David7204 wrote...
#1. The victory is Shepard's reunion with the old crew and the character development that comes with it.
#2.The entire new crew, the break up of the old crew, new Normandy, working with Cerberus, EDI, the Illusive Man...That fact that those circumstances could have arisen from alternate circumstances is true of pretty much anything.
#3. Perhaps the Illusive Man understands that there are things more important and more valuble than muscle. After all, he's only a single man himself.
#4. Lazarus is not a cure for death.
1. My original point is that this victory isn't earned by any of the protagonists' actions; it simply happens to him or her as a result of off-screen events (Liara recovering the body, the Lazarus research, etc.), none of which Shepard has a hand in. I don't want to say that death and rebirth always has to signal a victory, but the point is that there should be some meaning to such a gesture; I'm struggling to find it.
2. I agree with you that there are always an infinite number of ways to move any plot from point A to point B. But I think that some ways just work better than others, and unless you're working a specific thematic angle, it's best to keep things simple, lest you raise more questions than you're prepared to answer.
Another nerdy example: Luke is spurred by the influence of Obi-Wan and the death of his aunt and uncle to join the Rebellion after an initial Refusal. Alternatively, Lucas could have written the script so that Luke is recruited by an alternative reality version of himself who comes through a tear in reality created by a fuschia-matter-induced singularity, but that would be pretty dumb. If you want to go with this seemingly silly version of Star Wars, it better be because you want to bring certain themes to the forefront, like something about ways our lives could have been but weren't, the dangers of fuschia matter, etc. Again, I didn't see this with Lazarus.
3. The point I tried to make here is that I'm not particularly fond of the idea that of all sentient beings in the whole galaxy, only Shepard has more to offer than muscle. Maybe you're okay with that idea; if so, we'll just have to agree to disagree.
4. This looks like it could get into a really trivial semantic debate, so I'll pass.
EDIT: Fixed the quote and punctuation.
Modifié par osbornep, 31 juillet 2013 - 04:09 .