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dreamgazer wrote...

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It would have been better. But still mediocre at best.


And what would be a great-writing end to the Reapers in ME3, David? Please, educate us.


Heroism being meaningful. And Shepard stopping the Reapers through the power of perfect teeth and skimpy outfits full of characterization.


Oh, my.  Why haven't we discovered this sooner?!

They're the secret weapon against the Reapers! Let's bounce some lasers and biotics and stuff off those pearly whites, and blast 'em to kingdom come. 


No. It has to be Kasumi. She has the most perfect teeth, ever ever.

Personally, yes I like Miranda's teeth. The same as Yvonne's.

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MassivelyEffective0730 wrote...

No. It has to be Kasumi. She has the most perfect teeth, ever ever.


From that thread:

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It's been in front of us all along.

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Would this be acceptable, David? (Liara's is in the background, teary eyed, exclaiming: "That's my Shepard! Go, you magnificent hero!)

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Here's the heroic charge that David wants.

And it gets exactly the kind of ending David's heroism deserves.

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CynicalShep wrote...

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Would this be acceptable, David? (Liara's is in the background, teary eyed, exclaiming: "That's my Shepard! Go, you magnificent hero!)


To bad that's Jack. 

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[quote]David7204 wrote...

I wrote this yesterday but felt it deserving of it's own thread. I want to talk a bit about supposedly 'smart' protagonists.

There have been countless posts on this forum suggesting that Shepard or one of her allies solve problems by 'doing research.' Kill the Reapers by 'doing research.' Control them by 'doing research.' Develop some super-duper weapons by 'doing research.' Cure Thane by 'doing research.' When I ask people what Shepard should have been doing when they complain about incarceration, pretty much the only answer I hear is Shepard 'doing research' on the Reapers. The list goes on.
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We were also able to get out of ME2 with no casualties by doing research.

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There's a reason why conflicts with great enemies are solved by violence, not by 'doing research.' And a reason why people need to give up this idea of protagonists solving problems by 'doing research' or whatever it is they imagine smart people do. It's poor writing.
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Sometimes you need to do research to do violence more efficently, basic rules of RTS and many RPGS.

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All the things the audiences associate with science -beakers of bubbling chemicals, equations on whiteboards, lasers and lab coats - those are all just props. The real science is the thought. And the thought is invisible. The audience can't see it. Can't perceive it. Can't appreciate it.
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Maybe that's how you associate with science but please don't assume that on behalf of the rest of us based on your own personal failings.

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Technology begins with an idea. An applied principle or series of principles. And once the ideas are in place...it's just a matter of work - the tremendous and often difficult process of building and refining that applied principle. But work is work. There's no interesting themes in a villain being defeated with work.
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Really? I could refer to the major effort taken on by the protaganist to defeat the antagonist in just about every fiction as effectively work. Harry Potter can't just go fight Voldemort he has to figure out how to first and make preperations, and he's not the only one who makes the effort.

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So when a problem is solved by 'science' and science alone...it's really nothing more than a Deus Ex Machina. One moment a person has no idea how to solve a problem. The next they do. One moment the galaxy is helpless as the Reapers are on the cusp of invading. The next moment Shepard comes up with an idea for a super-weapon. Or super-technology. Or super-whatever. After which, it's just a process of refining the idea and building the thing. And even if the weapon is actually somehow scientifically and logistically possible against the Reapers, it would be ridiculous. Because where's the conflict in that premise? Where's the drama? Where are the themes? There are none.
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Here's what you're missing. All the science has to provide is a tool for the protaganist to use, no one is suggesting it'll save the day on it's own the act of applying said tool to a given situation successfully is still likely the monumental task of the protaganist, all science will give you in this sort of setting is a fighting chance, it's still all on the protaganist to make that chance a reality.

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So allthrough scientific work requires intelligence and experience, it's thematically no different than other work. And conflicts solved by work and nothing else are boring and narratively pointless. How thematically ridiculous would it be to have the Reapers defeated and conflict lasting millions of years solved because factories produced a certain amount of weapons? Because shipyards built a certain number of ships? Incredibly ridiculous and incredibly lame. Scientific work is ultimately no different. There's no meaning in a great villain being defeated because a bunch of scientists spent X number of hours in the lab.
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Again just about every protaganist has to do some sort of leg work. You remember that episode of Superman where Sups just clobbered the villain in the first 5 mintues and the show was over? Me neither because that'd be "incredibly ridiculous and incredibly lame." Conflict is intresting when there are obsticles to overcome, what they are (internal or external) and how they're overcome can vary depending on the story but the basic principle is the same.

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Which brings us back to what seems to be the general BSN sneering at violence in stories as immature and mindless and praising science as the supposed smart and mature writer's way to solve conflicts.
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People sneer at the idea of bludgening your way past a problem. Granted some can bludgen pretty hard but you're "interesting themes" are hardly more compelling that way.

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Stories have protagonists confront conflicts with violence because violence does carry themes. Themes of courage. Themes of unity, friendship, and love as characters see their friends and lovers at risk. Themes of loyalty and sacrifice. Themes of strength and honor. Of despair, of loss, of hope, and of triumph. And these themes simply don't apply to the labors and invisible thoughts of a scientist 'researching.'
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No a story carries themes violence is just how the conflict is sometimes resolved in stories.

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I think of Gandalf speaking to Pippen in Minas Tirith about 'a far green country' as a troll and their death hammers on the door a few feet away. I think about Aragorn speaking to his men before the Black Gates. (Lord of the Rings is very good with this sort of thing.) I think of Shepard kissing Liara after the battle in Lair of the Shadow Broker. Incredibly strong moments, and all heavily and directly associated with violence.
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Funny you mention Lotr as in the books we clearly have an example of the Big Bag being defeated by two Hobbits walkng towards a mountain, they don't even push Gollum into the fires he just sort of jumps in on accident. Yet the themes of friendships and overcoming impossible odds for Frodo are still plenty strong in the books.

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You know how many such moments I've seen taking place in a laboratory? Taking place as characters sit and type at computers? Zero.
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Here's an idea. Point me towards when anyone had ever suggested that very premise or I'll just assume you're misunderstanding what other people are actually saying and talking out of your ass like you usally do.

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Consider Breaking Bad. A protagonist hailed as someone who solves their problems with science. But look carefully. When the audience knows about the plan beforehand, Walter never comes up with the idea himself. Every time the plan is known ahead of time to the viewer, the original idea comes from somewhere else.

Walter builds a battery in the desert...after Jesse suggests it. Walter breaks into the evidence room using a magnet...after Jesse suggests a magnet. Robs the train using a clever weight idea...after Jesse suggests the method how. Why? Because the writers understand that a person just coming up with an idea and successfully applying it is off the table. Because it's boring. Because it carries no themes.
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And whoever said all the ideas had to come strictly from the protagnist? Whoever said the protaganist can't have his/her own character defining moment of awesome by implementing an idea they thought up themselves once in a while?

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Science always exists on the periphery in these kinds of stories. There's science in the weapons and defences the characters use, science in the ships and other vehicles they travel on. Science in AIs and electronic warfare. Science in the characters overriding locks and hacking drones and disrupting shields. But thinking science to be some sort of glorious arrow of rationality and intelligence that pierces through the muck of mysticism and immaturity to solve whatever conflict the story focuses on conveys a failure to understand both stories and science.
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I have no clue where you even got this idea aside from your own imaganitive interpratations of other peoples posts.

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I feel I should cap things off by reminding the BSN that even if this sort of thing wasn't a huge problem from a narrative standpoint, the chancesof anyone coming up with a plausible scientific solution to a very difficult problem faced by people with lots of resources (which is going to be any epic story, including Mass Effect) might as well be zero. It  can be done with a small group of people facing a relatively small challenge (such as breaking into a vault), but it's next to impossible for large-scale conflicts. Either the science itself is going to be fabricated, or it's going to be so effective and obvious that everyone else looks like a complete and total idiot for not using the solution  beforehand. I'm reminded of science fiction stories where the good guys defeat the enemy ship by scanning and then 'matching their shield frequency' to the enemy's 'weapon frequency,' upon which the enemy's weapons apparently bounce off and blow up their own ship. Pretty much every 'Reaper killing' suggestion I've seen on the BSN has fit these two problems like a glove. [/quote]
It's only a problem for you since you think science will be stealing your protaganist's heroic thunder.

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@ Grey:

And that video that I linked shows how I believe David's heroic thunder (in the way he wants it) deserves to end.

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Even for a David thread, this is weird.

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Unconventional heroism is a thing, after all.

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CynicalShep wrote...

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Would this be acceptable, David? (Liara's is in the background, teary eyed, exclaiming: "That's my Shepard! Go, you magnificent hero!)


Yeah homie, that's Jack - don't get it mixed! :lol:

edit: The name Epantiras should hint at Jack too, if you were here back in the day. 

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Jack is a mere squaddie, dammit. Only Shepard is capable of heroism of this magnitude

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CynicalShep wrote...

Jack is a mere squaddie, dammit. Only Shepard is capable of heroism of this magnitude

She's got plenty of "characterization" though!

(am I doing it right?)

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CrutchCricket wrote...

CynicalShep wrote...

Jack is a mere squaddie, dammit. Only Shepard is capable of heroism of this magnitude

She's got plenty of "characterization" though!

(am I doing it right?)


If only she was a virginal blue babe with a pasion for all things prothean and all things Shepard ...

(I think so.)

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Clearly Matriarch Benezia has the most impressive characterization in the entire trilogy.

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All characters have to be beautiful (10/10), who are smart, brave, nice, and good (all with David's definition of those things).

They must be perfect, flawless, mary-sues.

If they're flawed, they're bad characters.

Thankfully, only Miranda is a flawed teammate.

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dreamgazer wrote...

Clearly Matriarch Benezia has the most impressive characterization in the entire trilogy.

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We share a common viewpoint. Perhaps I should add you to my friendlist? :wizard:

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David7204 wrote...

If the story exists on the basis of problems the protagonist is 'qualified' to solve and proceeds to solve, there's no conflict and thus no real story at all. It's just watching someone complete a task.


So mass effect had no real conflict?

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TIL heroes don't need to be any more than a bag of bricks for a head and some muscles.

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MassivelyEffective0730 wrote...

Here's the heroic charge that David wants.

And it gets exactly the kind of ending David's heroism deserves.


TheMyron wrote...

DeinonSlayer wrote...

Major Coates: "OK, listen up, dirtbags. If we're gonna reach the Conduit, we need a good game plan. Now, I have two options we can use. Number one, we run at the beam in a single file line, screaming at the top of our lungs! The enemy will be so flabbergasted, by the time they have a chance to regroup, we'll already be inside.

James: Oh, yeah, right. They're not going to get surprised, they're just going to start mowing us down.

Major Coates: That is the inherent beauty of the single file line! They can only kill the person in front. So if we order from least important to most important, with James being in the front and me being in the back, then we just might make it through.

Garrus: Don't you think that Shepard should be in the back, since he's the protagonist?

Major Coates: No, Shepard is in front of me. We need someone in back who can objectively evaluate how the plan is working.

James: How are you going to know if the plan isn't working?

Major Coates: If Shepard gets shot, I'll know we're in trouble, and immediately abort.

Shepard: I think that's a good plan!


VS: Major, while that is the most retarded plan I ever heard, I just wanted to thank you for not putting me in front of the line...



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dreamgazer wrote...

Clearly Matriarch Benezia has the most impressive characterization in the entire trilogy.

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I think Engineer Donnelly is the deepest character in the game, he's the one who appreciates this stuff the most.

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TheMyron wrote...

MassivelyEffective0730 wrote...

Here's the heroic charge that David wants.

And it gets exactly the kind of ending David's heroism deserves.


TheMyron wrote...

DeinonSlayer wrote...

Major Coates: "OK, listen up, dirtbags. If we're gonna reach the Conduit, we need a good game plan. Now, I have two options we can use. Number one, we run at the beam in a single file line, screaming at the top of our lungs! The enemy will be so flabbergasted, by the time they have a chance to regroup, we'll already be inside.

James: Oh, yeah, right. They're not going to get surprised, they're just going to start mowing us down.

Major Coates: That is the inherent beauty of the single file line! They can only kill the person in front. So if we order from least important to most important, with James being in the front and me being in the back, then we just might make it through.

Garrus: Don't you think that Shepard should be in the back, since he's the protagonist?

Major Coates: No, Shepard is in front of me. We need someone in back who can objectively evaluate how the plan is working.

James: How are you going to know if the plan isn't working?

Major Coates: If Shepard gets shot, I'll know we're in trouble, and immediately abort.

Shepard: I think that's a good plan!


VS: Major, while that is the most retarded plan I ever heard, I just wanted to thank you for not putting me in front of the line...


Heroism.

That is all.

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conventional victory is easy, humanity simply has to resurrect that humblest of all god's creatures...

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tickle267 wrote...

conventional victory is easy, humanity simply has to resurrect that humblest of all god's creatures...

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That reminds me, isn't it cute how Grunt looked up his clan leader on the Extranet as "Tyrannosaurus Wrex"?

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HiddenInWar wrote...

David7204 wrote...

If the story exists on the basis of problems the protagonist is 'qualified' to solve and proceeds to solve, there's no conflict and thus no real story at all. It's just watching someone complete a task.


So mass effect had no real conflict?

Of course it does, because the work wasn't smooth and easy. Conflicts arose. Challenges arose.

In comparison, consider Mordin making the genophage cure. Never does the story present this as a problem. Shepard needs the cure, Mordin says he can make it, he proceeds to do so. There's no conflict or challenges.

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David7204 wrote...

HiddenInWar wrote...

David7204 wrote...

If the story exists on the basis of problems the protagonist is 'qualified' to solve and proceeds to solve, there's no conflict and thus no real story at all. It's just watching someone complete a task.


So mass effect had no real conflict?

Of course it does, because the work wasn't smooth and easy. Conflicts arose. Challenges arose.

In comparison, consider Mordin making the genophage cure. Never does the story present this as a problem. Shepard needs the cure, Mordin says he can make it, he proceeds to do so. There's no conflict or challenges.


And it's consistently called one of the best sequences and plotlines in the entire trilogy. 

I think this is a case of you making things up. Again. So no new changes for the new year David?