Wulfram wrote...
It's an exposition dump delivered by a faux symbolic glowing child. That's not a good ending to anything.
Funny thing is, you could almost make it work with proper foreshadowing, actual emphasis placed on the Synthetic/Organic conflict and Saren delivering the lines. Why? Saren is a relatable character we can associate with. Anderson or even TIM could equally fill the role for similar reasons.
Another necessary change would be a proper climax. Player tension is never allowed to dissipate. We have our emotional farewell to the squad - which were good - but are immediately thrust back into combat and by the time the slog through London is over, we've forgotten all the dialogue and the emotional high is gone. You need to ease out tension as the story is approaching its "dramatic conclusion," not ramp it back up again, only for it to abruptly end.
I have no idea what they were thinking with the Quarian/Geth conflict that runs completely contradictory to everything the Catalyst says. If anything, peace should never have been an option to emphasis this supposed inevitable conflict.
Modifié par Bourne Endeavor, 16 août 2013 - 10:35 .





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