That there will be some discussion, is a given and I'd like it, but any outright bashing will not be that appreciated.
So here are my 'two cents' for a possible alternate reaper origin, based on ME1 and ME2 and maybe inspired by parts of ME3, just for fun (writing is along-time hobby of mine). So yes, I will try to wet some of the dry stuff here and there:D
While also talking about this with another member, I asked myself a few questions and tried to find a simple and logical answer, though it's all pure conjecture and very subjective I'm sure.
My questions and the answers that come to mind:
Why make it easier for species to get to mass effect level of technology? Faster harvesting; also as noted by the member I talked to, so they don’t use other kinds of technology the Reapers wouldn’t know how to counteract; ‘Your civilization is based on the technology of the mass relays. Our technology. By using it, your civilization develops along the paths we desire. We impose order on the chaos of organic life. You exist because we allow it, and you will end because we demand it.’ –Sovereign. ‘Putting a fence around your cattle’, paraphrasing my fellow member.
Side question answered: Why make it easier for species to get to mass effect level of technology? Faster harvesting
Side question answered: What is the harvesting for? Making new Reapers
Side question answered: Why would only space-flight species be smart enough to be turned into a Reaper? Otherwise they would keep all organic species dumb for easy harvesting… Or a Reaper made from non-sentient species is worthless.
Why not keep producing the same space-flight species to harvest them and make new Reapers? They might eventually find a way to kill the Reapers if the war goes on long enough (what could have almost happened with the Protheans because of the resistance they put up and maybe some info from previous cycles)
So, suppose they need space flight sentient species to make new Reapers and they cannot avoid the species rebelling, ultimately quite effectively, against the harvesting, what are they to do? Keep continuing the cycle until a solution comes to them; they are deluded by their arrogance, but they still need to die
But… Why do they need to make new Reapers in the first place?
Before I present the alternate origins that members suggested and I figured could work, let’s check Sovereign’s quotes for some glaring inconsistencies that everyone will sure find in my alternate origins and goals of the Reapers. Sure, Sovereign could be lying, but ME2 and ME3 shows what is just a threat made out of arrogance and what is all too true. I could use all the quotes from ME2 and ME3, but that would be too much. And Sovereign’s quotes combined with events from ME2 and some of ME3, already seem to rule out some of the possibilities.
Without further ado, the magnificently hammy Sovereign, the Vanguard of your destruction (or not so magnificent, that’s anyone’s opinion).
Sovereign: We have no beginning. We have no end. We are infinite. Millions of years after your civilization has been eradicated and forgotten, we will endure.
Sovereign: We are eternal. The pinnacle of evolution and existence. Before us, you are nothing. Your extinction is inevitable. We are the end of everything.
Guess not, Sovereign. *Shepard Fist*
Sovereign: We are legion. The time of our return is coming. Our numbers will darken the sky of every world.
Okay, true story.
Sovereign: We impose order on the chaos of organic evolution. You exist because we allow it, and you will end because we demand it.
Sovereign: Rudimentary creatures of blood and flesh. You touch my mind, fumbling in ignorance, incapable of understanding.
Sovereign: Reaper? A label created by the Protheans to give voice to their destruction. In the end, what they chose to call us is irrelevant. We simply... are.
Sovereign: There is a realm of existence so far beyond your own you cannot even imagine it. I am beyond your comprehension. I am Sovereign.
More arrogance, but possibly referring to them being the pinnacle of all organic evolution, indoctrination and the Reapers trying to look like Space Chtulhus even if they might not be as uberpowerful. Possibly referring to dark space and again a ‘you are but cosmic specks of dust’ speech like Harbinger likes to give. Reapers sure are hammy:D
Sovereign: Organic life is nothing but a genetic mutation, an accident. Your lives are measured in years and decades. You wither and die. We are eternal, the pinnacle of evolution and existence. Before us, you are nothing. Your extinction is inevitable. We are the end of everything.
Sovereign: Confidence born of ignorance. The cycle cannot be broken.
Sovereign: The pattern has repeated itself more times than you can fathom. Organic civilizations rise, evolve, advance, and at the apex of their glory they are extinguished. The Protheans were not the first. They did not create the Citadel. They did not forge the mass relays. They merely found them - the legacy of my kind.
Sovereign: Your civilization is based on the technology of the mass relays. Our technology. By using it, your civilization develops along the paths we desire. We impose order on the chaos of organic life. You exist because we allow it, and you will end because we demand it.
Sovereign: My kind transcends your very understanding. We are each a nation - independent, free of all weakness. You cannot grasp the nature of our existence.
Pinnacle of evolution, there it is! More arrogance, apex glory, built the mass relays and Citadel (spoilers!), made a fence around the cattle (or gave them crutches to stand up which the Reapers can easily use to cripple them again, if you’re still following the broken as heck metaphor) and a bit about the Reapers being a nation each on their own, maybe even a consensus? Anyway, the Reapers being made of a whole organic race seems to be a quite logical revelation in ME2, though that’s just my guess as to how Bioware planned some stuff.
Sovereign: Your words are as empty as your future. I am the Vanguard of your destruction. This exchange is over...
Boy, I really want to kill him again now.
So as you’ll probably see as you skim what’s down below, I already have a clear favorite among the alternate Reaper origins. But let’s try to bring logic into this, very dangerous. Let’s go to the last of my questions that led to several options as to what origin the Reapers have and what their motives might are as a result. Note: I purposefully excluded the official origin from the answers to my questions, since that would kind of defeat the purpose of finding an alternate origin, for fun.
But… Why do they need to make new Reapers in the first place?
- It could be their former organic drive to reproduce.
My personal opinion is that this is a very good reason… to rid the world of Reapers. That’s just me.
Let me elaborate: if you can make Mass Effect Relays, the Citadel, orchestrate thousands of cycles of death and destruction because you can’t get such a flaw out of your system or hive mind…
Spoiler for Halo!!!
Well, you have the Flood (Halo) with technology really. *shudder* Did I just imagine that?
- Or if they truly are immortal, as some members suggested they could just want to spend their immortality discovering everything there is to know about the cosmos and the lesser races should serve them in their pursuit.
That would explain having to harvest space-flight smart races… and even leaves room for arrogance. But then you’d also really want them to die, because even if cooperating with races in the past didn’t work out, or you’re too arrogant to ask and just demand their servitude (not unlike the Protheans), thousands of cycles of genocide and sacrificing other races for the quest for ‘knowledge’ makes you an abusive God we should be freed from by killing that God/those Gods… or you could have a high enough Paragon or Renegade count that you Charm or Intimidate them into stopping all of this. If people would have considered that the crowning achievement of Shepard. And the Crucible was planned as some sort of weapon in ME3 sans ending (which WAS extensively peer reviewed, even if you don’t agree with their writing decisions), so it could be used as a threat to make the Reapers change their minds… or be wiped out. Letting the Reapers live might’ve been too stupid, but killing them while they were so deluded in their quest for knowledge or just wiping an enemy out because they’re too dangerous, could not go over well with how you handled the krogan and the geth… unless the decisions you made with them influence your final decision, so you have to stay true to your choices, instead of being able to overwrite anything.
- Could be that they think every species should become a Reaper.
-> An arrogant apex race. Yep, pretty much fits the bill. But more on this in the next answer, which combines with it.
- Or maybe Reapers aren’t as perfect as they or the species they harvest believe. For example, the ‘pinnacle of organic evolution’ does not allow normal reproduction (which seems to be confirmed by ME2) AND Reapers eventually die (if only after millions of years) and they’re looking for a cure with their cycles
-> Either they make new Reapers in an effort to find the perfect way to make a Reaper, or they make a smarter Reaper that can fix this ‘problem’ with their imperfect form; then they can go back to making other races serving them, the ‘apex race’
Warning: spoilers for the Covenant from Halo and the Higbreed from Ben 10: Alien Force; hate for
these shows is irrelevant while talking about the concept behind these races/alien empires
So, a combination of
both of the above options:
The Reapers could be a proud race that ascended, only to find out other races didn’t and they forced them to do the same (similar to the Covenant from Halo branding pretty much everyone who doesn’t agree with their beliefs heretics and enemies); but then they found out their ascension wasn’t that perfect at all (like the Highbreed in Ben 10: Alien Force with their purity); in their twisted belief that they were the apex race (formerly the Leviathans), they refused the thought they weren’t perfect or they had made a mistake and looked for thralls, people to indoctrinate who could find the ‘real’ reason why they were dying, maybe even blaming it on dark energy (now don’t flip, just connecting the weirdest stuff to see if it is an interesting and somewhat logical link). Only problem is, how the heck is Shepard going to find a cure for them? Provided you don’t destroy them because you want them to die so bad.
Just my thoughts for any choices for this origin and the Reaper’s motives:
You could choose between destroying the Reapers (Renegade-ish) or letting them help rebuild (Paragon-ish). Revenge or Forgiveness? Being just as ruthless as the Reapers, or making compromises with a very powerful enemy?
The Crucible could be the weapon to destroy the Reapers or make them cooperate (though that could very much be like putting a shock collar on an evil Superman). Or Shepard could convince them to help each other, help rebuild and help find the cure… Only problem is, that could be one heck of a cure.
That’s one of the weaknesses of this alternate origin and the Reaper’s motives have: there is no clue as to how they should come up with such a cure…
Warning: Me going nuts, rant rant rant! Feel free to address the issues I have with what the Bioware writers were thinking in the terms of planning stories, not the content of the actual story.
While the original ending, which was badly foreshadowed and splits people (I liked the well-known synthetic vs. organic conflict from sci-fi literature maybe a bit too much and am therefore biased, but not necessarily totally in the wrong), makes it a case of Shepard showing organics are ready for the solution so it can be used. I have digged and digged and digged and while I eventually agreed with the member I talked to that the ending doesn’t seem to fit with the rest of ME3, but… something else doesn’t fit.
I usually make things up as I write stories, but even I plan the ending, the villains’ motivations in rough outlines and TIM’s control subplot (and other stuff) seems like the less than stellar foreshadowing of an ending that would’ve been a bit better executed than the EC if EA had let Bioware. If the ending’s created vs creators theme doesn’t fit with the rest of ME3, does that mean they planned some of the ending, a final twist about the Reaper’s motivations and then two writers said ‘screw that, we have to churn out endings to keep EA happy’… or they didn’t plan the ending AT ALL?
And this is why, I decided not to make an alternate ending fic, because it would mean putting a lot of planning and foreshadowing as early as the second half of ME2 or something. It seems as if if you took ME1, ME2 and ME3 sans ending… any alternate Reaper origin, motivations and an ending to go along with the twists… wouldn’t fit. The foreshadowing just isn’t there, TIM wanting to control the Reapers is made quite clear in the beginning of the peer-reviewed Mars mission, yet it’s a part of three colored endings there is much debate about. Sure, the control could be similar to my ‘putting a shock collar on an evil Superman’ idea, but it would actually make more sense if you were actually the accepted boss of the Reapers, the Catalyst, instead of the guy with the shock collar’s remote.
So this could be the cause of the split: either they didn’t plan the ending at all and wrote themselves in a corner, so they made an ending without thinking about some foreshadowing, so there are some errors that can be acceptable for one side, but no for the other. Or they did plan some of it, but the execution was flawed and how accepting you are of what they ‘tried to do which some can see and others cannot’ or ‘should have done but they didn’t deliver’, is a matter of personal opinion. I sense I’m gonna get flak from both pro-enders AND anti-enders now, so although I have put a very long and personal treatise and rant on the subject, answering it with your own opinion and arguments isn’t going to help. What might help is give a short answer to a simple question I have as a writer: What could they have planned that some fans still wouldn’t have liked, but was executed with quite some flaws because of all the circumstances (EA pushing, Bioware rushing and not having planned enough ahead in their trilogy, etc.)? I just don’t get it, as a WRITER. Not as a fan that wanted this or that, but as a builder of metaphorical houses that says: why didn’t they use concrete for that wall! What if you build ten stories on that, it’s not gonna hold!
End of rant.
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