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ReubenLiew wrote...

Well, could still use a bit more description like the part where she enters the great hall, you might describe the high, arching ceilings of the tower, it's gothic architecture and the majestic statues that litter the rooms every so often, and how the dim rays of the sun penetrates through the high windows to creat pillars of light in the room...
But it's really just me :D I like your writing because it gets to the point, though :)



Ah, but you already know what it looks like.  I am trying to make sure I at least describe the characters more since I can take liberties, though.

But as far as taking time away from the story to have Moira gawk at her surroundings (or Zevran, who would merely be more interested in where someone could hide to stick a knife in his back, not how pretty the hiding place is) like she'd never seen them before seems to be immersion breaking for me.  I try to sketch things as the main character, or whoever's POV I'm in at the time, comes across things.  If someone's drinking ale, they're just drinking ale, not letting the golden liquid slide down their throat, turning their belly into a brief bonfire.  Unless, of course, it's the first time they've had ale.

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Yeah perhaps :) Although I like prose, they make me happy haha.

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ReubenLiew wrote...

Yeah perhaps :) Although I like prose, they make me happy haha.


That's just because you're an artist. ;)

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the title reminds me of the nicholas sparks book

loved the story btw

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Nicholas Sparks?



Thanks! It's not done yet. More tomorrow.

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Sialater wrote...

Nicholas Sparks?

Thanks! It's not done yet. More tomorrow.


He wrote The Notebook, didn't he?

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I'm intrigued... want more! :D Nicely written Sialater

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amethyst_rose2009 wrote...

Sialater wrote...

Nicholas Sparks?

Thanks! It's not done yet. More tomorrow.


He wrote The Notebook, didn't he?


YES! Posted Image
he also wrote nights in rodanthe, a walk to remember, and the soon to be out movie Dear John

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Well, the title isn't set in stone, so who knows? Glad you like it Marcus.



@ Kulkodar: Thanks! I'm a bit ahead on what I've posted so there'll be a new section a day for awhile.

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Got around to reading this one finally, great work.

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Thanks! I really can handle detailed criticism, as long as it's not stylistic. There's no real point to stylistic criticism.

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Part 6



Moira sighed and stretched. It had been wonderful to get out of that armor. She didn’t put on her mage’s robes, however. They were equally as uncomfortable. Instead, she’d packed a plain white shirt with sleeves gathered at the wrists, a brown leather vest and soft woolen trousers dyed a matching brown. Her short brown boots that stopped at her ankles and went over thick wool socks kept her constantly cold feet warm in the drafty Tower.



Looking around the large room, she realized she was in the very chamber Duncan stayed in when he recruited her. She hadn’t known the man long, just the few days he was here before swooping her off to Ostagar, but that long trip on the road, where all she did was brood and pout and rail against Jowan’s betrayal of the Circle and everything they’d been taught, he had born it with equanimity. He’d then asked her, probably after he was tired of listening to her, what she was more upset with at the time, Jowan’s betrayal of the Circle or of her. It had taken her longer than she liked to admit that she was more upset with Jowan lying to her about his Blood Mage abilities than any wrong he’d done to the Circle. After all, his lies to her showed an incredible distrust in their friendship. Not for the first time, she wondered if her influence as Chancellor and The Hero of Ferelden would get Lily out of prison. She’d written to the Revered Mother in Denerim, but had only gotten a polite dismissal to stay out of Chantry business. Perhaps once she rescued Alistair, she’d take up prison escaping as a hobby and get Lily out. Maybe grab her phylactery on the way. But that was for the future, now, it was time to find out what Zevran had discovered.



Moira watched the assassin wander around the guest room, picking up various items and examining them closely before putting them back down. She wondered if he were looking for occasional weapons or just sating his curiosity. Knowing Zevran, probably both. He’d changed out of his armor, too, wearing a black woolen tunic and snug black leather pants. She wondered if he wore them because she’d once mentioned she liked them on him. She also wondered how many daggers he’d managed to hide under his clothes. She patted the bench beside her. “Zev.”



Smiling, the assassin put down the small wrought silver jewelry box he was examining and walked over to sit with her on the bench, his feet on the opposite side of hers. Moira leaned in to him, almost close enough to kiss. Zevran raised his eyebrows and leaned in, too. He didn’t think she had anything in mind, and was not surprised when she said, “I don’t trust the Tower.”



“Neither do I.”



“Good. Remember Jowan, from Redcliffe?”



He nodded, “The Blood Mage who was hired to poison Arl Eamon.”



“He’s escaped.” Zevran’s breath came out in a rush as if she’d punched him hard in the stomach.



“Let me guess, they want you to find him.”



“Aye. And they want us to take Cullen with us.”



Zevran blinked in surprise, “The unstable Templar? Is that safe? For you, I mean?”



It was Moira’s turn to be surprised. “What are you talking about?”



“I am content to be your friend, even if you never take me to your bed again. Not that I wouldn’t welcome another glorious night of passion in your arms, mind you.” He grinned at her as she blushed and looked away from his eyes. “But I do not require it. This Cullen, however, may not be content to let you be. He seems. . . obsessed. To put it kindly.” Zevran shrugged. “You are spoken for and it bothers him. There’s also the fact that he sees Blood Mages in every closet and around every corner.”



Moira nodded, “As far as blood mages, he’s apparently decided it’s impossible for me to be one. He used to be jealous of Jowan, just because I could actually talk to Jowan out in the open, whereas if he wanted to talk to me, he’d have to meet me clandestinely. ”



Zevran grinned at the image, “Ah, my Warden, such a heartbreaker!”



She punched him lightly in the shoulder, and laughed. “I doubt he’ll be a problem. I just don’t think he’s ever really recovered from what Uldred did to him. Maybe getting him out of here, away from the constant reminders, would do him some good.”



The elf nodded, “You may be right. He admitted he cannot go into the Harrowing chamber any more. The fear and anger are too great.”



Moira dropped her head onto the assassin’s shoulder, facing away from him. “Wonderful. In your vast, worldly experience, do people usually get to have their childhood bite them on the ass this often?”



“No, my Warden, only us lucky few,” he replied, hugging her. He released her and stood up. “Perhaps we should find dinner?”



She looked up at him, “Depends. How social do you want to be?”



“Mages take no vow of celibacy, do they?” He asked with a twinkle in his eye.



She laughed, “No, we definitely do not. Just try not to corrupt too many of them, all right?” She looked around at the room. “I think I’ll just stay here. I don’t really want to revisit my old stomping grounds.” She saw his concerned look, “Don’t worry, I’ll get an apprentice to bring me dinner. I won’t go hungry. And I’ll have Perrin for company.” She stood up and looked at him steadily. “Just . . . watch your back, my friend.”



“As if I had eyes in the back of my skull, my Warden,” he bowed, grinning, and left the room.



Another reason she didn’t want to wander around the Tower, was the memories it would bring. Both of her childhood innocence and of the horror of having it all destroyed by Uldred and his demons.



A knock on her door startled her out of memory. “Come in?” She called.



A young girl dwarf peeked her head around the door. “Chancellor Surana! I’m so glad to see you!” Dagna bounced into the room, radiating enthusiasm. She was wearing apprentice’s robes that had been inexpertly tailored to her tiny frame. Her red hair had gotten a little longer and was braided haphazardly around her face as if the dwarf just didn’t have time to worry about it. She bounced over to Moira and threw a hug around Moira’s waist.



“Uh, hi, Dagna!” Moira replied. “I assume the Tower is treating you well?”



“Well? It’s fantastic! More than I could ever hope for! And it’s all because of you!” The young woman began to rattle off something scholarly sounding she was apparently working on. Moira felt her eyes glaze over, but managed to nod and smile in all the right places. It was apparently enough because Dagna kept chattering at her, excitedly. In the middle of Dagna’s chattering, Moira was distracted by another noise at her doorway. Cullen leaned there, for once not wearing his Templar armor. He looked stunning in the plain black trousers and slightly too tight blue tunic he wore, though. Almost like the novice Templar she’d once fancied herself in love with. Moira froze and felt her face harden at his appearance. Perrin stood up, looked at the dwarf, looked at Moira, then at Cullen. Then the traitorous dog trotted out of the room!



Dagna fell silent, realizing something was distracting her audience. Moira looked down at her and caught an expression of pity cross the young woman’s expressive features as she noticed Cullen, before her innate enthusiasm took over again. “Well, I just wanted to tell you I loved it here, and thank you again for helping me study here! It’s wonderful!” She hugged Moira again, and Moira briefly returned the embrace, though her attention was still on the angry Templar in the doorway. The scholarly dwarf nearly ran out of the room, squeezing by the Templar’s legs.



Moira had rarely seen anyone walk angrily, but somehow, Cullen managed. All her hormones decided to remind her she’s once fancied this man. “Greagoir just told me I’m relieved of my vows. And I have been pawned off on you.” He spat the pronoun at her as if it were a curse.



Moira crossed her arms and looked up at him as he attempted to loom over her, thoughts of childhood infatuations gone. Alistair tried that occasionally when he was angry at her. It didn’t work then, and it certainly didn’t work when it was someone she didn’t love. She stood her ground. “And?”



His hands formed into fists, “A Templar is all that I am, and all that I’ve ever wanted to be! How can you do this to me?” He demanded through clenched teeth.



“I am doing nothing to you, Cullen.”



“You are letting them send me with you! I can’t leave the Tower! What about the Blood Mages?” He snarled.



“Greagoir and Irving will have to deal with them, Cullen. Some battles you cannot fight,” that had been a hard lesson for her to learn, too. She glimpsed Zevran coming into the room behind the Templar, the Mabari entering behind him. The assassin made no move, however. This was hers to handle.



“But this is my battle to fight! Justice needs to be meted out! I need to find them and punish them!”



“That’s not justice, Cullen. That’s vengeance. And vengeance is never something to be sought after at all costs.” When they’d learned about how to kill an Archdemon, Moira and Alistair had both realized their mistake in not making Loghain a Grey Warden. Alistair had blamed himself and his intractable need to avenge Duncan and his half brother. Moira had wanted it for Jowan, and Redcliffe and the Circle, though. Both had been irrational in the heat of that fateful Landsmeet.



“Vengeance is all I have left,” Cullen snarled and turned and stormed out of the room.



“We leave at first light!” She called after him. “Be there, or not. I don’t care!” He waved her off over his shoulder.



Zevran sheathed the dagger he’d palmed. “Are you all right, my dear Moira?” he asked. She realized she was shaking. She sat back down on the bench. Her old friend was in such pain. Her healing abilities had let her feel it, to a certain extent. However, his wounds were not the kind magic could fix. Maybe it hadn’t been a mistake to make Loghain pay for his crimes with his death, not if this was the aftermath of his actions. She mourned the stammering, shy boy who’d once tried to steal a kiss in the library. Zevran sat down next to her and put his arm around her and leaned her head on his shoulder.



“They want me to make him a Grey Warden.” She felt Zevran stiffen beside her.



“They what?” He seemed to ask the question carefully.



“They want me to make him a Grey Warden,” she repeated, lifting her head off his shoulder.



“And would you do such a thing?” There was an odd note in his voice she didn’t understand. She looked at him, searchingly. His tattooed face with its sun bronzed lines gave no secrets away. Which meant he was wounded by something she’d said.



“I don’t know. I did want to talk to you about it. And to Alistair, of course.” Moira sighed, “Two of the three people at my Joining died, Zevran. And one at Alistair’s. It’s not good odds. I’d be sentencing him to death.”



“Is he the only one you’d consider making a Grey Warden?” He spoke slowly.



She searched his face for his meaning, “Are you asking to be recruited, Zevran?”



He gave her an indecipherable shrug. “Maybe I am, maybe I am not. It is a problem for another day, is it not?” He pulled her back to leaning on him.


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Ahh I'm loving this. Excellent work :)

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To quoteh the Macdonalds, I'm loving it :D I can smell the tension and frustration in the air already!

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Very well done! You're very good at leaving us hanging, waiting for the next chapter. How can we not come looking for it? Your descriptions are nicely done, too, as I can see the tower room, the clothing they're wearing. This is how I like my books to read!

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Millat: Thank you, I'm glad you're liking it!



Reuben: You ain't seen nothing, yet. ;)



Kulkodar: I'm glad I'm getting repeat customers, so to speak. I hope you enjoy reading future chapters as much as I enjoyed writing them.

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Oooh, you changed the ending on that chapter, Sia, from when I read, didn't you?  I like it. Posted Image

Modifié par amethyst_rose2009, 19 janvier 2010 - 09:41 .


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Will she be able to keep her chastity all the way to Weisshaupt? Damn elves and their leather pants.

And another templar to boot.



*goes back to awaiting next part eagerly*

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Am: Yeah, I realized she'd be upfront with Zevran about that. And not "forget" to tell him.



Uhl: I'm very mean to my heroines. Very, very mean.

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Sialater wrote...

Am: Yeah, I realized she'd be upfront with Zevran about that. And not "forget" to tell him.

Uhl: I'm very mean to my heroines. Very, very mean.


No, I meant the part about Zev asking to become a gray warden. I remember her telling Zev that Cullen was possibly going to become one, but I didn't remember the part where Zev asked her about it.  Whichever the case, I like it this way better.  Zev as a gray warden, wow. Posted Image

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I didn't end up with the card saying he did anything other than follow her. So, it's a possibility.

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Thanks! I really can handle detailed criticism, as long as it's not stylistic. There's no real point to stylistic criticism.


Well most of the criticism I would have is based on your style which is why I didn't really say anything ;). I could nitpick but no real point. Only thing I would suggest is expand your vocabulary a bit, create more of a variety in your sentences which in turn will help make the story flow better. Overall good work though.

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I just started reading, and WOW. I'm probably gona have to come back to this page at least 3 times a day now XD

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TheMadCat wrote...

Thanks! I really can handle detailed criticism, as long as it's not stylistic. There's no real point to stylistic criticism.


Well most of the criticism I would have is based on your style which is why I didn't really say anything ;). I could nitpick but no real point. Only thing I would suggest is expand your vocabulary a bit, create more of a variety in your sentences which in turn will help make the story flow better. Overall good work though.


Can I ask you to clarify on that bolded part? 

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Part 7



In the morning, Moira was in the foyer of the Tower, trying to figure out how to fit three pounds of lyrium and enough vials and concentration agents for it in hers and Zevran’s pack. Cullen was suddenly there, looming over the two of them crouched on the floor. Moira stood up, dusting her hands off. She was in a similar outfit from yesterday, just in black leather and wool with a white shirt. It made her skin seem translucent and her eyes glow with a blue fire. When she’d answered the door this morning, Zevran’s eyes had traveled from her face, down to her toes and back up again, grinned lazily, not a single sign of his temper last night, and then said, “Are you sure we must leave? Right now?” Moira made a mental note to wear black around Alistair more.



Apparently, Cullen agreed with Zevran’s earlier comment, he swallowed and flushed, glancing away. He was wearing armor that didn’t fit him quite as well as his Templar armor did. She could see gaps that would stand out like red flags if they were attacked. “Have you decided to come?” She asked, her hands on her hips.



He met her eyes again, “Yes, if you’ll allow me. Greagoir’s made it clear there’s nothing for me here.”



Moira nodded sharply, “Fine, take a third of the lyrium supplies. We’ll get you better armor on the other side of the lake.”



His eyes widened, “I . . . I have no money for that.”



“Consider it a gift. If you’re going to be fighting by my side . . . our side, I can’t have you going down like a ten copper street **** in Denerim.” She heard Zevran choke back a laugh behind her. Cullen’s icy façade even cracked enough for a smile. “Good, I’m glad we’re in agreement.” She turned to look at Zevran, “Looks like we’ll be paying a visit to The Griffon’s Rest, after all.”



Zevran grinned, “I’m sure Oghren would be glad to stand us a pint or two.”



“Or three or four,” Moira finished, handing the third pack Zevran just finished filling to Cullen.



“Wait, it’s barely dawn! A pint?” Cullen objected.



Zevran shook his head, “My dear Templar, you’ll have to learn that as an adventurer and fighting man, you will take your pleasures as you find them. A pint for breakfast merely gets the blood flowing.” He looked at Moira, “That depends, however, if one isn’t . . . unwise . . . enough to challenge our dwarven friend to a drinking contest over breakfast and then try to walk all day afterwards.”



Moira laughed, “Hey! No telling tales out of school!”



“I am merely trying to tell our Templar friend the . . . challenges . . . he might face traveling with us,” Zevran grinned and arched his eyebrows.



“Let’s get going. I don’t have time for you to stand around all day and malign my character,” Moira said, laughing. She picked up one of the packs and looked down at her Mabari. “You have it easy. All you have to do is stand around and look menacing, the rest of us have to haul your breakfast.” The Mabari panted in that short way that meant he was laughing.



The Tower was quiet. Only the servants were up at this hour and the ever present Templar door guards who were ignoring them. Greagoir and Irving had opted not to see her and her friends off. She couldn’t blame them, she’d rather be snug in a warm bed at this hour, too. With Alistair.



The trip across the lake wasn’t too bad, though she worried what would happen if Cullen fell overboard in that ill fitting, heavy armor. Zevran sat in the prow, sharing an apple with Perrin. No one spoke, the ferryman filled the silence with his own voice, chattering about things Moira didn’t listen to. It had been ages since she’d seen Oghren. She wondered how he and Felsi were doing. She and Alistair had divided the money they’d collected on their adventures between everyone else. After all, the king of Ferelden and his chancellor wouldn’t need the coin. Shale and Wynne had taken their money and traveled to Tevinter to find a cure for Shale’s golemnization. Lelianna had taken her money to finance the search for Marjolaine. Sten, well, Sten did whatever it was Qunari do with money. It probably paid for his travel back to his homeland, but beyond that, Moira didn’t really know what he’d done with it. Morrigan had left, melted away in the night after the Archdemon was slain, Alistair’s child quickening in her belly, refusing material assistance. Oghren had wooed Felsi and bought the Spoiled Princess and renamed it The Griffon’s Rest. Zevran had stayed in Denerim, of course. She didn’t really know what he’d done with the money, either. She made another mental note to ask him one day. She laughed to herself silently, wondering if she’d ever read these mental notes.



The Griffon’s Rest looked almost no different from The Spoiled Princess. The biggest change was the benches and tables out front. Oghren had apparently taken to liking the sky since his exile from Orzammar. The exterior of the inn was also in much better repair than it had been under its previous owner.



Oghren was out front, even at this ridiculously early hour. The sun was just peering over the treetops. Oghren was sitting on one of his benches, a pint next to him on the table, watching the sunrise reflect off Lake Calenhad. The dwarf looked odd without his armor, he was dressed in plain grey trousers and vest over a blue shirt. Moira felt her face crack into a huge grin at seeing one of her old friends sitting happy and content. After all, that was what she and Alistair had fought for. Not necessarily to save Ferelden, but to save all their friends. Oghren had been headed for the Deep Roads himself, probably as a member of the Legion of the Dead, before two green Grey Wardens had recruited him to their cause. Now, he was sitting enjoying a sunrise with his favorite beverage. The door to the inn opened and shut and a small child ran out to throw himself? Herself? Onto Oghren for a hug. Moira felt her heart catch. She glanced over at Zevran and realized he was grinning from ear to ear, too. The dwarf finally noticed their approach and set his child down, his thick red beard split by a broad grin.



“Moira! Zevran! It’s sodding good to see you!” the dwarf’s gravelly voice carried across the grass. Moira quickened her pace and knelt down to give the dwarf a hug. He no longer felt as solid as he once had, but then, he’d probably not needed to pick up an axe and kill a glenlock in a while, either. Before she could ask after Felsi and the little one currently hiding behind her father, Oghren glared up at the Templar at Moira’s back. “Still collecting lost Chantry flunkies, Moira?” The Dwarf’s voice had hardened as he glared up at Cullen.



Moira, confused, looked from one to the other. Cullen merely glared down at both of them. Oghren crossed his arms and planted his feet as if ready for a fight. “Cullen?”



“I questioned him about lyrium missing from the Tower,” Cullen said, scowling and looking away.



“He came in here, insulted me, picked a fight with one of my waiters and trashed my common room.” Oghren looked at Moira, “Apparently, he’d forgotten who my friends are. As if I’d do anything to upset you or the boy.” Oghren looked back at Cullen, “If he’d asked nicely, I could have told him the rumors I’d been hearing. Hmpf.”



Cullen had the grace to look embarrassed. Moira’s legs were cramping from crouching in front of Oghren. Zevran had already claimed a bench and was silently watching the dwarf and the human. Moira caught his eye and he shrugged one shoulder, cryptically. She moved to sit on the bench opposite the other elf. Her stomach took the opportunity to rumble, loudly. Oghren laughed, his attention pulled back from anger at the former Templar. “Moira, go tell your mother to get four pints of ale and bring us some breakfast. Tell her the Grey Warden’s here.”



Moira’s eyes widened at the name he’d given the little dwarf girl. She had her mother’s adorable face, and Oghren’s bright red hair done up into two braids pinned at her crown. Wordlessly the child scampered off, flinging open the tavern door and allowing it to slam shut behind her. Moira directed her wide eyed stare to Oghren. Zevran laughed. “Is she as much a handful as her namesake?” He asked the dwarf.



Oghren laughed loudly, “She’s certainly trying to be! She’s not old enough to do much, but she started talking in full sentences immediately. She didn’t have a first word, she had a first command!” The pride in his voice was unmistakable.



Moira felt a lump in her throat, she couldn’t seem to swallow around. Zevran laughed, “I think you rendered our dear Moira speechless, Oghren!”



Oghren laughed louder. When he finally calmed down, “Stop looking at me like that, Warden. You saved me, down there in the Deep Roads. Naming a child after you was a small favor. Haven’t decided if we’ll name the next one after the boy, though. He’s probably got enough children under the age of two named for him. Ran into sodding Alista and an Alistaira the other day. About made me ill, naming girls after the boy and not you.” Felsi came out of the tavern at that point, carrying a steaming platter of food outside. Moira felt the familiar clench in her stomach, watching Oghren’s wife, his very pregnant wife, carry their food out to them. Not for the first time, she rubbed her abdomen surreptitiously. It didn’t happen often, but it did hurt to see a woman carrying a child while she knew she could not. At least, not Alistair’s child. And that was what really rankled about Morrigan.



She smiled in greeting, however, just as brightly as when she’d approached Oghren. Zevran beat her and Oghren to getting the platter from the diminutive woman, however. Once relieved of the platter, Felsi came over to greet Moira. The two women embraced, Moira bending around the baby. While the food was on the table, the talk turned to Felsi and the upcoming birth of Oghren’s second child. The sun climbed higher in the sky.



It wasn’t long before the platter sat empty and even Cullen looked to be less irritated on a full stomach. The two dwarves sat closely together on the bench they shared, little Moira on Oghren’s knee. Oghren belched and took another swallow of ale. “So, what brings you out of Denerim, Warden?” The dwarf refused to call her Chancellor, as if being a Grey Warden and their senior officer outranked a mere bureaucrat. In a way, Moira guessed he was right.



She and Zevran exchanged a glance. Before she could say anything, Zevran spoke, “Alistair’s gotten himself in trouble.” Cullen looked up at that. Moira figured he was also curious as to why she and Zevran were traveling around.



Oghren sat his pint down hard. “The sodding boy can’t even stay out of trouble as King?”



Zevran shrugged. “The Grey Wardens ordered him to Weisshaupt.”



Oghren looked at Moira out of the corner of his eye, “I thought you were the sodding Warden Commander? Why wouldn’t they summon you, instead? And why would that boy think leaving his sodding kingdom for any reason a good sodding idea?”



“They must have gotten wrong information. Or perhaps, since he’s technically senior to me and king, they made an assumption. A wrong one, but an assumption, nonetheless.” She sighed, “Or perhaps, like I told him, it’s because I’m an elf.” And a woman, she added silently.



Oghren snorted and Zevran chuckled. Cullen merely watched her. “Someone else underestimating you, Warden. I never sodding get tired of that,” Oghren laughed.



“So, we stopped by to get Cullen some better armor. I can’t have him fighting in that junk,” Moira waved her hand vaguely at the ex-Templar. “And to see if you’d heard any rumors.”



Oghren ran a considering eye over the big man. “By the stone, the Chantry forge you boys from the same mold?” He glanced an amused eye at Moira, “Now, no sodding getting this one confused for the other one some dark night, Warden.” He laughed uproariously at his own joke. Moira and Zevran joined him, used to Oghren’s sense of humor. Cullen turned a bright scarlet and stormed off.



Moira stopped laughing first. That man needed to relax. It might be a good idea to talk to Zevran about taking him to the first ****house they came to. She took a long drink of her ale as the others’ laughter died down. “What rumors?”



Oghren nodded to Felsi and the dwarven woman took their daughter and disappeared inside the tavern. He looked down at his pint. “Someone’s been buying up lyrium. Sometimes even stealing it. And no, not like we did to keep you and Wynne and Morrigan in fighting form. This is ridiculous amounts. Merchants have ended up dead for not selling.” Moira and Zevran looked at each other, each thinking of the bandits that had attacked them on the way to the Tower.