erezike wrote...
First the VS were never too smart to begin with on me1. ashley was always too suspicios and kaiden was always too much of a goody goody wrex was the brain in me1. the VS heard the rumors of shepard coming back from the dead and working for the terrorist organization . how could they know its even shepard. the same face yes, but they dont know anything more than that. and now shepard shows just up when the collectors attack right after they almost got killed. they were shaken, their behaviour is understandable. it show they are human beings.
Their skepticism is not the issue. The instant you mention Cerberus (you're forced to), they go on a tangent and lose any form of reason, speculating Cerberus might be behind the colony attacks despite the correlation being nonexistent. Not once does the narrative allow us to challenge them, citing Shepard's reasons. Bear in mind, both Ashley and Kaidan openly committed munity ME1, yet give Shepard not the slightest bit of leeway to explain herself.
This is a classic case of a decent idea, crippled by poor execution. An I contest the notion either lacked intelligence. Kaidan, in particular is played as a level-headed and calm individual who tends to assess the situation. His characterization was all but infused into Ashley's emotional outbursts.
Going through the omega 4 relay means taking risks, installing the reaper tech was the only way. edi was made part reaper tech and has already proven itf value, it was a risky game but sometimes you cant play it safe. you have to take risks. the timing for leaving the ship was problematic. my best guess is that they assumed this process to be of very low risk and were proven wrong. shepard wanted to make as much as possibile in due time and decided to go off ship in order to complete another mission. it could also be the case that testing iff needed the normandy not to be in ftl speed which would further slow down shepard progress
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Harby wanted shepard, becauase shepard was uniqe. this is why he didnt simply destroy the normandy, he expected to find shepard on the normandy. harbinger couldnt know that the normandy would be able to overcome the collectors hacking. he underestimated edi's capabilities.
Risks are fine if they are not inherently stupid. The crew makes no effort to test the IFF. What if it were a virus that cripples the Normandy... yeah. Better even, it could have disabled or sabotaged EDI, whose subsequent rampancy would be severe. If nothing else, dock the ship in a safe environment to minimize risk. Were they to perform the installation while in Citadel space, the Collectors would be screwed. Instead, the crew compounds the situation by
leaving the Normandy. By making assumptions, you are inventing a narrative that was not properly articulated, which is the job of the writers. Omitting the actual mission is a complete cop out, especially as this is the only time in the entire series - Citadel DLC notwithstanding - we bring the entire crew on a mission. No adequate reason is ever presented to justify these actions.
While this angle is mentioned, the narrative never attempts to justify why the Reapers have any interest in Shepard or why she is unique. And no, "You defeated Sovereign" is not enough. In fact, Harbinger undermines his supposed agenda by willingly opting to kill Shepard in every one of their encounters instead of actually attempting to abduct him - the very beginning of the game goes against this logic. When the villain in a position to win uncontested, it is the responsibility of the narrative to provide legitimate context why this option is either not chosen or thwarted. At no point do we ever discover why Shepard is unique, if anything, the series seems to downplay that aspect.
Harbinger already knew of EDI's capabilities. She only just hacked his entire ship two plot missions ago. That is not underestimating the enemy, it is plain incompetence.
I accept tim arguements, it was an obvious trap but maybe not to all players which is why it gives shep the chance to be mad about it.
Tim later talk strategy with you, because peraphes now after you have managed to overcome their computers you can also encrypt your transsmisions in a realiable manner. And peraphes it is a risk he is willing to take. earlier it wouldnt have benefited him for shepard to know about the collectors. he could have only lose an advantage for informing shepard of the trap. now he has to inform shepard of his plans in order to advance their fight against the collectors. its not ideal but it all he has.
Harbinger allows Edi acess, in order to have easier hacking into the normandy and take control from it. if he wouldnt have enabled the connection he would a much harder time doing so.
That would be fine, if Shepard was given the option to contest or make mention of it prior to the mission. At no instance are we able to call into question the remarkably coincidental circumstances until the end, where Shepard is forced into a passive aggressive whine. Regardless, TIM's justifications are completely illogical and you are again investing the narrative. The games does not ever speculate on these claims and TIM's betrayal is never mentioned thereafter.
You are speculating here. Nevertheless, he still allows vital data to be analyzed, when there is no reason to provide his enemies with such. His ambush is also laughably inept as an army of Collectors on their own ship cannot prevent three soldiers from escaping.
The reapers were gathering information the species, they were building their prototype in secret and preparing for their assault on the galaxy. the collectors premature harvesting was part of this plan.
It could have played a better role if mass effect 3 had a better following plot which is easily done.
But drew left for start wars and his plots were neglected in favor for macs movie.
Except their plan had no basis, nor conclusion. They could never have acquired the necessary amount of humans to finish and the narrative does not even attempt to explain the rationale behind their motivation or how the Human-Reaper would function. This is especially rendered meaningless when Arrival revealed they had a backdoor alternative that was significantly better and far less conspicuous. ME3 beat it into the ground when the Reapers arrived six months later.
CaptainZaysh wrote...
Bourne Endeavor wrote...
Why it is objectivity is because the basis for my criticism is not emotion, but through the use of literacy tools at our disposal.
That's absurd, pompous and narcissistic. Also, "literacy" doesn't mean what you think it means.
And yet still accurate, otherwise you would have refuted my points. The whole basis of criticism is established on rules in literature writers must abide by, although creative leeway does exist with some. And yes, I meant "literary." My mistake.
Modifié par Bourne Endeavor, 26 juin 2013 - 04:34 .