Sagacious Rage wrote...
Aw, thanks, Reuben! Yeah I may go back and revise those earlier chapters. Part of the skipping around is me assuming that anybody bothering to read it has played the game, so I just tell the parts of the story that change because of who she is, you know?
But yeah chapters 2, 3, & 4 in particular. I go back and read them and I think: "Ugh." Of course, by the time I finish I'll probably feel that way about chapters...5-end so who knows. I still like 1.
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