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[ElliotRobinson]

Hi, I'm currently writing a fan ficition detailing Garrus' investigation into Dr. Saleon, the salarain geneticist.

This is my first attempt at writing any fan ficiton so I would very much appreciaite any feedback, both positive or negative, if anyone is intrigued enough to sample my prologue.

Blurb: Tasked to monitor black market trade on the Citadel, C-Sec officer Garrus Vakarian notices an increase in the trade of organs and begins an investigation that will expose the disturbing scheme of an insidious salarian geneticist...

Link: http://www.fanfictio...Effect-Incision

Thanks 

[N7 Shadow 90]

Really good! Well detailed and interesting writing style.

[ElliotRobinson]

N7 Shadow 90 wrote...

Really good! Well detailed and interesting writing style.

Thank you very much - that means a lot! Be sure to check back for updates.

[N7 Shadow 90]

You gonna be updating this thread?

[ElliotRobinson]

N7 Shadow 90 wrote...

You gonna be updating this thread?

Yes, I'll update when future chapters go live

[N7 Shadow 90]

I'll be sure to look out for them!