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Prodigal is COMPLETE. Final chapter SFW. The whole thing? Not so much.


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ReubenLiew

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Sagacious Rage wrote...

Aw, thanks, Reuben! Yeah I may go back and revise those earlier chapters. Part of the skipping around is me assuming that anybody bothering to read it has played the game, so I just tell the parts of the story that change because of who she is, you know?

But yeah chapters 2, 3, & 4 in particular. I go back and read them and I think: "Ugh." Of course, by the time I finish I'll probably feel that way about chapters...5-end so who knows. I still like 1.


Yeah I more or less gathered that :) Although it was still a little bit confusing at first but I more or less settled with it ^_^

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Sagacious Rage wrote...

I had to argue for "epic fail". The husband told me it was "too cute" but I was like "Well, somebody should have told BioWare that when they put it in the game

Which is why I approve of this choice, as much at Tas will hate me for it! :innocent:

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Sagacious Rage wrote...
One of these days I am going to write the epic tale of Bizarro!Alistair, Barbie: the Barbarian Queen and Vesuvio Horseloin III.

I WANT THIS STORY SO HARD IT HURTS

:wub:

Modifié par odiedragon, 22 janvier 2010 - 04:35 .


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Herr Uhl

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ReubenLiew wrote...
-edit- Oh, and a little note, Thedas IS the name of the world, so when Alistair says best girl mage in Thedas, maybe the entire world, you're saying it twice :)
Unless I'm horribly wrong, then ignore this part.


You are wrong, Thedas is the continent. Par Vollen is not Thedas for example.
Unless I'm horribly wrong that is.

*goes back to reading*

#30
ReubenLiew

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Really? I always thought Thedas was referring to the world...

Then ignore me, I'm just being silly then. *nods*

#31
Sagacious Rage

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According to the unofficial wiki Thedas is the name of the continent. dragonage.wikia.com/wiki/Thedas That's what I was going off of, anyway.

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ReubenLiew

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That'll teach me to say stuff anymore *nods*

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Tasmen

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odiedragon wrote...

Sagacious Rage wrote...

I had to argue for "epic fail". The husband told me it was "too cute" but I was like "Well, somebody should have told BioWare that when they put it in the game

Which is why I approve of this choice, as much at Tas will hate me for it! :innocent:


My hate is strong and pure......

#34
Sagacious Rage

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Wynne has some very good advice for Maebh! She doesn't listen! The
Brecilian Forest is completed in about thirty words! Maebh finally
keeps her promise to Teagan! Rated M for...plot reasons

www.fanfiction.net/s/5612769/18/

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AdorableAnarchist

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I take a couple of days away due to family stuff and come back to this! YAY!!!!! Awesome!

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Sialater

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Finally! At least she didn't wait for Landsmeet!

#37
ReubenLiew

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Heh, Brecillian forest, who needs em? ;)

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Sagacious Rage

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Honestly there was nothing going on in there that affected Maebh's character arc at all. So, just -insert whatever happened in-game here-

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ReubenLiew

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*nods* Fair enough, who cares about those elves anyway ;)

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Tasmen

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ReubenLiew wrote...

Heh, Brecillian forest, who needs em? ;)


Hush you...forest makes for good sex landscape *whistle*

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Sagacious Rage

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It does, doesn't it?

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Tasmen

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Sagacious Rage wrote...

It does, doesn't it?


Trees make for great back support...

#43
AdorableAnarchist

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Tasmen wrote...

Sagacious Rage wrote...

It does, doesn't it?


Trees make for great back support...


A little rope, some fluffy leaves, maybe some sap.... Yeah, works for me.

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tallon1982

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Trees are also good for cooking...you know BBQ...

#45
AdorableAnarchist

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Mmmm, BBQ.... I know what I want for lunch tomorrow!

#46
Sagacious Rage

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WHY DOES IT ALWAYS END IN BBQ?

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AdorableAnarchist

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Because BBQ is the pinnacle of all that is good in the world?

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tallon1982

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It's smokey goodness in your choice of meat...give in to the taint erm I mean BBQ

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Tasmen

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tallon1982 wrote...

It's smokey goodness in your choice of meat...give in to the taint erm I mean BBQ


That's my only complaint about DA:O, not enough meat choices.

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Sagacious Rage

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Loghain waltzes into Eamon's estate like he owns the place! He's a big
jerk! Maebh tries to tear out Cauthrien's eyes! She then rescues Anora,
who's a big jerk and assumes everybody else is, too! Maebh gets the
crap kicked out of her in Fort Drakon! Sisterly reunions rarely go as planned, just ask Alistair!

www.fanfiction.net/s/5612769/19/Prodigal

I also want you to know that I managed to produce this EVEN THOUGH ME2 IS IN MY XBOX RIGHT NOW AS WE SPEAK