As a fellow Writer, this does look interesting based on the synopsis, and I can't really criticize much, mainly because I've never dabbled too much in larger works, but I will admit the synopsis seems a little bit cliché and the character, at least to me, seems a little bit like a Mary Sue; an ordinary, lonely young woman who's faced the rather ordinary protagonist situation of "Deceased parents" and "Life trauma", but suddenly becomes extremely important to how things go that people have to rely on by sheer chance.
I'd like to give it a read, but first impressions do mean a great deal in some situations, and I will admit my first impression is not all that great. I'm not at all judging or giving opinions on the rest of it, though. I'd like to see how it goes, and if my first impression is proven wrong.
Modifié par Foshizzlin, 13 août 2013 - 01:32 .