2013 - 08:43
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Soon, there may be kissing.
Awkward. Aweful. Kissing.
If I can just get the whole legs thing done and out the way so I can never go into such detail again! And focus on the battles to come.
But that Baldurjack just keeps throwing a damn good plan out the window....... He'll get his one day!
Awkward. Aweful. Kissing.
If I can just get the whole legs thing done and out the way so I can never go into such detail again! And focus on the battles to come.
But that Baldurjack just keeps throwing a damn good plan out the window....... He'll get his one day!
#155
Posté 16 juillet 2013 - 05:32
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*poked* oof!
Yea, sorry all, doing some manual work atm and quite wiped out after each day. Will do my best to get back up to speed soon.
Yea, sorry all, doing some manual work atm and quite wiped out after each day. Will do my best to get back up to speed soon.
#156
Posté 16 juillet 2013 - 06:49
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It just means more time to think up where to take the characters, place them in settings, and what they will do to one another.
#157
Posté 16 juillet 2013 - 09:49
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Well it wouldn't feel like ME without a pinch of romance
Besides, Zia is kind of a sexmachine...she can't decide though what turns her on more, Naomi's innocence or Wyld's sharp tongue
Besides, Zia is kind of a sexmachine...she can't decide though what turns her on more, Naomi's innocence or Wyld's sharp tongue
#158
Posté 16 juillet 2013 - 12:05
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FuriousFelicia wrote...
Well it wouldn't feel like ME without a pinch of romance
Besides, Zia is kind of a sexmachine...she can't decide though what turns her on more, Naomi's innocence or Wyld's sharp tongue
Or the anticipation of violence that never seems to be coming because Wyld keeps blocking her.
Girl's engine is revved but is stuck in park.
Somethings gotta give.
And it's going to result in a pile up.
#159
Posté 18 juillet 2013 - 06:49
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Getting to the final post of the flashback that never seems to want to stop.
One more post and it's done. Honest. Yep! All done.
Maybe just one more....... No. No I promised myself. With the flashbacks. Just one more post.
Just.... one.... more.
Then Wyld will get pounced on.
One more post and it's done. Honest. Yep! All done.
Maybe just one more....... No. No I promised myself. With the flashbacks. Just one more post.
Just.... one.... more.
Then Wyld will get pounced on.
#160
Posté 18 juillet 2013 - 11:55
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Maybe two posts.
But writing a bit where Aria goes all Sir Alan Sugar on a Batarian, Omega style.....
Priceless.
But writing a bit where Aria goes all Sir Alan Sugar on a Batarian, Omega style.....
Priceless.
#161
Posté 19 juillet 2013 - 01:06
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I like the Aria bit. Can't wait to see where that goes!
#162
Posté 19 juillet 2013 - 01:41
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Considering a "Don't F*** with Aria" moment, but considering just how high up Aria is on Wyld's axe list, I'll hold it back till the epilogue.
After all. These two ladies don't like the other.
As for how I'm, going to bring off the whole 3 sister thing. I have to admit.....
I'm winging it with a faint idea, regarding all that's happened so far.
And it's going to come down to a mask. Is there enough in what has been written previously to support one? And do furies wear them?
Time to dip into MP mode.
It'll also be helpful to know what Omni-tool weapon Furies have because Naomi's life may hang on it later.
After all. These two ladies don't like the other.
As for how I'm, going to bring off the whole 3 sister thing. I have to admit.....
I'm winging it with a faint idea, regarding all that's happened so far.
And it's going to come down to a mask. Is there enough in what has been written previously to support one? And do furies wear them?
Time to dip into MP mode.
It'll also be helpful to know what Omni-tool weapon Furies have because Naomi's life may hang on it later.
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#163
Posté 19 juillet 2013 - 03:32
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Redbelle wrote...
Considering a "Don't F*** with Aria" moment, but considering just how high up Aria is on Wyld's axe list, I'll hold it back till the epilogue.
After all. These two ladies don't like the other.
As for how I'm, going to bring off the whole 3 sister thing. I have to admit.....
I'm winging it with a faint idea, regarding all that's happened so far.
And it's going to come down to a mask. Is there enough in what has been written previously to support one? And do furies wear them?
Time to dip into MP mode.
It'll also be helpful to know what Omni-tool weapon Furies have because Naomi's life may hang on it later.
You do what you want. Nobody tells you what to do! Just make it entertaining, like you always do
As far as omni-tool weapons go, I'd say pick whatever you want. It seems, according to the insinuation of the MEU, if you can use a biotically enhanced hth attack, that is the way you tend to go. Or, apparently, if you also know Karate....
#164
Posté 19 juillet 2013 - 03:47
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Aaaah, apparently the Fury's heavy is a port and burst. So I think I can go off piste and just makeup something new for her weapon...... Something stabby for effect.
*Edit
i had intended to finish the flashback tonight but found the heatwave so intense I had to go out for icecream.
*Edit
i had intended to finish the flashback tonight but found the heatwave so intense I had to go out for icecream.
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#165
Posté 20 juillet 2013 - 05:05
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Finally, the Flashback is over, and we're back to the group on Earth.
I didn't know I could make Wyld so annoying to the galaxies most dangerous woman. Much less get away with it.........
Ok, it's Aria. Wyld can't just get away with it.
But she'll have to wait for another chapter. Wylds got stuff to do.
I didn't know I could make Wyld so annoying to the galaxies most dangerous woman. Much less get away with it.........
Ok, it's Aria. Wyld can't just get away with it.
But she'll have to wait for another chapter. Wylds got stuff to do.
#166
Posté 20 juillet 2013 - 10:18
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The kissing has begun. And I think they've both forgotten about Naomi standing guard above them.
Wyld's trying to do two things at the same time again. With the usual results.
And Zia's cork finally popped. And how on Earth is Wyld going to cope with that? On top of the fact that this is essentially an area of her life where Zia outranks her.
On the plus side, she can't crush her pelvis like the other poor chap.
Incidently, the view count was 787 when I posted........
Wyld's trying to do two things at the same time again. With the usual results.
And Zia's cork finally popped. And how on Earth is Wyld going to cope with that? On top of the fact that this is essentially an area of her life where Zia outranks her.
On the plus side, she can't crush her pelvis like the other poor chap.
Incidently, the view count was 787 when I posted........
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#167
Posté 21 juillet 2013 - 12:12
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Sorry, took a few days off. Back now.
Things have taken a turn for the worse I dare say. How could things get any worse? Well, we are dealing with reapers, and the dumb assed people did have to go to thermal clips in a galaxy-wide tech downgrade. That was not very smart. Cannibals, banshees and brutes! Oh my! They don't drop thermal clips either!
And our "sick" asari goes off her meds.
Things have taken a turn for the worse I dare say. How could things get any worse? Well, we are dealing with reapers, and the dumb assed people did have to go to thermal clips in a galaxy-wide tech downgrade. That was not very smart. Cannibals, banshees and brutes! Oh my! They don't drop thermal clips either!
And our "sick" asari goes off her meds.
#168
Posté 21 juillet 2013 - 10:20
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Regarding the latest chapter of event's.
Well, I did say it would be a car crash.
Wyld's more distracted than usual.
Zia's discovered a power she has over Wyld. And just needs to decide how best to exploit it while they trundle off to the next fight. (Which means Zia's distracted as well).
And Naomi's just not getting any.
That said, it's time to wave goodbye to Pepper and Gizmo. They were great. But I only brought them all this way to fix the Mako. Now that's done, it's time to squeeze the number of people down in the group again. They'll be fixing things for a long time to come. But the PG team doesn't really have anything else to offer to a group who is off to discover what's happening to make husks with mini dragon teeth.
Well, I did say it would be a car crash.
Wyld's more distracted than usual.
Zia's discovered a power she has over Wyld. And just needs to decide how best to exploit it while they trundle off to the next fight. (Which means Zia's distracted as well).
And Naomi's just not getting any.
That said, it's time to wave goodbye to Pepper and Gizmo. They were great. But I only brought them all this way to fix the Mako. Now that's done, it's time to squeeze the number of people down in the group again. They'll be fixing things for a long time to come. But the PG team doesn't really have anything else to offer to a group who is off to discover what's happening to make husks with mini dragon teeth.
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#169
Posté 21 juillet 2013 - 02:40
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I'm really trying my best to get something up today. It is a time thing...making sure I have enough to sit down and write...only really need a couple of hours but lots of things to do today. Anyway, I may be posting some questions at our group, if you want to check it out.
#170
Posté 21 juillet 2013 - 09:49
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Scene's that didn't make it - I
Zia took Wyld's face in her hands and claimed her lips as her own as she shoved her back against the tyre. Wyld arched and groaned under her assualt and began to wrap her arms around......
"You cheating Wtich"!!!
Damn, thought Zia. Forgot about Naomi. She looked up to see her face, quivering with rage, looking down at them from the Valkyr. "Naomi.... it's just another woman. I can explain"!
"You can't get out of this one Zee"! She shrieked as she fumbled for something in the Valkyr. She drew out a pipe bomb and lit the fuse. "It was supposed to be us! Nobody else! You only went and brought this on yourself"!
She threw the bomb down and ducked behind the Valkyr's armour. Zia and Wyld watched as the fuse hissed an inch away......
Wyld hugged Zia close. "I've always loved you".
"Home Wrecker"! Came the muffled cry from above as the bomb exploded. The Valkyr rocked up onto it's side and came down with a thud. Naomi got up and turned to face the gang who were looking her way with open jaws. She spread out her arms in Triumph and called out....
"Fat-al-ity"!
A smoking Zia staggered into view, glared up at Naomi. and using the Valkyr as support lifted a half hearted fist to the air as she gasped. "Human....... Shield"!
Zia took Wyld's face in her hands and claimed her lips as her own as she shoved her back against the tyre. Wyld arched and groaned under her assualt and began to wrap her arms around......
"You cheating Wtich"!!!
Damn, thought Zia. Forgot about Naomi. She looked up to see her face, quivering with rage, looking down at them from the Valkyr. "Naomi.... it's just another woman. I can explain"!
"You can't get out of this one Zee"! She shrieked as she fumbled for something in the Valkyr. She drew out a pipe bomb and lit the fuse. "It was supposed to be us! Nobody else! You only went and brought this on yourself"!
She threw the bomb down and ducked behind the Valkyr's armour. Zia and Wyld watched as the fuse hissed an inch away......
Wyld hugged Zia close. "I've always loved you".
"Home Wrecker"! Came the muffled cry from above as the bomb exploded. The Valkyr rocked up onto it's side and came down with a thud. Naomi got up and turned to face the gang who were looking her way with open jaws. She spread out her arms in Triumph and called out....
"Fat-al-ity"!
A smoking Zia staggered into view, glared up at Naomi. and using the Valkyr as support lifted a half hearted fist to the air as she gasped. "Human....... Shield"!
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#172
Posté 22 juillet 2013 - 11:48
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Poor Naomi
But honestly I was cheering for Wyld and Zia...dat attitude
Didn't read last few posts yet (bit busy having fun) but when this is all finished, I'm gonna copy paste everything in one novel and read it again...hopefuly there will be some room left when I get back..
Redbelle I can't thank you enough for filling in for me ♥
But honestly I was cheering for Wyld and Zia...dat attitude
Didn't read last few posts yet (bit busy having fun) but when this is all finished, I'm gonna copy paste everything in one novel and read it again...hopefuly there will be some room left when I get back..
Redbelle I can't thank you enough for filling in for me ♥
#173
Posté 22 juillet 2013 - 04:59
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Suddenly I have an urge to go to the market and get some strawberries....
#174
Posté 22 juillet 2013 - 06:03
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Kel Riever wrote...
Lol! Oh, the emotion...
Come now, don't be shy, admit you felt some juices flowing while going through it (especially the kissing description)
I admit it turned me on
#175
Posté 22 juillet 2013 - 06:13
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FuriousFelicia wrote...
Kel Riever wrote...
Lol! Oh, the emotion...
Come now, don't be shy, admit you felt some juices flowing while going through it (especially the kissing description)
I admit it turned me on
Oh, hah. That was a response to the 'piece that didn't make it.' Pipe bombs for revenge and all. On the story there, I am unashamed to admit it is an excellent piece and I totally approve. You may have missed it because I think I sent it in a PM, but I basically stated that I think the above ground groups are kicking a lot more ass than us lowly undergrounders
